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Section B 3a-3c
Unit 1 Happy Holiday
After class, you will ...
Learning Goals
熟练运用一般过去时描述假期经历（动词过去式：went/visited/took/felt）。
准确使用地点、活动、感受类词汇（如 beach/palace, relaxing/wonderful, take a boat trip）。
掌握时间顺序法（in the morning→at noon→in the evening）组织文章结构。
运用五要素写作框架（Where/Who/What/Weather/Feeling）完整叙事。
通过对比范文（Vincent/Gina/范文），分析细节描写技巧（如形容词 clear blue water, 感叹句 What a...!）。
理解不同国家假期文化（如俄罗斯胜利博物馆、苏格兰森林探险），尊重文化多样性。
What did you do during the holiday
took music lessons
visited my grandparents
visited some ancient buildings
went to a festival
went to the mountains
went to a summer camp
went on a city tour
travelled with friends
went to a theme park
went shopping
watched movies
studied for the new term
What did you do during the holiday
Our good friend,Gina,went to Scotland during her summer holiday.Let’s have a look.
Hi, Gina. Did you go somewhere interesting on your vacation
Yes, I went to Scotland.
/ sk tl nd/
Go
Scotland
Scotland is a beautiful country in the northern part of the united Kingdom. It’s famous for its green mountains, deep blue lakes (called "lochs"), and ancient castles. The capital city is Edinburgh, where you can see a huge volcano-shaped hill called Arthur’s Seat.
Last autumn, my family took a train to Scotland for a holiday. We stayed in a comfortable house in the countryside with beautiful scenery. I live in a big city, so everything seemed so different. For example, beside the house, there was a huge forest.
On the last day, early in the morning, I went to the forest to explore. While there, something made a noise. I turned around and was surprised to see a deer.
I ran home and told my parents what I saw. My mum smiled and said, “The deer is probably looking for food and hoping to get some from you.” What a wonderful experience I had! I really hope I can go back again.
countryside / k ntrisa d/
n. 乡村；农村
turn around 转身；翻转
surprised /s pra zd/ adj. 惊奇的；惊讶的
Read Gina’s holiday story and write down the things that she did.
3a
Skimming
My Holiday in Scotland
Last autumn,my family took a train to Scotland for a holiday.We stayed in a comfortable house in the countryside with beautiful scenery.I live in a big city,so everything there seemed so different. For example,beside the house,there was a huge forest.
On the last day,early in the morning,I went to the forest to explore.While there,something made a noise.I turned around and was surprised to see a deer.
I ran home and told my parents what I saw.My mum smiled and said,"The deer is probably looking for food and hoping to get some from you."What a wonderful experience I had!I really hope I can go back again.
How many parts are there in the passage
title
beginning
body
ending
What order did this passage use
time order
Writing tip 1
1. clear structure清晰的结构
2. time order
Let’s predict.
1. What can you see in the picture
2. Can you guess what the animal is
doing
3. How do you feel when you see a
deer
A deer and a countryside.
/d (r)/
Probably it is looking for something.
/ pr b bli/
look for
寻找
Surprised.
/s pra zd/
Read for the main ideas of each paragraph
1
2
3
When did she go there
Who did she go with
How did she go there
What did she hear and see
How did she feel
What did she learn
Background
event
Feelings
Gina told her story
in the order of ______
time
Skanning
（ ）Where did she go
（ ）When did she go
（ ）Who did she go with
（ ）What did she do
（ ）What did she learn
（ ）How did she go
（ ）How did she feel
What did she talk about in the passage
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Writing tip 2
Use 5W2H to tell a story.
3a
Read and answer.
My Holiday in Scotland
Last autumn, my family took a train to Scotland for a holiday. We stayed in a comfortable house in the countryside with beautiful scenery. I live in a big city, so everything seemed
so different. For example, beside the house, there was a huge forest.
On the last day, early in the morning, I went to the forest to explore. While there, something made a noise. I turned around and was surprised to see a deer.
I ran home and told my parents what I saw. My mum smiled and said, "The deer is probably looking for food and hoping to get some from you." What a wonderful experience I had!
I really hope I can go back again.
Q1：How did the writer’s family go to Scotland
Q2：Where did they stay in Scotland
They took a train.
In a comfortable house in the countryside.
My Holiday in Scotland
Last autumn, my family took a train to Scotland for a holiday. We stayed in a comfortable house in the countryside with beautiful scenery. I live in a big city, so everything seemed
so different. For example, beside the house, there was a huge forest.
On the last day, early in the morning, I went to the forest to explore. While there, something made a noise. I turned around and was surprised to see a deer.
I ran home and told my parents what I saw. My mum smiled and said, "The deer is probably looking for food and hoping to get some from you." What a wonderful experience I had!
I really hope I can go back again.
Q3：What surprised the writer in the forest
Q4：What did her mum think of the deer
A deer.
The deer was probably looking for food and hoping to get some from the writer.
3a
Read and answer.
Skanning
took __________
______________
stayed __________
______________
went to ________
______________
saw __________
______________
ran home and____
______________
______________
a train
in a
comfortable house
the forest
to explore
a deer
told
her parents what she saw
Writing tip 3
Use verbs（simple past tense） to tell a story.
Summary
Writing tip 1
1. clear structure清晰的结构
2. time order
Writing tip 3
Use verbs（simple past tense） to tell a story.
holiday
topic
structure＆order
审结构
step 2
审时态
step 3
Writing tip 2
Use 5W2H to tell a story.
content内容
一般过去时
审要点
step 4
5W2H
审主题
审人称
审体裁
step 1
假期活动
第一人称
日记
My Holiday in Scotland
Last autumn, my family took a train to Scotland for a holiday. We stayed in a comfortable house in the countryside with beautiful scenery. I live in a big city, so everything seemed so different. For example, beside the house, there was a huge forest.
On the last day, early in the morning, I went to the forest to explore. While there, something made a noise. I turned around and was surprised to see a deer.
I ran home and told my parents what I saw. My mum smiled and said, "The deer is probably looking for food and hoping to get some from you." What a wonderful experience I had! I really hope I can go back again.
Pre-writing: Analyze the story.
Beginning:
写游记先交代 “何时 + 去哪儿 + 怎么去 + 住哪儿”
Body: “做了什么 → 遇到什么 → 感受 / 反应” ,
像探险故事一样有情节
End: “心情 + 对这次旅行的评价 + 未来想法
（还想再去 / 推荐别人）” ，让游记有温度
3b
Think of an unforgettable holiday experience and answer the questions.
1. When did it happen _______________________________________
2. Where were you _______________________________________
last summer / winter / autumn / spring / …
Sanya / Beijing / Shanghai …
Last autumn, my family took a plane to Sanya for a holiday.
Last winter, my family took high-speed train to Harbin for a holiday.
Let’s look and say.
How did you feel
What a / an ____________ experience I had!
unforgettable
feelings
what
excellent
…
wonderful
fantastic
unforgettable
amazing
小试身手
请你回想一下令你难忘的一次快乐旅行，并以“A Happy Holiday Trip”为题， 写一篇英语短文， 说说你去了哪儿、你的旅行经历，以及你的旅行感触，在英语课上与同学们分享。
注意：1. 内容完整，语句通顺，逻辑清晰；
2. 80 词左右。
A Happy Holiday Trip
____________________________________________
____________________________________________
____________________________________________
文体：
人称：
时态：
要点：1.旅游地点
2. 介绍旅游经历
3. 描述旅游感受
记叙文
第一人称
一般过去时
写作任务
Writing Tips for Students
审题是关键： 仔细阅读题目要求，确保覆盖所有要点 (Where, Who, What, Weather, Feeling)。
时态要准确： 描述过去发生的事情，主要用 动词的过去式。
词汇要丰富： 尽量使用本单元学过的描述假期活动和感受的词汇 (如：wonderful, exciting, relaxing, delicious, beautiful, go swimming, take photos, visit places, have fun 等)。
句子要多样： 尝试使用简单句和并列句 (用 and, but, so 等连接)，也可以尝试一两个复合句 (如 while walking)。
分段要清晰： 开头引入，中间描述活动，结尾抒发感受。每段有明确的中心。
书写要工整： 保持卷面整洁。
Post-reading(Writing)
Think of an unforgettable holiday experience and share with your group members.
Beach Adventure
Mountain Hiking Trip
Island Boat Tour
City Adventure
Farm Stay
Ski Trip
...
How to tell a story
(1) When and where did the story happen (时间和地点)
(2) Who is the main character (人物)
(3) What happened in the story (经过)
(4) Why did that happen (原因)
(5) What is the end of the story (结果--感受+收获)
How about your holiday experience
I went to Xi’an on vacation with my family. When I got there, it was sunny and hot. I was so excited because it was the first time for me to see one of the oldest cities in China.
We drove to the Terracotta Army first. I learned something important about Chinese culture and history. The next day, we decided to climb Hua Mountains and we walked up to the top. Everything was small from above. We were so excited to dance and took photos. After walking for four hours, I was tired and hungry. Then, we tried something special in Xi’an. Mutton and bread tasted delicious. Before leaving, I bought something special for my grandparents and friends.
No one felt bored. It was a wonderful trip. I am so proud of our country. I decide to study hard and learn more about Chinese history.
Let’s write.
3c
Use your ideas above to write a holiday story.
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Last winter holiday, I visited Beijing with my classmates. It was in January, a bit cold but full of fun.
We stayed in a hotel near the Forbidden City. First, we went to the Great Wall. It was huge and old. We walked on the grey bricks and felt the history. Then, we visited the Forbidden City. The red walls and golden roofs were really grand. In the evening, we tried Beijing Roast Duck. It was delicious!
I felt amazed during this holiday. I learned so much about Chinese history and culture.
Let’s write!
Evaluation Form 评价表
Items 评价项目 Standard Scores 标准 分值
Scores
得分
Format 格式 1
Person 人称 2
Simple past tense 一般过去时 2
Content 内容 1. 时间 2.天气 3. 地点 4. 人物 5. 事件 6. 感受 8
Hand-writing 书写 2
语法或单词拼写错误酌情扣分
Total 总分 15
Date
Today the weather was...
I went to...with...It was...
We saw/did/... I liked...
because...For dinner, we had...
It was/They were... I...
I felt...
17 July
Today was our first day to visit Moscow.The weather was fine an everyone felt excited to visit some famous places in Russia.
In the morning,we went to the Victory Museum.The Russian people built this museum to remember their fight against the Nazis during World War II.As we walked through the halls,the tour guide told us stories about the war.
In one hall,I saw an artwork with thousands of glass"tears"falling down.It reminds us that war is terrible and peace does not come easily.We should not forget that.
At noon,we had lunch at a restaurant near the park.I liked the ice cream there,solate a lot of it.But,during dinner,I didn't feel like eating because I felt sick.So now,I just want to get a good night's sleep.请根据这个内容给我生成莫斯科的旅游手账图
What did you learn
1. From this experience, I can learn about/that...（文化/历史/饮食/艺术）
例句：From this experience, I can learn about the unique local culture.
（从这次经历中，我了解到了独特的当地文化。 ）
2. This experience taught me + n./that ...
例句：This experience taught me the importance of protecting the environment.
（这次经历让我懂得了保护环境的重要性。 ）
17 July
Today was our first day to visit Moscow.The weather was fine an everyone felt excited to visit some famous places in Russia.
In the morning,we went to the Victory Museum.The Russian people built this museum to remember their fight against the Nazis during World War II.As we walked through the halls,the tour guide told us stories about the war.
In one hall,I saw an artwork with thousands of glass"tears"falling down.It reminds us that war is terrible and peace does not come easily.We should not forget that.
At noon,we had lunch at a restaurant near the park.I liked the ice cream there,solate a lot of it.But,during dinner,I didn't feel like eating because I felt sick.So now,I just want to get a good night's sleep.请根据这个内容给我生成莫斯科的旅游手账图
What does it look like
！修饰成分 — 介词短语
优点：丰富细节，表达多样化。
原文例句：
We stayed in a comfortable house in the countryside with beautiful scenery.
我们住在有着优美景色的乡下，一间舒适房子里。
翻译：有着……/伴随着……
例句仿写：
1. 清晨，我们走进了一个有着五彩野花的房子。
Early in the morning, we walked into a house with beautiful flowers.
17 July
Today was our first day to visit Moscow.The weather was fine an everyone felt excited to visit some famous places in Russia.
In the morning,we went to the Victory Museum.The Russian people built this museum to remember their fight against the Nazis during World War II.As we walked through the halls,the tour guide told us stories about the war.
In one hall,I saw an artwork with thousands of glass"tears"falling down.It reminds us that war is terrible and peace does not come easily.We should not forget that.
At noon,we had lunch at a restaurant near the park.I liked the ice cream there,solate a lot of it.But,during dinner,I didn't feel like eating because I felt sick.So now,I just want to get a good night's sleep.请根据这个内容给我生成莫斯科的旅游手账图
What did you do
1. I did sth, did sth, and did sth.
例句：I swam in the sea, built sandcastles on the beach, and watched the sunset.（我在海里游泳，在沙滩上堆沙堡，还观看了日落 ）
2. First, I did sth, then I did sth, and finally, I did sth.
例句：First, I visited the zoo and saw many cute animals. Then, I went to a nearby park and had a picnic. Finally, I watched a movie at the local cinema.
（首先，我去了动物园，看到许多可爱的动物。然后，我去了附近的公园野餐。最后，我在当地电影院看了场电影 ）
17 July
Today was our first day to visit Moscow.The weather was fine an everyone felt excited to visit some famous places in Russia.
In the morning,we went to the Victory Museum.The Russian people built this museum to remember their fight against the Nazis during World War II.As we walked through the halls,the tour guide told us stories about the war.
In one hall,I saw an artwork with thousands of glass"tears"falling down.It reminds us that war is terrible and peace does not come easily.We should not forget that.
At noon,we had lunch at a restaurant near the park.I liked the ice cream there,solate a lot of it.But,during dinner,I didn't feel like eating because I felt sick.So now,I just want to get a good night's sleep.请根据这个内容给我生成莫斯科的旅游手账图
How did you feel
1. I felt + 形容词（如 excited/relaxed）. It was truly an unforgettable experience.
例句：I felt thrilled. It was truly an unforgettable experience.
（我感到非常兴奋。这真是一次难忘的经历 ）
2. I was filled with （如 情感名词，如 joy/excitement）. What a wonderful experience I had!
例句：I was filled with joy. The whole experience was amazing.
（我满心欢喜。多么美妙的一段经历啊！）
hope的用法
hope to do sth希望做某事
hope+(that)从句 希望……
What引导的感叹句
What a/an+形容词+可数名词单数(+主语+谓语)！
What a good girl!多好的女孩啊！
be surprised to do sth 对做某事感到意外/惊讶
be surprised at… 惊讶于
be surprised that… 令人惊讶的是
Language points
1
2
3
Beginning
Body
Ending
Travel
experience
(记叙文)
Activity
Person
Place
Time
Reason
Feeling
Feeling
Last summer/winter...
The weather was...
I went to...with...
I/We visited/ saw/ climbed/ took/ had...
I liked this place because I learned something important…
What an unforgettable experience!
Weather
The structure of the passage
1. 去年冬天，我和朋友乘大巴去北京旅游。
Last winter, my friends and I _____ ___ ____to Beijing for a trip.
2. 我们住在市中心一家复古的酒店里。
We ______ _____ a vintage hotel in the city center.
3. 第二天清晨，我去公园拍照。
Early the next morning, I _____ to the park to _____ _______.
4. 在公园里，听到鸟叫后我转身，看见一只孔雀。
In the park, after hearing birds sing, I _______ _______ and saw a peacock.
根据汉语提示完成句子。
took a bus
stayed in
went
take photos
turned around
5. 我跑回酒店，把看到孔雀的事告诉了父母。
I ____ _____ to the hotel and _____ my parents about the peacock.
6. 这次北京之行给了我一段难忘的回忆。
This ______ ____ Beijing gave me an _____________ memory.
7. 酒店在一座古塔旁边。
The hotel was _______ an _______ _______.
8. 我真希望能再次去北京。
I really hope I can _____ ______ to Beijing again.
根据汉语提示完成句子。
ran back
told
trip to
unforgettable
beside
ancient tower
go back
Write your own holiday story.
3c
museum
theatre
zoo
park
factory
farm
forest
market
/mju zi m/
/ θ t /
/zu /
/pɑ k/
/ f ktri/
/fɑ m/
/ f r st/
/ mɑ k t/
Practice
wonderful
OK
not too bad
boring
terrible
great
amazing
excellent
fantastic
relaxing
1. Make a comment on your composition.
仿写训练： 模仿Gina苏格兰游记结构（时间顺序+五要素），用60词描述一次本地周末出行，需包含：
1个地点形容词（peaceful/crowded）
2个过去时活动动词（explored/tasted）
1句感受（I was surprised that...）
小组评价：小组互评：
三人一组交换仿写作业，用课件中的简略评分表（内容/时态/结构）批注，推荐1篇优秀习作并说明理由（例：”You used 3 vivid adjectives like Gina!“）。

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