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(共43张PPT)
Reading for Writing:
Introduce someone you admire
UNIT 1 PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT
Can you guess who he is
a Jewish
worked in the Swiss patent office
Get Nobel Prize for Physics in 1921
Find a famous formula E=mc
The theory of relativity
Albert Einstein
Read the passage in Page 8
What is mainly about in each paragraph？
1. what aspects are introduced
2. underline the expressions related to the aspects
Identity contribution Einstein, who is the greatest scientists…, is considered one of the smartest men who ever lived.
He made numerous contributions to…
Education Out of a strong passion for knowledge, he continued to study… earning a doctorate in physics …
Life story /Achievements …published four extraordinary physics papers.
…became famous as Isaac Newton
He was awarded the Nobel Prize
He continued to make great contributions in…
Appearance Slightly odd-looking, had a thick moustache and long white hair
Personalities a genius, courageous, kind, loved by many people, funny, sometime forgot things
Read and Think: structure of introduce a person
In time order
Title
Para1: Brief Introduction
Para 2: Early life/Education background
Para 3: Work experience & achievement
Para 4: Mid-life
Para 5: Appearance & personality
Para 6: Death
Rhetorical Device Example
Analogy (类比)
Metaphor (暗喻)
Simile(明喻) Personification (拟人)
Euphemism(委婉语）
Following this, he gradually became famous throughout the world ________________________ .
Einstein, who was Jewish, found _______________
___________________ closed to him.
He had a thick moustache and long white hair, which sometimes _________________ _____________
_____________________________________.
Einstein ________________.
as the new Isaac Newton
the doors of
had just received an electric shock
stood on end
had passed away
academic institutions
as though he
What rhetorical devices are used in the passage
Task 3：Micro-writing (导学案P117）
Albert Einstein, perhaps the greatest scientist in modern physics, is often considered one of 1. ______ smartest men who ever lived. He made numerous 2. _________________ (contribute) to the world, the most well-known 3. ________ (be) the general theory of relativity and the famous formula E=mc2. He was not only a genius, but also a 4. _______________ (courage) and kind person.
the
contributions
being
courageous
Einstein was born in Germany on 14 March 1879. He
5. ___________ (enter) university in 1896 and graduated in 1900. In 1905, he earned a doctorate in physics and published four extraordinary physics papers. In 1922, he 6. _________________ (award) the Nobel Prize in Physics for his explanation of the photoelectric effect. In 1933, he was forced 7. __________ (flee) Germany and 8. _____________ (eventual) took up a position as a researcher at the Institute for Advanced Study in Princeton, USA.
entered
was awarded
to flee
eventually
Although Einstein was a genius, he sometimes forgot things. He was loved by his friends and neighbours. He even made friends with a little girl, 9. _______ asked for help with her homework.
In 1955, Einstein passed 10. ________. The whole world mourned the great loss of the scientist. Till now, Einstein is remembered and respected by the public.
who
away
life story+
appearance
major achievements
Comments/
evaluation
pattern 1 (famous figure)
pattern 2 (ordinary people)
one
unusual thing
traits/influence
（特质）
(influence)
How to introduce someone you admire
Character determined/ committed
independent
practical
humorous
reliable
Wonderful expression of personality
ability wise
intelligent
talented/gifted
有才智的
睿智的、英明的
有天赋的
Attitude enthusiastic
optimistic
confident
polite
patient
considerate
frank
diligent
ambitious
满腔热忱的
乐观的
自信的
有礼貌的
热心的
为他人着想的
坦率的
勤奋的
野心勃勃的
坚定的
独立的
实事求是的
幽默的
值得信赖的
导学案P121【词句模板】
1.背景:
…was born in/into a poor/rich family in…;
when…was young; at the age of…; …spent one's childhood in…
2.外貌:
beautiful, pretty, good-looking, ordinary-looking, odd-looking, handsome, strong, fat, thin…
被大学录取 be admitted to 主修....... major in
获得硕士学位 /博士学位
receive a master's / doctor's degree
出国深造
have further study in .../ go aboard for the further education
毕业于.......大学 graduate from…university
精通…… have a good command of…
education background
3.品质或个性:
committed, kind, determined, gentle, considerate, optimistic, easy-going, warm-hearted, hard-working, responsible, patient, helpful, friendly, generous…
4.爱好:
be good at; have a great gift for; be keen on; be interested in; be fond of; be crazy about…
导学案P121【词句模板】
5.经历和成就:
devote oneself to;
do sth with great determination;
fight for; make up one's mind to do sth;
be determined to do sth;
overcome many difficulties;
try one's best to do sth;
enjoy widespread popularity;
win fame as;
make great contributions to…
导学案P121【词句模板】
6.评价:
one of the best;
the most important;
one of the heroes of the 20th century;
set a good example to;
…is the pride of…;
be regarded /recognized/respected/honoured as…;
…still live in one's heart…
导学案P121【词句模板】
三、常用表达
第一部分：简单介绍人物背景。
When talking about......, I can't help but think of......, a famous.......
eg: When talking about “The Admirable”, I can't help but think of Yuan Longping, an famous agricultural scientist.
当谈到“令人钦佩的人”，我情不自禁想起农业科学家袁隆平。
1. ......(人名) experienced many failures, but he did not give up.
eg: Yuan Longping experienced many failures, but he did not give up.
袁隆平经历了多次失败，但他没有放弃。
第三部分：你崇拜他／她的原因。
2. I am deeply inspired by......
eg: I am deeply inspired by his perseverance and scientific spirit.
他的毅力和科学精神鼓舞了我。
3. sb’s achievement not only...but also…
eg: Tu Youyou’s achievement not only showcases the immense potential of traditional Chinese wisdom but also underscores the importance of perseverance and innovative thinking in scientific research.
屠呦呦的成就不仅展示了中国传统智慧的巨大潜力，而且强调了在科学研究中坚持不懈和创新思维的重要性。
【拓展】
描述人的品质
patriotism 爱国精神 self-sacrifice 自我牺牲精神
perseverance 坚韧不拔 scientific spirit 科学精神
patience 耐心 persistence 坚持
determination 果断 selflessness 无私
sense of responsibility 责任心 kindness 善良
3. ......(人名) made great contributions in …, not only to China, but also to the whole world.
eg: Yuan Longping made great contributions in agriculture, not only to China, but also to the whole world.
袁隆平不仅对中国，而且对整个世界在农业方面做出了贡献。
4. As far as I am concerned, he is ......
eg: As far as I am concerned, he is a hero.
就我而言, 他是个英雄。
5. Her story inspires me to pursue my academic endeavors with an open mind, embracing both the past and the future.
她的故事激励着我以开放的心态去追求我的学术事业，拥抱过去和未来。
导学案P122【主题示例】
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以“最值得尊敬和爱戴的人”为主题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:
1.人物简介;
2.受尊敬和爱戴的原因。
注意: 短文题目和首句已为你写好。
1.令人敬佩的 _____________
admirable
2.谦虚的 __________
modest
3.贡献 ________________
contribution
导学案P122【主题示例】
1.取得巨大成就 ________________________________
make great achievements
2.对……产生影响 _________________________
make an impact on
3.为……做出贡献 ____________________________
make contributions to
4.成功做某事 ___________________________
succeed in doing sth
5.向……学习 ______________
learn from
6.致力于 _______________________
devote oneself to
【高级句式】
1.在他们当中,我最尊敬的人是钟南山。他因为对战胜病毒做出的巨大贡献已经家喻户晓。
Among them, the person I respect most is Zhong Nanshan, ______________________________________________ for his great contributions to defeating viruses.
who has become a household name
2.每次我看到他努力拯救人们的生命的照片时,我都禁不住被他感动。
Every time I see the pictures, in which he is fighting to save people's lives, I __________________________________________.
cannot help being moved by him
导学案P122【主题示例】
3.最让我印象深刻的是,84岁的他毫不犹豫地冲到了疫区前线。
________________________________ is that aged 84, he rushed to the front line of the epidemic area without hesitation.
What impresses me most
4.尽管很危险,但钟南山和他的同事们日夜努力治疗感染新冠病毒的病人。
__________________________________________________________________________________ , Zhong Nanshan and his workmates worked hard day and night to treat the patients infected with COVID-19.
Dangerous though(/as) it was/Although(/Though) it was dangerous
导学案P122【主题示例】
5.他对工作和对人的奉献是令人钦佩的,这确实激励了我将来要成为一个像他这样的人。
His dedication to work and to people is admirable, ______________________________ to become a man like him in the future.
which truly inspires me
导学案P122【主题示例】
The person I respect most
There are many respectable people in my heart. Among them, the person I respect most is Zhong Nanshan, who has become a household name for his great contributions to defeating viruses.
Zhong Nanshan, a medical scientist, is a leading figure in the battles against SARS in 2003 and COVID-19 in 2019, winning him the worldwide respect. Every time I see the pictures, in which he is fighting to save people's lives, I cannot help being moved by him. What impresses me most is that aged 84, he rushed to the front line of the epidemic area without hesitation.
导学案P122【主题示例】
Dangerous though it was, Zhong Nanshan and his workmates worked hard day and night to treat the patients infected with COVID-19. With their great efforts, remarkable results were achieved.
His dedication to work and to people is admirable, which truly inspires me to become a man like him in the future.
导学案P122【主题示例】
【活学活用】
假定你是李华，准备参加你校英语社举办的英语演讲比赛，主题为“我最敬佩的人”，参赛者需提前写好演讲稿并提交。内容包括：
1.人物介绍；
2.敬佩的原因。
注意：写作词数应为80左右。
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen,
____________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for your listening.
导学案P123【主题示例】
Writing practice
One possible version:
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen,
The person I respect most is my physics teacher. She is of medium height, with long and blonde hair. She is so patient with each student that we all like her.
It's her friendliness and the sense of responsibility that make me admire her. When I failed the exam last month and was in low spirits, she patted me gently on my shoulder and gave me great encouragement. She teaches us not only how to gain knowledge but also how to be a good person.
Thank you for your listening.
导学案P123【主题示例】
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen,
Born into a poor farmer‘s family in 1930, Dr Yuan Longping graduated from Southwest Agricultural College in 1935. Since then, finding ways to grow more rice had been his life goal.
As one of the most famous scientists, he grew what is called super hybrid rice which has a high output. Thanks to his great research, many less developed countries have got rid of hunger. Even in his 80s, he spared no efforts to pursue his dream that rice would be grown well in the sands and deep sea.
Famous as he is, he cares little for money and fame. He is a real hero not only in my heart but also in that of the millions of people all over the world.
个人简介
尊敬和爱戴的原因
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen,
There are many respectable people around us. As for me, Marie Curie is the person I respect most. It is generally acknowledged that Marie Curie is one of the greatest scientists in the world. Her discoveries are crucial to the later scientific research.
Marie Curie was interested in science when she was young. After graduating from university, she committed herself to her work with the objective of serving the whole society. Marie and her husband found the element radium, for which they were awarded the Nobel Prize. Not only was Marie the first female professor at the University of Paris, but she was also the first scientist in the world to win two Nobel Prizes.
Madam Curie was intelligent, brave and strong-willed. To sum up, she is the person I respect most. Thank you for your listening.
Jay Chou was born on the 18th of January, 1979 in Taiwan.
He is a famous singer .
He was raised by his mother.
Since his childhood, he has enjoyed singing.
Develop to Writing
周杰伦于 1979 年 1 月 18 日出生于台湾。
他是一位著名的歌手。
他由母亲抚养长大（raise up）。
自从他的童年时期开始，他就很喜欢唱歌。
Jay Chou was born on the 18th of January, 1979 in Taiwan. He is a famous singer .He was raised by his mother. Since his childhood, he has enjoyed singing.
想想，这样的句子真的能获得老师的青睐吗？
句型还能再升级呀！
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怎么升级？
三从非虚强倒！
从句
非谓语
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Jay Chou was born on the 18th of January, 1979 in Taiwan. He is a famous singer .He was raised by his mother. Since his childhood, he has enjoyed singing.
同位语：职位头衔、 年龄性别。
如：
⑴全红婵是一个来自广东的14岁女孩，她是世界跳水冠军。
Quan Hongchan, a world champion in diving (同位语), is a girl of 14 from Guangdong.
同位语
2.非谓语：介绍出生的时间、地点和家境, 使文章更简洁。如：
非谓语
⑴出生于2004年的潘展乐，在巴黎奥运会上打破了100米自由泳的世界记录。
Born in 2004, Pan Zhanle broke the world record
in the 100-meter freestyle at the Paris Olympics.
1. 钟南山1941年出生在广州，他是中国最伟大的医生之一。
Zhong Nanshan, ___________________________________, was born in Guangzhou in 1941. （同位语）
__________________________, Zhong Nanshan was one of the greatest doctors in China. （非谓语）
2. 为人自信乐观的男孩刘翔，出生在1983年的上海。
Liu Xiang, ________________________________, was born in Shanghai in 1983. （同位语）
one of the greatest doctors in China
Born in Guangzhou in 1941
a confident and optimistic boy
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3. 在中山大学毕业后，她出国深造。 （非谓语）
_____________________________________________ from Sun Yat-sen University, she went abroad to further her study.
4. 潘展乐创造了新的游泳的世界记录，为国家做出了贡献。 （非谓语）
Pan Zhanle set a new world record of swimming, ___________________________________.
5. 叶诗文获得两枚奥运金牌，这使她闻名于世界。(非限制性定语从句）
Ye Shiwen won two gold medals in London Olympic Games, _______________________________.
Having received a master’s degree/having graduated
making a contribution to our nation
which made her world-famous
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3. 巧用with复合结构：
分词结构
用来补充情况或细节。
①在句中作状语，表示条件、原因、时间、方式或伴随情况等
②用作定语，修饰前面的名词。
with+n.
◣She is a doctor with a strong sense of responsibility.
她是一位具有强烈责任感的医生。
2.with+宾语+介词短语
◣The teacher came in with a book in his hand.
老师手里拿着一本书进来了。
3.with+宾语+形容词
◣He likes to sleep with the window open.
他喜欢开着窗户睡觉。
3. 巧用with复合结构：
分词结构
用来补充情况或细节。
①在句中作状语，表示条件、原因、时间、方式或伴随情况等
②用作定语，修饰前面的名词。
4. with+宾语+-ing分词
◣He lay there with his eyes looking at the sky.
他躺在那里眼睛看着天空。
5.with+宾语+-ed 分词
◣All the afternoon he worked with the door locked.
一整个下午他都锁着门工作。
6. with+宾语+to do (表示动作尚未发生，或表示将来的动作）
◣With a lot of homework to do, he didn't know what to do.
有很多作业要做，他不知道怎么办了。
Jay Chou was born on the 18th of January, 1979 in Taiwan. He is a famous singer .He was raised by his mother. Since his childhood, he has enjoyed singing.
1. Born on the 18th of January, 1979 in Taiwan, Jay Chou, a famous singer, who has enjoyed singing since his childhood, was raised by his mother.
同位语
非谓语
定从
合理运用多样句式，言简意赅
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