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My Holiday in Scotland
Section B. 3a-3c
通过本课时的学习，学生能够：
1.复习Vincent的俄罗斯旅行经历；了解Gina的假期内容和英国的苏格兰；通过分析阅读文本，掌握写假期故事的结构。
2.从When,Where,What,How,Learn等多方面展开遣词造句，进行多种句式结构的训练练习，分析假期故事的时态，写作顺序，结构等方面的特点，锻炼学生的写作能力。
3.通过记录假期活动，重温假期的快乐时光，享受假期，享受生活。
Objectives
Do you remember Vincent’s holiday in Russia
17 July
went to the Victory Museum and learned about World War II.
saw an artwork with thousands of glass “tears” falling down.
felt sick;
didn’t feel like eating
had lunch at a restaurant and ate a lot of ice cream.
morning
during dinner
18 July
felt like he was
walking inside a palace
played games,
sang and danced
with Russian students
went to Red
Square and saw
fantastic buildings
took the
Moscow Metro
morning
afternoon
Tip
What he did and learned
Tip
What he saw
Tip
What he ate
Tip
how he felt
My friend Gina went to Scotland on vacation.
Scotland, part of the UK, is in the north of Great Britain Island.
It is famous for its unique culture. People there wear kilts, and the bagpipe is a traditional instrument. Edinburgh Castle and the mysterious Loch Ness are must-visit places.
苏格兰是英国的一部分，位于大不列颠岛的北部。
它以其独特的文化而闻名。那里的人们穿着苏格兰短裙，风笛是一种传统乐器。爱丁堡城堡和神秘的尼斯湖是必游之地。
My Holiday in Scotland
Last autumn, my family took a train to Scotland for a holiday. We stayed in a comfortable house in the countryside with beautiful scenery. I live in a big city, so everything seemed so different. For example, beside the house, there was a huge forest.
On the last day, early in the morning, I went to the forest to explore. While there, something made a noise. I turned around and was surprised to see a deer.
Read Gina’s holiday story and write down the things that she did.
I ran home and told my parents what I saw. My mum smiled and said, “The deer is probably looking for food and hoping to get some from you.” What a wonderful experience I had! I really hope I can go back again.
3a
n.乡村;农村
例如,后加完整句子
转身;翻转
adj.惊奇的(人的感受)
adv.可能;大概
寻找(强调过程)
n.鹿(单复同形）
Things that Gina did
took __________
______________
stayed __________
_______________
went to ________
______________
saw __________
_____________
ran home and_____
______________
______________
a train
in a
comfortable house
the forest
to explore
a deer
told
her parents what
she saw
My Holiday in Scotland
Last autumn, my family took a train to Scotland for a holiday. We stayed in a comfortable house in the countryside with beautiful scenery. I live in a big city, so everything seemed so different. For example, beside the house, there was a huge forest.
On the last day, early in the morning, I went to the forest to explore. While there, something made a noise. I turned around and was surprised to see a deer.
What elements did Gina mention in the passage
I ran home and told my parents what I saw. My mum smiled and said, “The deer is probably looking for food and hoping to get some from you.” What a wonderful experience I had! I really hope I can go back again.
3a
when
who
how
where
what
how
Think of an unforgettable holiday experience and answer the questions.
3b
When did it happen ____________________________
Where were you ____________________________
What did you do ____________________________
How did you feel ____________________________
What did you learn ____________________________
When
Where
What
How
What
How to write a holiday experience
Elements to write an unforgettable holiday experience.
3a
You can add: people,weather, transportation(交通方式)and so on.
01
When did it happen
通用时间表达
1. during +节日 / 假期名称.
例句：during the summer vacation.（在暑假期间 ）
2. In+季节+of +年份, on+具体日期.
例句：In autumn of 2023, on October 1st.（2023 年秋天，10 月 1 日 ）
3. Last summer/Last winter/year...
例句：Last winter, around Christmas Day.（去年冬天，圣诞节前后 ）
1. 在 2023 年秋天，我们去了一个美丽的公园。
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练习：汉译英
2. 去年夏天，在暑假期间，我有了一段难忘的经历。
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01
When did it happen
In autumn of 2023, we went to a beautiful park.
Last summer, during the summer vacation, I had an
unforgettable experience.
02
Where were you
通用地点表达
1. I was in+城市/地区
例句：I was in Chengdu.（我在成都）
2. I went to 具体地点 on vacation.
例句：I went to Sanya on vacation with my family.
（我和我的家人去三亚度假。）
3. I stayed in + 地点
例句：I stayed in a comfortable house in the countryside with beautiful scenery.
（我待在乡下一座风景优美的舒适房子里。）
03
What did you do
1. I did sth, did sth, and did sth.
例句：I swam in the sea, built sandcastles on the beach, and watched the sunset.（我在海里游泳，在沙滩上堆沙堡，还观看了日落 ）
2. First, I did sth.Then,I did sth.Finally, I did sth.(使用顺序副词)
例句：First, I visited the zoo and saw many cute animals. Then, I went to a nearby park and had a picnic. Finally, I watched a movie at the local cinema.
（首先，我去了动物园，看到许多可爱的动物。然后，我去了附近
的公园野餐。最后，我在当地电影院看了场电影 ）
通用行为表达
03
What did you do
1. I did sth, did sth, and did sth.
2. First, I did sth.Then,I did sth.Finally, I did sth.
通用行为表达
1. 我乘火车去乡下，探索了森林，还看到了一只可爱的鹿。
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练习：汉译英
2. 首先，我去了博物馆，接着我拜访了爷爷奶奶，最后我在一家餐馆吃晚饭。
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I took a train to the countryside, explored the forest, and saw a lovely deer.
First, I went to the museum.Then,I visited my grandparents.Finally, I had dinner in a restaurant.
04
How did you feel
1. I felt + 形容词（如 excited/relaxed）.
例句：I felt excited. It was an unforgettable experience.
（我感到非常兴奋。这是一次难忘的经历 ）
2. I was filled with （情感名词，如 joy/excitement）.
例句：I was filled with joy.
(我满心欢喜)
3.How +adj.+主语+谓语
What +(a/an)+adj.+n.+主语+谓语（感叹句)
例句：How excited I was! 我是多么兴奋呀！
What an amazing experience it was!
多么让人惊奇的经历呀！
通用感受表达
04
How did you feel
1. 我感到非常惊奇。这真是一次难忘的经历。_______________________________________________
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练习：汉译英
2. 我满心兴奋。我拥有多么美妙的一段经历啊！
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I felt very amazed. It was truly an unforgettable experience.
I was filled with excitement. What a wonderful experience
I had!
05
What did you learn
通用感悟表达
1. From this experience, I learn about/that...（文化/历史/饮食/艺术）
例句：From this experience, I learn about the unique local culture.
（从这次经历中，我了解到了独特的当地文化。 ）
2. This experience teaches me + n./that .../to do..
例句：This experience teaches me the importance of protecting the environment.
（这次经历让我懂得了保护环境的重要性。 ）
05
What did you learn
1. 从这次经历中，我了解到不同的城市有不同的文化。
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练习：汉译英
2. 这次经历教会我去享受大自然美丽的风景。
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From this experience, I learn that different cities have different culture.
This experience teaches me to enjoy the beautiful scenery of the nature.
写作技能提升
TIP1: 修饰成分 — 介词短语
基本结构：with + n.
优点：丰富细节，表达多样化。
原文例句：
We stayed in a comfortable house in the countryside with beautiful scenery.
我们住在有着优美景色的乡下，一间舒适房子里。
翻译：有着……/伴随着……
例句仿写：
1.清晨，我们走进了一个有着美丽鲜花的公园。
2. 去年秋天，我们住在一个有着一条清澈小河的村庄里。
Early in the morning, we walked into a park with beautiful flowers.
Last autumn, we stayed/lived in a village with a clean river.
写作技能提升
TIP2: 从句使用
基本结构：so+adj./adv.+that从句
原文例句：
We were so happy that we didn’t notice the time.
我们是如此开心以至于没有注意到时间。
优点：提升写作句式的丰富
例句仿写：
风景是如此之好以至于我拍了很多照片。
The scenery was so wonderful that I took a lot of photos.
Last autumn,I went to Beijing on vacation with my family.The weather was sunny and hot. In the morning, my family and I decided to visit Tian’anmen . It was so wonderful that I took a lot of photos.After that, we went to the Palace Museum and learned something interesting about history.At noon, we ate something special-Beijing Duck. It was expensive but very delicious.We arrived at a Beijing hutong in the afternoon. It took us twenty minutes to get there by car.Everything was amazing,because the buildings there were very special .Finally, we rode bicycles along the hutong and I felt like I was a happy bird.
Life is beautiful because of traveling.What a wonderful day it was!I really had a good time.
sample
when
where
who
weather
what
how
how
how
Last autumn,I went to Beijing on vacation with my family.The weather was sunny and hot. In the morning, my family and I decided to visit Tian’anmen . It was so wonderful that I took a lot of photos.After that, we went to the Palace Museum and learned something interesting about history.At noon, we ate something special-Beijing Duck. It was expensive but very delicious.We arrived at a Beijing hutong in the afternoon. It took us twenty minutes to get there by car.Everything was amazing,because the buildings there were very special .Finally, we rode bicycles along the hutong and I felt like I was a happy bird.
Life is beautiful because of traveling.What a wonderful
day it was!I really had a good time.
sample
旅行经历
描写用
过去式
Last autumn,I went to Beijing on vacation with my family.The weather was sunny and hot. In the morning, my family and I decided to visit Tian’anmen . It was so wonderful that I took a lot of photos.After that, we went to the Palace Museum and learned something interesting about history.At noon, we ate something special-Beijing Duck. It was expensive but very delicious.We arrived at a Beijing hutong in the afternoon. It took us twenty minutes to get there by car.Everything was amazing,because the buildings there were very special.Finally, we rode bicycles along the hutong and I felt like I was a happy bird.
Life is beautiful because of traveling.What a wonderful day it was!
I really had a good time.
sample
用时间顺序
描述事件
Framework (结构)
My travel
Beginning
Main body
Ending
time
place
weather
partner
activities
I did
I ate
I learned
I enjoyed
...
I saw/heard
summary
first,next,after that ,in the morning,at last 等时间顺序串联。
feeling
feeling
项目 标准 自我评价 同伴评价 教师评价
结构 （1-3分） 段落合理(2-3段)，结构完整
衔接自然
内容 （6-7分） 要点：1.时间地点人物天气 2.活动与感受等； 3.总结。
语言 （3-4分）
句法正确，语言优美,内容丰富
卷面 （1分） 书写工整
时态： 体裁：
人称：
一般现在时
记叙文
第一人称
Now write an unforgettable holiday experience.
3c
Use your ideas above to write a holiday story.
3c
museum
theatre
zoo
park
farm
forest
market
/mju zi m/
/ θ t /
/zu /
/pɑ k/
/fɑ m/
/ f r st/
/ mɑ k t/
wonderful
OK
not too bad
boring
terrible
great
amazing
excellent
fantastic
relaxing
How was your holiday
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