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Write a letter of advice
Unit 1
Reading for writing
Learning objectives
By the end of this lesson, you will be able to:
Memorize the key words and phrases;
Apply the form of a letter to give advice;
Clarify the benefits of writing a letter.
Lead-in Pre-writing While-writing Post-writing Homework
1. Do you have the same behavior as Chen Lei Is it good or bad
Lead-in Pre-writing While-writing Post-writing Homework
2.Brain storm: Shall we tell him directly or by letter
Benefits of writing a letter
polite;
sincere;
informational;
indirect…
Benefits of telling him directly
easy;
direct…
Lead-in Pre-writing While-writing Post-writing Homework
1. Read the advice from Susan Luo and analyze the structure of a letter.
Lead-in Pre-writing While-writing Post-writing Homework
2. Read the advice from Susan Luo and analyze the form of letter.
10 September 2018
2025/3/14= 14 March 2025
date
greeting
Dear Worried Friend,
Dear XXX,
Lead-in Pre-writing While-writing Post-writing Homework
2. Read the advice from Susan Luo and analyze the form of letter.
body
I know the problem is
I understand how you feel
This is my advice and reasons
I think my advice will help
Lead-in Pre-writing While-writing Post-writing Homework
2. Read the advice from Susan Luo and analyze the form of letter.
body
I know the problem is
I understand how you feel
This is my advice and reasons
I think my advice will help
You wrote that you are very worried about your friend, Chen Lei.
You said that…
You mentioned that…
Lead-in Pre-writing While-writing Post-writing Homework
2. Read the advice from Susan Luo and analyze the form of letter.
body
I know the problem is
I understand how you feel
This is my advice and reasons
I think my advice will help
I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible.
You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
I get it that…
I agree that…
Lead-in Pre-writing While-writing Post-writing Homework
2. Read the advice from Susan Luo and analyze the form of letter.
body
I know the problem is
I understand how you feel
This is my advice and reasons
I think my advice will help
I recommend that you talk to your friends about his behavior…
I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies.
Why not discuss the problem together
Lead-in Pre-writing While-writing Post-writing Homework
2. Read the advice from Susan Luo and analyze the form of letter.
body
I know the problem is
I understand how you feel
This is my advice and reasons
I think my advice will help
I am sure he will listen to you, since you are his good friend.
I assume that…
I guess that…
Lead-in Pre-writing While-writing Post-writing Homework
2. Read the advice from Susan Luo and analyze the form of letter.
All the best,
You sincerely,
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signature
Susan Luo
XXX
Lead-in Pre-writing While-writing Post-writing Homework
1. Work in groups. Choose one of the teenagers and discuss his/her problem. List possible suggestions and reason.(5mins)
Lead-in Pre-writing While-writing Post-writing Homework
1. Work in groups. Choose one of the teenagers and discuss his/her problem. List possible suggestions and reason.
If I were you, I'd show my opinion about things. In this way, parents will see our good points and begin to listen to our ideas
Lead-in Pre-writing While-writing Post-writing Homework
1. Work in groups. Choose one of the teenagers and discuss his/her problem. List possible suggestions and reason.
As far as I’m concerned, I recommend that you should go to after-school class for there are a lot of children like you in the class.
Lead-in Pre-writing While-writing Post-writing Homework
1. Work in groups. Choose one of the teenagers and discuss his/her problem. List possible suggestions and reason.
I understand quite well that anyone of us will like a girl to a certain degree.
You can speak it out to her, then perhaps you will go on making friends.
Lead-in Pre-writing While-writing Post-writing Homework
2. Draft your letter according to the outline below.(8mins)
Lead-in Pre-writing While-writing Post-writing Homework
3. Use the checklist to give feedback on your partner’s draft. (2mins)
Are all the parts of a letter included and organized in a good order
Does the writer give reasons for the advice
Does the writer use proper expressions to give suggestions
Does the writer use commas and stops correctly
Is the handwriting east to read
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Lead-in Pre-writing While-writing Post-writing Homework
1. Get your draft back and revise it.(2mins)
Lead-in Pre-writing While-writing Post-writing Homework
2. Summary: a letter of advice.
Lead-in Pre-writing While-writing Post-writing Homework
Homework: Make a list of your problems and give suggestions and reasons.
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