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(共20张PPT)
2025
一招制胜——高考
“活动与反响”类写作
攻克讲座、比赛、节日、社团活动等高频场景
目录
CONTENT
01
考情分析
02
核心痛点
03
万能模型
04
实战演练
01
考情分析
考情分析
结论： 此类题目贴近校园生活，考查学生叙事、描述、评价的综合能力，是必考题型。
02
核心痛点
病症1: 内容空洞
病症2: 结构混乱
病症3: 反响单一
病症4: 语言平淡
“We did many activities. They were very good.” (无细节)
流水账，没有逻辑顺序。
只会用“happy/excited/interested”，缺乏深度。
重复使用简单词汇和句型。
病例诊断书
处方: 细节填充术
处方: TRC结构法
处方: 多维反响库
处方: 高级句式配方
同学们，这四种‘病’，你最容易得哪一种？
03
TRC三段式结构
万能模型
TRC黄金结构
万能模型详解 - T段 (总起)
万能句式库:
On [date], our school successfully organized/hosted a [theme] activity, which turned out to be a great success.
A [adjective] event took place in our school on [date], aiming to [purpose].
The recently-held [Event Name] has left an indelible mark on all participants.
雷区: "I will tell you about an activity." (过于口语化且弱)
正确: 使用提供的万能句式。
实战演练：修改There was an activity about environment.
A groundbreaking Environmental Day event took place in our school last Friday, captivating every participant.
功能： 点题，吸引读者。
万能模型详解 - R段 (分述)
能力提升型 (The Skill-Builder) 情感体验型 (The Spirit-Booster) 认知启发型 (The Mind-Opener)
能力提升型
(The Skill-Builder)
核心价值: 强调活动带来了知识、技能、方法上的进步。
适配活动: 讲座、工作坊、培训、大师班、辩论赛、编程比赛等。
“活动”描述词库
enlightening 富有启发的
informative 信息丰富的
professional 专业的
well-structured 结构清晰的
“反响”生成句库
It equipped us with practical skills in...
它使我们掌握了...的实用技能
We gained a deeper insight into the core principles of...
我们对...的核心原则有了更深的洞察
The lecture provided us with a brand-new perspective to view...
讲座为我们提供了一个全新的视角来看待...
It was a golden opportunity to learn from the experts in this field.
这是一个向该领域专家学习的黄金机会。
能力提升型 (The Skill-Builder) 情感体验型 (The Spirit-Booster) 认知启发型 (The Mind-Opener)
情感体验型
(The Spirit-Booster)
核心价值: 强调活动带来了情感上的慰藉、压力释放、团队凝聚力、快乐体验。
适配活动: 运动会、合唱比赛、节日庆祝（元宵、圣诞）、社团团建、心理减压活动、郊游。
“活动”描述词库
fun-filled 充满乐趣的
joyful 快乐的
relaxing 放松的
unforgettable 难忘的
heartwarming 暖心的
“反响”生成句库
Laughter filled the air, effectively melting away our stress.
欢声笑语有效地消除了我们的压力。
It served as a much-needed break from our hectic study schedule.
它是我们繁忙学业中一个急需的调剂。
A strong sense of belonging and team spirit was fostered among us.
我们之间培养出了强烈的归属感和团队精神。
The event left us feeling refreshed and recharged.
活动让我们感到身心焕发、能量满满。
能力提升型 (The Skill-Builder) 情感体验型 (The Spirit-Booster) 认知启发型 (The Mind-Opener)
认知启发型
(The Mind-Opener)
核心价值: 强调活动拓宽了视野、改变了观念、激发了社会责任感、培养了文化自信。
适配活动: 文化节、博物馆参观、环保活动、志愿者项目、慈善义卖、国际交流。
“活动”描述词库
eye-opening 大开眼界的
meaningful 有意义的
inspiring 鼓舞人心的
thought-provoking 发人深省的
“反响”生成句库
It significantly broadened our horizons and made us more open-minded.
它显著地拓宽了我们的视野，让我们变得更开放。
We became acutely aware of the importance of... 我们深刻意识到...的重要性。
A strong sense of cultural confidence was ignited in our hearts.
一股强烈的文化自信在我们心中被点燃了。
It inspired us to take concrete actions to contribute to...
它激励我们采取具体行动为...做出贡献。
万能模型详解 - C段 (总结)
万能句式库:
This meaningful experience has significantly enriched our campus life.
The day was overwhelmingly positive. We sincerely hope that such events will be held on a regular basis.
... (活动) proved to be a huge hit among students.
升华主题的万能清单
个人成长: enhanced our skills, broadened our horizons
校园生活: enriched our campus life, strengthened the bond between...
社会价值: raised our awareness of..., fulfilled our social responsibility
点睛之笔： 可引用一句谚语或提出号召。
As the saying goes, "All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy." This activity was a perfect balance.
功能： 总结全文，提升立意
万能模板全文整合示范
题目： 学校举办了“心理健康周”活动
(T段-蓝色) On May 25th, our school launched a Mental Health Week, which proved to be an immensely beneficial experience for all.
(R段-绿色) The event featured a variety of activities. A psychologist's lecture on stress management was highly enlightening, enabling us to identify sources of anxiety. What followed was a fun outdoor session where we played team-building games. Laughter filled the air, effectively relieving our pent-up pressure.
(C段-红色) This event was a great success. It not only raised our awareness of mental well-being but also equipped us with practical skills. We sincerely hope that such activities can become a regular part of our school life.
非限定定语从句
主语从句/定语从句
not only...but also...
无灵主语
04
实战演练
当堂练习假设学校举办了“传统文化节”，请用TRC模型列提纲。词汇支持: traditional crafts, calligraphy, paper-cutting, intangible cultural heritage, hands-on experience, cultural confidenceWord Bank
举办: host / organize / launch (a campaign)
参加: participate in / engage in
提高: enhance / boost (confidence) / promote (cooperation)
展示: showcase / demonstrate
学习: acquire (knowledge) / gain (an insight)
成功的: fruitful / rewarding / well-received
有趣的: engaging / captivating / fun-filled
印象深刻: unforgettable / impressive / memorable
有意义的: meaningful / enlightening / significant
动词升级
形容词升级
万能句式
Not only did we... (活动), but we also... (收获).
The [活动], which was [评价], enabled us to... (效果).
This event was more than just a [活动类型]; it was a valuable lesson in [升华点].
升级示范
青铜: We had a good activity. We were happy.
白银: We took part in a meaningful activity and felt very happy.
王者: Engaging in the well-organized charity sale, we were thrilled to not only raise a substantial amount of money but also to strengthen our bond with the community. It was indeed a rewarding and unforgettable experience.
建议每次写作选用2-3个高级词汇或句式，让你的文章瞬间亮眼！
愿你的笔下，活动纷呈，反响热烈！

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