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动作链
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Please describe the following picture and video.
Tom cooked the duck.
Tom added some carrots,mixed them and took a sip .
Please describe the following picture and video.
The two pandas hugged .
The old panda dashed forward, raised his son up and hugged him tightly.
重结果更要重过程
Tip: 拆解动作，形成动作链
将结果性的动作，拆解成更细致的连贯性的微动作，使动作结果过程化，形成动作链。
How to divide the action into small parts(slow motions)
句式一： S + V1 , V2 and V3
比如“打车去火车站”这个动作
= 拦车 + 上车 + 告诉目的地
He _______ a taxi, _______ in with his suitcase and _______ the driver, “ Go to the railway station,please.”
中英文区别:中文中可以出现一系列动词，英文中不允许，所以英文写作非常依赖连词。
stopped
jumped
told
句式一： S + V1 , V2 and V3
“把肉扔给狼”
= 拿出 +瞄准 + 扔
He _______ the meat, _________ the wolf and _______ it straight to the wolf.
took out
aimed at
threw
He glanced at the cup, _________________ and said, “Thanks.”
=先看一眼奖杯，深吸一口气，说道：“谢谢！”。
took a deep breath
句式一： S + V1 , V2 and V3
男孩们跳入湖中嬉戏。
=冲向湖边 + 脱掉衣服 + 跳入水中
The boys _________ excitedly to the lake, ________ their clothes and _________ into the water.
rushed
took off
jumped
句式一： S + V1 , V2 and V3
仿写： 主+V1, V2, and V3....
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1.她登上(board)飞机，坐在座位上，寻找她的书。
2.女孩停止了啜泣(sob)，从女人身边退了(step back)回来，开始唱歌。
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The girl stopped sobbing, stepped back from the woman and began to sing.
She boarded the plane, sat on her seat and then looked for her book.
2. My father patted me on the shoulder and encouraged me never to
give up my dreams.
My father patted me on the shoulder, encouraging me never to give up my dreams.
1. Mary saw the ring on the table and felt a little bit shock.
Seeing the ring on the table , Mary felt a little bit shock.
3. The child was moved by the story and began to cry.
Moved by the story, the child began to cry.
Sentence pattern 2: 非谓语Doing A(+doing B)，sb did sth...
Sentence pattern 3: 非谓语Done ，sb did sth...
Polish(用非谓语作状语)
同一对象同时发出不同动作
例：我难过地挂断电话。
= 放下电话 + 坐下 , 全身发抖/哭泣
I put down the telephone and sat down, shaking/sobbing.
句式二： S + V1 and V2，+doing/done 或
doing/done, S+V1 and V2
=抬起头 + 举起双臂 , 大喊“我可以做到！”
He held up his head and raised his arms, ________ loudly, “ I can do it!”
句式二： S + V1 and V2，+doing/done 或
doing/done, S+V1 and V2
yelling
他从墙头往外看。
她递给我一张纸巾。
= 把梯子靠墙放好， 他爬上去 + 往外看。
= 看到我哭， 她抽出纸巾 + 递给我。
_________the ladder against the wall, he climbed and looked out.
Seeing me crying louder and louder, she silently pulled out of a piece of napkin and _________ it to me.
non-verb(doing/done作状语)，S + V
句式二： S + V1 and V2，+doing/done 或
doing/done, S+V1 and V2
Putting
handed
How to make your continuation writing vivid
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Skill 1: 描述一系列的动作。如果是同一个主语做了两个以上动作，可用 : 主+谓1, 谓2 and (then) 谓3
Skill 2: 当出现一系列动作，而且前后几个动作逻辑主语一致时，
还可采用:
非谓语, 主+谓1 and 谓2
主+谓1 and 谓2, 非谓语
主动:doing 被动:done
动作链: 一连串的动作构成画面
情绪描写
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Feeling adj. adv. Feeling adj. adv.
开心 惊讶
难过 困惑
痛苦 好奇
紧张 自信
激动 羞愧
生气 焦虑
失望 自豪
happy
delighted
happily
delightedly
sad
sadly
painful
painfully
nervous
nervously
excited
excitedly
angry
angrily
disappointed
disappointedly
surprised
amazed
surprisedly
amazedly
confused
confusedly
curious
curiously
confident
confidently
ashamed
ashamedly
anxious
anxiously
proud
proudly
My mom takes care of me patiently.
My mom talks to me gently.
Observe the sentences carefully to find out the rule
Skill 1: Use adverbs to make actions more emotional.
使用副词让动作更具情感。
1.Nervous and scared, Peter started to deliver his speech.
2.Confident and determined, David tried his best to run .
3.Depressed and helpless, Eric burst in tears.
Observe the sentences carefully to find out the rule
Skill 2:
Adj.1 and adj.2, sb. did sth.
怀着...和...的感情，某人做...
1.既开心又激动
2.既难过又沮丧
3.既紧张又焦虑
4.既担心又害怕
5.既坚定又自信
6.既惊讶又感动
7.既生气又失望
8.既疲倦又饥饿
常用搭配
Delighted and excited
Sad and frustrated
Nervous and anxious
Worried and scared
Determined and confident
Surprised and touched
Annoyed and disappointed
Exhausted and hungry
Tips: 使用两个意义相近的形容词进行搭配。
Task 2: Complete sentences with appropriate adjectives.
1. _________________________(感到坚定和受到鼓舞的）, David raised his head , looking at me with gratitude . （2022全国1卷）
2._________________________(感到放松的和快乐的) , David waved at me immediately after crossing the finish line , conveying his happiness and gratitude . （2022全国1卷）
3.________________________(既惊讶又感动), Mr. Alder believed what I said, giving me a second chance. (2023广东一模)
4._________________________(感到开心和兴奋的), he
received the admission letter from Guangzhou University.
Determined and inspired
Relaxed and delighted
Surprised and touched
Delighted and excited
Observe the sentences carefully to find out the rule
Skill 3:
So+adj.+be+主语+that从句
某人是如此的...以致于
So happy is Tom that he jumps highly.
So scared was Tina that she burst into tears.
1. ______________________that I heard my heart pounding strongly.
我非常紧张，能听到我的心剧烈地跳动。
2.______________________that she burst into laughter.
可莉非常开心，突然大笑起来。
Task 3: Complete the following sentences
So nervous was I
So delighted was Klee
感受情绪: 套用固定句式
例2:
She felt a great sense of anger welling up in her heart and surging through her.
她感到一股强烈的怒意在内心升腾
2. Judging from her voice, it was evident that she was trapped in great concern/ worry.
从她的声音判断, 很明显她陷入了极大的忧虑之中.
Sb
情绪
sb’s
sb
sb’s
sb
情绪
引导启发，句型探索 ·无灵主语
“I felt happy.”
无灵主语句：用无生命的事物来做主语
(换主语) : “开心(的情绪)抓住了我 ”
(加介短) :“ 一股开心(的情绪)抓住了我”
(加并列): “开心与振奋(的情绪)抓住了我”
我开心:
Delight seized me.
A wave of delight seized me.
Delight and excitement seized me.
1.情感状态的抽象名词+谓语+sb.
Fear gripped the village.
Courage deserted him.
Anger choked my words.
A wave of nervousness washed over him.
A chill of horror suddenly swept over him.
Excitement seized him.
整个村庄笼罩在恐怖之中。
他失去了勇气。
我气得说不出话。
一阵紧张感涌上他。
他突然感到不寒而栗。
他好兴奋。
情绪名词
固定动词
seize/catch/take hold of 抓住
strike/hit
surround 围绕着
tear... into pieces 把..撕碎
well up in 涌入
come over 包围/支配
envelop 笼罩
overwhelm 压倒, 使难以承受
sweep/flood/rush over 袭来
choke 噎住，堵住
sb
+as/when sb do sth
无灵主语:“情绪名词+固定动词+sb"+as/when sb do sth
(当某人做某事时，一股...情绪涌上心头)
a burst/wave/surge/sense/flush of +情绪名词 (一阵/一种 ... 向某人袭来)
常见的情绪名词：
开心:delight/joy/pleasure
愤怒: anger/fury/rage/annoyance
悲伤:sadness/sorrow/grief
害怕:fear/panic/terror/horror
震惊:shock/astoninshment/surprise/amazement
绝望:despair/hopelessness
感激:gratitude/appreciation
钦佩:admiration/respect
失望:disappointment
激动:excitement
满意:satisfaction/contentment
轻松、宽慰:relief/comfort
愧疚、懊悔:guilt/regret
沮丧、抑郁: frustation/depression
羞愧、尴尬:shame/embarrassment
紧张、焦虑:nervousness/anxiety/
怀疑、不确定: doubt
迷惑: confusion/puzzlement/
勇气: courage
自信:confidence

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