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(共29张PPT)
Writing
letter of advice
Objective
01
Format
02
Structure
03
Expression
04
Homework
05
Content
第一部分
Objective
1.复习书信格式，掌握书信的框架结构。
Review the format of the letter, master the structure of it.
2.能有效审题，从题目中获取有效信息。
Understand the topic and get useful information.
3.能够写出具体的建议内容。
Be able to write specific suggestions.
Objective
1.How many paragraphs
How to write the letter
Two questions:
2.What are included in each paragraph
Format
第二部分
I’m glad to receive your letter. From your letter, I know you have the problem of how to make new friends in high school. The following are my suggestions. First, you should smile and try to be friendly when you meet people. You should also care about your schoolmates. If you are always ready to help them, they will understand you better. Second, it is important for you to be a good listener. That way, when people are with you, they will feel comfortable and happy. Finally, it is better for you to take an active part in class activities where you can show your talent. I hope my advice will be helpful to you. May you be happy in your new school.
I’m glad to receive your letter. From your letter, I know you have the problem of how to make new friends in high school. The following are my suggestions.
First, you should smile and try to be friendly when you meet people. You should also care about your schoolmates. If you are always ready to help them, they will understand you better. Second, it is important for you to be a good listener. That way, when people are with you, they will feel comfortable and happy. Finally, it is better for you to take an active part in class activities where you can show your talent.
I hope my advice will be helpful to you. May you be happy in your new school.
Dear Lin Hao,
I’m glad to receive your letter. From your letter, I know you have the problem of how to make new friends in high school. The following are my suggestions.
First, you should smile and try to be friendly when you meet people. You should also care about your schoolmates. If you are always ready to help them, they will understand you better. Second, it is important for you to be a good listener. That way, when people are with you, they will feel comfortable and happy. Finally, it is better for you to take an active part in class activities where you can show your talent.
I hope my advice will be helpful to you. May you be happy in your new school.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear______,
Yours truly,
signature(签名)
Greeting sentences (1.greetings)
Letter body ( 2.tips/suggestions)
Ending sentences( 3.encouragement)
Format
写书信体裁作文就是和收信者聊天:
语言风格
和亲朋好友（轻松说）
相关负责人（正式说）
Tips
Structure
第三部分
体裁：书信
类型：建议信
假定你叫李华，最近，你的好友林浩来信说他升入高中以后感到不太适应，不知道如何结交新朋友。请你用英语给他回一封信，提出一些建议。
Dear Lin Hao,
I’m glad to receive your letter. From your letter, I know you have the problem of how to make new friends in high school. （背景）Here are my suggestions. （目的）
First, you should smile and try to be friendly when you meet people. You should also care about your schoolmates.（建议1） If you are always ready to help them, they will understand you better. （理由1）Second, it is important for you to be a good listener. （建议2）That way, when people are with you, they will feel comfortable and happy. （理由2）Finally, it is better for you to take an active part in class activities where you can show your talent. （建议3）
I hope my advice will be helpful to you. May you be happy in your new school. （希望建议能帮助对方）
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Lin Hao,
I’m glad to receive your letter. From your letter, I know you have the problem of how to make new friends in high school. （背景）Here are my suggestions. （目的）
First, you should smile and try to be friendly when you meet people. You should also care about your schoolmates.（建议1） If you are always ready to help them, they will understand you better. （理由1）Second, it is important for you to be a good listener. （建议2）That way, when people are with you, they will feel comfortable and happy. （理由2）Finally, it is better for you to take an active part in class activities where you can show your talent. （建议3）
I hope my advice will be helpful to you. May you be happy in your new school. （希望建议能帮助对方）
Yours,
Li Hua
Knowing that
On the one hand,
On the other hand,
In addition
建议信
自我介绍/问候+写作背景+目的
表明具体建议+理由
希望所给建议有帮助+期待回信
1.写作背景
得知你对.......感兴趣
很遗憾得知你.....方面有困难
2.写作目的
我写信是想给你分享我的看法/提出一些建议
3.建议如下：
Knowing that you are interested in .........
I'm sorry to hear that you have trouble in......
How to write part 1
I'm writing to share my opinions
I'm writing to give you some advice/suggestions
Here are some advice/suggestioms.
The suggestions are as the following.
On the one hand, you should（建议1）
On the other hand, you'd better（建议2）_
In addition, it is +adj+ for sb to do（建议3）
How to write part 2
1. I hope my advice will be helpful to you.
2. Looking forward to your reply
1.希望我的建议对你有帮助
2.期待收到你的回复
How to write part 3
第四部分
Expression
假定你叫李华。你的朋友Tom来信向你询问如何保持健康,请你给他发一封E-mail提些建议。
要点如下：
1.注意合理饮食，多吃水果蔬菜；
2.保证充足睡眠，至少8小时；
3.坚持锻炼身体，多参加体育运动。
保持健康
建议
Exercise
Dear Tom,
How is everything going Knowing that ______________________________. I’m writing to _________________________. The advice is as the following.
请把中间段补充完整。
I hope my advice will be helpful to you. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
LiHua
you need some help from the letter
tell you how to keep healthy
睡眠
饮食
运动
On the one hand, 你每晚应该有至少8小时的睡眠（建议1），充足的睡眠使你精神充沛.如果不，你会经常感到疲惫，（理由1）
在我看来，health includes several aspects.
On the other hand, food is also important, 你应该养成一个好的饮食习惯,多吃水果和蔬菜（建议2）有助于提高你的学习效率.
In addition, 做运动对我们来说是很有必要的，
你应该多参加体育活动（建议3），它会使你的身体更强壮更健康（理由3）
怎么解决一个问题/困难
怎么达成一个目标
How to solve the problem
How to achieve your goal
难题：
难以融入新集体，适应新环境
与家长/同学沟通问题、学习遇到困难
学校举办活动
视力衰退肥胖等健康生活方式等问题
环境问题、交通问题
建议信
自我介绍+问候+写作背景+目的
表明具体建议+理由
希望所给建议有帮助+期待回信
邀请信
表明邀请的具体原因+内容
希望对方接受邀请+期待回信
建议信
自我介绍+问候+写作背景+目的
表明具体建议+理由
希望对方考虑自己的建议+期待回信
推荐信
邀请信
推荐的内容+理由
表明邀请的具体原因+内容
希望对方能采纳推荐+期待回信
希望对方接受邀请+期待回信
建议信
自我介绍+问候+写作背景+目的
表明具体建议+理由
推荐信
感谢信
推荐的内容+理由
表达感谢的具体原因+细节
希望对方能采纳推荐+期待回信
再次表达感谢+期待回信
第五部分
Homework
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