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信议建
How to Write a Letter of Suggestion
应用文

行业PPT模板http:///hangye/
题型分析
建议信可以写给个人，针对遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法或观点；也可以写给某个组织或者机构，就改进其服务等提出建议或忠告。建议信要给出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，而且提出的理由要合情合理，语气一定要得当，既要委婉礼貌，又要有说服力。
写作方法
Tips: 如题目设定为给认识的好朋友写信，那么首段中自我介绍可省略。
真题链接
【2023年新高考I卷】假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括:
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议；
注意: 1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
常用句式
1. 自我介绍 2. 写信背景+写信目的
(1) 得知你做某事有困难后，我写信来和你分享一些建议。
Having learned that you have difficulty (in) doing sth., I am writing to share with you some suggestions/tips/advice.
(2) 得知你对……感兴趣, 我写信提供一些关于……的想法。
Hearing that you are interested in …, I am writing to offer some ideas concerning/with regard to ….
常用句式
1. 自我介绍 2. 写信背景+写信目的
(3) 很高兴收到你的来信，询问我.......。
① I’m more than glad to receive your letter asking for my suggestions about how to learn English well.
② I'm extremely delighted to receive your letter asking for my advice on .......
常用句式
1. 自我介绍 2. 写信背景+写信目的
(4) 很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful/conducive.
实战练笔
Having learned that you have difficulty in learning Chinese, I am writing to share with you some suggestions.
得知你最近在学习汉语方面有困难后，我写信来和你分享一些建议。
实战练笔
Having learned that you are having trouble fitting in with your new class as an exchange student, here I’m writing to offer some practical advice.
得知你作为交换生很难适应新班级，我写信给你提供一些实用的建议。
实战练笔
I'm Li Hua, a student in our school. I'm writing to give you some constructive tips on how to create a green school.
我叫李华，是我们学校的一名学生。我写信给你一些关于如何创建绿色学校的建设性(constructive)建议。
常用句式
过渡语
① 第一：initially/ first of all /to begin with/at first/ first and foremost/ What should be mentioned first is that…
② 第二：in addition, besides, what’s more, furthermore, moreover…
③ 最后：finally/eventually/last but not least…
常用句式
(2) 具体建议【可用副词strongly/highly】
① I suggest (sb) doing sth. / I suggest that ...... / My suggestion is that ......
② (虚拟语气) It is highly suggested/recommended that you (should) do sth. 强烈建议.......
③ (虚拟语气)It is advised/advisable that...... 建议......
④ (虚拟语气) I believe it important that you (should) do sth. / I believe it is of great importance that you (should) do sth. 我相信......很重要。
常用句式
(2) 具体建议【可用副词strongly/highly】
⑤ (虚拟语气) If I were you/ Were I you, I would... 如果我是你，我会......
⑥ (虚拟语气) It would be better/wise/helpful if you did sth. 如果你......会更好/更明智/更有帮助。
⑦ You’d better do sth. 你最好......
⑧ Why not… Why don’t you… 为什么不......
⑨ You might as well… 你不妨......
⑩ It’s a good idea to...... ......是个好主意。
常用句式
(3) 建议理由
① 具体建议. Only in this way can you ….
② 具体建议. Not only can it +理由1，but also it can +理由2.
③ 具体建议, which will …(理由)
④ 具体建议, which is an effective way to ...
⑤ 具体建议, in which way you can …
⑥ 具体建议, in the hope that +从句/ in the hope of doing sth. ......，
⑦ 具体建议 so that......
实战练笔
It is highly recommended that you take regular exercise, which is an effective way to promote physical and mental health.
强烈建议你经常锻炼，这是一种很有效的促进身心健康的方式。
实战练笔
If I were you, I would get involved in more after-class activities. Not only can it enrich my school life, but also it can develop my social abilities.
如果我是你，我会多参加一些课外活动。这不仅能够丰富我的校园生活，而且能够锻炼我的社交能力。
实战练笔
1. I strongly suggest that you (should) join a volunteer club so that you can improve your ability.
2. You'd better take exercise regularly so that you can build up your body.
1.我强烈建议你加入志愿者俱乐部，这样你才能提高自己的能力。
2.你最好经常锻炼，这样你才能强身健体。
常用句式
（1）如果你觉得我的建议有帮助，我将非常高兴。
I will be more than delighted/glad/thrilled/happy if you find my suggestions helpful/conducive.
（2）如果你能考虑我的建议，我将非常高兴。
I will be more than delighted/glad/thrilled if you could take my suggestions into account/consideration.
三段框架范式
真题练笔
【2023年新高考I卷】假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括:
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议；
注意: 1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.
My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together. Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解题导语】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。
【思路详解】1.词汇积累
首先：to begin with→first of all
提高：improve→progress
选择：choose→select
2.句式拓展----简单句变复合句
原句：My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.
拓展句： My suggestion is that we are supposed to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.
【点睛】[高分句型1]This can hinder the progress of students ......leaving little room for the other students to improve.（运用了现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]Besides, Students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.（运用了省略句和who引导定语从句）
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