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中考话题复习综合写作课
个人情况、家庭、朋友和人际关系、
日常生活与学校生活
学习目标
1. 学生能通过思维导图，梳理个人介绍信息和给建
议的句型；
2. 学生能够选择合适、恰当的个人信息进行口头自
我介绍，应聘校心之桥社团助理招募；
3. 学生能够以书信形式，有读者意识，能够表达自
己的同理心、给予建议并有换位思考的意识。
Part 1 Warming up (Play a game)
Looking for you
Rule: If you think the words are describing you,
please stand up and say it again like “I ...”.
Looking for you
You are 15 years old.
You are tall with short black hair.
Your hobby is playing basketball.
You are interested in reading books.
You are good at communicating with people.
You are a helpful student.
You love your English teacher very much.
You like me, too.
introduce
a person
What else
When do we need to introduce someone
Go to a party
Join a new class
Attend a new club
Have a job interview
age
appearance
hobby
advantage
name
class, grade, school
family
personality
Part 1 Warming up (Elicit the background)
Part 2 Oral Practice ( a self-recommendation speech)
What are you going to introduce
□name □age □nationality □birthday □family □class, grade □appearance □hobby
□advantages □personality □achievements □future plan
personal information
personal ability
personal
ability
You can begin like this:
Good afternoon. I’m Jerry. I’m pleased to have the chance to be interviewed for the position. ...
....
I’m glad I can talk to you. I’m sure I am the right person for the position.
Jerry
60 words
Part 2 Oral Practice ( a self-recommendation speech)
During the interview
Checklist
Did the student talk about Jerry’s personal information？
Did the student talk about Jerry’s personal ability
Jerry
Jerry
Part 3 Pre-writing
Heart-Bridge Club
Asking for help
How to write a letter of advice
Jerry
Helper
Part 3 Pre-writing
Choose the proper expressions to show comfort with your partner.
Show comfort
1. I understand how you feel.
2. I’m so proud of your achievement!
3. I’m sorry to hear about your situation.
4. You must be going through a tough(艰难的) time.
5. That must be really challenging for you.
6. Please know that I’m here to support you.
7. Congratulations on your victory!
8. I can understand your situation.
9. I know this isn’t easy for you.
10. I’m sorry to hear that...
Part 3 Pre-writing
Give advice
Choose the proper advice to help solve the problem.
proper
acceptable
A. You can start reading English books or articles that interest you.
B. You should be kind and friendly to others.
C. It is a good idea to speak English as much as possible.
D. The more you use them, the easier learning English will be.
Part 3 Pre-writing
Give advice
Choose the proper advice to help solve the problem.
proper
acceptable
A. Make word cards.
B. You’d better read quickly to get the main ideas and key points.
C. If you take part in some activities with your classmates, you will
learn more about your classmates.
D. It is useful to repeat difficult words.
Part 3 Pre-writing
Give advice
Choose the proper advice to help solve the problem.
proper
acceptable
A. When you understand them, you can remember them better.
B. I strongly advise you to exercise more often.
C. There’s no need to care about what others think of you.
D. Try to have a healthy diet.
Part 3 Pre-writing
Can you sum up sentence structures used to express suggestions
A. You can start reading English books or articles that interest you.
B. You should be kind and friendly to others.
C. It is a good idea to speak English as much as possible.
D. The more you use them, the easier learning English will be.
A. Make word cards.
B. You’d better read quickly to get the main ideas and key points.
C. If you take part in some activities with your classmates, you will
learn more about your classmates.
D. It is useful to repeat difficult words.
A. When you understand them, you can remember them better.
B. I strongly advise you to exercise more often.
C. There’s no need to care about what others think of you.
D. Try to have a healthy diet.
1. You can/ should(情态动词) ...
2. It is a good idea for sb to do sth.
3. You’d better do sth.
4. If you ..., you will...
5. It is adj. for sb to do sth.
6. When..., you can...
7. I strongly advise you to do sth.
8. I think you should try to...
9. To solve this problem, why
don’t you do...
10. If I were you, I would...
11. In my opinion...
12. It’s better to do...
13. I’d like to suggest that ...
Part 3 Pre-writing
Writing a letter of advice is the best way to give advice to others.
Dear Sally,
I’m sorry to hear that you are not good at English and you failed the English exam. Here are my suggestions for you to solve the problem.
First of all, you can start by reading English books or articles that interest you. This will not only help you increase your vocabulary but also improve your reading ability. Besides, it is a good idea to speak English as much as possible. What’s more, when you don’t know the word’s meaning, you can look it up in a dictionary and learn it by heart.
I hope that my suggestions will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Jerry
Comfort +Problem
advice 1
effect
advice 2
condition/ reason
advice 3
wish
Transition words 过渡词
Transition sentence 过渡句
Part 4 While-writing
Dear Tom,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Jerry
Write a letter of advice to Tom.(At least 3 pieces of advice)
80 words
1. You can/ should(情态动词) ...
2. It is a good idea for sb to do sth.
3. You’d better do sth.
4. If you ..., you will...
5. It is adj. for sb to do sth.
6. When..., you can...
7. I strongly advise you to do sth.
8. I think you should try to...
9. To solve this problem, why
don’t you do...
10. If I were you, I would...
11. In my opinion...
12. It’s better to do...
13. I’d like to suggest that ...
Part 5 Post-writing
Checklist Content Does the article show comfort, state the problem and give at least three pieces of advice
Language Does the article use correct sentences or beautiful expressions
Structure 1. Does the article use transition words and sentences
2. Does the article include three paragraphs
Exchange papers
Dear Tom,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Jerry
基础作业：自查作文的内容要点是否齐全，语言表达是否准确，连接词是否正确运用，尝试用一两个复杂句型提高作文的亮点。
提升作业：美化作文，逻辑结构是否合理，尝试较复杂的句式，丰富词汇的多样性。
拓展作业：根据Amy的来信所提出的问题，给予合适的建议，写一封回信。
Part 6 Homework
Alone we can do so
little;
together
we can do so much.
团结合作胜过单打独斗。
Self-evaluation Yes / No
能选择合适、恰当的个人信息进行口头自我介绍，应聘校心之桥社团助理招募；
能掌握表达同理心、给予建议的句型；
能在课堂小组合作中，向他人学习到了一些知识；
能根据他人的问题有条理地提出自己的建议；
能互帮互助，增强了探究方法解决问题的意识。
课后评价单
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