2026年高考英语一轮复习 写作题型(含答案解析)

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2026年高考英语一轮复习 写作题型
一.书面表达(共25小题)
1.(2025 新高考Ⅰ) I met Gunter on a cold,wet and unforgettable evening in September.I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference.Due to a big storm,my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half.I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague.The moment I got off the plane,I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second sought.
That was when I met Gunter.I told him where I was going ,but he said he hadn't heard of the bus station.I thought my pronunciation was the problem,so I explained again more slowly,but he still looked confused.When I was about to give up,Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend.After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century,Gunter put his phone down and started the car.
Finally,with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station.Thankfully,there was a long queue still waiting to board the bus.Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus,turned around,and looked at me with a big smile on his face. "We made it, "he said.
Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet.I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard.He tried it several times,but the card machine just did not play along.A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out.
At this moment,Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station.There at the entrance,was a cash machine.I jumped out of the car,made a mad run for the machine,and popped my card in,only to read the message:"Out of order.Sorry."
I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news._____
Four days later,when I was back in Vienna,I called Gunter as promised._____
2.(2025 深圳一模) In our weekly staff meeting,our editor Ashley was not pleased with the quality of our reporting."Our readership is way down.We need better stories for this Thursday's school newspaper.Does anybody have any ideas?"she said.
I handed her my article about our basketball team beating Deerfield High School the previous night by one point."Sports stories are fun,"she said,"but not good enough for the front page.We need something to really get people's attention."
After our meeting,we left the newsroom together and heard someone screaming,"Perry is missing!"Perry was a big red parrot and had been our school mascot(吉祥物) for ten years.He played an important role in students"lives,both in and out of class.He had also been a constant presence at school events,inspiring a sense of unity among students.
Everyone gathered around Perry's empty cage,heartbroken.Suddenly,a student from the crowd came over and showed me a photo. "You're a reporter for the school paper,right?I happened to take this yesterday,"he said.In the photo was a Deerfield High School basketball player with something large hidden under his shirt around the size of a parrot.
"He must have stolen Perry to get back at us for winning the game!"Ashley cried.We hurried back to the newsroom,agreeing to run the photo on the front page with the headline "Deerfield Stole Perry.""This is just the story we need.Everyone will read it,"Ashley said confidently.
After she left,I took a closer look at the photo.The clock in the background read 4:15 pm,but our game against Deerfield hadn't started until 4:30 pm.Why would the boy have taken Perry before we even played?An uneasy feeling came over me that we might have falsely accused someone.
I went to Perry's usual caretaker to ask if he knew Perry was missing."He's not missing.He's retired.He's ready for some quieter days,"he said.Learning the truth,I immediately told Ashley and suggested writing a story to say goodbye to Perry.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
To my surprise,Ashley insisted on reporting the "Deerfield Stole Perry" story.______
On Thursday,the paper came out with the headline "Bye﹣Bye,Perry" on the front page.______
3.(2025 广东模拟) It took a day's drive,but distance was beside the point.I always enjoyed long journeys in my father's car with my family.However,things went different that time.We were moving to a new town,not for any tourist destination,but to settle down,for my father had a new job there.My mother,sitting on the passenger seat in the front,was talking with my father.She looked excited for the coming new life.But I was down,feeling nervous about starting a new school life.Entering a new school meant adapting to a completely different environment and meeting new classmates and teachers,which I was not good at.
On my first day at the new school,I felt lost and out of place.The students already knew each other well,and they chatted happily during breaks.I missed my old friends terribly and wished I could go back to my old school.Feeling lonely,I often spent time alone during breaks and after classes,reading books in the library or drawing pictures in the art room.I missed the good days I had with my old friends and longed for that sense of belonging.
As the days went by,I still found it hard to fit in.I was shy and found it difficult to strike up conversations with my classmates.Some of the kids in my class noticed my discomfort and tried to be friendly,but I couldn't shake off the feeling of being an outsider.I only had words with my deskmate,Alex,when necessary.Things took a turn for the worse when I knocked off Alex's water bottle by accident,although I picked up the bottle immediately and apologized to him.He got mad at me and seemed not to forgive me.Soon I found we were avoiding each other.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
However,I was assigned to pair up with Alex to design a poster.______
Alex proudly introduced that the fantastic picture was drawn by me._______
4.(2025 南宁模拟)你校英文报正在举办"最美微笑"的照片征集活动,请提交你的作品并对作品做英文简介,内容包括:
(1)照片内容介绍;
(2)选择该照片的原因。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
5.(2025 金安区校级三模)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Mike对中国高中生"选科学习"(optional study)很感兴趣,他想了解你是选择物理类还是历史类。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)介绍你的选择类别;
(2)陈述你的选择理由。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
How is everything going?________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
6.(2025 张家港市校级模拟)你校英文报正在开展以Students' Time Spent on Physical Exercise Weekly为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
(1)描述调查结果;
(2)分析其原因并给出建议。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
Students' Time Spent on Physical Exercise Weekly
Nowadays,many students are aware of the significance of physical exercise,although the time they spend on it varies.
7.(2025 许昌模拟) It was time for the ice cream event that my small youth group had waited for many months.The group consisted of five boys;one of them was Scott.
Scott always had a positive attitude.He looked on the bright side of things and never criticized anyone.But Scott was different from the rest of us because he was disabled,suffering from a disease which caused hands shaking constantly.Therefore,he was unable to participate in activities in most cases.No one ever made fun of him to his face,but at times,people would laugh or stare in his presence.But Scott never worried;he just kept his head up high and ignored them.
Finally,the night of the ice cream event descended.My friends and I rushed to the church basement and waited with scoops (冰淇淋勺) in hand for the guests to arrive.One by one,people filed in,all hoping to get a creamy and tasty scoop of ice cream.But what they ended up getting was a hard and frozen mass.We waited for a while for the ice cream to melt,and eventually it did.
Once the ice cream melted,we had another problem.It had turned into three pools of coconut,chocolate,and strawberry.But we persisted in serving it.We had our chance to serve,except for Scott.So,being as kind as possible,I gave Scott a chance to scoop and serve.As soon as Scott gripped the scoop,our ice cream troubles grew beyond control.Milky ice cream was flung in every direction and made a mess on people,but there was no sign for him to come to a stop on account of his terrible control of trembling hands.At that moment,a stir of unrest and dissatisfaction rippled through the crowd.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Abruptly,a woman stormed forward and grabbed the scoop.______
Tears blurred his eyes as Scott got hold of the scoop again._____
8.(2024秋 寻甸县校级月考)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文.续写词数应为 150 左右.
It was time to go home. "Remember to work on your class speeches for homework," Miss Walker called as everyone started talking and packing their school bags.Jenny felt sick.She hated having to read aloud in class.She was sure everyone got really bored listening to her.Once,when Jenny was reading out her holiday diary,Lee was even looking at his watch,a silver and blue one which seemed just magical.
Jenny watched Lee walk ahead of her as they left school.He seemed so clever,and he had a certain sort of shining confidence.He was just one of those people who were good at everything.Jenny sighed.As she turned the corner,she saw Lee's watch lying right in the middle of the path.
Jenny knew she should just pick it up and return it to him,but she didn't want to run after him.Jenny bent down quickly,picked up the watch and ran home.On arriving home,Jenny put it on almost without thinking.She was surprised it fitted so well.She walked to the mirror and started practising her speech.Words just flooded out of her. "I'm going to talk about swimming.I have been lucky.I've won lots of competitions.But when I'm in a race,I'm not really thinking about winning.I'm just loving the feeling of being in the water…" Jenny laughed with excitement.She walked across the room.She suddenly seemed to have a certain sort of confidence.Turning back to the mirror,Jenny saw a flash of light from the watch in the glass.The flashes of silver seemed almost magical.So maybe Lee's watch really DID have something magic about it.
The next day,as the lesson began,Miss Walker asked who was going to be brave and go first.Nobody moved.Jenny slowly raised her arm.Before Miss Walker could say anything,there was a shout from behind. "She's stolen my watch!" Lee said angrily, "It went missing at school yesterday."
Paragraph 1:
Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jenny,waiting for an explanation._________.
Paragraph 2:
Miss Walker smiled and asked the class to listen to Jenny's speech first._______.
9.(2025 合川区校级模拟) Every Sunday,the competition started.The three of us would set our alarm clocks to wake up earlier than anyone else.I had set my alarm clock to six in the morning,hoping that my brothers wouldn't start before me.
Beep.Beep.Beep.Groaning,I reached over to my nightstand and slapped the top of my alarm clock. "Too early on this cold winter day," I murmured.I curled back into my warm blanket and fell asleep again.
My eyes blinked open to the whirring sound of the vacuum cleaner. "They chose their chores first!" I thought with despair.I jumped up from my bed and rushed to the bathroom,where I started the only chore that was left for me.I would definitely be shoveling (铲) the driveway while they built an igloo (冰屋) ,I thought cheerlessly,rubbing and wiping madly at the toilet bowl.
When I finished cleaning the toilet and sink,my brothers came into the bathroom to watch me clean the bathtub as they mocked me about how I'd overslept and got stuck with the longest chore. "Whoever finishes last has to shovel the driveway,remember?" my older brother reminded me with a triumphant smile when we put on our big coats and snow pants to go outside.
The three of us stepped outside into the knee﹣deep snow and shielded our eyes from the brightness.My brothers wasted no time and dashed off to play in the yard,leaving me behind to tackle the frustrating task of shoveling the driveway.With a heavy sigh,I inched through the thick snow to the driveway,my boots sinking with each step.I grunted (嘟哝) with effort as my brothers yelled with joy.Sunday would never be my day,I sighed.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Suddenly,I heard the sound of a shovel rubbing against the driveway concrete.
______
After we finished,we sat inside the igloo,laughing about our morning adventures.
______
10.(2025 固始县校级二模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Lily was renowned for her desire to achieve perfection in everything she undertook.Whether it was school projects,art assignments,or even helping her parents with household chores,Lily's commitment to excellence was unwavering.
One sunny summer day,Lily's family decided to spend a day at the beach.As they arrived,Lily's eyes were immediately drawn by a group of children who playfully built and then tore down their sandcastles.They giggled and shouted,their excitement on full display. "How silly, " she thought,not quite getting why they enjoyed doing that.
Lily,being herself,decided to build a perfect sandcastle that would become the envy of all beachgoers.She began to plan every detail in her mind,from the balanced structures of the towers to the delicate decorations.Then,she set about piling sand to make the towers and walls of her sandcastle.Painstakingly,she crafted each feature of her work,carefully smoothed the surfaces and adjusting every detail to her vision.
Jake,Lily's younger brother,didn't seem too concerned with building a fantastic sandcastle.He picked a spot nearby and amused himself with the sand.He scooped up handfuls of sand,let it slip through his fingers like grains of time,and then molded it into careless shapes with the carefree abandon of a child.Jake's happiness was contagious.Mom and Dad joined him,laughing and joking over Jake's playful creations.From time to time,they called out to Lily and invited her to join the fun,knowing that the pursuit of perfection could be exhausting.
Nevertheless,Lily stayed where she was,determined to create an impressive sandcastle.She frowned at Jake's unconventional,abstract art﹣like sandcastle shapes and persisted in her efforts.However,the process didn't go as smoothly as she had anticipated.The sand didn't always hold its shape,and the waves constantly lapped at the edges of her creation.
Para 1:As the day wore on,Lily's sandcastle kept losing its form.___________
Para 2:With bitter smile,Lily decided to join her family.___________
11.(2025 龙岗区校级模拟)假定你是李华,是阳光中学英语广播台的负责人。英语广播台将举办主题为"志愿服务,从我做起"的英语演讲比赛。请你写一则英语通知发布到学校英文网站上,内容包括:
(1)活动目的;
(2)具体要求。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Notice
English Speaking Competition
___________
Li Hua
English Radio Station
8th June 2024
12.(2025 绍兴二模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Kevin woke to the blaring beep of his alarm clock. "Can't wait for that camping trip," Kevin thought,filled with excitement.As he was leaving home,his dad grabbed him by the hand and said, "Before you go,just tell me the directions on where you and your friends are going to stay."
"But dad!" Kevin complained.
"No buts!" Kevin's dad added.
"Fine." Kevin told him the directions and left.
The three friends,Kevin,Jay and Nathan,had been planning this adventure for weeks,packing their stuff﹣tents,snacks,and a map﹣preparing for a 3﹣day outdoor exploration.Excitement ran through Kevin as they departed for their campsite. "This trip is going to be awesome, " Nathan excitedly yelled as they set off.But little did they know that nature had a surprise in store for them.
The first day at the campsite was going great,setting up tents,collecting firewood,and sharing stories. "Man,we nailed these tents, " Kevin said. "I know it was easy really," Nathan replied.The friends were happy.
Yet towards night,as the dark clouds gathered overhead,the atmosphere shifted,and a sudden storm erupted with unforgiving anger.Rain poured down from the heavens like a relentless waterfall,transforming the peaceful campsite into a muddy battleground.Worse still,a huge tree was uprooted and crashed down with a deafening crack on their only means of escape ﹣ their car.Kevin's eyes widened in horror as he spotted the damaged wreckage beneath the fallen giant. "Our car!" he screamed over the howling wind,his voice a mix of disbelief and despair. "We're stuck here," he declared,his words barely audible against the backdrop of thunder and raindrops.They realized that their plans had been violently spoiled by forces beyond their control.The once quiet campsite now stood as a deserted battlefield,the fallen tree serving as a painful reminder of the unpredictable nature of the world around them.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:The next day,they found themselves facing the immediate problem of finding water.________
Paragraph 2:On the third night,a distant engine sound broke the terrible stillness.________
13.(2025 广东二模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
After a busy week,Emily and her parents decided to go on a mountain picnic.They longed to fully experience nature's beauty and enjoy quality family time.Little did they know,this outing would be filled with unexpected twists and turns (波折).
Arriving at the mountain's base,they discovered a house,in front of which Mike and his father had just finished loading a boat onto Mike's truck.Emily approached them and asked for the best picnic spot in the area.Knowing the mountain well,Mike suggested a location about two hours' walk away. "It's worth the effort," he assured them.
Parking their car next to Mike's truck and carrying their picnic supplies,Emily and her parents set off on the winding road.Tall green trees on one side,a flowing stream on the other,the road eventually led them to a breathtaking clearing dotted with colorful wildflowers.They enjoyed their delicious sandwiches,fruits,and snacks,engaging in pleasant conversations.
Just as they finished their meal and settled down to relax,dark clouds unexpectedly rolled in.It looked like rain.Panicked,they hurriedly set up the tent they had brought.No sooner had they entered than raindrops began pouring on the roof.Heavy rain enveloped the surroundings,making it impossible to see anything.They had no choice but to patiently wait it out.
After what felt like a century,the rain ceased.Emily and her parents wasted no time packing up their belongings,ready to get downhill.However,their excitement turned to worry when they discovered that the small stream they had previously crossed had turned into a wide and impassable river.With no cellphone signal,they were trapped without a means of seeking help.To make matters worse,darkness was approaching.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Suddenly,they heard the sound of a vehicle from across the river.________
Emily and her parents boarded the boat.________
14.(2025 上城区校级模拟) Tom and Jane planned a holiday at the lake,and they decided to take their children,Tim and Sarah,with them.However,Tim and Sarah wanted:to visit Disney World for their holiday or hire a yacht (游艇) in Hawaii.Camping by the lake wasn't even on their list of holiday adventures.
"We can visit some of the islands too," Jane said. "Your dad and I always wanted to explore the mysterious cabin on Moose Island."
Mysterious cabin?The children were now far more interested in this lake holiday idea.
"We might see Big foot," Tim said.
"Or some unusual species!" Sarah turned to her parents. "We're in.When do we leave?"
The children's excitement quickly disappeared when they arrived at the lake.While their parents were carrying their suitcases inside,Timand Sarah stood on the path and stared at the cabin they'd be staying in for the next week,complaining about the smell around,the dust,and the various small insects.
"We're in nature now,kids.Enjoy the experience!Your dad is building a fire so we can have barbecued fish and potatoes baked in the coals.Isn't that great?"
Sarah choked. "I am not eating food cooked in coals!I want takeaway instead."
"Me too." Tim was about to cry. "Holidays are supposed to be fun,Mom."
"Come on,guys.There's a lot of joy to be found in living a simple life and spending time together as a family."
"People in the suburbs live a simple life,which is more like being homeless!" Sarah shouted
"Yeah," Tim added. "How can there not be a single restaurant that delivers here?How do these people survive?"
"They eat coal potatoes!" Sarah laughed. "And fish they kill with their bare hands!"
Sarah ran away,and Tim followed.Jane buried her head in her hands.She realized she had to do something to correct their children's attitude towards simple life.After dinner,she told all about this to Tom,who agreed with Jane.Then they came up with an idea.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:The next morning,Tim and Sarah entered the main room to demand they leave immediately,but neither Mom nor Dad was in there.
______
Paragraph 2:When Tim was about to fall asleep,he heard the sound of heavy footsteps outside,which were approaching.
______
15.(2025 洪山区校级二模)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was a cold,snowy evening.Tommy was running as fast as he could,focused on nothing but his destination — the shop on the street comer.Two weeks ago he saw figurines(小塑像)of Marvel superheroes on the shelves and felt he had to have one.He's been walking the neighbor's dog ever since then to earn money to fulfill his little dream.He was so excited and barely noticing the world around him.Maybe that's why he tripped over the legs of a homeless woman,who was sitting on the pavement,her back against the wall.He murmured(低语)"sorry" and moved on to his destination.
Once he entered the shop,he went straight to the shelves with figurines.Hulk,Thor,Captain America,Iron Man,and many more — all of his admired heroes.With his heart pounding like crazy he reached for Spiderman.
"You like these,true believer?"
Tommy turned around.An old man was standing behind him with a wide smile on his face.
"Y﹣yes,...Yes,they're awesome!" answered Tommy. "They're strong and fast and help other people a lot ..." the boy looked at figurines in admiration. "I wish I could be a superhero(超级英雄)too."
"Then become one!" said the old man.
"How?" Tommy asked in surprise. "I don't have any superpowers."
"And why would you need them?" the old man smiled.Seeing the confusion on the boy's face,he squatted(蹲下)and put his hands on Tommy's arms. "Did you know that shopkeeper lady over there has a disabled husband?She's been working hard and taking care of him for years.I've never heard a word of complaint from her.And this person —" he pointed at a redhead man,who just entered the shop. "He's a firefighter,he's saved countless lives.He never gives up,no matter how dangerous the situation seems to be."
The old man looked Tommy in the eyes and smiled. "You don't need a superpower to be a hero for someone else.The path of a superhero starts not in the mind,not in the muscles,but in the heart."
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Tommy lowered his head and looked at his shoes thinking intensely.__________
The homeless woman was right there,where he saw her last time._________
16.(2025 广西模拟)假定你是李华。为迎接爱尔兰姐妹学校来访,你校英语俱乐部将举行学生活动图片展,现正向学生征集照片。你打算参与,请你写一封邮件,说明相关信息,内容包括:
(1)描述照片内容;
(2)选择该照片的理由;
(3)表达入选期望。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear English Club,
I'm Li Hua from Class 1,Senior 3._____
Attached is the photo.Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
17.(2025 龙凤区校级模拟) 假定你是校英语俱乐部负责人李华,你邀请到了英国环保专家 Smith 教授作主题为"Living in Harmony with Nature"的讲座。请你在讲座前简要发言,内容包括:
(1)相关介绍;
(2)注意事项。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear fellow students,
18.(2025 辽宁一模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On a sunny Friday morning,Mr.Stone,the Grade 4 head teacher,walked into the classroom with a new student following him.She was a lively girl from Mexico,and her red mushroom hair cut immediately drew everyone's eyes.With a welcoming smile,Mr.Stone gestured for her to sit beside Mike,a student known for teasing others.
During break time,Mike couldn't help but laugh when he caught sight of his new deskmate.Sara's distinctive hairstyle seemed like an open invitation for him to make fun of her.Leaning in towards Sara,he playfully suggested, "Hey,Sara.Ever thought about changing your name to Dora?You look just like Dora the Explorer!" His words caused laughter and cheers from the others in the classroom.
Sara's eyes filled with tears,her cheeks turning red with embarrassment.Feeling hurt and upset,she stood up suddenly,rushing to the teacher's office to seek support from Mr.Stone.After hearing her story,Mr.Stone offered her gentle comfort,saying, "Sara,your hairstyle is truly pretty.Remember,everyone has their own sense of beauty."
Mr.Stone then directed his attention to Mike,expressing his disappointment and urging Mike to apologize to Sara. "Mike," he continued, "your actions were unkind.We must treat everyone with empathy(同情).Laughing at Sara's hair has deeply hurt her."
This conflict was temporarily settled,but Mr.Stone found himself lost in thought.Reflecting on his own childhood,Mr.Stone recalled how he had been teased for being overweight.The pain caused by hurtful words was like wrinkles on a crumpled(压皱的)ball of paper.Even if you smoothed them out,the wrinkles stayed.
He wanted to teach an important lesson to Mike,the troublemaker.Then,a unique strategy came to mind.He contacted Mike's mother,explaining the situation and discussing a plan with her to develop empathy in her son.They agreed that over the weekend,Mike's mother would arrange for Mike to have his hair cut extremely short.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
On Monday morning,Mike unwillingly approached the classroom.________
At that moment,Mr.Stone walked into the classroom with a ball of paper.________
19.(2025 邵阳二模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使其构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a beautiful sunny morning in early summer,when the world seemed full of sunlight and new green leaves.I was in a good mood as my parents had just given me $300 for my daily expenses during the week that they would be away in Mexico to visit my mother's sick grandfather.I was extremely overjoyed,thinking hard about the things I could do with the money.If I survived on bread and butter the whole week,I would have an unexpected windfall of $200 to buy the latest Kobe Bryant basketball shoes!What a terrific idea!
As usual,the physical education class was thrilling.I felt most at case on the basketball court.After playing several fierce games,I could hardly catch my breath as I headed back towards the classroom,sweaty and exhausted.When I entered,I found my classmates gathered around Steven's desk as he searched through his books and some other personal items anxiously.Steven had always been popular.Not only was he intelligent and well﹣mannered,but he also came from a well﹣off family.And he shared everything he had with us.
Right away,I learned Steven had lost the money he would donate to a children's welfare institute that afternoon.Then I informed Miss Jones,the class teacher.She rushed over immediately and organized a search around the classroom.We stood by our desks and emptied the contents of our schoolbags onto the desk for inspection.
It was my turn.As Miss Jones took out the $300 from my wallet,the class fell into a shock.I didn't know the amount lost was exactly $300 until then.I kept proving my innocence,but in vain.Miss Jones confiscated (没收) the $300 and decided I was getting kicked out of the school.I stayed home alone the whole week,living only on bread.I felt wronged,angry,and loss of self﹣esteem.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Finally,my parents returned home and talked with me.________
Miss Jones had just accepted my parents' advice when Steven came.________
20.(2025 广州模拟)假定你是李华,你校计划在暑假期间重修图书馆,校英文报举办主题为"Small changes make an ideal library"的征文活动,向同学们征求意见,请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
(1)提出建议;
(2)说明理由。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为 80 个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Small changes make an ideal library
_____
21.(2025 大连模拟)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I spotted my neighbor,Monica,working in her garden one day when I returned home from school.It was sunny,and the smell of cut grass made me feel refreshed.I popped my head over the fence,and Monica and I got talking.
"I've seen you're very good at using a lawn mower(割草机) and gardening tools," Monica said. "There's a hedge(树篱) growing over the pathway near here.It's so overgrown that it becomes a head ache for the passers﹣by.I was planning to cut it back myself.Would you like to help out?"
I loved the idea of helping Monica and our community.We agreed to cut the hedge the following Sunday.My brother Ivan,aged 10,also came along to help us.We wheeled Monica's garbage can down to the hedge,which the community council was responsible for.All three of us cut it with shears (大剪刀) until a trouble﹣free pathway came in sight.Mr.Brown,a wheelchair user,was grateful that he didn't have to make a detour(绕行) any more to pass the hedge.Encouraged by his words,I suggested doing more for our community,to make it a better place.
When we first started,we just made the best of the equipment we already had in my parents' garage.But as time went on,donations came in from the local community.Our garage got filled up quickly with brushes,gardening tools,and even donated power tools like leaf blowers.With everything ready,our first project was to beautiful park near our houses,which looked a bit run﹣down.Ivan was in charge of painting the fence around,Monica cleared the lawn with a leaf blower,and I was responsible for repairing the benches where our neighbors usually sat at their leisure.After two weeks' hard work,we felt stunned when stepping back and appreciating the clean and brand new small park.My heart swelled with pride because our efforts paid off.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为 150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I posted photos of our hard work on our local Facebook Group.________
With more neighbors joining in,we headed for the flower bed near the community center.________
22.(2025 长春模拟) I remember a time when I learned the true meaning of forgiveness.It was a period in my life that tested my patience and my ability to understand others.
It all started when I was in middle school.I had a close friend named Emily,and we spent a lot of time together.One day,Emily introduced me to a new girl in our class,named Olivia.Olivia was quiet and shy,but we quickly became friends as well.
One afternoon,after school,we were all working on a project in the classroom.As we were discussing our ideas,Olivia suddenly exclaimed out something that completely contradicted what I had been saying.I was shocked and felt a little embarrassed.I tried to explain my point of view,but Olivia was very stubborn and insisted on her own idea.
Emily,who was sitting next to me,tried to mediate (调节) the situation.But Olivia got angry and said some unkind words to me.I was hurt and angry,and I couldn't believe that Olivia would treat me like that.I stormed out of the classroom,leaving Emily and Olivia behind.
The next few days were very difficult for me.I avoided Olivia as much as possible,and our friendship with Emily seemed to be stressed.I felt like I had been betrayed by Olivia,and I couldn't understand why she would do such a thing.
One day,I asked Emily why she was still friends with Olivia after what she had done.Emily looked at me with a sad expression and said,"You know,Olivia has been through a lot lately.Her parents are going through a divorce,and she's really struggling.Maybe she was rude to you because she was feeling overwhelmed and insecure."
Hearing this,I felt a surge of guilt.I realized that I hadn't taken the time to understand Olivia's situation.I had been too quick to judge her and too focused on my own feelings of hurt.I decided to talk to Olivia and apologize for my behavior.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When I found Olivia,she was sitting alone in the hallway.______
Olivia accepted my apology and we had a long conversation.__________
23.(2025 靖远县校级模拟)假定你是某国际学校学生李华,你的爱尔兰笔友Kelly对你提到的学校"多元文化日"(Multicultural Day)活动很感兴趣。请回信告知他关于该活动的相关信息。内容包括:1.活动时间;2.活动目的和内容。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Kelly,
________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
24.(2025 上城区校级模拟) 假定你是学生会主席李华,将为获得校英语辩论赛第一名的学生代表致颁奖词。请写一篇发言稿,内容包括:
(1)表示祝贺;
(2)回顾比赛过程;
(3)简述获奖理由。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
25.(2025 辽宁模拟)近年来,许多城市都流行兴建"口袋公园",曾经的社区边角地摇身一变,成了家门口高颜值的小公园,给市民带来了惊喜。假定你是李华,你所在的城市也逐渐建了一些口袋公园,为此你校英文报社正在组织以"Pocket Parks in My Eyes"为主题的征文活动,请你撰写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
(1)简要介绍"口袋公园";
(2)阐述"口袋公园"的好处;
(3)号召绿色生活方式。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Pocket Parks in My Eyes
_____
2026年高考英语一轮复习 写作题型
参考答案与试题解析
一.书面表达(共25小题)
1.(2025 新高考Ⅰ) I met Gunter on a cold,wet and unforgettable evening in September.I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference.Due to a big storm,my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half.I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague.The moment I got off the plane,I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second sought.
That was when I met Gunter.I told him where I was going ,but he said he hadn't heard of the bus station.I thought my pronunciation was the problem,so I explained again more slowly,but he still looked confused.When I was about to give up,Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend.After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century,Gunter put his phone down and started the car.
Finally,with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station.Thankfully,there was a long queue still waiting to board the bus.Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus,turned around,and looked at me with a big smile on his face. "We made it, "he said.
Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet.I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard.He tried it several times,but the card machine just did not play along.A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out.
At this moment,Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station.There at the entrance,was a cash machine.I jumped out of the car,made a mad run for the machine,and popped my card in,only to read the message:"Out of order.Sorry."
I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news._____
Four days later,when I was back in Vienna,I called Gunter as promised._____
【考点】读后续写.
【专题】书面表达.
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】本文为记叙文。文章讲述了一个充满压力的夜晚,作者与一位名叫Gunter的出租车司机的难忘邂逅。作者赶公共汽车去布拉格参加会议的时间很紧,但由于暴风雨,他的航班延误了。在与时间的赛跑中,作者遇到了Gunter,Gunter起初不知道公交车站,但通过他的努力和帮助,他们及时赶到了车站。然而,作者意识到他没有现金支付给Gunter,车站的银行卡机也出了故障。尽管遇到了种种障碍,Gunter还是表现出了善意,并确保作者登上了公共汽车。
高分句型一:As I boarded the bus,I promised him that I would repay him as soon as I returned to Vienna.
译文:当我登上公共汽车时,我向他承诺,我一回到维也纳就会还钱他。
分析:这句话使用了as引导的时间状语从句,that引导的宾语从句,as soon as引导的时间状语从句。
高分句型二:Just as you can see,a random kindness in a cold night turned out to be a warm encounter.
译文:正如你所看到的,在寒冷的夜晚,一次随意的善意变成了一次温暖的邂逅。
分析:这句话使用了as引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】 I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.His face fell,but he quickly recovered and said, "Don't worry,you can get on the bus first and go to conference.You can pay me back when you coma back." With those words,he waved goodbye to me and urged me to go on the bus.As I boarded the bus,I promised him that I would repay him as soon as I returned to Vienna.【高分句型一】His kind gesture had saved me from missing the conference,and I was deeply grateful.(尽管作者没有现金,Gunter还是让作者上了公共汽车,作者承诺会还钱给他)
Four days later,when I was back in Vienna,I called Gunter as promised.He was delighted to hear from me and told me to meet him at the same taxi rank.I brought with me the exact amount money he had charged me plus a little extra as a token of my appreciation.As I handed him the money,he smiled warmly and said, "I was just doing my job.But it's always good to have friends in unexpected places." Just as you can see,a random kindness in a cold night turned out to be a warm encounter.【高分句型二】(四天后,作者联系Gunter,并将钱还给他)
【点评】解题方法点拨
(1)品读原文。确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜(结尾)"。
(2)仔细审题,明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求,如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示,这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
(3)回扣原文,揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求,再次快速阅读短文,抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。
(4)拟写草稿,修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时,注意句子结构的多样性,语言的丰富性,并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用,使上下文连贯。
2.(2025 深圳一模) In our weekly staff meeting,our editor Ashley was not pleased with the quality of our reporting."Our readership is way down.We need better stories for this Thursday's school newspaper.Does anybody have any ideas?"she said.
I handed her my article about our basketball team beating Deerfield High School the previous night by one point."Sports stories are fun,"she said,"but not good enough for the front page.We need something to really get people's attention."
After our meeting,we left the newsroom together and heard someone screaming,"Perry is missing!"Perry was a big red parrot and had been our school mascot(吉祥物) for ten years.He played an important role in students"lives,both in and out of class.He had also been a constant presence at school events,inspiring a sense of unity among students.
Everyone gathered around Perry's empty cage,heartbroken.Suddenly,a student from the crowd came over and showed me a photo. "You're a reporter for the school paper,right?I happened to take this yesterday,"he said.In the photo was a Deerfield High School basketball player with something large hidden under his shirt around the size of a parrot.
"He must have stolen Perry to get back at us for winning the game!"Ashley cried.We hurried back to the newsroom,agreeing to run the photo on the front page with the headline "Deerfield Stole Perry.""This is just the story we need.Everyone will read it,"Ashley said confidently.
After she left,I took a closer look at the photo.The clock in the background read 4:15 pm,but our game against Deerfield hadn't started until 4:30 pm.Why would the boy have taken Perry before we even played?An uneasy feeling came over me that we might have falsely accused someone.
I went to Perry's usual caretaker to ask if he knew Perry was missing."He's not missing.He's retired.He's ready for some quieter days,"he said.Learning the truth,I immediately told Ashley and suggested writing a story to say goodbye to Perry.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
To my surprise,Ashley insisted on reporting the "Deerfield Stole Perry" story.______
On Thursday,the paper came out with the headline "Bye﹣Bye,Perry" on the front page.______
【考点】读后续写.
【专题】书面表达.
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】本文为记叙文,讲述了作者在一家报社工作,他们的吉祥物佩里被迪尔菲尔德高中的篮球运动员偷走了,调查得知是佩里退休了。阿什利本来想报道被偷这件事,但是作者说明了可能对选手和报纸的声誉造成的潜在伤害。最后阿什利放弃了,他们报道了佩里退休的新闻,这一报道取得了成功。
高分句型一:Noticing her hesitant expression,I further explained the potential harm it would cause to the player and our paper 's reputation.
译文:注意到她犹豫的表情,我进一步解释了这会对球员和我们报纸的声誉造成的潜在伤害。
分析:这句话使用了现在分词短语Noticing her hesitant expression作状语,it would cause to the player and our paper 's reputation是省略关系代词的定语从句修饰the potential harm。
高分句型二:Many were disappointed with Perry's sudden departure,but were comforted by the fact that he was in good care.
译文:许多人对佩里的突然离开感到失望,但他得到了很好的照顾,这让他们感到安慰。
分析:这句话使用了that引导的同位语从句。
【解答】To my surprise,Ashley insisted on reporting the "Deerfield Stole Perry" story. "This is the very story we need to attract more readers,"she argued.To convince her,I defended that if we wrote this article,we would be telling a lie.Noticing her hesitant expression,I further explained the potential harm it would cause to the player and our paper 's reputation. 【高分句型一】After some discussion,Ashley finally gave in,"OK,let's try with real stories." Then I went to gather all the necessary information to write an article about Perry and the precious memories we shared over the years. (作者反对这一决定,说明了其中的危害以及他们最后决定报道佩里退休的事情)
On Thursday,the paper came out with the headline "Bye﹣Bye,Perry" on the front page.Soon,it sparked heated discussions among students about Perry.Many were disappointed with Perry's sudden departure,but were comforted by the fact that he was in good care. 【高分句型二】The story also evoked sweet memories of Perry.Some students even requested to share their stories of him in our paper!Seeing the story's success,Ashley came to me and said sincerely,"You are right!It's a good story." Her words brought me a great sense of fulfillment.Indeed,true stories might not always draw attention,but they have the power to touch and connect.(报道佩里退休的新闻产生的影响以及取得成功)
【点评】解题方法点拨
(1)品读原文。确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜(结尾)"。
(2)仔细审题,明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求,如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示,这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
(3)回扣原文,揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求,再次快速阅读短文,抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。
(4)拟写草稿,修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时,注意句子结构的多样性,语言的丰富性,并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用,使上下文连贯。
3.(2025 广东模拟) It took a day's drive,but distance was beside the point.I always enjoyed long journeys in my father's car with my family.However,things went different that time.We were moving to a new town,not for any tourist destination,but to settle down,for my father had a new job there.My mother,sitting on the passenger seat in the front,was talking with my father.She looked excited for the coming new life.But I was down,feeling nervous about starting a new school life.Entering a new school meant adapting to a completely different environment and meeting new classmates and teachers,which I was not good at.
On my first day at the new school,I felt lost and out of place.The students already knew each other well,and they chatted happily during breaks.I missed my old friends terribly and wished I could go back to my old school.Feeling lonely,I often spent time alone during breaks and after classes,reading books in the library or drawing pictures in the art room.I missed the good days I had with my old friends and longed for that sense of belonging.
As the days went by,I still found it hard to fit in.I was shy and found it difficult to strike up conversations with my classmates.Some of the kids in my class noticed my discomfort and tried to be friendly,but I couldn't shake off the feeling of being an outsider.I only had words with my deskmate,Alex,when necessary.Things took a turn for the worse when I knocked off Alex's water bottle by accident,although I picked up the bottle immediately and apologized to him.He got mad at me and seemed not to forgive me.Soon I found we were avoiding each other.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
However,I was assigned to pair up with Alex to design a poster.______
Alex proudly introduced that the fantastic picture was drawn by me._______
【考点】读后续写.
【专题】书面表达.
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】这是一篇记叙文,讲述了作者因父亲工作原因搬到新城镇并转学的经历。在新学校,作者感到孤独和难以融入,尽管有同学试图友好相处,但作者仍感到自己是个局外人。一次意外导致作者与同桌关系紧张,使情况进一步恶化。
高分句型一:I was worried that working with Alex would be very difficult because of our previous relationship.
翻译:我担心由于我们之前的关系,与亚历克斯合作会非常困难。
分析:本句使用了that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二:Moving to a new town was not only challenging,but it also opened up a world of opportunities and new experiences for me.
翻译:搬到一个新城不仅具有挑战性,而且为我打开了一个充满机遇和新体验的世界。
分析:本句使用了动名词短语Moving to a new town作主语。
【解答】However,I was assigned to pair up with Alex to design a poster.Reluctantly,we started working together.I was worried that working with Alex would be very difficult because of our previous relationship.【高分句型一】But to my surprise,as the work progressed,we found that we shared many common interests.We put a lot of efforts into the drawings and texts,and finally we completed a quite outstanding poster.Alex seemed to forgive me.He appreciated my efforts and began to care about my feelings.The teacher highly praised our work and our classmates were amazed at the picture on the poster.(两人通过合作,关系逐渐得到了改善)
Alex proudly introduced that the fantastic picture was drawn by me.I smiled shyly but happily as my classmates crowned me and gave me a thumbs up.Slowly but surely,I started feeling more comfortable in my new school.I made new friends,including Alex,and began to participate in activities in and after classes.Moving to a new town was not only challenging,but it also opened up a world of opportunities and new experiences for me.【高分句型二】(两人的作品很成功,作者也适应了新的环境)
【点评】(1)品读原文,确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索。
(2)仔细审题,明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求,如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示,这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
(3)回扣原文,揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求,再次快速阅读短文,抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。
(4)拟写草稿,修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后,最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时,注意句子结构的多样性,语言的丰富性,并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用,使上下文连贯。
4.(2025 南宁模拟)你校英文报正在举办"最美微笑"的照片征集活动,请提交你的作品并对作品做英文简介,内容包括:
(1)照片内容介绍;
(2)选择该照片的原因。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【考点】提纲作文;课外活动.
【专题】书面表达.
【答案】I would like to submit a photo from my good friend,whose eyes sparking with joy.She stands against flowers in full bloom,wearing a beaming smile.Her smile brings an instant sense of delight to anyone who gazes upon it.
I believe this photo is a great choice because it not only highlights the spirit of smile but also shows a positive attitude towards life.It provides a glimpse into the inner beauty of a teenager.Her smile always has the power to brighten my day whenever I go through difficulties.
【分析】高分句型一:I would like to submit a photo from my good friend,whose eyes sparking with joy.
译文:我想提交一张我的好朋友的照片,她的眼睛里闪烁着喜悦的光芒。
分析:这句话使用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二:She stands against flowers in full bloom,wearing a beaming smile.
译文:她站在盛开的鲜花旁,面带笑容。
分析:这句话使用了现在分词短语wearing a beaming smile作状语。
【解答】I would like to submit a photo from my good friend,whose eyes sparking with joy. 【高分句型一】She stands against flowers in full bloom,wearing a beaming smile. 【高分句型二】Her smile brings an instant sense of delight to anyone who gazes upon it. (照片内容介绍)
I believe this photo is a great choice because it not only highlights the spirit of smile but also shows a positive attitude towards life.It provides a glimpse into the inner beauty of a teenager.Her smile always has the power to brighten my day whenever I go through difficulties. (选择该照片的原因)
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数,不要太多也不要太少。
5.(2025 金安区校级三模)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Mike对中国高中生"选科学习"(optional study)很感兴趣,他想了解你是选择物理类还是历史类。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)介绍你的选择类别;
(2)陈述你的选择理由。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
How is everything going?________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文;学习生活;书信类.
【专题】书面表达.
【答案】Dear Mike,
How is everything going?I'm delighted to hear from you.I'm writing to tell you what subjects I'll choose in my second year of high school.I intend to choose history,biology and chemistry.First,as a fan of historical events,I wouldn't miss any chance to learn more about history.Also,biology is always appealing to me because of many interesting experiments,and I'm confident I'll do well in biology.Although chemistry is known as a most challenging subject,it's also a subject widely applied to many fields.It is believed that interest is the best teacher.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一:I'm writing to tell you what subjects I'll choose in my second year of high school.
翻译:我写信是想告诉你我在高二的时候会选择什么科目。
分析:本句运用了what引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二:Although chemistry is known as a most challenging subject,it's also a subject widely applied to many fields.
翻译:虽然化学被认为是最具挑战性的学科,但它也是一门被广泛应用于许多领域的学科。
分析:本句运用了although引导的让步状语从句。
【解答】Dear Mike,
How is everything going?I'm delighted to hear from you.I'm writing to tell you what subjects I'll choose in my second year of high school.【高分句型一】I intend to choose history,biology and chemistry.(介绍自己的选择类别)First,as a fan of historical events,I wouldn't miss any chance to learn more about history.Also,biology is always appealing to me because of many interesting experiments,and I'm confident I'll do well in biology.Although chemistry is known as a most challenging subject,it's also a subject widely applied to many fields.【高分句型二】It is believed that interest is the best teacher.(陈述自己的选择理由)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【点评】写作步骤:
第一步:审题,确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点,避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步:拟定提纲;叙述得体,布局谋篇;巧妙过渡,完美结尾。
第三步:遣词造句,套用句型,上下衔接,地道表达,行文成篇。
6.(2025 张家港市校级模拟)你校英文报正在开展以Students' Time Spent on Physical Exercise Weekly为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
(1)描述调查结果;
(2)分析其原因并给出建议。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
Students' Time Spent on Physical Exercise Weekly
Nowadays,many students are aware of the significance of physical exercise,although the time they spend on it varies.
【考点】提纲作文;图表作文;文娱与体育.
【专题】书面表达.
【答案】
Students' Time Spent on Physical Exercise Weekly
Nowadays,many students are aware of the significance of physical exercise,although the time they spend on it varies.
It can be seen from the survey that the percentage of students who spend 2﹣3 hours a week,3﹣4 hours a week and 4﹣5 hours a week is respectively 30%,40% and 18%.However,there are still 12% of students who only spend 1﹣2 hours a week.
The survey shows that a significant number of students are committed to physical exercise.This trend may be due to increased awareness of the importance of physical fitness and promotion of sports activities by the school.
As far as I'm concerned,by continuing to promote and support physical activities within the school environment,we can ensure the overall well﹣being and health of our students.
【分析】高分句型一:However,there are still 12% of students who only spend 1﹣2 hours a week.
翻译:然而,仍有12%的学生每周只花1﹣2个小时。
分析:本句使用了who引导的限制性定语从句。
高分句型二:The survey shows that a significant number of students are committed to physical exercise.
翻译:调查显示,相当多的学生致力于体育锻炼。
分析:本句使用了that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】
Students' Time Spent on Physical Exercise Weekly
Nowadays,many students are aware of the significance of physical exercise,although the time they spend on it varies.
It can be seen from the survey that the percentage of students who spend 2﹣3 hours a week,3﹣4 hours a week and 4﹣5 hours a week is respectively 30%,40% and 18%.However,there are still 12% of students who only spend 1﹣2 hours a week.【高分句型一】(描述调查结果)
The survey shows that a significant number of students are committed to physical exercise.【高分句型二】This trend may be due to increased awareness of the importance of physical fitness and promotion of sports activities by the school.(分析其原因)
As far as I'm concerned,by continuing to promote and support physical activities within the school environment,we can ensure the overall well﹣being and health of our students.(给出建议)
【点评】写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
7.(2025 许昌模拟) It was time for the ice cream event that my small youth group had waited for many months.The group consisted of five boys;one of them was Scott.
Scott always had a positive attitude.He looked on the bright side of things and never criticized anyone.But Scott was different from the rest of us because he was disabled,suffering from a disease which caused hands shaking constantly.Therefore,he was unable to participate in activities in most cases.No one ever made fun of him to his face,but at times,people would laugh or stare in his presence.But Scott never worried;he just kept his head up high and ignored them.
Finally,the night of the ice cream event descended.My friends and I rushed to the church basement and waited with scoops (冰淇淋勺) in hand for the guests to arrive.One by one,people filed in,all hoping to get a creamy and tasty scoop of ice cream.But what they ended up getting was a hard and frozen mass.We waited for a while for the ice cream to melt,and eventually it did.
Once the ice cream melted,we had another problem.It had turned into three pools of coconut,chocolate,and strawberry.But we persisted in serving it.We had our chance to serve,except for Scott.So,being as kind as possible,I gave Scott a chance to scoop and serve.As soon as Scott gripped the scoop,our ice cream troubles grew beyond control.Milky ice cream was flung in every direction and made a mess on people,but there was no sign for him to come to a stop on account of his terrible control of trembling hands.At that moment,a stir of unrest and dissatisfaction rippled through the crowd.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Abruptly,a woman stormed forward and grabbed the scoop.______
Tears blurred his eyes as Scott got hold of the scoop again._____
【考点】读后续写.
【专题】书面表达.
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开,这篇文章讲述了一个年轻团体的冰淇淋活动,其中一个名叫Scott的残障人士在众人的嘲笑与失望中勇敢地尝试去参与。最初,他的手的颤抖导致冰淇淋到处乱飞,引起了不满和愤怒。但随后,有人解释了Scott的奉献精神,人们开始理解并帮助他。最终,活动圆满结束,展现了理解、温暖和善意的力量。
高分句型一:Astonishment and then silence took hold of the crowd,after which she apologized and returned the scoop.
翻译:人群中充满了惊讶和沉默,随后她道了歉,把独家新闻还了回去。
分析:本句运用了由介词+关系代词which引导的定语从句。
高分句型二:It was at this moment that I came to the enlightenment that this experience was a testament of understanding,warmth and kindness.
翻译:就在那一刻,我领悟到,这段经历证明了理解、温暖和善良。
分析:本句运用了强调句"It is+被强调部分+that+其他"。
【解答】 Abruptly,a woman stormed forward and grabbed the scoop.She clenched her fist,knitted her eyebrows and glared at Scott.Suddenly,she held the scoop high and roared to blame.Meanwhile,a flush of dissatisfaction and then fury overwhelming the crowd,they began to yell.Evidently,Scott was scared,rooted to the spot,with his forehead sweaty and his face pale.At the sight of this,I stepped forward,cleared my throat and shouted to explain Scott's spirit of devotion despite disability.Astonishment and then silence took hold of the crowd,after which she apologized and returned the scoop.【高分句型一】(描写了该女士对Scott的行为感到生气,对其责备和怒吼,并且描述Scott害怕和失落的情绪及表现,以及描写作者为Scott的情况进行解释)
Tears blurred his eyes as Scott got hold of the scoop again.He strained every nerve to control his hands to scoop ice cream.So regretful was the woman that she even came to assist him.Now,fully aware of the situation,the crowd settled down and stood in line.They beamed with smiles and offered words of encouragement as they received ice cream.As the last scoop of ice cream was served,a symphony of laughter and euphoria permeated the basement.It was at this moment that I came to the enlightenment that this experience was a testament of understanding,warmth and kindness.【高分句型二】(描写了Scott对作者的行为表示感激,并且愤怒女士了解Scott的情况后感到后悔,以及描写作者的感悟)
【点评】(1)品读原文,确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜(结尾)"。
(2)仔细审题,明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求。续写段落的首句提示,这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
(3)回扣原文,揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求,再次快速阅读短文,抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。
(4)拟写草稿,修改错词病句
拟写时,注意句子结构的多样性,语言的丰富性,并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用,使上下文连贯。
8.(2024秋 寻甸县校级月考)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文.续写词数应为 150 左右.
It was time to go home. "Remember to work on your class speeches for homework," Miss Walker called as everyone started talking and packing their school bags.Jenny felt sick.She hated having to read aloud in class.She was sure everyone got really bored listening to her.Once,when Jenny was reading out her holiday diary,Lee was even looking at his watch,a silver and blue one which seemed just magical.
Jenny watched Lee walk ahead of her as they left school.He seemed so clever,and he had a certain sort of shining confidence.He was just one of those people who were good at everything.Jenny sighed.As she turned the corner,she saw Lee's watch lying right in the middle of the path.
Jenny knew she should just pick it up and return it to him,but she didn't want to run after him.Jenny bent down quickly,picked up the watch and ran home.On arriving home,Jenny put it on almost without thinking.She was surprised it fitted so well.She walked to the mirror and started practising her speech.Words just flooded out of her. "I'm going to talk about swimming.I have been lucky.I've won lots of competitions.But when I'm in a race,I'm not really thinking about winning.I'm just loving the feeling of being in the water…" Jenny laughed with excitement.She walked across the room.She suddenly seemed to have a certain sort of confidence.Turning back to the mirror,Jenny saw a flash of light from the watch in the glass.The flashes of silver seemed almost magical.So maybe Lee's watch really DID have something magic about it.
The next day,as the lesson began,Miss Walker asked who was going to be brave and go first.Nobody moved.Jenny slowly raised her arm.Before Miss Walker could say anything,there was a shout from behind. "She's stolen my watch!" Lee said angrily, "It went missing at school yesterday."
Paragraph 1:
Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jenny,waiting for an explanation._________.
Paragraph 2:
Miss Walker smiled and asked the class to listen to Jenny's speech first._______.
【考点】读后续写.
【专题】书面表达.
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型一:She felt so frightened and the watch didn't seem magical at all.
译文:她觉得很害怕,手表一点也不神奇.
分析:使用so+形容词+that+从句的句型.
高分句型二:Ten minutes later the whole class stood up applauding Jenny's wonderful speech Jenny smiled as she eventually realized the real source of confidence.
译文:十分钟后,全班同学都站起来为珍妮精彩的演讲鼓掌.珍妮终于意识到了真正的信心来源,她笑了.
分析:as引导时间状语从句.
【解答】Paragraph 1:
Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jenny,waiting for an explanation.Jenny didn't answer.How could she explain about the watch and its magic?No one could understand.No one could believe."But I saw you wearing it yesterday,"Miss Walker gently reminded him.For a moment Lee remained silent and then he apologized he had just remembered that Jenny was relieved saying she had found it on the way home and decided to return it after the speech.(Lee说出真相)
Paragraph 2:
Everybody was puzzled and asked why.Jenny again was speechless.
At that,Miss Walker smiled and asked the class to listen to Jenny's speach first.Jenny walked slowly to the front She couldn't think properly.All round her,a sea of faces was watching.She felt so frightened and the watch didn't seem magical at all. 【高分句型一】Suddenly she saw Miss Walker's encouraging eyes.Jenny took a deep breath."I'm going to talk about swimming.."Ten minutes later the whole class stood up applauding Jenny's wonderful speech Jenny smiled as she eventually realized the real source of confidence.【高分句型二】(Jenny成功演讲获得自信)
【点评】读后续写,简言之,就是阅读完一篇还未写完的文章之后,根据要求和提示把这篇文章未写完部分补充完整,使之浑然﹣体.它一方面很好地考查考生对所学语言知识的实际运用能力,而另方面,它也培养学生的发散思维能力.根据《考试说明》该部分的规定,考生在续写文章时,要注意续写部分"与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度","内容的丰富性和对所标出关键词语的应用情况","应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性"以及"上下文的连贯性".根据这些规定,我们会发现读后续写有如下特点:(1)读后续写不是随心所欲,是要在引导语(开头语)和提示词的帮助下完成续写部分.如《考试说明》样题中规定"应使用5个以上短文中标有下划绨的关键词语(10处)".这些关键词语类似于传统写作中的要点提示,如人物、地点、事件,但是不同点在于这些关键词语并不是全用.这样考生可根据自己的理

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