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Step One: Appreciation（赏析）
读后续写微技能
心理活动·常见的情感描写
No shows , No Art!
emojis
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Step Two: Lead-in (导入)
Advantages of emojis
I prefer to use emojis while chatting with my friends, because they .
express ideas
vividly
add fun
promote relationship
convenient......
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Step Two: Lead-in (导入)
情感 学生作文 emojis版本
happy
sad
scared
moved
angry
I was happy.
I was very sad.
I was very scared.
I was moved.
I was very angry.
情感描写+表情包
（动作描写/神态描写）
Step 1：
Step 2：
Step 3：
心理活动·情感描写
高兴
难过
害怕/紧张
感动
生气
依据外界刺激(什么事)，判断情感基调（喜怒哀乐...）
联想一个表情包（形象生动）
细节描写这个表情包
情感描写+表情包（动作描写/神态描写）
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Step Three: Learning the new (知新)
To show : to write with more sensory(感官的) detais ,allowing your readers to hear,see,taste,touch and smell the same things your characters are experiencing .
当我想起母亲 (平时对自己很照顾，但自己未感恩)时，我感到......。
Step1：依据外界刺激(什么事)，判断情感基调（喜怒哀乐）
Step2：联想一个表情包（形象生动）
Step3：细节描写这个表情包
情境一：
Sad
When I thought of my mom, I (My) _______
______________________________________
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Step Three: Learning the new (知新)
When I thought of my mom, I(My) .
Sad语料库
I was sad, tears streaming down my cheeks.
I broke down emotionally.
I couldn't help crying bitterly.
My heart sank.
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Step Three: Learning the new (知新)
情境二：
当爸爸说他准备收养这只狗时，我感到......
Delighted/Excited
Step1：依据外界刺激(什么事)，判断情感基调（喜怒哀乐）
Step2：联想一个表情包（形象生动）
Step3：细节描写这个表情包
When my father said that he would adopt the dog,________________.
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Step Three: Learning the new (知新)
her eyes twinkled with excitement.
her eyes danced with joy and sweetness.
she cheered and jumped with joy.
(欢欣雀跃)
（激动得两眼放光）
When my father said that he would adopt the dog,_______________________.
Delighted/Excited语料库
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Step Three: Learning the new (知新)
情境三：
当看到那只母熊时，我感到......
Step1：依据外界刺激(什么事)，判断情感基调（喜怒哀乐）
Step2：联想一个表情包（形象生动）
Step3：细节描写这个表情包
Scared/Nervous
When I saw the mother bear, I(My) .
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Step Three: Learning the new (知新)
When I saw the mother bear, I(My) .
I felt so scared that my legs felt weak.
I felt so scared that my face turned pale and I was trembling.
I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch.
吓呆了，不敢动弹
紧张到手心出汗
Scared/Nervous 语料库
吓到腿软
紧张到
头脑空白
紧张到
心跳加速
吓到面色发青，发抖
I felt so nervous that my mind went blank.
I felt so nervous that my palms were sweating.
I was so nervous that my heart beat wildly.
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Step Three: Learning the new (知新)
情境四：
母亲节到了，我儿子送了她母亲一张他自己画的画，她感到......
Moved
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Step Three: Learning the new (知新)
Moved语料库
At the sight of this, She(Her) ......
She was touched, tears filling her eyes/tears streaming down her cheeks.
She was touched and walked closer to hug him.（+动作行为）
Her heart melted.
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Step Three: Learning the new (知新)
情境五：
课前没有读书声，覃老师感到.......
Step1：依据外界刺激(什么事)，判断情感基调（喜怒哀乐）
Step2：联想一个表情包（形象生动）
Step3：细节描写这个表情包
Angry
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Step Three: Learning the new (知新)
① Mr. Qin felt so angry that his face turned red and glared at us.
③Filled with anger, Mr. Qin was unable to utter a single word, arms folded. (充满愤怒；说不出话)
Angry语料库
② Mr. Qin felt so angry that he rushed out of the classroom, slamming the door furiously behind him. (冲出教室；狠狠摔门)
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Step Three: Learning the new (知新)
Step 1：依据外界刺激(什么事)，判断情感基调（喜怒哀乐...）
Step 2：联想一个表情包（形象生动）
Step 3：细节描写这个表情包
心理活动·情感描写
高兴
难过
害怕/紧张
感动
生气
情感描写+表情包（动作描写/神态描写）
我有我的课堂
Step Four: Revision（温故）
在横线中续写相应的情感描写，可适当添加内容，使文章前后连贯。
I was nine years old. It was a cold dark night.
We had our meal and went to sleep. Somehow in the midnight I heard some strange sounds outside the main door. I _____________________________
________. I gathered courage and looked out through the window and I found Spotty, a small puppy.
felt so scared that my legs felt weak
I felt so scared that I jumped out my bed, holding the lamp tightly.
What happened
How did you feel
What emojis
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Step Five: Practice（操练）
Like any other parents would, my parents first
totally refused my idea but my sister and I
convinced them to keep Spotty. I ______________ __________________________________________. Slowly, Spotty got on well with everyone and became one of the family members.
was so excited that my eyes danced with joy and sweetness.
What happened ：
How did you feel
What emojis
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Step Five: Practice（操练）
One day, Spotty returned from his daily walk
with a broken leg. He appeared very exhausted. He came to my room and sat near me. It was then that I saw his behind leg was injured and was bleeding. I_________________________________
___________________________________. Luckily, two days later, Spotty was up to his usual tricks though he limped(一瘸一拐) a bit. I really admired him for his courage.
was sad and cried my mother for help, tears streaming down my cheeks.
What happened
How did you feel
What emojis
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Step Five: Practice（操练）
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Step Six: Rewrite and Show (重写和赏析）
请大家根据这节课所学内容，对昨天考试中的读后续写的第一段进行重新构造、重写。
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Step Seven: Assignment
Task 1: Think out other emotions.
Task 2: Rewrite the writing of Test 5.

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