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(共19张PPT)
A Happy Encounter—Composition
If you can take it, you can make it.
敢于实践，方能实现
Learning Objectives:
* Master the basic structure of a letter.
* Express opinions with English thinking.
* Accumulate some language materials.
Just imagine: What is a good writing
Structure
Content
idea
Language
Welcome to London. I'm Li Hua, a guide. Now I'd like to tell you something about London.As is known to all, London is the capital of Britain, which is located on the bank of River Thames. It is a very big city with a population of about 7 million. It is also a busy place. People there are usually friendly and helpful, but they are often in a hurry.What impresses visitors most is that the weather is chopping and changing. That ’s why the English people always talk about the weather. London has many beautiful parks andgardens and other famous places of interest,such as London Museum and Hyde Park.Finally, I sincerely hope every one ofyou will enjoy yourself here.
Structure:
Enjoy the following paragraph
How do you feel when you see this
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter 对中国文化很感兴趣，来信询问重阳节的相关情况。请你给他写一封邮件，介绍重阳节。
内容包括:1.重阳节的时间2.重阳节的活动
3.重阳节的意义
The Double Ninth Festival is the ninth day of the ninth lunar month.On this day, people often visit their parents. They sing, dance and eat Chongyang cake together.
What about this
Content:
亮“宝”
① Knowing that the Double Ninth Festival is coming, so happy am I that I can not wait to writer the letter to tell you something about it.
② I am looking forward to you letter.
词性 !!!
Language:
writer
③ It means family get together to happy.
④ The Double Ninth Festival meaning is respect old people.
⑤ Many people will climb moutains to remember their family.
Chinglish !!!
Idea:
What is a good writing
首段：How have you been recently
Knowing that you are interested in Chinese culture, so happy am I that I can not wait to tell you something about the Double Ninth Festival.
论“宝”
中段：The Double Ninth Festival is one of the Chinese traditional festivals.
On this day, people often visit their parents and eat Chongyang cake with their families.In addition, they can climb mountains.
论“宝”
参考范文：In my opinion, this festival is of great significance because it reminds the young to have a sincere respect for the aged.
末段：I sincerely hope you can have a chance to come to China.
I have to stop now. If you want to know more about the Double Ninth Festival please write to me.
I have to stop now. I would appreciate it if you could reply to me at your earliest convenience.
论“宝”
藏“宝”
1. Knowing that 知道/ Learning that得知/ Considering that 考虑到 +背景, so happy/ delighted/ sad/ sorry am I that I am writing/ can not wait to + 目的
①invite you to do ②ask you for help/advice
③offer you some advice ④ apologise to you
⑤ express my thanks to you ⑥ introduce sth
⑦ apply for sth ⑧ complain about sth
2. For one thing, we can not only...but also...For another,it is ...for sb to do sth.In addition...
3. I'd appreciate it if you could...
PRACTICE
假定你是李华，你将邀请书法老师给学生作主题为“如何正确握笔，优美书写”的一次讲座。请用英语给对书法感兴趣的留学生Jack写一封信，邀请他一起参加。
内容包括:1. 写信目的 2.介绍讲座 3.期待他的参加
鉴“宝”
Please learn to
assess
your compositions !
Knowing you are interested in Chinese handwriting, I am writing to invite you to attend a lecture whose theme is holding pens correctly and writing beautifully.
I sincerely hope you can attend the lecture with me. Looking forward to your early reply.
Structure:
Good beginning and ending.
Well organised and smoothly developed.（结构合理，行文流畅)
Content: No topics left out. （不能遗漏主题)
Language:
No Chinglish.
No Grammatical mistakes.
With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns.
（词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化)
Idea: Meaningful.
Homework
假定你是李华，你将邀请书法老师给学生作主题为“如何正确握笔，优美书写”的一次讲座。请用英语给对书法感兴趣的留学生Jack写一封信，邀请他一起参加。
内容包括:1. 写信目的 2.介绍讲座 3.期待他的参加
Thank you for your listening！

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