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Home Sweet Home
Same or Different
Unit 3
Section B 3a~3c
学习目标
After the class, you will ...
1.撰写一篇结构清晰、有观点、有例证的关于友谊的回复帖。
理解并运用表达个人观点的句式（如：I think…, In my opinion…, I don't really care if…）。
使用形容词和副词的比较级（如：more outgoing, funnier, as helpful as）来描述朋友间的异同。
运用恰当的连接词（如：for example, but, while, although, thanks to）使文章逻辑连贯。
2.通过分析范文，总结出“提出观点-举例论证-总结感受”的写作框架。
3. 通过同伴互评和自我检查（COLT法），提升修改和优化作文的能力.
Who is he
1.
2.
3.
He is short and of medium build.
He has a big nose.
He is funny.
He is really hard-working.
He likes making movies.
He is good at Kungfu.
a star

Listen and guess
Who is she
1.
2.
3.
She is tall and thin.She has big eyes.
She has short black hair.
She is kind and beautiful.
She is really friendly and helpful.
She likes making friends and reading books. She is the face of Chinese Poetry Conference and Readers.
She is good at Chinese.
a TV hostess

Observe and say
How to describe a person
2.
1.
3.
He has a big nose.
He is short and of medium build.
He is funny.
He is really hard-working.
He likes making movies.
He is good at Kungfu.
habits&strength
looks/appearance
Personality
/character(性格)
Should friends be ________ or different
I think a good friend is like a _________.
Steven and I have _______ hobbies and interests.
We both love sports. He plays badminton ______ than I do. So I try ________ when I practice.
Steven is as ________ as me.
We enjoy reading together. I read ______ history books than he does, and he reads a lot of _______.
alike
mirror
similar
better
harder
serious
more
novels
Tom
Matt
express one’s opinion
Give examples
Read the posts in 2b. Then fill in the blanks.
Should friends be ________ or different
Friends who are ________ make me _______.
I am kind of _____. But my friend Yuan Lei is ________. ___________ her, I am becoming ________________.
Zhang Yong is not araid to ________________ when he thinks I am ___________________. I am ________ ____________ than he is.
alike
different
shy
Thanks to
outgoing
give his opinion
making a mistake
less
Tom
Diana
express one’s opinion
Give examples
better
more outgoing
straightforward
Respect each other’s differences and learn from each other.
What’s your opinion about friends
All
My page
I think that a good friend is like a mirror. You can understand people by knowing their friends.
I think friends who are different make me better.
In my opinion, ...
3 hours ago
...
...
...
2 hours ago
1 hour ago
How about Rose’s opinion
I don't really care if my friends are similar to or different from me. l have two amazing friends. Lily is funnier than anyone else l know. When l feel sad or have a problem, she makes me laugh and feel better. She helps me see the silver lining in difficult situations.
Rose
3 hours ago
My other friend, Lucy, is not as funny as Lily. Lucy is quieter but she listens better than others. Lucy and l talk about everything.l know she cares about me because she's always there to listen.
My favourite saying is, “A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart." Both Lily and Lucy are true friends. We are always ready to help each other by lending a hand.
1. Is Rose's opinion the same as or different from the posts in Section B 1b
Her opinion is different from the ones in Section B 1b.
2. What’s her opinion
Rose doesn’t really care if her friends are similar to or different from her.
How does Rose support her own idea
Show opinions again
A. tell a story
B. give numbers
C. show examples
D. by comparing
Topic sentence
Two examples
(Lily and Lucy)
How many examples does Rose show
I don't really care if my friends are similar to or different from me. l have two amazing friends. Lily is funnier than anyone else l know. When l feel sad or have a problem, she makes me laugh and feel better. She helps me see the silver lining in difficult situations.
Rose
3 hours ago
My other friend, Lucy, is not as funny as Lily. Lucy is quieter but she listens better than others. Lucy and l talk about everything.l know she cares about me because she's always there to listen.
My favourite saying is, “A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart." Both Lily and Lucy are true friends. We are always ready to help each other by lending a hand.
How does Rose organize her post
beginning
body
ending
the opinion
examples
The Feelings
Lily
Lucy
2 amazing friends
I don’t really care the similarities or differences
A true friend reaches for your hand dan touches your heart.
beginning
body
ending
Read the body part and complete the table.
Body
Examples
Reasons
Friend Personality What she does
Lily _________ than anyone else Rose knows makes Rose________ and feel_________;
helps Rose see the _______________ in difficult ___________.
Lucy not as _____ as Lily; ________ but listens better than others _________ everything;
____________ Rose because she’s always there to _______
funnier
laugh
better
silver lining
situation
funny
quieter
talk about
cares about
listen
What is your opinion Use personal experiences to support your opinion.
Opinion Reason Example
Friends should be similar.
Friends should be different.
I don’t mind.
We both like ______. We often ___ it together.
We can ________________.
I'm not interested in _____, but my friend __________. She helps me with ________, and I learn a new thing.
True friends ______________, and understand each other
I have a friend. We like different ________, but we always share our _______ each other
3b
We can share the same ________
interests
games
learn from each other
and grow
math
is good at it.
math
respect each other
music
feelings
要求：1.A.B层学生自己发挥写；C,D层学生参考提示完成。
2.每个小组选择三个观点中的一个观点来写，完成后组员交换修改。
Group work 小组内完成
play
Use the table above to write your reply to the post.
3c
I think that ___________________because ____________.
For example, my friend_______is ___________________.
When ________________, _________________________.
My favorite saying is,“__________.” _________________.
opinion 观点
reason理由
优势//能力/做什么
Details（细节支撑）具体的事例
Saying（谚语）+Opinion(观点)
例子
All in all, I think it is important for good friends to care about and help each other in need.
使用以上表格中的内容，写一写你的回复贴文
Checklist
Point(s)
Content Giving opinions (1 point)给出观点 Descriptive&Comparative&Example (3 points) Personal feelings&Opinions on true friendship (2 points) Others (1 point)
Structure Beginning/ Body/ Ending (3 points)
Expressions Good expressions (2 points) No mistakes (grammar, tense, spelling) (2 points)
Handwriting clean&tidy (1 point)
Check your partner’s article according to the checklist.
要求：对照评分表格检查自己写好的文章，自评，同桌互评，小组内互评，选出组内优秀的文章。
描写/对比/例子
关于友谊的 个人情感 / 观点
其他方面
开头/主体/结尾
好的表达
没有错误（语法，时态，拼写）
书写整洁
内容
结构
表达
书写
Should friends be similar or different
Self-check 自我校对
Content 内容 & Laguage 语言 Have a topic sentence
Develop ideas in different ways
（摆事实、举例子、作比较、列数据）
Use linking/proper words 逻辑词
Correct spelling
Correct grammar 语法
Beautiful handwriting书写
Peer-assessment 同伴互评
Content 内容 & Laguage 语言 Have a topic sentence
Develop ideas in different ways
（摆事实、举例子、作比较、列数据）
Use linking/proper words 逻辑词
Correct spelling
Correct grammar 语法
Beautiful handwriting书写
OK
Good
Excellent
Symbol Aspect
Good sentences
Missing words
Mistakes
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Opinion
Reasons 理由
Examples 例子
Opinion观点
Summary
“OREO”writing
True friends
Friends are both the same and different
Unit3 SectionB(3a-3c)
Lily
Lucy
similarities
good comforter
good listener
doesn't care
differences
Rose's reply post
I don’t really care _________ (是否) my friends are similar _________ or different _________ me. I have two _________(amaze) friends. Lily is funnier than anyone else I know. When I feel sad or have a problem, she makes me laugh and feel _________(good). She helps me see the __________________(一线生机) in difficult situations.
My other friend, Lucy, is not as funny _________ Lily. Lucy is quieter, but she listens better _________ others. Lucy and I talk _________ everything. I know she cares about me because she’s always there to listen.
My favourite saying is, “A true friend reaches for your hand and _________(touch) your heart.” Both Lily and Lucy are true friends. We are always ready to help each other by _________(lend) a hand.
语法填空
if to
from amazing
better
silver lining
as
than about
touches
lending
翻译
1. 我不太在意我的朋友和我相似或者不同。
__________________________________________________________________________
2. 当我感到悲伤或遇到问题时，她会逗我开心，让我心情好转。
__________________________________________________________________________3. 我知道她关心我，因为她总是愿意倾听我的诉说。
__________________________________________________________________________
4. 我最喜欢的一句话是：“真正的朋友会牵起你的手，触动你的心灵。”
__________________________________________________________________________5. 我们总是准备好通过伸出援手来帮助彼此。
__________________________________________________________________________
I don’t really care if my friends are similar to or different from me.
When I feel sad or have a problem, she makes me laugh and feel better.
I know she cares about me because she’s always there to listen.
My favourite saying is, “A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart.”
We are always ready to help each other by lending a hand.
基础题（必做）： 完成教材3c的写作任务。根据你在3b中准备的观点和例子，写一篇回复帖，参与论坛讨论。要求至少80词，必须包含观点句和具体事例。
提升题（选做）： 使用课堂上学到的“COLT检查清单”（Content, Organization, Language, Technicalities），对你写的回复帖进行自我检查与修改，并在文末注明你修改了哪些地方。
Thank You!

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