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2025-2026学年八年级英语上册单元复习考点培优仁爱科普版
（2024）Unit 4 Changing and Growing
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．成长路途中难免有风雨，幸运的是总有人为我们撑伞。请结合自身经历，谈一谈在你遇到困难、面对压力时，他人对你的帮助及你的成长收获。
要求：
1. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清晰。
2. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
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2．生活中总有很多爱包围着我们，父母的付出，老师的鼓励，朋友的支持，陌生人的帮助……我们在用心感受这点点滴滴的爱。你校英语社团将举行主题为“Feel love, learn to love”的演讲比赛，请用英语写一篇参赛演讲稿。
内容包括：·show what love is in your eyes
·tell one of your stories of being loved
·share the influence that this story has on you
注意事项：1.词数不少于80词；2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
Dear teachers and friends,
When we talk about “love”, it’s not just a simple word to me—
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That’s all. Thank you!
3．研究表明音乐对不同的人的情绪有着重要的影响，因此人们用不同的音乐来调节心情。请根据下列提示内容，写一篇英语短文。
1. 如果你二十几岁，感觉压力大并且焦虑太多，建议你听流行音乐。流行音乐学起来容易并且被很多人所喜欢。作用：能够让你心情放松。
2. 如果你是我的同龄学生，沉迷于电脑游戏，兴奋过度，建议你听乡村音乐。乡村音乐是关于乡村生活和牛仔的。吉他的声音是令人愉快的。作用：能够让你心情平静。
3. 令我们吃惊的是，如果你感觉困倦和疲劳，建议你听摇滚音乐。摇滚音乐多用鼓。作用：能够让你心情兴奋。
4. 当你感到孤独悲伤时，听……，……音乐的特点能够让你心情高兴起来……
Research has shown that music has an important effect on one’s moods.
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4．陪伴家人你会幸福，笑对人生你会幸福，好友相聚你会幸福，努力奋斗你会幸福，酣畅淋漓地运动你会幸福，一顿美食你会幸福，亲近自然你会幸福，一次出游你会幸福，帮助他人你会幸福……，英语校报正在开展以“如何获得幸福”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请你用英文，以“How To Be Happy”为题，写一篇短文投稿。
How to be happy 1. love…
2. stay positive …
3. help others…
4. …
要求：1.短文词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和人名；
4.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
How to Be Happy
Everyone hopes to get happiness in daily life.
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5．转眼，已是你在力旺中学的第二年，在两年的初中生活中，一定有很多令人难忘的瞬间，让你至今回忆起都印象深刻，难以忘怀。请以“An unforgettable thing”为题，写一篇英语短文，描述一件难忘的事和事情发生的时间，地点，事情的经过。并阐述事情难忘的原因和你的感受。
要求：
1. 讲述你的一次难忘经历。
2. 谈谈你的感受。
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名。
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6．升入八年级后很多同学学习和交友方面的精神压力加大，深感焦虑。为了引导他们关注心理健康，鼓励他们积极面对压力，学会良好的缓解方法。请你以How to deal with our stress and worry为题，根据以下要点提示，写一份英文发言稿。
写作要点：
1. 引发同学们压力焦虑的原因(学习和交友)。
2. 过度压力焦虑带来的危害。
3. 提出缓解压力焦虑的方法(至少3点)，并希望一切得以解决。
写作要求：
1. 内容完整，语法正确，篇章连贯，段落清晰，书写工整；
2. 必须包括要点中所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；
3. 不得使用本人真实姓名和校名等；
4. 80—90词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
How to deal with our stress and worry
Good morning, my dear classmates and friends. It’s my honor to speak here, and today my topic is how to deal with our stress and worry.
It’s not easy being our age...
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That’s all. Thanks for listening.
7．假如你是张华，马上要毕业了，请你根据以下内容提示问题，写一篇英语文章寄给校刊，讲述你的惜别之情。
1. How do you like your school
2. Who impresses you most
3. How do you feel about the coming separation
Something more about your school life.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数100词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
How time flies! Looking back on the past three years,
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8．课桌里褪色的笔记本、书包上摇晃的钥匙扣、储物柜里的球鞋……那些看似普通的物品，总会在某个瞬间让记忆泛起温暖的涟漪。在你的成长过程中，一定也收到过这样的礼物吧！其中某件礼物或许承载着特别的故事。假如你是滕飞，请以“The Most Special Gift I Have Ever Received”为题，根据以下提示和要求，介绍这份礼物的来历、背后的故事及其意义。
提示：
1. What is it Who gave it to you How long have you kept it
2. What’s the story behind it
3. Why is it special to you Give your reasons.
要求：
1. 围绕以上提示展开作文并适当发挥补充，使文章内容充实；
2. 语意通顺，表达准确，条理清晰，书写规范；
3. 词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 文中不得出现个人真实的姓名、校名等信息。
The Most Special Gift I Have Ever Received
The most special gift I have ever received is
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9．我们的生活中处处充满着幸福，有父母的爱，有老师的爱，有同学的爱，有朋友的爱……请以“Happiness Around Me (我身边的幸福）”为题，写一篇短文。内容要点如下：
爱你的人 爱的表现
父母 为你做早餐；送你上学；照顾你……
老师 教你知识；传授学习方法；提供支持(provide support) ……
同学 一起学习；一起运动；和睦相处；分享快乐与烦恼 (worries)……
字数: 80—100 词
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10．班级将举办英语演讲比赛，请根据思维导图，以“How to Be Happy”为主题，写一篇70词左右的演讲稿。开头已经给出 （不计入总词数）。
要求：
1. 短文应条理清楚、行文连贯、段落分明；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的姓名、学校、地名等信息；
3. 短文应包括全部信息，可围绕主题适当发挥。
Good morning, everybody!
Today I want to talk about “How to Be Happy”. The following are my suggestions.
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11．美好的生活和学习中，总会有些东西值得我们回忆和珍惜，可能是一本书，一个玩具，一件物品……，请根据下面提示和要求，写一篇英文短文，讲讲你最喜欢的这件东西吧！1. 要点：
1）你保留了多长时间；
2）你如何得到它的；
3）你为什么如此喜欢它；
4）发生了什么事情让人对它印象深刻；
5）可适当发挥。
2. 要求：
1）文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；
2）词数100左右。
参考词汇：special adj. 特殊的； memory n. 回忆
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12．假如你是刘薇，你有一位在澳大利亚悉尼的外国朋友简。请给她写一封80个单词左右的信，文中必须包括以下要点：①来信收到，感谢对方寄来的礼物 (礼物自定)；
②回忆你们过去相处的情况；
③谈谈你现在的情况；
④想念对方，希望对方回信；
要求：
①短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。
②词数80左右，文章开头已给出 (不计入总词数)。
Dear Jane,
How are you I’m very glad to hear from you.
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Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Liu Wei
13．某英文网站正在开展以“我最想感谢的人”为主题的征文活动，假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈谁是你最想感谢的人，他/她是怎样帮助你的，以及你的收获。提示词语：trouble, encourage, improve, stick to, role model (榜样)等，提示词语的使用适情况而定。提示问题 (文章必须包含以下三方面)：
Who do you want to thank most
How did he/ she help you
What have you learned from him/ her
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
In my life, many people helped and influenced me a lot.
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14．我们曾收到过许多礼物，在这些礼物中一定有自己最珍爱的，它也许是一本书，或是一辆自行车，或是一张卡片……这些礼物伴随着我们成长，让我们时常想起生活中的点滴喜悦、感动和难忘。请以“My Cherished (珍爱的) Gift”为题结合自己的生活实际，描述这件礼物，写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1. 你珍爱的礼物是什么？
2. 你是如何得到这份礼物的？
3. 这份礼物对于你的意义是什么？
要求：
1. 词数不少于80；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
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15．每个人的生活都丰富多彩，因为我们的生活中每天都会发生各种各样的事情，令人难以忘记，如失意时的鼓励，奋斗后的喜悦，孤独时的陪伴，遇到困难时朋友伸出的援手……
请以“A(n) __________Thing in My Life"为话题，用英语写一篇短文分享你的经历。
写作要点 参考句型
1. Write about the event: what, when, where… 2. Write about your feeling and the reasons why you feel about that. When I was in…, I… I was…, when/while they… I think…. It was…in my life!
要求：
1. 补全完整标题，短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数不少于80词。
A(n) _________ Thing in My Life
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16．假如你是李华，期末考试后你将作为优秀学生代表在家长会上发言，讲述你自己的学习生活以及和老师、同学及家人的相处的方法。请根据以下要点写一篇英语发言稿，给同学和家长们一些好的建议。
要点：
1.学生应该制定适合自己的学习计划；
2.保持健康的饮食习惯，多进行体育锻炼；
3.在学校与老师、同学和睦相处。保持好的心情；
4.在家时，学生和家长要多沟通。同时家长不要给学生太多的压力。
要求：
1.文中应该包括以上信息，可适当发挥，论点清晰，行文连贯，书写规范；
2.文中不得出现涉及考生真实信息的人名、校名等；
3.词数：100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone. I am Li Hua. I’m glad to give a talk here. Here are some suggestions I would like to make.
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17．快乐在我们的生活中很重要，它可以让我们更健康、更幸福，请以“The Secret of My Happiness”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍你幸福的秘诀。
内容包括：
1. 总是保持乐观 (stay positive) ，即使遇到坏的事情；
2. 热爱读书，读书可以获取知识还可以变得更优秀；
3. 帮助他人，快乐自己；
4. 广交朋友，友谊就像阳光。
要求：
1. 语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯；
2. 词数：70词左右。
The Secret of My Happiness
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18．假如你是李华，请根据邮件内容，用英语给你的笔友Jenny写封回信。
Dear Li Hua, How’s it going I’m having a great time these days. I got many beautiful gifts on my birthday party and I like them very much. What’s your favorite gift How long have you had it Who gave it to you Why do you like it Can you tell me more about it Looking forward to your reply. Jenny
要求：
1.词数不少于80，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分；
Dear Jenny,
I’m glad to hear from you.
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Yours,
Li Hua
19．爱是付出，是陪伴，是支持，是分享。在生活中, 我们付出爱: 学校里随时向老师同学提供帮助，社区、敬老院里参加志愿者活动……在生活中，我们也收获爱: 享受家人制作的美味佳肴，得到父母、师长的各种关爱和帮助，假日里家人朋友陪伴我们的休闲出游……假如你是李辉，学校英文网站正在开展以“My memory of love”为题目的征文活动。请你用英文写一篇短文，积极参与投稿，分享你的爱的记忆。
内容包括：
（1）分享你的爱的记忆；
（2）介绍你的感悟。
注意:：
（1）词数 80 左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
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20．生活中，我们会收到来自家人、朋友、同学的各种各样的礼物，它们或是节日里的惊喜，或是生日时的祝福，又或是成长路上的鼓励。有些礼物因精致而被喜爱，有些却因背后的故事和情感，成为记忆中最珍贵的存在。请以”The Most Special Gift”为题，用英语写一篇短文，分享你心中那份最特别的礼物。
问题提示：
What is the gift and who gave it to you
How long have you had it
Why is it special to you
Something more about it.
注意事项：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数 100 词左右；标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
The Most Special Gift
The most special gift I’ve ever got is
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《参考答案及试题解析
1．范文：
Growing up is colorful.
It’s not always easy and I often felt lonely in the past. But things have changed since my head teacher Ms. Zhang had a long talk with me. She encouraged me to open my heart and lend my hand to others. I tried and it really worked. Now I have made a few friends and become more confident. I don’t find making friends that difficult now.
I will not be a closed book any more.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”及“一般过去时”；
③提示：作文要求结合自身经历，讲述身边的家人/朋友/老师是如何帮助你减压或度过困难的，注意时态的运用，避免出现单词拼写和语法方面的错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先表达在成长过程中遇到的问题；
第二步，具体介绍身边的家人，朋友或老师等是如何帮助你度过困难的；
第三步，书写结束语，表达自己的改变。
[亮点词汇]
①grow up 长大
②feel lonely 感到孤独
③have a talk with sb. 与某人交谈
④encourage sb. to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事
[高分句型]
But things have changed since my head teacher Ms. Zhang had a long talk with me. (since引导时间状语从句)
2．例文
Dear teachers and friends,
When we talk about “love”, it’s not just a simple word to me—Love means different things to different people. It can be support, encouragement or trust. In my view, love is understanding and respect.
Last summer vacation, my family talked about where to go for our trip. I knew they preferred educational ones, but I really wanted something relaxing. Thinking twice, I said I hoped to go to the beach. To my surprise, they agreed happily. Filled with warmth, I realized how much they loved me.
Love is about caring about others’ feelings. Just as my parents understand me and respect my choice, I promise I’ll do the same for them.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容完成写作，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你眼中的爱是什么；
第二步，讲述一个你被爱的故事；
第三步，分享这个故事对你的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①talk about谈论
②to my surprise令我惊讶的是
③filled with充满
[高分句型]
①Last summer vacation, my family talked about where to go for our trip. (where引导的宾语从句)
②Thinking twice, I said I hoped to go to the beach. (现在分词作状语；省略that的宾语从句)
3．例文
Research has shown that music has an important effect on one’s moods. So people use different kinds of music to change moods.
If you are in your twenties and feel stressed and worried a lot, I will suggest you listen to pop music. Pop music is easy to learn and loved by many people. It can also make you feel relaxed.
If you are a student of my age and crazy about computer games, I will advise you to listen to country music. Country music is about country life and cowboys. The sounds of guitars are pleasant. It can make you feel calm.
To our surprise, if you feel sleepy and tired, I suggest listening to rock music. Rock music often uses drums as the main instrument. It can make you feel excited.
When you feel lonely and sad, you can listen to jazz. Jazz music can make you feel happy and wonderful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：需围绕音乐对不同人群情绪的影响展开，结合题干中4条具体建议完成短文，注意逻辑衔接。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出音乐的重要性；
第二步，具体阐述每一种音乐带来的不同感受。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds of各种各样的
②be crazy about对……痴迷
[高分句型]
①If you are in your twenties and feel stressed and worried a lot, I will suggest you listen to pop music.（if引导了条件状语从句）
②It can also make you feel relaxed.（make sb. do sth.结构中省略to的动词不定式作宾补）
4．例文：
How to Be Happy
Everyone hopes to get happiness in daily life. As for me, there are several ways to achieve it. First, love your family. Spending time with them, like having dinners together or chatting, can bring warmth. Second, stay positive. When facing problems, a smile and a hopeful heart help a lot. Third, help others. Giving a hand to those in need, such as volunteering, makes you feel useful. Also, enjoy sports. Running or playing ball games lets you release stress and feel energetic. By doing these, happiness will surely fill your life.
【详解】【总体分析】
① 题材：说明文（阐述获得幸福的方法）；
② 时态：一般现在时（表述获得幸福的常规做法、观点等）；
③ 提示：围绕 “如何获得幸福”，从陪伴家人、保持积极、帮助他人、运动等方面展开，结合自身视角阐述 。
【写作步骤】
第一步：开篇点明大家都希望在生活中获得幸福，“Everyone hopes to get happiness in daily life.” ，引出话题；
第二步：从爱家人、保持积极、帮助他人、享受运动等方面，阐述获得幸福的具体做法，丰富内容；
第三步：总结做到这些，幸福会充满生活 ，收束全文。
【亮点词汇】
① release stress释放压力
② give a hand to帮助
【高分句型】
①As for me, there are several ways to achieve it. （there be句型）
②When facing problems, a smile and a hopeful heart help a lot.（省略了主语和be动词的时间状语从句）
③By doing these, happiness will surely fill your life.（by doing sth. 作方式状语）
5．例文
An unforgettable thing I had an unforgettable thing last summer vacation. I was free on a hot afternoon, so I went to play by the river with my friends. We played hide-and-seek. We had a good time. Then I hid behind some grass by the river. Suddenly I slipped and fell into the river. The water washed me away. Luckily, I was not far from the bank. My friends found a long stick to pull me out. It’s dangerous to play by the river. I’ll never forget the thing.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中一件难忘的事和事情发生的时间，地点，事情的经过以及事情难忘的原因和自己感受的介绍。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍一件难忘的事和事情发生的时间，地点，事情的经过；
第二步，介绍事情难忘的原因；
第三步，书写结语和介绍自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①an unforgettable thing一件难忘的事
②played hide-and-seek玩捉迷藏
③fell into the river落入河里
④far from离……远
[高分句型]
①I was free on a hot afternoon, so I went to play by the river with my friends. (so连接并列句，表示结果)
②It’s dangerous to play by the river. (it作形式主语)
6．例文
How to deal with our stress and worry
Good morning, my dear classmates and friends. It’s my honor to speak here, and today my topic is how to deal with our stress and worry.
It’s not easy being our age. In Grade Eight, we have more subjects and harder exams. Making new friends is also difficult. Too much stress makes us tired, sad and unable to sleep. It even hurts our bodies and minds.
There are some suggestions. First, talk to parents or teachers—they’ll always help. Second, do sports like running or playing basketball to relax. Third, listen to music or read books when we feel down.
I believe if we follow these suggestions, our stress and worry will slowly go away.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
②时态：以一般现在时为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：介绍引发同学们压力焦虑的原因；
第二步：指出过度压力焦虑带来的危害；
第三步：提出缓解压力焦虑的方法。
[亮点词汇]
①deal with处理
②too much太多
③listen to music听音乐
[高分句型]
①I believe if we follow these suggestions, our stress and worry will slowly go away. (省略that的宾语从句，if引导的条件状语从句)
7．例文
How time flies! Looking back on the past three years, I’m filled with gratitude for my school. It’s not just a place of learning, but a warm home where I’ve grown.
My English teacher impresses me most. Her lively classes and patient guidance made learning fun. She always encouraged me to step out of my comfort zone.
Facing the coming separation, I feel a bit sad. I’ll miss the laughter in the classroom and the chats with friends on the playground. But I also know that this is a new start. I’ll carry the memories and lessons from school into the future, and I’m looking forward to what lies ahead.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：根据提示要点进行写作，可适当添加细节，注意行文连贯，表述完整并突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明时光飞逝，回顾三年收获；
第二步，具体写给我留下印象最深的人；
第三步，表达对校园生活的怀念、对师生的感谢及不舍之情。
[亮点词汇]
①fill with充满
②step out of走出
③look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①It’s not just a place of learning, but a warm home where I’ve grown.（where引导的定语从句）
②But I also know that this is a new start. （宾语从句）
8．例文
The Most Special Gift I Have Ever Received
The most special gift I have ever received is a handmade notebook. It was given by my best friend on my 12th birthday, and I have kept it since then.
Last year, I was going through a hard time because of poor grades. My friend noticed my sadness. She spent a whole week making this notebook. Every page was decorated with encouraging words and our funny memories. When I received it, I was deeply touched.
This notebook is special because it carries my friend’s love and support. Whenever I look at it, I feel warm and regain the courage to face difficulties. It reminds me that true friendship can help us get through tough times.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先介绍收到过的最特别的礼物是什么，包括赠送者、赠送时间和保存时长；
第二步，具体介绍发生在礼物背后的故事；
第三步，说明礼物特殊的原因以及对自己的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①go through 经历
②because of 由于
③decorated with 装饰着
④regain 重新获得
⑤courage 勇气
⑥remind 提醒
⑦get through 度过
[高分句型]
①Whenever I look at it, I feel warm and regain the courage to face difficulties. (whenever引导的时间状语从句)
②It reminds me that true friendship can help us get through tough times. (that引导的宾语从句)
9．参考范文
Happiness Around Me
There is lots of happiness around me in my everyday life. Every day I can receive happiness from my parents, my teachers, my classmates and my friends. In the morning, my lovely mother cooks delicious food for me. Then my father drives me to school. At school all the teachers not only look after me well but also teach me lots of useful knowledge. My dear classmates and I study together happily, getting on well with each other. I chat online with friends in my spare time. They often share my pleasure and worries. I often feel happy and excited when I get love from them. I make a decision to study hard and make great progress. Here, I should say to them, “Thank you for all your love.”
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据表格内容进行写作，可适当增添细节，以使行文连贯，表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明自己身边有很多“爱”；
第二步，分别具体介绍爱自己的人以及爱的表现；
第三步，书写结语，表达对这些人的感恩。
[亮点词汇]
①look after照顾
②get on well with和……友好相处
③not only…but also…不但……而且……
④in one’s spare time在某人的空闲时间
⑤make great progress取得巨大进步
[高分句型]
①There is lots of happiness around me in my everyday life. (There be句型)
②I often feel happy and excited when I get love from them. (when引导的时间状语从句)
10．例文
Good morning, everybody!
Today I want to talk about “How to Be Happy”. The following are my suggestions.
First of all, it’s important to keep healthy. Without good health, we will have nothing. So we should form good life habits, eat good food and try our best to take exercise every day. Next, we should have some hobbies. When we have hobbies, we can spend our free time doing things we like. And our life will be busy but meaningful. Finally, I think happiness springs from helping others. When we help those in trouble, we must know what we can do and who we can help. I believe that if we do so, we can have a happy life.
That’s what I want to share with you. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏任何要点，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，由于文章开头已给出，故接下来具体阐述如何使人快乐；
第二步，提出让人快乐的建议；
第三步，表达对听众的感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all首先，起初
②keep healthy保持健康
③spring from起源于，来自
④in trouble处于困境中
[高分句型]
①When we have hobbies, we can spend our free time doing things we like. (when引导的时间状语从句，省略了that/which的定语从句)
②I believe that if we do so, we can have a happy life. (that引导的宾语从句，if引导的条件状语从句)
11．例文
My favorite thing from childhood is a toy bear. My mother gave it to me on my fifth birthday. I have had it for ten years.
I like it very much because it is so cute. It’s special to me because I used to play with it almost every day until I was ten years old. I think it was one of my best friends. The toy bear has left me so many memories.
I remember when I was six years old, I would never go to bed without it. Now, I don’t want to give it up, but to be honest, I have to. Because I’m getting older!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章要点已经给出，按照话题展开阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明最喜欢的物品及保留时长、获取方式；
第二步，阐述喜欢该物品的原因；
第三步，讲述与该物品相关的深刻回忆及当下对它的态度。
[亮点词汇]
①give sth to sb给某人某物
②give up 放弃
③to be honest说实话
[高分句型]
①I think it was one of my best friends.（省略that的宾语从句）
②I remember when I was six years old, I would never go to bed without it.（when引导的时间状语从句）
12．例文：
Dear Jane,
How are you I’m very glad to hear from you. Thanks a lot for your wonderful stamps and pictures. What nice pictures! Your smile is so sweet that I will think of you when seeing it.
How time flies! More than half a year has passed! We once studied in the same class and lived in the same room. You taught me English songs and I told you how to make dumplings. We were like sisters.
Now I’m busy getting ready for the exam. So I have to stop here. I miss you very much.
Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Liu Wei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一篇书信作文；
②时态：主要采用“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据写作要点展开写作，可以适当补充；注意条理清晰，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，感谢对方寄来的礼物；
第二步，介绍过去自己和对方相处的情况；
第三步，介绍自己现在的情况；
第四步，表达想念，希望对方回信。
[亮点词汇]
①thanks a lot for非常感谢
②be busy doing sth忙于做某事
[高分句型]
①Your smile is so sweet that I will think of you when seeing it.（so...that引导结果状语从句）
②How time flies!（感叹句）
13．例文：
In my life, many people helped and influenced me a lot. The person I want to thank most is my English teacher, Miss Wang.
Once, I had trouble learning English grammar. I felt frustrated and wanted to give up. Miss Wang noticed my problem and encouraged me not to lose heart. She spent extra time explaining difficult points patiently and helped me make sentences to improve. With her help, I stuck to learning and made great progress.
From her, I’ve learned that perseverance is key to success. She is truly my role model, and I’m grateful for her help.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为征文投稿；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”，描述过去的经历和帮助；
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，考生需围绕“最想感谢的人、他/她是如何帮助你的、你从他/她身上学到了什么”这三个方面进行写作，并适当使用提示词语，如“trouble, encourage, improve, stick to, role model”等，同时要注意行文的连贯性。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。通过“In my life, many people helped and influenced me a lot”来引出自己最想感谢的人；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。详细描述最想感谢的人是谁，他/她如何帮助自己度过困难，以及自己从他/她身上学到了什么，如坚持、鼓励等品质；
第三步，书写结语。可以表达自己对这个人的感激之情，以及他/她对自己的榜样作用。
[亮点词汇]
①have trouble doing sth. 做某事有困难
②lose heart 丧失信心
③make great progress 取得巨大进步
④be grateful for 感激
[高分句型]
①With her help, I stuck to learning and made great progress. (with的复合结构作状语)
14．例文
My Cherished Gift
Everyone has his or her most cherished gift. I have received many gifts, among which I like the book given by my father best of all.
Last summer holiday, I was addicted to screens almost every day, causing a sharp decline in my eyesight. Then my father gave me a gift—a book named Oxford Bookworm Series. He was smiling and said, “A good book can change your feelings and make you happy at home.” I wondered whether my father was right. But I still began to read the book. After a short time I was interested in the book gradually. Thanks to my father’s book, I didn’t feel bored any longer and kept away from my phone, for I was devoted to what’s in the book.
I think a good book is a good friend, which can keep you company and broaden your horizons. So it is my special gift—a book named Oxford Bookworm Series that has changed me a lot.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍自己最珍贵的礼物”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍珍爱的礼物是什么；
第二步，具体介绍得到礼物的过程；
第三步，总结这个礼物珍贵的原因，和自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②thanks to多亏
③keep away from远离
④broaden one’s horizons开阔眼界
[高分句型]
①I wondered whether my father was right.（whether引导的宾语从句）
②I think a good book is a good friend, which can keep you company and broaden your horizons.（which引导的定语从句）
15．例文：
An Unforgettable Thing in My Life
Life is full of memorable moments, and one thing that I’ll never forget happened last year.
When I was in Grade Seven, our school held a speech contest. I was very nervous because it was my first time to speak in front of the whole school. I practiced day and night but still forgot my lines halfway through the contest. I stood there, feeling so embarrassed that I wanted to run away.
Just then, my classmates started clapping and shouting “Come on!” Their warm encouragement gave me courage. I took a deep breath and finished the speech. Though I didn’t win a prize, I felt proud of myself. It was unforgettable because it taught me that the support from friends can help us get through difficulties. It was really a special thing in my life!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意要点齐全，可适当补充。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。文章开篇直接点明生活中有难忘时刻，引出下文要讲述的去年发生的一件难忘之事。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。详细描述了七年级时学校举办演讲比赛，自己因首次在全校面前演讲而紧张，日夜练习却在比赛中忘词，尴尬想逃时同学鼓掌加油，自己鼓起勇气完成演讲，虽未获奖但为自己骄傲。
第三步，书写结语。说明这件事难忘的原因是它让自己明白朋友的支持能帮助度过困难，强调这是生活中特别的事。
[亮点词汇]
①memorable难忘的
②nervous紧张的
③embarrassed尴尬的
④encouragement 鼓励
[高分句型]
①I was very nervous because it was my first time to speak in front of the whole school. (because引导原因状语从句)
②It was unforgettable because it taught me that the support from friends can help us get through difficulties. (because引导原因状语从句；that引导的宾语从句)
16．例文
Hello, everyone. I am Li Hua. I’m glad to give a talk here. Here are some suggestions I would like to make. First, I think it is necessary for us to make a suitable study plan. A good study plan helps improve efficiency. Second, we should have a healthy eating habit and take more exercise. Third, at school, we should get on well with our teachers and classmates. We should stay in a good mood. If we are in good spirits, we can study better. Finally, at home, we should talk with our parents more often. We need their support. At the same time, I think our parents shouldn’t give us too much pressure.
That’s all I want to say. Thanks for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题干要求展开内容，注意语言简洁、逻辑清晰，适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开场问候并引入主题；
第二步，给出自己的建议；
第三步，结束语。
[亮点词汇]
①get on well with与……和睦相处
②stay in a good mood保持好心情
③too much太多
[高分句型]
①I think it is necessary for us to make a suitable study plan.（宾语从句）
②If we are in good spirits, we can study better.（if引导条件状语从句）
17．参考范文
The Secret of My Happiness
Happiness is very important in our life. It can make us healthier and happier. Let me tell you the secrets of my happiness.
First, I always stay positive even when I meet bad things. Second, I love reading books. I can get lots of knowledge from books and become better and better. Third, I enjoy helping others. When I see their smiles, I feel warm. Finally, I like making more friends because friendship is like sunshine.
These are the secrets of my happiness.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生写作时应注意按材料要求写，需围绕保持乐观、热爱读书、帮助他人、广交朋友这几个要点展开叙述，清晰阐述每个要点与幸福的关联，根据实际情况可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明幸福在生活中的重要性，引出要介绍自己幸福秘诀的意图；
第二步，分别从保持乐观、热爱读书、帮助他人、广交朋友这几方面，阐述每个行为是如何成为幸福秘诀的；
第三步，书写结语，总结强调这些就是自己幸福的秘诀。
[亮点词汇]
① stay positive 保持乐观
② get lots of knowledge 获取大量知识
③ enjoy helping others 喜欢帮助他人
④ make more friends 交更多朋友
⑤ the secrets of ……的秘诀
[高分句型]
① I always stay positive even when I meet bad things. (含有时间状语从句的复合句)
② When I see their smiles, I feel warm. (含有时间状语从句的复合句)
③ I like making more friends because friendship is like sunshine. (含有原因状语从句的复合句)
18．例文：
Dear Jenny,
I’m glad to hear from you. Among all the gifts I've received, my favorite is a handmade notebook. I’ve had it for about two years. It was given to me by my grandma on my 12th birthday.
This notebook is special because it’s filled with grandma’s love. The cover is made of brown kraft paper, and she drew a little flower on it herself. Inside, there are some blank pages and some pages with her hand-written words of encouragement, like “Believe in yourself” and “Keep going”. Whenever I write in it, I feel her warmth. It makes me cherish every moment of writing and reminds me of the deep love from my grandma. So it’s not just a notebook, but a precious memory.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件。
②时态：时态为一般现在时和现在完成时。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中最喜欢的礼物、拥有时长、送礼人、喜欢原因的介绍要点，适当添加细节，突出礼物的特殊意义。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借已给开头引出最喜欢的礼物。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从礼物时长、送礼人、喜欢原因几方面，说明礼物的特殊之处。
第三步，书写结语。无需额外结语，原文结尾已给定，按逻辑完成内容阐述即可。
[亮点词汇]
①handmade notebook手工笔记本
②kraft paper牛皮纸
③words of encouragement鼓励的话语
④precious memory珍贵的回忆
[高分句型]
①I’ve had it for about two years. (现在完成时，说明拥有礼物的时长)
②This notebook is special because it’s filled with grandma’s love. (because引导原因状语从句，解释礼物特殊的原因)
③Whenever I write in it, I feel her warmth. (whenever引导时间状语从句，强调写笔记时的感受)
19．例文
My Memory of Love
Love is everywhere in our life. One of my most precious memories of love happened during my illness. I had a high fever and had to stay in bed. My parents took turns taking care of me. They made delicious porridge for me and watched over me day and night. My classmates also came to visit me, bringing me schoolwork and sharing funny stories to cheer me up. This experience made me realize that love is the most powerful force. It gives us strength and courage in difficult times. We should cherish the love we receive and also spread love to others.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，分享你的爱的记忆；
第二步，书写结语，介绍你的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①had a high fever 发高烧
②stay in bed躺在床上
③cheer up振作起来
[高分句型]
①This experience made me realize that love is the most powerful force.（宾语从句）
②We should cherish the love we receive and also spread love to others.（and连接的句子）
20．例文
The Most Special Gift
The most special gift I’ve ever got is a bookmark from my primary school teacher. I’ve had it for four years. It’s special to me for several reasons. First, it’s a lovely hand-made bookmark in the shape of a leaf. I can see my teacher made it with great care. Second, there’re inspiring words on it, “Reading makes a full man.” So the bookmark has greatly encouraged my reading. Third, it brings back happy memories. Whenever I see it, it reminds me of my teacher’s kind smile and her fun classes. This bookmark isn’t just a simple gift. It shows the care and encouragement from my teacher, and it will always be precious to me.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：以现在完成时和一般现在时为主；
③提示：文章紧扣主题，包含礼物的具体信息、特别的原因以及对礼物的情感，内容完整，情感真挚，逻辑连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明最特别的礼物是小学老师送的书签，说明拥有它已有四年，引出下文对其特别之处的阐述；
第二步，分点说明礼物特别的原因；
第三步，总结对礼物的情感。
[亮点词汇]
①bookmark书签
②hand-made手工制作的
③inspiring words励志话语
④remind使想起
⑤precious珍贵的
[高分句型]
①The most special gift I’ve ever got is a bookmark from my primary school teacher.（使用定语从句）
②I can see my teacher made it with great care.（运用宾语从句）
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