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(共26张PPT)
书面表达之
细节增加
（一）开头与结尾
Learning aims: To better the beginning and ending by adding details
I am Li Hua.
I have many friends worldwide.
I am so busy writing letters/emails.
Thousands of students pretend to be me.
邀请信
2017-2018年
一、引入
假定你是李华，你校成立了网上旅游俱乐部(Online Travel Club)，你想邀请你的英国朋友Evans加入。请你写一封邮件，告知该俱乐部的活动内容。内容包括：
1. 讨论旅游话题；
2. 推荐旅游景点；
3. 交流旅游经历。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
Dear Evans,
I’m glad to tell you that our school has founded Online Travel Club, and I’d like to invite you to join it.
All the activities will be held online, which is convenient for us all. We will discuss various travelling topics, which can broaden our vision and add to our knowledge. Besides, every club member has the duty to recommend well-known tourist attractions to others. In this way, we’ll have rich sightseeing resources and more choices when travelling. Finally, the club is also a good place to share our travelling experiences with each other.
Pleasant travelling experiences can bring much pleasure. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
参考范文
优秀作文：专家评分：25分，
结构：(2-3)+(8-10)+(2-3), 增添细节
Based on the writing task and cover all the points.
“第五档（很好）：（21-25）
1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。
2. 覆盖所有内容要点。
3. 适当增添了细节。”
－《全国高考英语作文评分标准（2018）》
01
02
开头 Beginning
03
正文 Body
结尾 Ending
Where can we add some details
二、主题内容
Beginning
Body
Ending
Part1
the Beginning
I'm Li Hua from Lianshi School, president of the Students Union. I'm writing to invite you to take part in the Talent Show, which will be held on next Friday evening. 邀请信
I am writing to express my gratitude to you. Because of your help, I have made great progress in learning English. 感谢信
I'm delighted to hear that you have won the first prize in the English speech contest of middle school students, so I'm writing to give my sincere congratulations. 祝贺信
I'm very sorry that I can't go on a trip to Beijing with you next weekend, which I have promised you. I'm writing to tell you the reason for it. 道歉信
Revision 常考作文的开头句
【Tips】1.
. (2017全国I) 假如你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Lesie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括:(1)时间和地点; (2)内容:学习唐诗; (3) 课前准备:简要了解唐诗。
Glad to receive your letter where you mentioned you are enthusiastic about Chinese. I am writing to inform you of the plan of our next lesson.
I am Li Hua. Given that you show a great interest
about Chinese, let me inform you our plans in the
next class. Here follows the content.
如何在开头适当增加细节？
注意双方的关系 the relationship
Friends
or strangers
【Tips】2.
1).招呼(Greetings) (17全国I) How are you getting along with ..
2).身份(identity):
I am Li Hua, a _____________ (高三） student of …
I am Li Hua, an __________________（交换生）from China.
I am Li Hua, ___________________(主席）of the Students Union
Senior Three
exchange student
president/chairman
同位语
邀请外教一起参观中国剪纸展。I am writing to invite you to join me in enjoying an exhibition of paper-cutting, where you can have a good taste of traditional Chinese culture.
【Tips】3.补充原因、好处、意义
—补充可以得到的好处, 增加说服力。
— 补充文化意义, 增加活动吸引力
邀请外教Lucy一起去敬老院陪老人过重阳节。I’d like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nursing home nearby for the Double Ninth Festival, which is the day for the elderly in our culture.
1.假定你是李华，你校将举办才艺表演，你想邀请你的外国朋友Tom参加。
A.I’m writing to invite you to join us in the Talent Show.
我写信是想邀请你参加“才艺表演”。
Which one is better
B.I’m writing to invite you to join us in the Talent Show, in which you can get a better understanding of Chinese culture.我写信是想邀请你参加“才艺表演”。
Practice1.选择
1.假定你是学生会的主席李华，你校将举办主题为thanks to our mother的英语演讲比赛，想邀请你校外籍教师Brown先生当评委。
I'm li Hua,____________________________. Our school is going to _____________________________with ___________________
__________, so I’m writing to _____________________________ .
Practice2.根据要求完成句子
同位语：学生会主席 president of the Students Union
举办：hold, 英语演讲比赛：English Speech Contest
主题：topic , ......的主题: the topic of sth. 评委: judge
president of the Students Union
hold an English Speech Contest
the topic of thanks to
our mother
invite you to be one of the judges
填空
2.假定你是李华，你被自己心仪的大学录取了。请你给你的外教Mrs. Wilson写封感谢信，感谢在校期间她对你的教导和帮助。
I’m glad to write to ________________________ and share with you ____________________________________, ________________
______________.
表达：_________ 感谢/感激之情：________________
向某人表达感激之情：__________________________
和某人分享某事：_______________________
承认：_______ 被......录取：_______________________
梦想做某事：_______________________________
express
thanks, gratitude
express one's gratidtude to sb.
express my gratitude to you
my happiness of being admitted to college
which I have been
dreaming of
share sth. with sb.
admit
be admitted to
dream of/about doing sth.
Part2
the Ending
1.我真诚地希望你能接受我的邀请, 我确定你一定不会后悔如果你能来。
I sincerely hope you could accept my invitation. I'm sure you won' t regret if you could come.
Para 3. the Ending 常见的结尾句：
4.祝你开心幸福
I wish you all possible joy and happiness in the world.
2.你的参与真的为我们的旅程增添色彩，我们都期待你的到来。
Your participation can surely add color to our trip and we are all looking forward to your involvement / coming.
3. I’d appreciate it if you could come.Thank you very much for the favour you’ll do to us. I’m looking forward to your early reply. (邀请对方帮忙）
Para 3.：the Ending
(2017全国I) 假如你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Lesie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括:(1)时间和地点; (2)内容:学习唐诗; (3) 课前准备:简要了解唐诗。
下面哪一个最好？
1. Looking forward to seeing you again.
2. Expecting your early reply and your participation.
3. (17年全国I 优秀考场作文)：If you have any question in the process of preparation, feel free to(随意) ask me by email or by phone. I am looking forward to the class and hoping to succeed in learning Chinese.
【Tips】：
It is always wise to try to be as polite as possible. (礼貌)
—To express your , appreciation, congratulations, wishes again.
2.Try to emphasize your emotion with adj. or adv.(形或副)
Thanks a lot for your _____(好心的) attention to the letter.
I shall appreciate it _________________(非常） if …
I am ___________(非常) glad that …
I ____________ (真诚地) wish you …
kind
a lot/very much
extremely
sincerely
Practice 翻译句子
1.你的到来(出席)真的为我们的演讲带来很大的帮助，我们都期待你的到来。（邀请信的结尾）
Your presence can surely be of great help to us and we are all looking forward to your coming.
使用高级词汇
出场：presence
有帮助的：helpful= of great help
期待：look forward to
2.正是你的帮助使得我的实现了我的梦想，在以后的时间里我会更加努力学习，以优异的成绩报答你的真诚帮助和期望。(感谢信的结尾)
It is your help that enables me to achieve my dream. For the following years I will study harder to return(报答) your sincere help and expectations with excellent grades.
使用高级句型
使某人能够做某事 enable sb. to do sth.
实现某人的梦想 make one's dream come true
realize/achieve one's dream
在以后的时间里 for the following years
用......回报 return sb. with sth.
以优异的成绩 with excellent grades
期待expect vt. expectation n.
使用高级词汇
It be... that ... 强调句
1.假定你是学生会的主席李华，你校将举办主题为thanks to our mother的英语演讲比赛，想邀请你校外籍教师Brown先生当评委。
I'm li Hua, presiddent of the Students Union. Our school is going to hold an English Speech Contest with the topic of thanks to our mother, so I’m writing to invite you to be one of the judges.
1.你的到来(出席)真的对我们的演讲有很大的帮助，我们都期待你的到来。（邀请信的结尾）
Your presence can surely be of great help to us and we are all looking forward to your coming.
把开头结尾连起来
2.假定你是李华，你被自己心仪的大学录取了。请你给你的外教Mrs. Wilson写封感谢信，感谢在校期间她对你的教导和帮助。
I’m glad to write to express my gratitude to you and share with you my happiness of being admitted to college, which I have been dreaming of.
2.就是你的帮助使得我的实现了我的梦想，在以后的时间里我会更加努力学习，以优异的成绩报答你的真诚帮助和期望。(感谢信的结尾)
It is your help that enables me to achieve my dream. For the following years I will study harder to return(报答) your sincere help and expectations with excellent grades.
把开头结尾连起来
三、Summary 总结
邀请信的开头
I am Li Hua, the president of the Students Union, I am writing to invite you to...
I’d like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nursing home nearby for the Double Ninth Festival, which is the day for the elderly in our culture.
同位语
非限定从
使用高级词汇
使用高级句
邀请信的结尾 Your presence can surely be of great help to us and we are all looking forward to your coming.
假如你是新华中学的学生会主席李华，你校学生会应英国Westminster School邀请，下星期将到该校进行交流访问，向该校学生介绍中国传统文化。请你给该校联系人Mr. Smith写一封邮件。要点如下：
1.感谢对方的邀请
2.询问食宿、活动安排和说明要介绍的传统文化内容
3.祝愿交流活动成功
适当添加细节。
四、Homework 作业
想高分，就背诵，多练笔，灵活运用！
Work hard! You can make it!
Practice makes perfert!

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