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Unit 2
School life
Integration D+ Further study
Pre-writing
Pre-writing
Pre-writing
Pre-writing
Why does Millie write the letter
(2) How many suggestions does Millie write in the letter
(3) What does Millie suggest frst Why
(4)What does Millie think of the library
(5)Why does Millie think they need more computers
Read and answer
She wants to make some suggestions on how to improve some parts of her school life.
Three.
She suggests that her school should provide more ping-pong tables, so more students can play ping-pong during breaks.
She thinks the library is a great place for students to enjoy reading and open their minds.
Because with more computers, it is easier for students to search online.
Pre-writing
Introduction: say why you are writing
Main body: Politely make your suggestions and give reasons
Conclusion: Add a sentence to conclude the letter
Pre-writing
structure
Opening Dear ...
Introduction Purpose of writing the letter
Main body Make suggestions and give reasons
Conclusion Express hope
Closing Yours sincerely/truly,
…
Pre-writing
Pay attention to the tone and language.
Pre-writing
Here is some advice on...
I am writing this letter because I want to ...
Pre-writing
First, Second,Moreover/Finally
I would like to suggest ...
I have a suggestion for ... ,so...can.
I think we should ...
It will be a good/great idea to ...
because ... is a great place to ...
we need ... so that it is easier for us to ...
Use conjections to make your
article more clear.
Use comparative adjectives
Pre-writing
Listen and finish Millie’s survey
add more ping-pang tables
add more interesting books
get to school a little later
school finishesa little earlier
have fewer lessons
lunchtime can be longer
add more kinds of delicious food
add more clubs
go on more school trips
design more fashionable styles
First, Second,Moreover/Finally
I would like to suggest ...
I have a suggestion for ... ,so...can.
I think we should ...
It will be a good/great idea to ...
because ... is a great place to
/is a good way to do...
we need ... so that it is easier for us to ...
Pre-writing
I hope these suggestions will be helpful/useful.
I hope you find my suggestions useful/helpful/...
While-writing
While-writing
While-writing
写作前：规划与头脑风暴
1. 理解主题
2. 规划段落结构并列出想法
写作中：表达与组织
1. 添加具体细节
2. 使用流畅的过渡语
写作后：检查与润色
1. 检查语法和拼写
2. 检查行文流畅性和逻辑性
3. 检查连贯性
Post-writing
One possible version:
Dear Head Teacher,
I am writing this letter to make suggestions on improving our school life. Here are some ideas that I hope can help make our school a better place.
First, I would like to suggest changing the school lunch break. The lunch time is too short, and we always have to eat quickly. I think it will be a good idea to make the lunch break 15 minutes longer so we can eat slowly and have time to talk with friends. Second, I have a suggestion for the school library. The books there are old, and we don’t have many new ones. It would be great to buy more interesting storybooks and science books. Finally, about the sports facilities, there aren’t enough basketballs and badminton equipment. I think it will be a good idea to get more sports equipment. This way, more students can play sports after class and keep healthy.
I hope you will find my suggestions helpful. Thank you for taking the time to read my letter!
Yours sincerely,
Linlin
Dear Miss Li,
I am writing to offer some suggestions on how to improve some parts of our school life.
First, I would like to suggest that we should have a longer lunch break. Some students eat slowly and don't get enough time to have a rest before the next class. A longer break will give us more time to relax. This will help us stay healthy.
Second, I think we should go on more school trips to make our learning more interesting. For example, we could visit science museums to see interesting shows. These trips would help us learn new things. Finally, I hope we can add more adventure books to the library. They are popular among students and can help us develop creativity and a love for reading. I hope you think my suggestions are helpful and improve the school in some of these ways. I am looking forward to the changes.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Post-writing
There are lots of books about school and school life. “Diary of a Wimpy Kid” is a really popular book series about an American middle school student's daily life. The book series tells the story of Greg, a 12-year-old boy, and how he deals with challenges at his new school. He often gets into trouble, but he always manages to find a way to get out of it. Do you know this book series Do you know any other books about school and school life If you do, choose one and share it with your classmates.

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