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Topic：Self-improvement
人教版英语
中考总复习 写作专项训练
教学文本
教学目标
通过学习本课，学生能够：
1. 通过阅读两个文本，获取关键信息，构建清晰的写作框架，完成自我提升
计划的写作；
2. 分析“建议”与“计划”的语言特征差异，并能将准确的时态、人称和句型运
用到写作中；
3. 能够结合写作技巧和评价量表自评及互评；
4. 在语言实践中描述个人成长目标，形成持续进取、突破自我的积极态度。
To Be a Better Self
-Self-improvement-
Warm-up
★I think __________ is _____________________.
Warm-up
helpful
kind
hard-working
brave
friendly
active
...
Shining Points
honest
Warm-up
Noticing others’shining points is
also a huge shining point！Everyone can be
a shining example！
★
a shining example
Reading
Su Yiming
苏翊鸣
Fast-reading
What is Su Yiming like
A. He is creative. B. He is hard-working.
C. He is lucky. D. He is shy.
Why
He is hard-working because _____________________________
he practised 4 to 6 hours daily.
he woke up early to train without giving up.
he kept practising difficult moves.
He is still working hard in order to___________________________.
Fast-reading
Why is he still working hard
be hard-working
won gold medals
get higher goals
achieve higher goals
Even if we’re good, we can always find ways to improve.
How can we be better
Our school website is collecting plans for self-improvement blogs! The best plans will get ‘Shining Star Prize’. Please write your plans about how to be a better self at school, at home and in society and send them to the website.
Reading
Task 1.1 How many parts are there in the passage
How can we divide them？
Part 1（Para. ____________________）
Part 2 （Para. ____________________）
Part 3 （Para. ____________________）
Three.
①
②③④
⑤
Reading
Task 1.2 Match the main idea with each part.
Part 1（Para. ①） Conclusion
Part 2 （Para.②③④） Introduction
Part 3 （Para.⑤） Suggestions
Tip 1：
Use clear structure
and linking words.
Reading
Task 2.1 What are the writer’s suggestions How does he support them？
Suggestions(______________) Supporting Details(支撑细节)
Para.②
It’s a good idea to be
hard-working.
For example, ...
Because ...
Example
Reason
Topic Sentences
主题句
Reading
Task 2.2 Discuss in groups and find the answers.
Suggestions(______________) Supporting Details(支撑细节)
Para.③
such as...
Para.④
You can show more love to family members.
You can do something good.
In order to ...
Purpose(目的)
Example
... are wonderful examples.
“Rome wasn’t built in a day.”
Example
Quotation
(引用)
Topic Sentences
Reading
Suggestions(______________) Supporting details(支撑细节)
Para.②
It’s a good idea to be
hard-working.
For example, ...
Because ...
Para.③
Para.④
You can show more love to family members.
You can do something good.
such as...
In order to ...
... are wonderful examples.
“Rome wasn’t built in a day.”
Tip 2：
Use topic sentences(主题句) to show opinions.
Tip 3：
Use different supporting details.
Topic Sentences
Pre-writing
Discuss and share
Can you give more suggestions？
Choose one aspect(方面) and share：
At school / At home / In society，
topic sentence + supporting details
e.g. At home，it’s a good idea for you to manage your time well. For example, read and learn for 2 hours and then do sports for half an hour. You will be healthier if you do so.
Writing
Our school website is collecting plans for self-improvement blogs! The best plans will get ‘Shining Star Prize’. Please write your plans about how to be a better self at school, at home and in society and send them to the website.
e.g. At home，I plan to manage my time well. For example, I will read and learn for 2 hours and then do sports for half an hour. I will be healthier if I do so.
Writing
Get help from the checklist while writing：
Checklist 评价维度 评价标准 学生自评
Content 内容 Cover the three aspects of the plan. Use correct vocabulary(词汇). Use different ways to support the ideas. ☆☆☆
Use 语用 Use future tense and first person to write the plan. Use correct sentence partterns(句型). ☆☆☆
Form 形式 Write the plans with clear structure and linking words. ☆☆☆
自评：Give three ★s if you can do this part perfectly and two ★s if you can do it partly.
Discuss in groups and share your plans.
Remember to underline
at least one good sentence in group members’ plans.
Post-writing
Homework
Must do：
Choose to do：
1. Polish your plans and send it to the school website.
2. Stick it on the table to help you improve.
Make a video about how you keep the plan and encourage other people to be better.
Summary
Brighter
Shining Stars

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