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Unit 7
When Tomorrow Comes
人教版2024版八年级上册
课时6 Section B (3a—3c)
写作课
Learning Objectives
1.能够基于写作需求，在阅读“Mandy的未来梦想”范文、完成“未来规划笔记填写”后，在教师引导下开展写作准备，梳理“介绍个人未来梦想”类写作的结构，列出自己写作中对应“主题引入—具体梦想—实现决心”的内容要点。
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2. 能够用本单元所学与未来、规划相关的词汇、一般将来时句型及逻辑连接词，撰写“我的未来梦想”短文，确保内容贴合个人规划、结构完整。
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3. 通过自评和互评，改进写作初稿，优化语篇逻辑、充实细节内容、修正语言错误，提升“介绍未来梦想”类写作的质量。。
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按要求写出正确的单词、词组或句子。
有价值的 (形容词) __________ 2.公共的(形容词) ___________
3. 医药的(形容词) __________ 4. 挑战(名词) __________
5. 任务(名词) __________ 6. 依靠 (短语) __________
7. 德国人（名词）__________ 8. 接受（动词）________
9. 中国将会逐步提升公共医疗系统。
___________________________
10. 这取决于我们如何选择去提升使用人工智能去面临未来的挑战。 _______________________
valuable
public
medical
challenge
task
depend on
German
accept
China will take steps to improve the public health system.
It depends on how we choose to improve and use AI to meet future challenges.
回顾复习Section B (2a—2c）
Free talk
Imagine how you will live in the future.
ways
Transportation
交通运输
Work place
工作地方
Environment
环境
Daily Life
日常生活
Education
(那时的教育情况)
...
Housing
居住
Warming Up
Look and guess.
I love robots, so I think I will become an ___________ . I will invent robot helpers !
engineer
I love stories, so I think I will become a _______ . I will write many interesting stories.
writer
I love football, so I think I will become a _____________ . I will be training with a famous team !
football player
What’s your dream job Why
What will you do to make it happen
Let’ read an article. It can help you write a passage about your future dreams.
Read about Mandy’s dreams for the future and find out what she wants to be.
3a
an artist
My Dreams for the Future
What will my life be like in 20 years It's not an easy question, but here are a few of my predictions. I love art, so I think I will become an artist. I want to study art in France, and then I will visit all the famous art museums. I will learn a lot about different artists and their works of art, and I will create my own too.
As an artist, I will live in the countryside and stay close to nature. There will be flowers and plants around my home. Life there will give me good ideas for making art. At the weekend, I will invite friends to come over and have fun together. I believe these dreams will come true as long as I study hard and keep on trying.
Item Mandy
Future job
Place to live
Free time activity
How to make dreams come true
Artist
Countryside in France
Visit museums, create art, invite friends
Study hard and keep trying
3b
Complete the table about Mandy’s dreams and yours.
Item You
Future job
Place to live
Free time activity
How to make dreams come true
engineer
smart city with modern buildings
join robot competitions, upgrade the designs, play basketball
practice math every day and never give up when things get hard
It’s your turn.
Complete the table about Mandy’s dreams and yours.
3b
文章结构
What will my life be like in 20 years It’s not an easy question, but here are a few of my predictions. I love art, so I think I will become an artist. I want to study art in France, and then I will visit all the famous art museums. I will learn a lot about different artists and their works of art, and I will create my own too.
并列句
宾语从句
所有艺术博物馆
作品
As an artist, I will live in the countryside and stay close to nature. There will be
flowers and plants around my home. Life there will give me good ideas for making art. At the weekend, I will invite friends to drop in and have fun together. I believe these dreams will come true as long as I study hard and keep on trying.
invite sb to do sth.
邀请某人做某事
实现
只要
状语从句
My Dreams for the Future
What will my life be like in 20 years It’s not an easy question, but here are a few of my predictions. I love art, so I think I will become an artist. I want to study art in France, and then I will visit all the famous art museums. I will learn a lot about different artists and their works of art, and I will create my own too.
As an artist, I will live in the countryside and stay close to nature. There will be flowers and plants around my home. Life there will give me good ideas for making art. At the weekend, I will invite friends to come over and have fun together. I believe these dreams will come true as long as I study hard and keep on trying.
一般将来时的特殊疑问句
learn about sth.
a few of + 可数名词复数
stay close to sth.
there be句型的一般将来时
come true
as long as
invite sb. to do sth.
keep on doing sth.
Find out useful phrases and sentences from this article.
What will your life be like in 20 years Write a short passage about your dreams for the future. Use your notes in 3b.
3c
写作指导
文本体裁
话题分析
要求想想自己20年后的生活将会是什么样，然后写一篇关于对未来梦想的短文。
本文根据3a与3b提示的内容，可知是描述未来情况的文章，因此偏记叙文。
人称时态
以第一人称为主；以一般现在时与一般将来时为主。
20年后你的生活会是什么样子？写一篇关于你对未来的梦想的短文。使用3b中的笔记。
What will your life be like？ Dream job
Place to live
Free time activity
How to make dreams come true
...
书面表达
主题：20年后的生活
文体：说明文
人称：第一人称(介绍自己)、第三人称(介绍其他人物或事情)
时态：一般将来时
要点：①未来的工作；②居住地；③闲暇活动;④如何实现梦想
(1) How many paragraphs are there in the article
(2) What is the content of this article
two
Observe and think
Paragraph 1
Paragraph 2
future job
place to live
(3) How does the first paragraph narrate(叙述)
First sentence: Question
Third sentence: interest+future job
Second sentence: feeling about the question
Fourth and fifth sentences: expectations (activities)
(use the simple future tense)
(4) How about paragraph 2
First sentence: place to live
Third sentence: combine the job content
Second sentence: environmental description
Fourth sentence: expected activity
Fifth sentence: How to make dreams come true
use the simple future tense
My Dreams for the Future
What will my life be like in 20 years It's not an easy question, but here are a few of my predictions. I love art, so I think I will become an artist. I want to study art in France, and then I will visit all the famous art museums. I will learn a lot about different artists and their works of art, and I will create my own too.
As an artist, I will live in the countryside and stay close to nature. There will be flowers and plants around my home. Life there will give me good ideas for making art. At the weekend, I will invite friends to come over and have fun together. I believe these dreams will come true as long as I study hard and keep on trying.
Beginning
Body
Ending
Introduce topic
My dream job
Study activities
Life activities
Conclusion
Read carefully and think!
Beginning
Body
Ending
Introduction (Topic)
What will ... be like in ... /Here are a few of my predictions/I always imagine what life will be like in ...
Content (Job&Place&Activity)
Job: I love... , so I think I will become.../I think I will work as .../I will be ... and I will be known for ...
Place: I want to study ... in .../I will live in .../There will be .../I will live in ...where people are ...
Activity: I will visit .../I will learn a lot about .../I will invite friends to... /In my free time, I will .../Life there will give me ... for ...
Summary (Resolution&Feeling)
I believe these dreams will come ture.../That’s what I think about .../ How interesting my life will be .../I’m sure I’ll have a/an ... life in the future.
How do you make dreams for the future
写作素材
1. As the saying goes, “Where there’s a will, there’s a way.” I believe I can make it!
2. I hope to live in a coastal city where I can see the ocean every day. After all, “Home is where the heart is”, and my heart belongs to the sea.
3. In my spare time, I’ll volunteer at animal center because pets bring people joy.
4. I’ll study science hard and stay curious. Remember—“Rome wasn’t built in a day,” so I’ll be patient with my dream.
Checklist Point(s)
Content Future dream (1 point) How to achieve the dreams (4 points) Explains why (1 point) Others (1 point)
Structure Beginning Body Ending (3 points)
Expressions Good expressions (2 points) No mistakes (grammar, tense, spelling) (2 points)
Handwriting clean&tidy (1 point)
Check your partner’s article according to the checklist.
使用but体现转折语气，巧妙地引出作者对于未来的猜想。
What will my life be like in 20 years It's difficult to answer, but here are a few of my predictions.
I love helping others, so I think I will become a doctor. I want to study at a medical school. Then I'll use my skills to save people's lives. There will be a robot in my house, and it will help with housework like cooking and cleaning.
There will be句型介绍作者对未来生活具体的畅想
All in all 总结前文，逻辑清晰；结尾句“the future is full of hope” 点明乐观态度，传递正能量。
People will plant more trees. The world will be a cleaner, greener, and more comfortable place to live in. I'll also take up a hobby like playing the piano when possible.
All in all, the future is full of hope. We can never know what will happen in the future, but we can try our best to make our dreams come true.
What will my life be like in 20 years I often think about it. I love helping others, so I hope to be a doctor. I plan to study medicine in a top-notch medical school. After that, I'll work in a big hospital, saving patients' lives and relieving their pains.
As a doctor, I'll live in a modern city. There, I can meet various patients and learn from different medical cases. In my free time, I'll take part in medical volunteer activities, going to poor areas to offer free medical care. I believe my dream will come true as long as I study hard now and keep improving my medical skills.
For example-1
In 20 years, what will my life be like Well, I'm really into technology, so I want to be a software engineer. I'll study computer science at a famous university first. Then, I'll work in a high-tech company, creating useful apps and software to make people's lives easier.
I'll live in a smart city, where everything is connected by advanced technology. During my free time, I'll join programming competitions and share my knowledge with other tech lovers. To make this dream a reality, I'll practice coding every day and keep up with the latest tech trends.
For example-2
Language Points!
1. I believe these dreams will come true as long as I study hard and keep on trying.
我相信只要我努力学习并持续尝试，这些梦想将会实现。
as long as只要，引导条件状语从句
例如：As long as you practice speaking English every day, you’ll make progress.
只要你每天练习说英语，就会进步 。强调 “每天练习” 是 “进步” 的条件 。
【拓展】as long as 和…… 一样长
The meeting lasted as long as three hours, which made us quite tired.
会议长达三小时，搞得我们挺累 。
Language Points!
2. I will learn a lot about different artists and their works of art, and I will create my own too. 我会了解很多关于不同艺术家以及他们的艺术作品的知识，而且我也会创作自己的作品。
work 作名词：
① 工作；劳动；活计（不可数）
例：I have a lot of work to do. 我有很多工作要做。
②活计；活茬儿；活（具体的工作任务等，可数）
例：The repair work took three hours. 维修活计花了三个小时。
③作品；著作（可数，常用复数 “works” ，文中 “works of art” 即艺术作品 ） ，
自我检测
按要求写出正确的单词、词组或句子。
拜访 (短语) __________ 2.只要(短语) ___________
3. 艺术作品(短语) __________ 4. 接近(短语) __________
5. 实现(短语) __________ 6. 坚持做 (短语) __________
7. 创造（动词）__________ 8. 邀请（动词）________
9. 我将邀请朋友过来拜访一起玩。
___________________________
10. 我相信这些梦想将会实现只要我努力学习并且坚持努力。 _______________________
come over
as long as
works of art
stay close to
come true
keep on doing
create
invite
I will invite friends to come over and have fun together.
I believe these dreams will come true as long as I study hard and keep on trying.

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