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7A第三单元知识复习第4讲--书面表达
一、作文核心复习清单
（一）核心写作主题
本单元作文以 “介绍学校” 为核心，多采用 “邮件” 形式（给外国朋友回复邮件），需涵盖对学校整体情况、设施、人物及个人感受的描述，词数通常要求 70 词左右（开头结尾已给，不计入总词数）。
（二）必含写作要素
1. 学校整体描述
大小 / 外观：如 “big and beautiful”“small but clean”“not large but special”；
环境：如 “many green trees and colourful flowers”“fresh air”。
2. 学校设施及功能
核心设施：library（图书馆）、playground（操场）、classroom building（教学楼）、gym（体育馆）、dining hall（餐厅）等；
设施作用：如 “library is quiet, I can read books there”“play football on the sports field”。
3. 最喜欢的地方及原因
明确 “最喜欢的场所”：如 “My favourite place is the library”；
说明原因：结合功能 / 感受，如 “because it’s quiet and has many interesting books”“I can play basketball with friends there”。
4. 人物描述（老师 / 同学）
老师：“kind and helpful”“patient”“teach carefully”“care about us”；
同学：“friendly”“often help each other”“play together after class”。
5. 个人感受
对学校的整体感受：“I feel very happy here”“I love my new school”；
期待：“I hope you can visit my school some day”。
（三）写作结构框架（邮件格式）
1. 开头（已给，无需自写）通常为 “Thanks for your email. I'm a new student at... now.”，直接承接邮件开头，引入学校介绍。
2. 正文（分 2-3 句，覆盖核心要素）
第 1 句：学校整体情况（大小 / 环境）；
第 2-3 句：最喜欢的地方 + 原因 / 老师 / 同学特点；
第 4 句：个人感受。
3. 结尾（已给，无需自写）通常为 “I hope you can come and visit my school some day! Best wishes,...”。
（四）高频实用句型
1. 描述学校整体：
My new school is...（big and beautiful/small but clean）.
There are many...（trees/flowers/classrooms）in my school.
2. 介绍最喜欢的地方：
My favourite place at school is...（the library/the playground）.
I like... best because...（it’s quiet/I can play sports there）.
3. 描述人物：
My teachers are...（kind/helpful/patient）. They often...（help me with lessons）.
My classmates are...（friendly）. We often...（play together after class）.
4. 表达感受：
I feel...（happy/relaxed）at my new school.
I love my school because...（it’s a great place to study and make friends）.
（五）写作注意事项
1. 词数控制：正文部分约 5-6 句，总词数 70 词左右，避免过长或过短；
2. 语法正确：使用一般现在时（描述客观情况）、人称代词（he/she/it/we）、There be 句型；
3. 词汇准确：使用本单元学校相关词汇（如 “modern library”“sports field”），避免生僻词；
4. 逻辑连贯：用简单连接词（and/but/because）衔接句子，如 “My school is not big, but it’s very special.”。
二、作文配套练习
（一）补全作文（每空 1 词，共 10 分）
根据提示，补全给外国朋友 Mike 的邮件，介绍你的学校。Dear Mike,Thanks for your email. I'm a new student at Star Middle School now.
My new school is ______（1. 又大又漂亮）and clean. There are many green ______（2. 树）and colourful flowers everywhere. My ______（3. 最喜欢的）place is the library. It’s quiet, and I can ______（4. 读）many interesting books there. My teachers are ______（5. 善良的）and helpful. They often help me ______（6.…… 的）my lessons. My classmates are friendly too. We often play basketball ______（7. 一起）after class. I ______（8. 感觉）very happy here.
I hope you can come and visit my school some day!Best wishes,Li Lei
（二）句型仿写（每句 2 分，共 10 分）
仿照示例，结合你的学校情况，用指定句型造句。
1. 句型：My new school is... but...
示例：My new school is small but special.
仿写：________________________________________________
2. 句型：My favourite place is... because...
示例：My favourite place is the playground because I can play football there.
仿写：________________________________________________
3. 句型：There are... in my school.
示例：There are two music rooms in my school.
仿写：________________________________________________
4. 句型：My teachers are... They often...
示例：My teachers are patient. They often explain problems to me.
仿写：________________________________________________
5. 句型：I feel... at school because...
示例：I feel relaxed at school because my classmates are nice.
仿写：________________________________________________
（三）段落写作（15 分）
请以 “My School Playground” 为题，写一段文字介绍学校操场，包含以下要素：
①操场的位置 / 大小；②在操场能做的活动；③你对操场的感受。要求 30-40 词。
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（四）书面表达（25 分）
假设你是晨光中学七年级学生王浩，收到英国朋友 Alice 的邮件，她想了解你的新学校。请根据邮件内容回复，词数 70 左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Alice,Thanks for your email. I'm a new student at Chenguang Middle School now.
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I hope you can come and visit my school some day!Yours,Wang Hao
三、练习答案
（一）补全作文
1. big and beautiful 2. trees 3. favourite 4. read 5. kind 6. with 7. together 8. feel
（二）句型仿写（示例）
1. My new school is big but not noisy.
2. My favourite place is the music room because I can practice singing there.
3. There are three computer rooms in my school.
4. My teachers are helpful. They often help me with my Maths.
5. I feel happy at school because I can learn a lot from my teachers.
（三）段落写作（示例）
My School PlaygroundOur school playground is behind the classroom building. It’s big and clean. We can play basketball, run and play games there after class. I like it because it makes me relaxed.
（四）书面表达（示例）
Dear Alice,Thanks for your email. I'm a new student at Chenguang Middle School now.
My school is not very big but very beautiful. There are many trees around the playground. My favourite place is the library—it has lots of storybooks. My teachers are kind and often help me with my lessons. My classmates are friendly, and we play together every day. I feel really happy here.
I hope you can come and visit my school some day!Yours,Wang Hao

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