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Unit 5 Going on an exchange trip
Writing
（沪教版2024）八年级
上
Learning objectives
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Lead in
Pre-writing
2
While-writing
Post-writing
4
Summary
Assessment
6
Homework
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5
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By the end of the lesson, I will be able to...
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use key phrases to describe exchange experiences and feelings;
know how to write a thank - you email with a clear structure;
learn and apply typical expressions for the thank - you email’s parts.
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Learning objectives
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Lead in
01
Eric has returned to London.
He decides to write a thank-you email to his host family.
Lead in
01
Free talk.
What do you usually say when you want to thank someone
If you write a thank - you email, what parts will you include
Eric’s teacher has suggested an outline and some useful expressions for a thank-you email. Add more useful expressions if you can.
Content Useful expressions
Greetings and beginning of the email I hope you are well. How are you
I’m writing to thank you for _____________________________
Your appreciation and gratitude Things you are grateful for Things you enjoyed most about the trip Things you learnt during your stay in Beijing (e.g. Chinese history, Chinese culture) It was so kind of you to ...
I am grateful that...
It has been a fantastic experience to learn ...
I felt like part of the family.
I still remember the day when ...
_____________________________
Your life and feelings after the trip Things you have done since you returned to London Things you miss about Beijing I have told my friends about...
The thing I miss most is ...
I do hope that________________
Ending and signing off Best wishes to the host family Keep in touch! Yours,
Best wishes, _____________________________
your hospitality.
Pre-writing
02
Look and learn.
Eric’s teacher has suggested an outline and some useful expressions for a thank-you email. Add more useful expressions if you can.
Content Useful expressions
Greetings and beginning of the email I hope you are well. How are you
I’m writing to thank you for _____________________________
Your appreciation and gratitude Things you are grateful for Things you enjoyed most about the trip Things you learnt during your stay in Beijing (e.g. Chinese history, Chinese culture) It was so kind of you to ...
I am grateful that...
It has been a fantastic experience to learn ...
I felt like part of the family.
I still remember the day when ...
_____________________________
Your life and feelings after the trip Things you have done since you returned to London Things you miss about Beijing I have told my friends about...
The thing I miss most is ...
I do hope that________________
Ending and signing off Best wishes to the host family Keep in touch! Yours,
Best wishes, _____________________________
your hospitality.
Pre-writing
02
Look and learn.
I truly appreciate your kindness.
Eric’s teacher has suggested an outline and some useful expressions for a thank-you email. Add more useful expressions if you can.
Content Useful expressions
Greetings and beginning of the email I hope you are well. How are you
I’m writing to thank you for _____________________________
Your appreciation and gratitude Things you are grateful for Things you enjoyed most about the trip Things you learnt during your stay in Beijing (e.g. Chinese history, Chinese culture) It was so kind of you to ...
I am grateful that...
It has been a fantastic experience to learn ...
I felt like part of the family.
I still remember the day when ...
_____________________________
Your life and feelings after the trip Things you have done since you returned to London Things you miss about Beijing I have told my friends about...
The thing I miss most is ...
I do hope that________________
Ending and signing off Best wishes to the host family Keep in touch! Yours,
Best wishes, _____________________________
your hospitality.
Pre-writing
02
Look and learn.
I truly appreciate your kindness.
Eric’s teacher has suggested an outline and some useful expressions for a thank-you email. Add more useful expressions if you can.
Content Useful expressions
Greetings and beginning of the email I hope you are well. How are you
I’m writing to thank you for _____________________________
Your appreciation and gratitude Things you are grateful for Things you enjoyed most about the trip Things you learnt during your stay in Beijing (e.g. Chinese history, Chinese culture) It was so kind of you to ...
I am grateful that...
It has been a fantastic experience to learn ...
I felt like part of the family.
I still remember the day when ...
_____________________________
Your life and feelings after the trip Things you have done since you returned to London Things you miss about Beijing I have told my friends about...
The thing I miss most is ...
I do hope that________________
Ending and signing off Best wishes to the host family Keep in touch! Yours,
Best wishes, _____________________________
your hospitality.
Pre-writing
02
Look and learn.
I truly appreciate your kindness.
Wishing you all the best.
Pre-writing
02
Read and analyze the outline.
Dear Mr and Mrs Li,
I hope you are well. How are you I’m writing to thank you for taking such good care of me during my stay in Beijing.
Content Useful expressions
Greetings and beginning of the email I hope you are well. How are you
I’m writing to thank you for _____________________________
Your appreciation and gratitude Things you are grateful for Things you enjoyed most about the trip Things you learnt during your stay in Beijing (e.g. Chinese history, Chinese culture) It was so kind of you to ...
I am grateful that...
It has been a fantastic experience to learn ...
I felt like part of the family.
I still remember the day when ...
_____________________________
Your life and feelings after the trip Things you have done since you returned to London Things you miss about Beijing I have told my friends about...
The thing I miss most is ...
I do hope that________________
Ending and signing off Best wishes to the host family Keep in touch! Yours,
Best wishes, _____________________________
I have told my friends about my amazing trip to Beijing. The thing I miss most is the time we spent together. I do hope that we can meet again someday.
It was so kind of you to show me around Beijing and cook delicious Chinese food for me every day. I am grateful that I could stay with your family and experience the warm Chinese family life. It has been a fantastic experience to learn about Chinese history and culture. I enjoyed tasting the Beijing Roast Duck most— it was so yummy! Also, visiting the Great Wall was unforgettable. I felt like part of the family when we sat together and talked after dinner. I still remember the day when we went to the Summer Palace. The gardens were so beautiful.
Keep in touch!
Yours,
Eric
Dear Mr and Mrs Li,
I hope you are well. How are you I’m writing to thank you for taking such good care of me during my stay in Beijing.
I have told my friends about my amazing trip to Beijing. The thing I miss most is the time we spent together. I do hope that we can meet again someday.
It was so kind of you to show me around Beijing and cook delicious Chinese food for me every day. I am grateful that I could stay with your family and experience the warm Chinese family life. It has been a fantastic experience to learn about Chinese history and culture. I enjoyed tasting the Beijing Roast Duck most— it was so yummy! Also, visiting the Great Wall was unforgettable. I felt like part of the family when we sat together and talked after dinner. I still remember the day when we went to the Summer Palace. The gardens were so beautiful.
Keep in touch!
Yours,
Eric
Pre-writing
02
Read and analyze the outline.
Content Useful expressions
Greetings and beginning of the email I hope you are well. How are you
I’m writing to thank you for _____________________________
Your appreciation and gratitude Things you are grateful for Things you enjoyed most about the trip Things you learnt during your stay in Beijing (e.g. Chinese history, Chinese culture) It was so kind of you to ...
I am grateful that...
It has been a fantastic experience to learn ...
I felt like part of the family.
I still remember the day when ...
_____________________________
Your life and feelings after the trip Things you have done since you returned to London Things you miss about Beijing I have told my friends about...
The thing I miss most is ...
I do hope that________________
Ending and signing off Best wishes to the host family Keep in touch! Yours,
Best wishes, _____________________________
Content Useful expressions
Greetings and beginning of the email I hope you are well. How are you
I’m writing to thank you for _____________________________
Your appreciation and gratitude Things you are grateful for Things you enjoyed most about the trip Things you learnt during your stay in Beijing (e.g. Chinese history, Chinese culture) It was so kind of you to ...
I am grateful that...
It has been a fantastic experience to learn ...
I felt like part of the family.
I still remember the day when ...
_____________________________
Your life and feelings after the trip Things you have done since you returned to London Things you miss about Beijing I have told my friends about...
The thing I miss most is ...
I do hope that________________
Ending and signing off Best wishes to the host family Keep in touch! Yours,
Best wishes, _____________________________
Pre-writing
02
Dear Mr and Mrs Li,
I hope you are well. How are you I’m writing to thank you for taking such good care of me during my stay in Beijing.
I have told my friends about my amazing trip to Beijing. The thing I miss most is the time we spent together. I do hope that we can meet again someday.
It was so kind of you to show me around Beijing and cook delicious Chinese food for me every day. I am grateful that I could stay with your family and experience the warm Chinese family life. It has been a fantastic experience to learn about Chinese history and culture. I enjoyed tasting the Beijing Roast Duck most— it was so yummy! Also, visiting the Great Wall was unforgettable. I felt like part of the family when we sat together and talked after dinner. I still remember the day when we went to the Summer Palace. The gardens were so beautiful.
Keep in touch!
Yours,
Eric
Read and analyze the outline.
Dear Mr and Mrs Li,
I hope you are well. How are you I’m writing to thank you for taking such good care of me during my stay in Beijing.
I have told my friends about my amazing trip to Beijing. The thing I miss most is the time we spent together. I do hope that we can meet again someday.
It was so kind of you to show me around Beijing and cook delicious Chinese food for me every day. I am grateful that I could stay with your family and experience the warm Chinese family life. It has been a fantastic experience to learn about Chinese history and culture. I enjoyed tasting the Beijing Roast Duck most— it was so yummy! Also, visiting the Great Wall was unforgettable. I felt like part of the family when we sat together and talked after dinner. I still remember the day when we went to the Summer Palace. The gardens were so beautiful.
Keep in touch!
Yours,
Eric
Pre-writing
02
Read and analyze the outline.
Mr Li; Mrs Li
Thank you
感谢信格式
主题 Subject：简洁说明邮件目的
称呼 Salutation：用 Dear [Host Family's Name]
正文 Body：
结尾 Closing：
常用 Best wishes, Yours sincerely,等
署名 Signature：
写上自己的名字，如： Eric
结尾常用语
I do hope that you can visit London someday. I would love to be your guide and show you around my city.
Keep in touch! I hope to hear from you soon and know how you are doing.
Best wishes to your family. May all your dreams come true.
While-writing
03
Now help Eric complete his thank-you email.
Step 1 Plan Make an outline of the thank-you email.
Read and write.
Part 1
The beginning
(the purpose of writing a thank-you letter)
Part 2
1. Describe something you are grateful for.
something you enjoy most.
something you have learnt.
2. Your life and feelings after the trip
Part 3
(Best wishes to the host family)
The body
The ending
Dear Mr and Mrs Li,
I hope you are well. How are you I’m writing to thank you for ….
I have told my friends about …. The thing I miss most is …. I do hope that we can meet again someday.
It was so kind of you to …I am grateful that …. It has been a fantastic experience to learn …. I felt like part of the family …. I still remember the day when ….
Keep in touch!
Yours,
Eric
Dear Mr and Mrs Li,
I hope you are well. How are you I’m writing to thank you for taking such good care of me during my stay in Beijing.
Mr Li; Mrs Li
Thank you
Step 2 Write
While-writing
03
Find and write.
I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
________
Part 1
The beginning
(the purpose of writing a thank-you letter)
1. Describe something you are grateful for.
something you enjoy most.
something you have learnt.
2. Your life and feelings after the trip
Part 3
(Best wishes to the host family)
The body
The ending
Part 2
参考词汇
1.问候与开头
hope, well, thank you for, time in Beijing, wonderful
2.感激与感恩
kind, grateful, fantastic experience, learn (Chinese history, Chinese culture), part of the family, remember, visit (the Great Wall, Summer Palace), taste (Beijing Roast Duck), teach (Chinese kung fu, calligraphy)
3. 旅行后的生活与感受
tell, friends, miss most, Beijing, host family, dumplings, noodles, the Forbidden City, hope, see you again
4. 结尾与告别
keep in touch, yours, best wishes
Step 3 Check and revise Tick (√) the boxes to check your writing, and then revise it.
While-writing
03
Find and write.
I used appropriate expressions, such as ________________, for greetings and signing off.
I used appropriate vocabulary, such as _________________, to describe Eric’s experiences and feelings about the trip.
I used the words and expressions I learnt in this unit.
Dear Mr and Mrs Li,
I hope you are well. How are you I’m writing to thank you for take such good care of me during my stay in Beijing.
It was so kind of you to showed me around Beijing and cook delicious Chinese food for me every day. I am grateful that I could stayed with your family and experience the warm Chinese family life. It has been a fantastic experience to learn about Chinese history and culture. I enjoyed taste the Beijing Roast Duck most— it was so yummy! Also, visiting the Great Wall were unforgettable. I felt like part of the family when we sat together and talked after dinner. I still remember the day when we go to the Summer Palace. The gardens were so beautiful.
I have told my friends about my amazing trip to Beijing. The thing I miss most is the time we spent together. I do hope that we can meet again someday.
Keep in touch!
Yours,
Eric
Read and correct.
Post-writing
04
show
taking
stay
tasting
was
went
Dear Mr and Mrs Li,
I hope you are well. How are you I’m writing to thank you for look after me so well during my stay in Beijing. It was so kind of you to takes me to visit the Forbidden City and made traditional dumplings for me. I am grateful that I could to live with your family and learnt about Chinese festivals. It have been a wonderful experience to know more about Chinese art. I loved to watch Beijing Opera most — it was so interesting! Also, visiting the Temple of Heaven is amazing.
I felt like part of the family when we sat together and shared stories after lunch. I still remember the day when we rode bikes in the hutongs. The old streets was full of history.
I have told my friends about my great trip to Beijing. The thing I miss most is the laughter we had together. I do hope that we can meet again someday.
Keep in touch!
Yours,
Eric
Read and correct.
Post-writing
04
take
looking
make
could live
learn
has been
Grade and share
Elements要素 Level档次
Content 内容(6分) 要点齐全,切合题意
适当发挥
Accuracy 准确性(6分) 语法，大小写，拼写等格式错误
语言使用恰当,丰富
Fluency 流畅性(3分) 分段，书写，衔接，过渡
互评总分
Show it.
Post-writing
04
Dear Mr and Mrs Li,
I hope you are well. How are you I’m writing to thank you for look after me so well during my stay in Beijing. It was so kind of you to takes me to visit the Forbidden City and made traditional dumplings for me. I am grateful that I could to live with your family and learnt about Chinese festivals. It have been a wonderful experience to know more about Chinese art. I loved to watch Beijing Opera most — it was so interesting! Also, visiting the Temple of Heaven is amazing.
I felt like part of the family when we sat together and shared stories after lunch. I still remember the day when we rode bikes in the hutongs. The old streets was full of history.
I have told my friends about my great trip to Beijing. The thing I miss most is the laughter we had together. I do hope that we can meet again someday.
Keep in touch!
Yours,
Eric
Mr Li; Mrs Li
Thank you
The words we have learned
一、请根据句意及首字母提示，填入恰当的单词。
Eric went on a(n) e__________ trip to China last year.
After the trip, we still k__________ in touch with each other by email.
Visiting the Great Wall was a(n) u______________ experience for me.
There are many p__________ of interest in Beijing, like the Forbidden City.
I'm really g__________ for your help during my stay in London.
When I studied in Australia, I s__________ with a host family.
Can you i__________ me to your new friend
We can l__________ about different ways of life from this book.
Summary
05
xchange
eep
nforgettable
laces
rateful
tayed
ntroduce
earn
The phrases we have learned
二、英汉翻译。
1.结交新朋友 ___________________________
2.学习一门新语言 ___________________________
3.享受不同种类的食物 ___________________________
4.住在寄宿家庭 ___________________________
5.参观名胜古迹 ___________________________
6.学习当地风俗或文化 ___________________________
7.在当地学校学习 ___________________________
8.去交换旅行 ___________________________
9.对…好奇 ___________________________
Summary
05
make new friends
learn a new language
enjoy different kinds of food
stay with a host family
visit places of interest
learn local customs or culture
study at a local school
go on the exchange trip
be curious about
The phrases we have learned
10.与某人保持联系 ___________________________
11.难忘的经历 ___________________________
12.感激 ___________________________
13.住在寄宿家庭 ___________________________
14.介绍 ___________________________
15.了解不同的生活方式___________________________
16.亲自 ___________________________
17.去旅游 ___________________________
Summary
05
keep in touch with sb.
an unforgettable experience
be grateful for
stay with a host family
introduce …to
learn about different ways of life
in person
go on tours
The sentences we have learned
三、英汉翻译。
埃里克参加了一次交换旅行，并且住在了一个寄宿家庭里。
_________________________________________________________________
我们应该和朋友们保持联系。(keep in touch with)
_________________________________________________________________
北京有许多名胜古迹，这是一次难忘的经历。
_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
我很感激你在我交换旅行期间的帮助。_________________________________________________________________
他向我介绍了不同的生活方式，并让我了解了很多。
_________________________________________________________________
Summary
05
Eric went on an exchange trip and stayed with a host family.
We should keep in touch with our friends.
There are many places of interest in Beijing, and it is an unforgettable experience.
I am grateful for your help during my exchange trip.
He introduced different ways of life to me and let me learn a lot.
Self-assessment Marks
I can use key phrases to describe exchange experiences and feelings. 1 2 3 4 5
I can know how to write a thank - you email with a clear structure. 1 2 3 4 5
I can learn and apply typical expressions for the thank - you email’s parts. 1 2 3 4 5
Assessment
06
Basic (基础)
背诵教材中 “Useful expressions” 部分的 5 个核心句式，并抄写 2 遍。
Improving(提升)
参考教材框架，给 “帮助过你的同学 / 老师” 写一封简短的感谢邮件（50 - 60 词），包含 “问候、感激事由、简单感受、结尾祝福”。
Extend (拓展)
小组合作（3 - 4 人），调查 “中西方表达感谢的不同方式”，制作一份简单的海报，并用英文标注关键差异点。
Homework
07
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