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Unit 5
Off to space
Writing
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Have you ever dreamt of travelling to space
Where will you go
What will you do
Lead-in
Watch the video and answer the questions
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Why was David's post the best？
David drew a mind map before he wrote about his dream plete the mind map and then read the post to see if you were right. (p.76)
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Pre-writing
a What the trip will be like
b Things I am going to do there
c Things I will have to do there
d Introduction
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Pre-writing
David
2053/11/5 20.05
I hope I can travel into space with my family one day. This is what my dream trip looks like. First, my family and I will fly out into space on a spaceship. When we get into orbit, we will visit a space station. It will take us about six hours to get there.
Things are very different in space. There is much less gravity, so we will have to tie our sleeping bags to the wall when we sleep. We will also have to wash our hands and brush our teeth in a different way.
Read David’s post and check your answer.
d. Introduction
c. Things I will have to do there.
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Pre-writing
David
2053/11/5 20.05
Read David’s post and check your answer.
b. Things I am going to do there.
When we arrive at the space station, I will first look out of the windows and enjoy the view of the Earth. After that, I would like to do some experiments. I really want to study how plants grow in space. Next, I’m going to put on a spacesuit and go on a spacewalk.
I really look forward to travelling into space someday—it will be an amazing experience!
a. What the trip will be like
David drew a mind map before he wrote about his dream plete the mind map and then read the post to see if you were right. (p.76)
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Pre-writing
a What the trip will be like
b Things I am going to do there
c Things I will have to do there
d Introduction
b
c
d
a
Read the first paragraph and further complete the first part of the mind map
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I hope I can travel into space with my family one day. This is what my dream trip looks like. First, my family and I will fly out into space on a spaceship. When we get into orbit, we will visit a space station. It will take us about six hours to get there.
When How With whom
Where
With whom
How
David
2053/11/5 20.05
When
Six key elements: 5W1H：
When
With whom（who）
What
Where
Why
How
What
Pre-writing
Read the second and third paragraph and find some conjunctions
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Things are very different in space. There is much less gravity, so we will have to tie our sleeping bags to the wall when we sleep. We will also have to wash our hands and brush our teeth in a different way.
When we arrive at the space station, I will first look out of the windows and enjoy the view of the Earth. After that, I would like to do some experiments. I really want to study how plants grow in space. Next, I’m going to put on a spacesuit and go on a spacewalk.
1. so
2. when
3. First
4. After that
5. Next
conjunctions
logical words
Read again and find the information:
things I will have to do there and things I am going to do there
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Things are very different in space. There is much less gravity, so we will have to tie our sleeping bags to the wall when we sleep. We will also have to wash our hands and brush our teeth in a different way.
When we arrive at the space station, I will first look out of the windows and enjoy the view of the Earth. After that, I would like to do some experiments. I really want to study how plants grow in space. Next, I’m going to put on a spacesuit and go on a spacewalk.
things I will have to do there
things I am going to do there
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Choose your task card
Suppose you are on Moon/Mars/a space station now. Discuss with your group members and use a timeline to plan your one-day trip in space and then share with us:
Rules: 1. List things you will have to do there and you are going to do there
2. Use writing techniques to discuss and share
15:00-16:00
Want to do:
Have a video call with family on Earth
10:00-12:00
Want to do: Collect lunar soil
08:00-09:00
Must do: put on spacesuits
Task Card（Moon/Mars/A space station））
Brainstorm
Show time
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How did David feel about this trip
What do you think your trip will be like
I really look forward to travelling into space someday—it will be an amazing experience!
wonderful
unforgettable
exciting
memorable
challenging
It will (be) ______ because______.
I’m looking forward to doing sth.
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conjunctions:
... so ... when ... because ...
logical words:
First ... After that ... Next ...
It will be ______ because______.
I’m looking forward to .
Summary
six elements.
Space Adventure
Have you ever dreamt of travelling to space Now comes your chance: write a post about your dream trip and send it to us. The writer of the best post will win a free trip to space!
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Step 1: Read the writing requirements.
While-writing
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Tense: Simple Future Tense; Simple Present Tense
Person: The first person
Paragraphs: 3-4
Step 2: Write your post.
While-writing
Remember to use the six elements, conjunctions and logical words
Time to write
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Check and revise
Tick (√) the boxes to check your writing, and then revise it.
Post-writing
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Exchange your writing with your partner.
You need to:
point out errors if any;
give suggestions for improvement
Post-writing
Check and revise
Invite your partner to read your final draft
How well can you Partner’s
rating
express your view of a dream trip to space
organize ideas and details into a well-balanced structure
use the theme vocabulary and sentences of the unit
use the Simple Future Tense and grammatical sentences
use punctuation
spell the words correctly
Write:1(more improvements
needed),
2(fair),
3(good),
or4(excellent)
for the ratings.
Post-writing
Show time
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Space exploration needs courage.
Our words today may become actions tomorrow!
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Homework
You must do:
Revise your post according to the suggestions
You can choose to do:
Turn your post into a short video to describe your day in space.
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