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2025-2026学年九年级全册英语期中复习考点培优人教新目标版
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假如你是张平，你的美国好友Alice 将来中国游玩，她对中国的传统节日非常感兴趣。请你根据以下相关信息，写一封邮件，向她推荐一个你觉得有特别意义的中国节日。
Alice: I like Chinese traditional culture, especially the spirit behind it. By the way, I also like Chinese food.
Spring Festival ·on the first day of lunar year ·a lot of celebrations ·dumplings Lantern Festival ·on the fifteenth day of lunar year ·lantern show ·tangyuan
注意：
1.邮件需包含节日的相关信息，可适当发挥。
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
3.字数80词左右。
Dear Alice,
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2．你的美国朋友Ben想了解中国的传统节日。请选择一个你最喜欢的节日并写信告诉他。开头部分已写好，请根据问题完成剩余部分，写一篇70—80词的短文。
（1）When is the festival
（2）What do you usually do at the festival
（3）What special food do you eat
（4）Why do you like it best
Dear Ben,
I am happy to know you are interested in traditional festivals in China.
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Yours,
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3．假如你的同学Mark在学习英语方面遇到了困难，请你给他提出一些建议。请以“How to learn English”为题写一篇短文，70词左右，标题、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
How to learn English
How can you learn English well Here are my suggestions.
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I hope these suggestions can help you.
4．技术进步带来学习方式的变化。假如你是李华，参与某英语报组织的关于两种学习方式的讨论。请根据报纸上提供的信息，谈谈你喜欢的其中一种学习方式及理由，并对这种学习方式提出你认为的不足。
Traditional learning in the classroom ·fixed timetable a plan made by a school ·face to face communication ·colorful class activities ·team spirit
Modern learning on the Internet ·flexible (灵活的) timetable a plan made by oneself ·online communication ·rich learning resources ·any place with the Internet
1.对你喜欢的学习方式说明理由，并提出你认为的不足；
2.词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3.语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
With the development of modern technology, the way of learning is changing. I think ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．本单元的话题是“学会如何学习”，所涉及的写作内容通常是介绍学习方法或根据他人学习中遇到的困难给出合理的建议。写作时可参考本单元所提到的学习方法。
假设你是李华，三年的初中生活即将过去，你的外籍同学Sam在英语学习上曾帮助过你。在即将毕业之际，请你在给Sam的毕业纪念册上用英语写一段100词左右的留言，要求包括以下内容要点：
1.你在学习上曾遇到的困难；
2.Sam对你的帮助、建议及措施：
(1) 多听多读；
(2) 多看英语电影，多唱英文歌曲；
(3) ……(自由发挥；不少于一项内容)
3．你的收获及对Sam的感谢和祝福。
Dear Sam,
How time flies! It’s time for us to say goodbye.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
6．假如你叫梁浩，你远在美国的笔友Paul想了解中国春节的情况。请你根据下表信息给他回一封电子邮件。
Time January or February
Activities 1. On the eve of the Spring Festival, family members get together and have a big dinner; 2. After dinner, watch Spring Festival Gala (春晚); 3. Set off fireworks; 4. Get lucky money;
Meaning The most important day in China
要求：1) 包含全部要点，可适当发挥；
2) 不能出现真实的校名及姓名；
3) 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；
4) 词数不少于 80。
Dear Paul,
Thank you very much for your e–mail.
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Yours,
Liang Hao
7．在即将举行的中学生国际文化交流活动中，你将代表学校介绍中国的传统节日。请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇发言稿。
The Spring Festival☆Meaning：The biggest day of a year; a new start. ☆Time：January or February ☆Activities：get together; visit relatives.
要求：
1. 词数90左右(开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数)；
2. 根据要点提示，可以适当发挥；3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。
参考词汇：make New Year’s resolutions 制定新年计划；put up couplets 贴对联；the Spring Festival Gala 春节联欢晚会
Ladies and gentlemen,
There is a famous saying in China, “A year’s plan starts with spring.” It tells us that the most important time of a year is spring.
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That’s all. Thanks for listening.
8．假如你是李明，你的英国笔友Jack对中国传统文化很感兴趣，写信向你询问端午节的有关情况。请你根据以下提示给他回信。80词左右。
提示：
1. 中国的传统节日之一，已有2000多年的历史；
2. 为了纪念著名诗人屈原 (honor the great poet)；
3. 中国南方有赛龙舟的习俗；
4. 家人团聚吃粽子和其他美食；
5. 有三天假期，可以外出旅游。
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9．你在生活或学习中一定取得过不少进步，比如生活技能的获得、学习方法的掌握。良好习惯的养成。请选取其中一个方面，结合自身经历，谈一谈你是如何取得这一进步的，以及毕业前你下一步的打算。请以My progress为题写一篇短文。
要求：（1）观点正确、条理清晰、表达流畅；
（2）文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称；
（3）卷面整洁，书写工整，词数80词左右。
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10．某英语报社开辟专栏“Reading is Very Important”，向中学生征稿。假设你叫李华，请写一篇英语征文，向该报社投稿，内容如下：
1.阅读的益处：
①获取大量知识；②给生活带来乐趣；③是一种放松的好方式。
2.你的阅读习惯。
3.号召大家多阅读。
要求：
1.所写内容必须包括以上要点；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3.内容连贯，并进行合理拓展；
4.100词左右，题目和开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
Reading is Very Important
It’s very important for us students to do some reading.
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11．假如你叫李丹，你想邀请朋友们来参加你的生日派对。请写一封90词左右的邮件给你的朋友们，介绍一下具体情况。开头及格式已给出，不计入总词数。
要点：
1. 生日派对于下周六下午3：00在友谊公园举行。乘坐地铁5号线到广场站，沿着广场路走，直到经过兴业街，公园在左边；
2. 能否有朋友准备音乐播放器；
3. 你的照相机坏了，能否有朋友带照相机为大家拍照；
4. 能否告诉哪里可以买到气球；
5. 那天天气会很好，大家是否想要露营。
Dear friends,
Next Saturday, I will have my birthday party in Friendship Park.
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Li Dan
12．假如你叫Tom，和Jack是同学。请用英语写一则邀请函，邀请他于本周五晚上7点来你家参加你的生日聚会，并告诉他你家的地址（参看下图）。
提示：1.聚会内容——唱歌、吃生日蛋糕、玩游戏、看电影；
2．内容要涵盖提示中的信息，词数80左右。
（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Jack,
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I think we will have a good time.
Yours,
Tom
13．行为举止是否文明礼貌体现的不仅仅是个人形象和城市形象，也在一定程度上反映了社会的文明程度。为配合我市开展“创建文明城市(build a civilized city)”活动，学校号召同学们做一个文明的中学生，特举办以“How to Behave Well”为题的英文征文比赛。请根据以下要点提示，写一篇90词左右的短文。开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
要点：
1. 在学校我们应该怎么做；
2. 在校外我们应该怎么做；
3. 号召大家为此次活动共同努力。
How to Behave Well
To be a civilized student is very important for a student. Here are what we should do and shouldn’t do.
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14．根据中文提示和英文提示，写一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑的短文。词数：60~70左右。
提示：1. 昨天晚上我和妈妈出去散步；
2. 在路上我们遇见了一个外国人；
3. 他向我询问如何去温泉酒店（the Hot Spring Hotel）；
4. 我告诉他沿路往前走，在第三个转弯处向左拐就能看见酒店；
5. 他非常感谢我，我也为能帮他而高兴。
提示词语：go out for a walk, on the road, the way to, walk along, on the left, thank sb. for sth., be happy that
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15．假如你们班级新来了一位同学，她打算周末步行去中央公园（Central Park），请你为她指路。
提示：出校园沿着Main Street一直走，到第一个路口右转，沿着Oak Street 走大概10分钟，看到一家银行向左转，再经过一家大超市，中央公园就在超市的对面。
要求：字迹工整，信息齐全，40词左右；开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Central Park is not far from here. It is easy to get there.
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16．你校英语报正举办以“My Country, My Pride (骄傲)”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
1. 简要阐述在环境、文化、旅游以及科技等4个方面中国近几年的变化；
2. 谈谈你的感想。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等关键信息。
My Country, My Pride
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17．随着年龄的增长，你周围的事物也发生了很大变化。请根据以下要点提示，以“Great Changes Around Me”为题，写一篇短文。
写作要点：1. In the past（narrow roads，…houses，air…，water…）；2. At present（wide and clean roads，different kinds of transportation，…houses，…sky)；3. Your feelings…
要求：1. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；2. 文中不得出现任何真实的信息（地名、校名和人名等）；3. 90词左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）。
Great Changes Around Me
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me.
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18．时光荏苒，初中三年转瞬即逝，和三年前的自己相比较，你会有很多变化，请以 “I have changed a lot” 为题，根据以下要求与提示，用英语写一篇短文，具体描述你最重要的变化及其如何发生的。
提示：
1. What did you use to be like
2. What is the most important change
3. And how did it happen Tell a story about it.
要求：
1.不少于80词；
2.短文需包括所有要点，可适当增加细节，以便行文连贯；
3.短文不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
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19．时光荏苒，跟三年前的自己相比较，你会有很多变化。请以“I Have Changed a Lot!”为题，根据以下要求与提示，用英语写一篇短文，具体描述你最重要的变化及其是如何发生的。
要求：
1. 短文不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息；
2. 100 词左右。
提示：
1. What did you use to be like
2. What is the most important change
3. And how did it happen Tell a story about it.
I Have Changed a Lot!
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________20．这些年，随着经济的迅速发展，你的生活也发生了很大变化。请以“My Life Has Become Much Better”为题，根据下面的要点和要求，写一篇英语短文。
要点：
1. 你的居住条件、周围环境、交通方式以及业余生活发生了哪些变化；
2. 你对这些变化的看法。
要求：
1. 文中不得出现你所在学校的名称和师生姓名；
2. 词数100左右。
My Life Has Become Much Better
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Dear Alice,
I am glad to hear that you are going to visit China and are very interested in Chinese traditional festivals. If you like Chinese traditional culture, I will introduce Spring Festival to you, because it is the most traditional festival in China. Spring Festival usually comes on the first day of lunar year. There are a lot of celebrations during Spring Festival. On the eve of Spring Festival, people clean their houses to get rid of bad luck. People say happy New Year to each other. Children also receive lucky money. The family get together to have a big meal. Dumplings are the most traditional food.
I’m looking forward to your coming.
Yours, Zhang Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，借用“很高兴收到你的来信”来引出重点介绍的春节；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“时间、庆祝活动和美食”3个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①are very interested in 对……感兴趣
②introduce...to... 把……介绍给……
③lunar year 农历年
④get rid of 摆脱
⑤look forward to 期待着……
[高分句型]
①I am glad to hear that you are going to visit China and are very interested in Chinese traditional festivals. (that引导的宾语从句)
②If you like Chinese traditional culture, I will introduce Spring Festival to you. (If引导条件状语从句，遵循“主将从现”)
③On the eve of Spring Festival, people clean their houses to get rid of bad luck. (to do作目的状语)
2．例文
Dear Ben,
I am happy to know you are interested in traditional festivals in China. I will tell you how I spend the Mid-Autumn Festival with you.
The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th day of the 8th month of the Chinese lunar calendar. On this day, I spend time with my family at home. As always, my mom and I make mooncakes together. I like to make mooncakes of different shapes, such as round and fish-shaped. At night, after my dad sets the table in the yard, my whole family enjoy the mooncakes and admire the full moon. My grandma usually tells us the story of Chang’e. It is really a wonderful day.
I like the Mid-Autumn Festival best because it is a time for family members to get together and everyone has great fun on this day.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己最喜欢的节日，可适当发挥，注意要点齐全，并突出重点写作。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，表达很高兴分享自己是如何度过中秋节的；
第二步，具体介绍自己是如何度过中秋节的，包括时间、活动、食物及感受；
第三步，书写结语，进行总结。
[亮点词汇]
①as always一如既往
②such as例如
③get together团聚
[高分句型]
①At night, after my dad sets the table in the yard, my whole family enjoy the mooncakes and admire the full moon. (after引导时间状语从句)
②I like the Mid-Autumn Festival best because it is a time for family members to get together and everyone has great fun on this day. (because引导的原因状语从句)
3．例文
How to learn English
How can you learn English well Here are my suggestions.
First, you can learn it by listening to English songs and watching English films. You can learn some new words. Second, you can speak it as much as possible. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. You can also learn from these mistakes. Third, read more English magazines and newspapers. It can improve your reading skills. Last but not least, remember some good sentences in English. They are really useful for writing.
I hope these suggestions can help you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题；
第二步，介绍学习英语的方法；
第三步，希望建议能有帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①as much as possible尽可能多
②be afraid of doing sth害怕做某事
③make mistakes犯错误
[高分句型]
①Don’t be afraid of making mistakes.（祈使句否定形式）
4．One possible version(1):
With the development of modern technology, the way of learning is changing. I think I still prefer the traditional learning in the classroom.
First, there is a fixed timetable. A clear plan is often made by a school, so I don’t need to think about how to arrange when to learn different subjects. Second, we can have facetoface communication with both teachers and classmates. Third, there are colorful activities in class. In this way, I can learn the new knowledge happily. What’s more, learning in the classroom can help me develop a sense of team spirit, so I can learn how to get along with others.
However, when I study in the classroom, sometimes I can’t follow my teacher. And learning in the classroom can’t provide enough resources for me to choose from.
One possible version(2):
With the development of modern technology, the way of learning is changing. I think I like the modern learning on the Internet better.
First, I have a flexible timetable. I can make a plan by myself. In this way, I can have more free time to arrange my life. Second, I can have online communication with people from all over the world. They may share something interesting about their lives with me. Besides, online learning also provides me with rich learning resources. With the Internet, I can learn at any place. That’s really wonderful!
However, I think learning online for a long time is bad for my eyes. Also, sometimes I can’t control myself and I will do something like chatting with my friends or playing computer games. That will have a bad influence on my study.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，主要讨论了现代技术发展对学习方式的影响，表达了作者对传统课堂学习方式的偏好；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：文章中提到了作者对传统课堂学习方式的偏好及其原因，同时也提到了这种方式的不足之处。写作的要点提示已给出，考生应围绕要点来展开写作，注意用词，避免出现单词拼写和语法方面的错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。首先介绍现代技术对学习方式的影响，并表达自己对传统课堂学习方式的偏好。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。说明作者为什么喜欢传统课堂学习方式，包括有固定时间表、面对面交流、丰富多彩的课堂活动以及培养团队精神等。
第三步，书写总结。指出传统课堂学习方式的不足，如有时跟不上老师的节奏和资源选择有限。
[亮点词汇]
① what’s more还有……
② get along with与……友好相处
[高分句型]
when I study in the classroom, sometimes I can’t follow my teacher.(when引导的时间状语从句)
5．例文
Dear Sam,
How time flies! It’s time for us to say goodbye.
During the past three years, you have given me so much help in English that I can’t thank you too much.
I still remember three years ago, I had difficulty in learning English. It was difficult for me to memorize so many words and understand what people were saying. My spoken English and written English were poor, too. However, I’m lucky that I met you, a kind hearted, smart and patient boy. Firstly, you taught me to listen and read more. And they really helped me a lot. Besides, you suggested that I should watch English movies and sing classical English songs. In addition, you told me to form the habit of reading aloud in the morning and reading novels before going to bed. As a result, I finally made great progress.
Thank you for all your help and best wishes to you.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本题是一篇便条作文；
② 时态：本文用一般现在时和一般过去时相结合；
③ 提示：描述自己是如何学会学习的，需要遵照所给要求，适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，陈述自己在初中三年里学习上遇到了困难，为后文做铺垫；
第二步，具体描述自己遇到的困难，以及是如何解决的，注意涵盖所有材料要点，适当发挥；
第三步，总结致谢。
[亮点词汇]
① too much 太多
② in addition 此外
③ the habit of ……的习惯
[高分句型]
① you have given me so much help in English that I can’t thank you too much.（结果状语从句）
② Besides, you suggested that I should watch English movies and sing classical English songs. （宾语从句）
6．例文
Dear Paul,
Thank you very much for your e-mail. Let me tell you something about our Spring Festival. It is the most important festival in China. It is always in January or February. On the eve of the Spring Festival, family members get together and then have a big dinner. After dinner, people like to watch TV. There is a great Spring Festival Gala on TV every year. We like to set off fireworks at night. They are really wonderful. During the Spring Festival, we get lucky money from our grandparents, parents, aunts and uncles.
We always have a good time in the Spring Festival. Welcome to our country.
Yours,
Liang Hao
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍春节的时间及意义；
第二步，介绍春节的相关活动；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①on the eve of…在……的前夕
②get together聚在一起
③set off fireworks放烟花
④have a good time玩得愉快
[高分句型]
There is a great Spring Festival Gala on TV every year. (there be句型)
7．例文
Ladies and gentlemen,
There is a famous saying in China, “A year’s plan starts with spring.” It tells us that the most important time of a year is spring. The Chinese Spring Festival is celebrated in January or February. It is the biggest day of a year and it is also a new start for everything. At this time, people make up New Year’s resolutions and plans for the whole year.
When the Spring Festival comes, no matter where people work, they’ll come back home and get together with their family. Before the festival, people are usually busy cleaning up their houses and putting up couplets on the doors. On the eve of the festival, people always have a big dinner with their family, and then watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV. As for children, they enjoy letting off fireworks and getting red packets. In the next few days, people visit their relatives and friends. I like the Spring Festival best, because I can visit my relatives and get many red packets.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材： 本文是一篇发言稿；
②时态： 时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示： 写作要点已给出，考生应注意避免“信息遗漏”，分别介绍春节的意义、时间和活动等。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。认真阅读文章的首句，引出下文；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。分别介绍春节的意义、时间和活动等；
第三步，书写结语。感谢大家的聆听。
[亮点词汇]
① make up resolutions 下决心
② clean up 打扫
③ relative 亲戚
④ get many red packets 得到很多红包
[高分句型]
① When the Spring Festival comes, no matter where people work, they’ll come back home and get together with their family. (when引导的时间状语从句）
② I like the Spring Festival best, because I can visit my relatives and get many red packets. (because引导原因状语从句）
8．例文
Dear Jack,
How’s it going I am very glad to introduce the Dragon Boat Festival to you. It is one of the Chinese traditional festivals which has over two thousand years of history. The festival is celebrated to honor the great poet Qu Yuan. On that day, people often get together with their family to eat zongzi and other delicious food. In the southern parts of China, people often have Dragon Boat races. It is so exciting to watch this activity on TV. Besides, we also have a 3-day holiday during the festival. So we can have a short journey to relax ourselves. How interesting the Dragon Boat Festival is! I like it very much.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。根据题干要求，向英国笔友Jack介绍下中国的传统节日——端午节。
2.写作指导：本文应以第一人称为主；时态采用一般现在时为主。注意按照提示的五句话进行写作。可采用分段的形式，使文章结构清晰。最后保证语言通顺，行文连贯；注意语法正确，无标点和大小写错误。
9．例文
My progress
I used to be poor at English, especially in reading and writing which I consider very difficult.
The biggest problem was that after reading a passage, I couldn’t fully understand it, which makes me feel very depressed and upset. But I kept on reading difficult English articles instead of just giving up. And I also practiced English writing whenever I had a chance. Little by little, I made much progress in English and gained a lot of confidence through my constant effort. As you can imagine, nothing makes me prouder than feeling my progress in English.
I realize that as long as I bravely face my weaknesses and take effective ways to overcome them, I believe I will be successful in the future. I will fight for my dream in the following months!
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。要求从生活技能的获得、学习方法的掌握、良好习惯的养成等三个方面，来选择其中的一个，以“My progress”为题写一篇作文，谈一谈你是如何取得这一进步的，以及毕业前你下一步的打算。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来书写；时态采用一般过去时为主；首先要选择写什么内容，引出话题；然后根据你的话题来详细的陈述是如何取得进步的；最后要介绍毕业前的打算。书写要工整，语言要简练，句子前后要连贯、通顺、符合逻辑。
10．例文
Reading is Very Important
It’s very important for us students to do some reading. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds but also make us cleverer and happier. Our study will be improved if we read more books. It’s a good way to relax. Reading also helps us grow up.
I spend half an hour reading before going to bed every day. I like reading classical novels. However, it’s a great pity that many activities such as playing with the smart phone, listening to music, watching TV and going online take up much of our reading time. So here, I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books and read good books. When you read books, you had better take some notes. It will be good for us! Let’s start reading now!
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据所给的要点提示，围绕“Reading is Very Important”写一篇英语短文，向某英文报社投稿；注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。
2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一、三人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般现在时。写作时要认真审题，根据提示的内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。
11．例文
Dear friends,
Next Saturday, I will have my birthday party in Friendship Park. It will start at 3:00 p.m. I would like everyone to come.
Now let me tell you how to get there. First, you can take Subway Line 5 to Square Station. Then, go along Square Road until you pass Xingye Street. The park is on your left.
Some preparations for the party need to be made, so I need your help. Could you please lend me your music player And there is something wrong with my camera. Please bring a camera to take photos. I’m not sure where I can get balloons, so please tell me, too. The weather will be fine that day. Would you like to go camping there
I am looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Li Dan
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括5个方面的提示要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第二人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，介绍生日派对的时间和地点，邀请大家参加；
第二步，介绍如何到达派对地点，陈述交通路线；
第三步，介绍需要朋友帮忙做的准备工作，请求朋友提供帮助；
第四步，表达期待。
［亮点词汇］
① go camping 去露营
② look forward to 期待
［高分句型］
① Then, go along Square Road until you pass Xingye Street. (until引导时间状语从句)
② Now let me tell you how to get there. (疑问词+不定式)
12．One possible version:
Dear Jack,
I’ll have a birthday party at 7 p.m. this Friday. I’d like to invite you to my home. Your house is not far from mine. You can walk here. Let me tell you the way to my home. Walk along Green Street and take the second turning on the left/turn left at the second crossing. And my home is on your right. At the party, we can sing, eat a birthday cake and play games. What’s more, we can watch a wonderful movie together.
I think we will have a good time.
Yours,
Tom
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，指明生日聚会的时间，并邀请对方来参加生日聚会；
第二步，提供清晰的到你家的路线；
第三步，介绍聚会的活动有哪些；
第四步，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①not far from离……不远
②walk along沿着……走
③take the second turning on the left/turn left at the second crossing在第二个路口向左拐
④what’s more而且
[高分句型]
①Walk along Green Street and take the second turning on the left/turn left at the second crossing.（祈使句；含and的并列句）
13．例文
How to Behave Well
To be a civilized student is very important for a student. Here are what we should do and shouldn’t do.
As a middle school student, it’s very important to keep our environment clean and tidy and take care of flowers and trees. Don’t throw litter everywhere. And we should respect our parents and teachers and help our parents do housework.
We are supposed to do everything on time and keep promises. Never lie to others or say dirty words. We should be polite to others and ready to help others in need. And remember to obey the traffic rules, family rules and school rules. We’d better not talk or laugh loudly in public.
If everyone behaves well, our city and school will become more and more beautiful.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文。
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”。
③ 提示：文章应围绕题目，根据要点提示进行写作，准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语等，注意语句通顺，表述连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接文章开头。
第二步，表述在学校应该怎么举止文明。
第三步，表述在校外我们应该怎么举止文明。
第四步，号召大家为此次活动共同努力。
[亮点词汇]
①be very important to do sth做某事非常重要
②take care of照顾
③respect尊重
④help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
⑤be supposed to do sth应该做某事
⑥keep promises遵守承诺
⑦remember to do sth记得做某事
[高分句型]
If everyone behaves well, our city and school will become more and more beautiful.（If引导的条件状语从句）
14．例文
Last night, my mother and I went out for a walk. On the way back we met a foreigner who asked us the way to the Hot Spring Hotel. I told him that he should walk along the street and then turn left at the third corner, and then he will see the hotel. He thanked me a lot. And my mother also praised me that I was a good boy. For me, I felt very happy for helping him. Besides, I realized that helping others was a really good thing. It can not only help others out of emergencies but also make ourselves feel happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为一般过去时；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏相关要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。表明昨晚外出遇到外国人问路一事；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“时间、如何指路、感受”几个方面重点介绍此次经历的细节；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己从中收到的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
① went out for a walk 散步
② on the way 在路上
③ walk along 沿着
[高分句型]
① I told him that he should walk along the street and then turn left at the third corner, and then he will see the hotel.（that引导的宾语从句）
② On the way back we met a foreigner who asked us the way to the Hot Spring Hotel.（who引导的定语从句）
15．例文：
Central Park is not far from here. It is easy to get there. When you get out of school, you just go straight. And then turn right at the first crossing. After that walk along Oak Street for about 10 minutes and turn left when you see a bank. Then pass a big supermarket. Central Park is across from the supermarket.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已部分给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容提示”中的地点和方位等。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍中央公园的大概位置；
第二步，具体描述如何到中央公园的路线；
[亮点词汇]
①far from远离
②at the first crossing在第一个转角
③aross from在……对面
[高分句型]
①When you get out of school, you just go straight.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②It is easy to get there.（“it is+adj+to do sth”句型）
16．例文：
My Country, My Pride
Obviously, great changes have taken place in China these years. For example, the environment has changed for the better since the government took some useful measures. Clear rivers and blue sky return to our life. At the same time, Chinese culture spreads quickly around the world, which makes more foreigners interested in it. What’s more, China has made great progress in its space industry. Many spaceships have been successfully launched, making China’s space dream a reality. Finally, with the improvement of people’s living standard, people not only travel to the country, but also travel to the whole world.
I’m proud of our country and I hope I’ll be the pride of our country in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文；
②时态：采用“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”；
③提示：要求包含所有要点提示，内容完整，条理清晰，注意标点符号的使用。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总体介绍中国近几年的发展；
第二步，具体阐述中国在环境、文化、旅游以及科技等方面的变化；
第三步，表达自己的感想。
[亮点词汇]
①take place发生
②interested in对……感兴趣
③not only...but also...不但……而且……
[高分句型]
①For example, the environment has changed for the better since the government took some useful measures.（时间状语从句）
②At the same time, Chinese culture spreads quickly around the world, which makes more foreigners interested in it.（定语从句）
17．One possible version：
Great Changes Around Me
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me. In my hometown, the roads used to be narrow and crowded. The houses were small and old. The air wasn’t fresh enough. Sometimes, there was terrible smell. The river was polluted badly.
Nowadays, the roads are wide and clean. It’s really convenient for people to go out. We can choose different kinds of transportation to go anywhere. Lots of tall buildings have been built. Most of us have moved to big and beautiful houses. The sky is very blue. My hometown looks like a big garden with green trees, grass and colorful flowers.
We are living a happy life. I’m sure as time goes by, our life will become better and better!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述过去的生活；
第二步，描述现在发生的变化；
第三步，描述自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①used to过去常常做某事
②different kinds of各种各样
③live a happy life过一个幸福的生活
[高分句型]
①It’s really convenient for people to go out.（it作形式主语）
②I’m sure as time goes by, our life will become better and better!（宾语从句）
18．例文
I have changed a lot
Great changes have happened to me during the past three years. I used to be shy, but now I am more confident than before. The most important change is my attitude to English. I used to be tired of learning English. And I was not interested in it. I couldn’t remember the words freely or pronounce them correctly. Thanks to my mother, she often encourages me to learn it. Besides, with the help of my English teacher, I find a better way to learn English. I read it every morning. I listen to her carefully in class, take grammar notes. I often ask my classmates for help. Now I like English so much that it is my favorite subject. Seeing the great change in my English study, how happy I am!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时与一般过去时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，过去和现在最重要的改变是什么；
第二步，介绍过去是什么样的；
第三步，介绍如何发生这样的改变的。
[亮点词汇]
①used to过去常
②encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事
[高分句型]
①how happy I am!（感叹句）
②Now I like English so much that it is my favorite subject.（so…that引导的结果状语从句）
19．例文
I Have Changed a Lot!
Time goes by quickly. My life has changed a lot in the past few years. Let me show you my changes.
I used to be really short and thin. Because I used to be shy and quiet, I was always silent in class. But now I have changed a lot. The most important change in my life is that I become more outgoing. What made me change a lot I remember when I was in Grade Eight, there was an English speech contest in our school. I wanted to take part in it, but I was afraid of it. Our English teacher, Mr. Wang encouraged me to take part in it. He guided me a lot, and I practiced a lot every day. Finally, I won the first prize in the speech contest. I felt very proud and happy. Since then, I have become more outgoing.
I hope my life will become better and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：“一般过去时”为主；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先总述和之前相比，自己改变了很多；
第二步，再描述你之前是什么样子的，例如可以从之前的外貌、性格等方面来描述；接着描述自己发生了哪些变化，其中最重要的变化是什么，这个变化是如何发生的。
第三步，书写结束语，表达自己对未来生活的憧憬。
[亮点词汇]
① used to be 过去是
② take part in 参加
③ be afraid of 害怕
④ encourage sb to do 鼓励某人做某事
[高分句型]
① Because I used to be shy and quiet, I was always silent in class.（because引导的原因状语从句）
② The most important change in my life is that I become more outgoing.（that引导的表语从句）
③ I remember when I was in Grade Eight, there was an English speech contest in our school.（when引导的时间状语从句和there be句型）
20． My Life Has Become Much Better
With the progress of society, now the family is getting smaller and smaller, generally only one or two children. In this way, children can enjoy a good education. They are also busy working. There are buses, subways and airplanes everywhere, and they make traveling very easy. We used to live in a very small house, but now we live in a very large house. There are many activities in people’s free time, such as mountain climbing, fishing and so on. There are many high-quality programs on TV, such as Beijing Opera and some old movies.
In a word, our life is better today and we eat better and live longer.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，以“My Life Has Become Much Better”为题，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍随着经济的迅速发展，你的居住条件、周围环境、交通方式以及业余生活发生了哪些变化；
第二步，谈谈你对这些变化的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①in this way以这种方式
②used to do sth过去常常做某事
③such as比如
④in a word总之
[高分句型]
① now the family is getting smaller and smaller（比较级+and+比较级的用法）
②There are buses, subways and airplanes everywhere, and they make traveling very easy.（there be句型，and连接并列结构）
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