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Unit 4 Eat Well
Section B (2a-2c) Writing
（人教版2024）七年级英语
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Learning objectives:
By the end of the class, you will be able to :
1. write a composition about your own eating habits and plans.
2. learn to how to develop good eating habits and keep healthy.
文章，作文
What kinds of food are healthy
broccoli (西蓝花)
vegetables
milk
fruit
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They are all good for our health.
健康
be good for
对…有好处
Brainstorm
What kinds of food are unhealthy
不健康的
They are all bad for our health.
be bad for
对…无好处
hamburgers
potato chips
fried chicken
coffee
good eating habits
your changes and plans
bad eating habits
eating habits
Lisa
Writing tip 1: Add a topic sentence to show the main idea clearly.
Does Lisa talk about her good or bad eating habits
5 hours ago
I have some good eating habits. I eat three meals a day, and I have them on time. I eat a lot of vegetables too. Some of my friends don’t like carrots or other vegetables, and they don’t eat them, but I eat all kinds of vegetables.
However, I have some bad eating habits too. First, I drink too many soft drinks. I love soft drinks because they taste so good! But soft drinks usually have a lot of sugar. They’re bad for me. Second, I don’t drink enough water. I drink water when I am thirsty, but it’s better to drink before I get thirsty. In future, I should drink more water.
Lisa
Good eating habits
Bad eating habits
主题句
Eat three meals a day.
Eat a lot of vegetables.
Drink too many soft drinks.
Don’t drink enough water.
Read again and complete the mind map.
Eat on time.
Is it important to develop good eating habits
Yes. It’s important to develop good eating habits.
very
quite
rather
5 hours ago
I have some good eating habits. I eat three meals a day, and I have them on time. I eat a lot of vegetables too. Some of my friends don’t like carrots or other vegetables, and they don’t eat them, but I eat all kinds of vegetables.
However, I have some bad eating habits too. First, I drink too many soft drinks. I love soft drinks because they taste so good! But soft drinks usually have a lot of sugar. They’re bad for me. Second, I don’t drink enough water. I drink water when I am thirsty, but it’s better to drink before I get thirsty. In future, I should drink more water.
Lisa
How many good and bad eating habits does Lisa write about What are they
Writing tip 2: Use proper words to add another idea.
使用恰当的连词 让文章更连贯
Using the proper linking words to make the article coherent
linking words
1.分要点表达
2.转折关系
3.因果关系
4.并列关系
5.陈述要点的两个方面
6.总结时使用
常用的连接词（linking words）
however
First(ly); Second(ly); Third(ly)
First of all; Besides; Also; What's more;
As for(至于)...
because/so
and... ...too. at the same time,
not only... but also... both...and...
on the one hand... on the other hand
all in all/in a word/in my opinion
although/but
What can Lisa do to improve her eating habits
Drink more water.
5 hours ago
I have some good eating habits. I eat three meals a day, and I have them on time. I eat a lot of vegetables too. Some of my friends don’t like carrots or other vegetables, and they don’t eat them, but I eat all kinds of vegetables.
However, I have some bad eating habits too. First, I drink too many soft drinks. I love soft drinks because they taste so good! But soft drinks usually have a lot of sugar. They’re bad for me. Second, I don’t drink enough water. I drink water when I am thirsty, but it’s better to drink before I get thirsty. In future, I should drink more water.
Lisa
Does Lisa know how to improve her eating habits
ways to improve
What are your plans or decisions
How to improve eating habits
change my bad habits
A
C
reduce(减少) junk/fast food
learn to cook meals from my mother
In the future,
have a balanced(平衡的) diet
B
D
I plan to...
/ I decide to...
/ I should...
Writing tip 3: Express ideas about the topic in the end.
Read for structure(结构)
Beginning
Ending
Today, I’d like to share my eating habits with you.
Body
talk about eating habits
talk about the purpose(意图)
talk about the importance of healthy eating & call on(号召) ...
①Remember: ______ ____________.
②Healthy eating is important for ________ _____________.
①Let’s ____________________ from now on. It’s never too late to begin.
②I’m sure I will _______________________.
if I have _______________.
③I believe if I ______________ little by little, I will be________.
improve our eating habits
live a healthy and happy life
good eating habits
do some changes
healthier
You are
what you eat
a healthy
body and mind
some useful expressions
1.As we all know(众所周知)，.....
2. There is no doubt that（毫无疑问）...
3. It’s very important/necessary to do......
4. Eating...is good for both body and mind.
5. They give us more energy for our whole day.
6. ........, which may cause heart/tooth problems.
7. I can keep fit by doing...
8. In the future, I decide to improve my eating habits.
9. I believe if I ......., my body will become ......
Writing task（写作任务）
饮食习惯对我们的健康非常重要，请以“My Eating Habits”为题，写一篇短文，谈谈你的饮食习惯及对个人的影响，号召青少年养成良好饮食习惯，享受未来美好人生。
注意事项：
1. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名等信息；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 字数约100词左右。
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My eating habits
As we all know, it’s very important to have a balanced diet. Now I’d like to share my eating habits with all of you.
I have some good eating habits. For example,
_________________________________________. _________. (连词1+要点1+补充1) ____________________________________________________(连词2+要点2+补充2) _________________________________________
( 连 词 3 + 要 点 3 + 补 充 3)
However, I have a few bad eating habits, such as......
_________________________________________________________(连 词4 + 要 点4 + 补 充4)
________________(连 词5 + 要 点5 + 补 充5)
In the future, I will change my bad habits. I believe I can live a healthier and happier life if I develop good eating habits.
My eating habits
As we all know,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
In the future,___________________________
_____________________________
_____________________________
Level A
Level B
Writing Components Checklist
Organization 结构 Does the reply letter have a clear structure
Does the reply letter have the linking words
Content 内容 Did he/she show the intention of this writing
Did he/she give some advice about the problems
Did he/she show hope
Language 语言 Does he/she use different sentence patterns to give advice in this composition （at least two different sentence patterns to give advice）
Handwriting 书法 Did he/she write beautifully
Evaluation 评价 Excellent Good Acceptable Needs improvement
Checklist feature(特征) 15 points
in total
three paragraphs (三段式) 1 point
some conjs and connecting words(连接词) 1 point
no grammar mistakes(无语法错误) 3 points
no spelling mistakes(无拼写错误) 3 points
a rich body and a perfect ending(内容丰富结尾完美) 3 points
wonderful handwritng(优秀书写) 2 points
beautiful expressions(优美表达) 2 points
Show time
feature(特征) 15 points
in total
three paragraphs (三段式) 1 point
some conjs and connecting words(连接词) 1 point
no grammar mistakes(无语法错误) 3 points
no spelling mistakes(无拼写错误) 3 points
a rich body and a perfect ending(内容丰富结尾完美) 3 points
wonderful handwritng(优秀书写) 2 points
beautiful expressions(优美表达) 2 points
Checklist
25%蔬菜
eat least
最少
eat well
适量
eat well
适量
eat more
最多
30%谷类
20%水果
10%脂肪、油、甜品
15%肉、蛋、奶
Eat Well
Keep a balanced diet.
均衡饮食
Remember:
① Health comes first!
健康第一！
② An apple a day keeps the doctor away!
一日一苹果, 医生远离我！
③He, who has health, has hope;
and he who has hope has everything.
拥有健康，就拥有希望；拥有希望，就拥有一切。
1. Make a list of menu dishes for your three meals.
2. Summarize what we have learnt this class by drawing a mind map.
3. Share the menu with your classmates.
4. Try to make some food by yourself.
Must do
Choose to do
Homework
Thank you !
Let’s think.
Sample
As we know, everyone has his or her own eating habits, and so do I. Today, I’d like to share my own eating habits with you.
I have some good habits. Firstly, I eat a lot of vegetables and fruit. They help to keep me fit. What’s more, I don’t like to eat fast food. Some of my friends eat them too often because they taste good, but I hardly ever eat them becase they may cause heart problems. However, I have some bad eating habits too. First, I don’t have breakfast. I hurry to school so I have no time to eat breakfast. No food gives me energy, so I always feel sleepy. To get enough energy from food, I need to get up earlier to have breakfast. Second, I don’t drink enough water. I only drink water when I am thirsty. It’s better to drink water before I get thirsty.
All in all, these are my eating habits. I decide to change my bad habits. And I believe that I will live a healthier life if I do some changes.
I have some good eating habits. (主题句) I eat three meals a day（拓展句） and I have them on time.(拓展句) I eat a lot of vegetables too. Some of my friends don't like carrots or other vegetables and they don't eat them（拓展句）, but I eat all kinds of vegetables（拓展句）.
However, I have some bad eating habits too.(主题句) First， I drink too many soft drinks.（拓展句） I love soft drinks because they taste so good but soft drinks usually have a lot of sugar .(拓展句)They are bad for me. Second, I don't drink enough water. I drink water when I am thirsty. But it's better to drink before I get thirsty. In future, I should drink more water. (反省及改进方式)
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