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(共30张PPT)
Unit 3 The Internet
Reading for Writing
1. To learn the organization and language feature of a blog post.
2. To write a blog about online safety.
3. To raise people’s awareness of privacy protection.
Learning objectives
Lead-in
online fraud
网络诈骗
cyberbully 网络暴力
What problems will we face on the Internet
identity theft 身份盗窃
information leakage 信息泄露
Lead-in
This passage talks about something related to wire fraud, information leakage and identity theft.
Q1：
What’s the main idea of the blog post Write a title for it.
Read paragraph 1 and find out the main idea of the passage
Title：
Online Safety/How to Stay Safe Online
Today I thought I'd blog about a question that has been asked many times—how do you stay safe online and avoid bad experiences on the Internet I'm not an expert, but many years as a blogger have taught me a thing or two.
navigation bar导航条
title
body
ending
introduction
comment area
主页
联系
图片(库)
分类
页数
Title
Introduction
Body
Ending
Comment
structure
Q2. What guidelines does the author provide for staying safe online
Tip1：Use imperative sentences(祈使句) to make the language powerful.
First of all, leave immediately if you find something that makes you feel uncomfortable on the site.
Second, protect your privacy.
Third, be polite.
Find out 3 online troublemakers the blog post mentions.
Identity theft
Troll
Cyberbully
It is a problem...steal your identity.
explanation
A troll is a person ... stir up trouble online.
definition
Like a troll, a cyberbully will use ... .
comparison
Tip2: Use skills such as explanation, definition and comparison to make the information clear and understandable.
Read paragraph 2 again and choose the best answer.
Q3.Who are the online troublesmakers the blog post mentions
Three kinds of people: an identity thief, a troll, and a cyberbully.
Q4. Do you have any more tips for how to surf the Internet safely Share your ideas with a partner.
Don't give your real name or personal details such as your age, address, or your school. Use a virus program to protect your computer from viruses or attacks.
Read paragraph 3 again and choose the best answer.
A. By asking questions.
B. By answering questions.
C. By asking and answering questions.
D. By asking readers to write comments.
√
Q5. How does the writer end the post
Title
Beginning
Body
Ending
Tell the main idea.
Introduce the topic.
Background information.
Use linking words to express clearly.
Use imperative sentences to make the language powerful.
Add details. （Examples/Definitions/Comparison)
Ask for comments.
A summary of a blog post.
Online shopping sites
Use a website you are familiar with.
Use strong passwords.
Don't use public computers.
Read for writing
(P33) Choose one of the topics below and use the notes to draft your blog post
Social networking apps
Don't give out too much information.
Never meet someone you met online alone.
Don't post personal information.
Don't believe everything you read.
Be polite.
Online chat rooms
Organise Your Draft
Introduction
Today, I want to blog about ......, which has caused wide attention nowadays. Many years as an online shopper have taught me a thing or two about this topic.
Body
To begin with, you might as well.......
Besides, remember to..., avoiding......
Equally important is to......
keep it in mind that the more cautious you are online, the less likely it is for you to become an easy target.
Ending
Do you have some good advice to share with us Your comments are highly welcome.
√ Does the writer tell the reader what he/she knows about the topic
√ Are the tips and suggestions well organised
√ Has the writer defined the new words
√ Does the author include examples, comparisons, or explanations
√ Does the writer end by asking readers to leave comments and/or suggestions
√ Can you find any grammar or spelling mistakes
Checklist for revising your draft
There are several reasons in the world to shop online. Shopping online is a fast, economical, convenient and safe way to shop. But always keep in mind the safety rules of shopping online.
First of all, choose a safe shopping platform or shopping app. You should avoid shopping at the websites that you are not familiar with because the risks are very high. Second, create and use strong passwords. It's critically important when banking and shopping online. Third, try to avoid shopping when connected to a public Wi-Fi network or when using a public computer, such as a netbar computer. Public computers and Wi-Fi networks are at a slightly greater risk for hacking, which could put your information at risk. Identity theft is more likely to occur when you use a public computer.
Have you had any bad experience when shopping online Do you have some good safety tips for shopping online. Post your comments below!
Introduction
Body
Ending
How to stay safe when shopping online
Writing
Beginning
Body
Ending
Para1
Para2
Para3
写作背景+目的
建议+理由
期待采纳
相关表达
（1）网络安全
（2）随着...的广泛使用
（3）给某人带来便利
（4）关于...的建议
（5）发表评论
（6）个人信息
（7）有帮助的
（8）为...做贡献
online safety
with the wide spread(传播)/use of
bring sb. convenience/bring convenience to sb.
advice/suggestion(s) /proposal(s)/tip(s)on...
post comments
personal information
be of (great) use/help
contribute to...
完成句子
（1）随着互联网的广泛使用，它在给我们带来很多便利的同时也有许多问题需要我们关注(attention)，比如网络安全。
（2）这里有一些关于网络安全的建议。
Here are some suggestions on the problem.
（3）保护好自己的个人信息。不要公布(post)你的地址或电话号码。
Protect your personal information.
Don't give out your address or phone number.
（4）有人可能会利用这些信息窃取(steal)你的身份。
Someone might use the information to steal your identity.
With the wide spread/use of the Internet, it brings us a lot of convenience, but at the same time there are many problems that need our attention, such as online safety.
（5）访问(visit)官方网站。不要随便(casually)发表评论，点击不可信(untrusted)的网站。
（6）使用强密码，创建包含字母、数字和特殊字符组合的复杂密码， 并定期更换密码。
（7）我希望我的建议对你有用处。
I hope my suggestions will be of great use/useful /helpful to you.
完成句子
Use strong passwords. Create complex passwords that include a combination of letters, numbers, and special characters, and change them regularly.
Visit the official websites. Don't post comments and click untrusted websites casually.
(8) 社交媒体
管理社交媒体隐私
（9）使用安全支付方式：在网上购物时选择知名且安全的支付平台，以保护你的财务信息。
more advice
social media
Manage social media privacy
Use secure payment methods: Choose well - known and secure payment platforms when shopping online to protect your financial information.
Writing
假如你是李华，你在博客上浏览到一篇关于“如何确保网络安全”的帖子，请你发帖谈谈你的建议，内容包括以下要点：
1.避开让人不适的网站；2. 文明上网；3. 保护你的个人信息。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
文体：
时态：
人称：
建议（信）
一般现在时
第一人称/第二人称
连句成篇
With the widespread use of the Internet, it brings us a lot of convenience, but at the same time there are many problems that need our attention, such as online safety. Here are some suggestions on the problem.
To begin with, protect your personal information. Don't give out your address or phone number. Someone might use the information to steal your identity. Second, visit the official websites.Don't post comments and click untrusted websites casually. Third, Use strong passwords: Create complex passwords that include a combination of letters, numbers, and special characters, and change them regularly.
I hope my suggestions will be of great use to you and all of us can contribute our strength to online safety.
分 析
bring convenience
protect personal information
steal one’s identity
post comments
click websites
official websites
untrusted websites
strong passwords
be of great use
contribute... to...
词组搭配
带来便利
保护个人信息
盗用某人身份
发布评论
点击网站
官方网站
不可信网站
高强度密码；安全密码
非常有用
为…… 贡献……
分 析
“With the widespread use of the Internet, it brings us a lot of convenience, but at the same time there are many problems that need our attention, such as online safety.”
分析：
“with + 名词短语” 结构作状语，引出背景；“but” 实现转折，连接 “带来便利” 和 “存在需关注问题” ；“that need our attention” 是定语从句修饰 “problems” ，“such as” 举例具体问题。
好句赏析
“To begin with, protect your personal information. Don't give out your address or phone number. Someone might use the information to steal your identity.”
分析：
“To begin with” （首先）开启分点建议；“protect your personal information” 是祈使句提建议；“Don't give out...” 从反面约束行为；“Someone might...” 阐述不良后果，形成 “建议 - 行为约束 - 风险警示” 逻辑链。
“Second, visit the official websites.Don't post comments and click untrusted websites casually.”
分析：“Second” 承接前文，保持建议条理性；“visit the official websites” 正向指引行为，“Don't post... and click...” 反向规范操作，通过 “正 + 反” 方式明确网络行为准则。
“I hope my suggestions will be of great use to you and all of us can contribute our strength to online safety.”
分析：“I hope...” （我希望…… ）表达期许，“be of great use to you” 体现建议价值，“contribute our strength to online safety” 升华主题，呼吁参与网络安全维护。
Check and revise your draft blog post and exchange it with your classmates to find any spelling or grammar mistakes.
Homework
THANK
YOU

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