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八年级上册 Unit 2 Home Sweet Home 写作任务单
班级：__________ 姓名：__________ 学号：__________
一、学习目标 (Learning Objectives)
1. 我能用一般过去时叙述一次与家人共度的快乐时光。
2. 我能使用形容词和连接词使文章更生动、有条理。
3. 我能在写作中表达对家庭的理解与情感，增强家庭归属感。
4. 我能通过自评与互评，修改并提升作文质量。
二、写作任务
家是心灵的港湾。日常生活中,你有哪些与家人共度的快乐时光 请以“The happy time with my family"为题写一篇短文,内容包括:
什么时候是你和家人共度的快乐时光;
一次与家人共度快乐时光的经历;
总结和感悟。
注意:
(1)不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。
(2)语句连贯,词数80 左右。
The happy time with my family
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三、写作准备支架 (Preparation)
审题（打√）
文体：记叙文/说明文/应用文/议论文
人称：第一人称/第二人称/第三人称
时态：一般现在时/一般过去时/一般将来时/现在进行时/过去进行时/现在完成时/过去完成时······
（二）输入型支架
1. 语篇支架（范文参考， 标注出核心句型（可用于模仿的框架性句子）和情感表达（直接或间接抒发情感的词汇和句子）：
The happy time with my family
I always feel happy and relaxed when I am with my family.
Last Sunday, I went to fly kites with my family in the park. It was sunny and windy. While flying kites, we ran and ran until our kites flew higher and higher. There were many kites in the sky. They were colourful and in different shapes. We ran freely with the kites. Then we had a great picnic. We talked and laughed happily. What an amazing day!
We spent an enjoyable and unforgettable day. It helps me understand my parents better and show my true love to them.
词汇/句型支架（家庭主题）：
好用动词 (Past Tense) ①共享时光：spent time, got together, shared, talked, laughed, enjoyed ②活动类：cooked, played, watched (a movie), went (to the park), had (a picnic), helped, celebrated ③情感表达：felt, loved, appreciated, remembered, smiled, hugged
精彩形容词 ①温馨氛围：warm, cozy, happy, joyful, loving, peaceful, relaxing ②活动体验：fun, enjoyable, memorable, wonderful, fantastic, special, delightful ③情感表达：grateful, thankful, cheerful, excited, touched, emotional
功能句型 ①I always feel... when I am with my family. ②Last weekend, we... ③We had a great time because... ④It was... and we felt... ⑤This experience made me realize...
家庭文化表达 （选一句用上吧！） Family is where life begins and love never ends. 家是生命的起点，爱是永不结束的旅程。 ② There is no place like home. 金窝银窝，不如自己的狗窝。 ③ A harmonious family brings happiness to everyone. 家和万事兴。 ④ I realized that spending time with family is the best way to show love. 我意识到，陪伴家人就是表达爱的最好方式。 ⑤ East or west, home is the best. 走遍天涯，最爱是家。
（三）结构型支架：提纲支架（建议结构）：
① 开头段：介绍你与家人共度的快乐时光通常是什么时候（如周末、节日、晚餐时间等）。
② 中间段：叙述一次具体的快乐经历（时间、地点、活动、感受）。
③ 结尾段：总结这次经历带给你的感悟（家庭的重要性、爱的表达等）。
四、起草写作 (Drafting)
请在下面完成你的初稿。
The Happy Time with My Family
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五、检查与修改 (Review and Revision)
（一）自我检查表 (Self-check Checklist)
完成初稿后，请对照下表检查你的作文，在符合的项后打 。
检查项
1. 我使用了一般过去时叙述经历。
2. 我使用了至少2个形容词描述感受。
3. 我写出了具体的时间、地点和活动。
4. 我表达了真实的感受或感悟。
5. 我使用了逻辑连接词（如and, because, so）。
（二）同伴互评表 (Peer-assessment)
请你当小老师，评价同桌的作文，涂黑相应的星级，并写下一句评价或建议。
评价维度 评价
语言（语法、词汇） ☆☆☆☆☆
内容（细节丰富、真实） ☆☆☆☆☆
结构（有条理、有连接词） ☆☆☆☆☆
情感（有真实感受） ☆☆☆☆☆
我喜欢的句子：_________________________________________________________________________
我的小建议：__________________________________________________________________________
评阅人：_______________
六、定稿与反思 (Final Draft & Reflection)
（一）修改定稿：请在下方完成最终稿。
The Happy Time with My Family
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（二）写作反思
本次写作，我学会的最有用的一个新词或句型是：______________________________________
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下次写作，我会在 ____________________________ 方面做得更好。
教师评语：________________________________________________________________________
评分：__________________ （满分15分）
七、参考范文
范文A (基础版 - Basic Version)
写作思路： 紧扣主题，使用最核心的词汇和句型，结构清晰，语言准确，适合基础较弱的学生模仿。
The Happy Time with My Family
I always feel warm and happy when I am with my family. Sharing a meal together is our favorite time.
Last Sunday, we cooked a big dinner at home. My mother made delicious soup, my father cooked fish, and I helped set the table. While eating, we talked and laughed about our week. The house was full of laughter and love.
That day was simple but wonderful. It made me understand that happiness is all about being together with the people you love.
范文B (进阶版 - Advanced Version)
写作思路：在基础之上，使用更丰富的形容词、副词和复合句，细节生动，并自然融入更深层次的情感与文化感悟，示范优秀写作。
The Happy Time with My Family
To me, the happiest moments are the weekends when my family and I escape to the park for some quality time together.
Last Saturday was perfect for a picnic. We brought homemade sandwiches, fresh fruits, and juice. After enjoying the food, we played a fun game of badminton. Later, we flew a kite that danced gracefully in the blue sky under the warm sunshine. Everyone's face was filled with smiles, and we felt completely relaxed and joyful.
This experience strengthened our family bond. I truly believe that spending meaningful time together is the most valuable way to express our love and care for each other.

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