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Z20 名校联盟（浙江省名校新高考研究联盟）2025届高三第三次联考 英语
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Final exams were approaching,and everyone in school was excited about vacations.We were dreaming of far-off destinations,our minds filled with images of thrilling adventures.
After school on Friday,on my way home,I ran into my best friend. Enthusiastic about the vacations,I asked him about his plans.His eyes twinkled brightly as he replied,"I’m going to visit my grandparents with my parents for a week.”
"Don't you ever get tired of going to the same place year after year I remember,every year,your family takes 7 to 10 days off to head back to your native village,”I asked,raising an eyebrow in curiosity.
"Oh,not at all!That's the absolute best time of the year for me!Being with my folks in the village is just amazing.”His face beamed with joy as he continued,“In the village,I get to meet so many wonderful people,and everyone there is so kind and welcoming.Our neighborhood crew is tight!We're always hanging out together,you know Just running wild,chilling by the lake,or bouncing between each other's houses.Honestly,I know what really matters about these village trips.It's not the cool places we see—it's spending time with the people I love.That's the real treasure of life.”
His words made me recall my own grandparents.I realized I hadn't seen them for years.But still,it's a pleasure to be there.….we had big long gardens and a big multi-story house.
The next day,over breakfast,I mustered up the courage and asked my parents,"Can we visit grandparents this summer after exams ”Dad replied hesitantly,“Oh,that's unexpected.”Mom was surprised."Well,you know it gets really hot there this time of year. “After a short pause,Dad gave a small sigh and met my hopeful gaze. “However,”he said, “if you perform well in exams,we'll make the trip.”
For the next six weeks,I threw myself completely into my studies.My mom was amazed by this sudden transformation in me.Soon came the long-awaited exam results.
注 意 ：
(1)续写词数应为150左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
I rushed home and immediately handed my parents my score card and a note with "PLEASE."
Paragraph 2:
I saw my mom had tears in her eyes when leaving them.
Z20 名校联盟（浙江省名校新高考研究联盟）2025届高三第三次联考 英语
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Final exams were approaching,and everyone in school was excited about vacations.We were dreaming of far-off destinations,our minds filled with images of thrilling adventures (独立主格刻画心理) (交代背景信息).
After school on Friday,on my way home, I ran into my best friend. Enthusiastic about the vacations(adj短语做主语补语), I asked him about his plans. His eyes twinkled brightly(人物刻画) as he replied,"I’m going to visit my grandparents with my parents for a week.”
"Don't you ever get tired of going to the same place year after year I remember, every year , your family takes 7 to 10 days off to head back to your native village,” I asked, raising an eyebrow in curiosity(现在分词做伴随动作).
"Oh, not at all! That's the absolute best time of the year for me(我对于这个事情的态度)! Being with my folks in the village(现在分词短语做主语) is just amazing.” His face beamed with joy(人物神态刻画) as he continued,“ In the village, I get to meet so many wonderful people, and everyone there is so kind and welcoming. Our neighborhood crew is tight! We're always hanging out together, you know Just running wild, chilling by the lake, or bouncing between each other's houses(动作串并列，衔接点). Honestly, I know what really matters about these village trips. It's not the cool places we see—it's(递进描写) spending time with the people I love(本句可以理解为本文的中心).That's the real treasure of life.”
His words made me recall my own grandparents. I realized I hadn't seen them for years. But still, it's a pleasure to be there.….we had big long gardens and a big multi-story house.
The next day, over breakfast, I mustered up the courage and asked my parents,"Can we visit grandparents this summer after exams ” Dad replied hesitantly,“Oh, that's unexpected.”Mom was surprised."Well, you know it gets really hot there this time of year. “After a short pause, Dad gave a small sigh and met my hopeful gaze. “However,” he said, “ if you perform well in exams, we'll make the trip.”
For the next six weeks, I threw myself completely into my studies. My mom was amazed by this sudden transformation in me. Soon came the long-awaited exam results.
注 意 ：
(1)续写词数应为150左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
I rushed home and immediately handed my parents my score card and a note with "PLEASE."
Paragraph 2:
I saw my mom had tears in her eyes when leaving them.
一、题目类型分析与构思策略
分析维度 内容说明
题目类型 个人情感类亲情主题（返乡、家庭陪伴、成长感悟）
主旨内核 乡村返祖之旅中，主人公和家人一同重新体会亲情与归属感，价值观发生转变
情节类型 “回归成长型”故事：由朋友影响 → 激发回忆 → 行动努力 → 实现愿望 → 情感升华
构思原则 紧扣“考试成绩换得返乡机会”主线，展开对亲情的重新发现与感悟
续写布局 第一段：考试成绩揭晓→达成目标→准备出发→到达乡村
第二段：与祖辈重逢→情感升温→领悟亲情真义→升华主题
框架提炼 开始（交卷成绩）→ 发展（回乡旅程）→ 高潮（与祖辈互动）→ 结尾（情感反思）
实施步骤 1. 明确续写起点：得知成绩
2. 衔接朋友话语&童年回忆
3. 设计高温环境的真实细节
4. 展示祖辈温情互动
5. 落点于“珍惜亲情”的深层领悟
二、原文与续写的承接分析表（核心线索与情节分析）
分析角度 内容概述 原文反应句或线索
人物刻画 主人公从“冷漠”到“热情”，转变过程合理；朋友为转变的引子 “Don’t you ever get tired of…”→“His words made me recall…”
情感层次 从向往冒险→受到触动→主动求变→亲情升温 “His face beamed with joy…” → “Can we visit grandparents…”
关键情节点 朋友言语触动→主动请求父母→考试奋进→成绩公布→返乡→重聚感动 “His words made me recall…”、“Soon came the long-awaited exam results.”
语言特色 青春口语化表达交织情感句式，语言真实自然 “That’s the real treasure of life.”、“Can we visit grandparents…”
关键词分析 treasure, folks, amazing, native village, hopeful gaze, transformation 贯穿情感核心与人物行为动机
心理描写 好奇→感动→渴望→坚决→喜悦→感恩 “I mustered up the courage…”、“My mom was amazed…”
动作描写 相遇对话→请假→学习→交成绩单→出发→与祖辈互动 “I rushed home and immediately handed…”
环境描写 童年记忆中祖屋的大花园，多层房屋，夏日炎热 “We had big long gardens and a big multi-story house.”
隐含主题 真正的快乐源自陪伴与亲情，而非新奇景点 “It’s not the cool places… It’s spending time…”
情感转折 被朋友话语唤醒亲情意识→学习投入→喜获成就→实现与家人团圆的愿望 “His words made me recall my own grandparents.”
空间转换 学校→家→乡村 续写需展现从城市出发到达乡村的过程
时间过渡 周五放学→六周备考→成绩公布→假期启程 “For the next six weeks…”、“Soon came the long-awaited…”
三、故事山（Story Mountain）结构分析
阶段 原文/续写内容衔接 说明
开端 与朋友的对话唤起童年回忆 引发主人公内在变化的契机
上升行动 请求父母→努力学习→期待成绩公布 行动驱动，情节向高潮推进
高潮 成绩公布→父母承诺成行→到达乡村 情感实现与目标达成形成高潮
下降行动 与祖父母的互动→回忆童年→体验村庄生活 情感加深，构建温情氛围
结局 感悟亲情重要性→价值观升华 主旨点题，情感闭环
四、续写注意事项与技巧
续写注意点 具体要求
续写开头已给定 段首句：“I rushed home…” 与 “I saw my mom…”必须准确使用
逻辑衔接自然 情节需顺理成章，从考试结果到返乡经历再到情感收尾
语言风格一致 保持原文中亲切、青春、口语化的表达风格，适当穿插细腻描写
情感升华落点自然 升华部分可设计为“祖父母的善意行为”触发感动，实现内心转折
3. 动作 / 心理 / 环境描写
动作描写
I grabbed my bag and sprinted out the door, my heart pounding with excitement.
我拎起书包冲出门，心中激动不已。
He leaned against the window, watching the scenery blur as the train moved.
他靠在窗边，望着随着列车移动而模糊的风景。
I flung my arms around Grandpa as soon as I saw him.
一见到爷爷，我立刻张开双臂拥抱了他。
She wiped the sweat off her forehead with the back of her hand.
她用手背擦去额头上的汗水。
I knocked gently on the wooden gate, feeling a rush of nostalgia.
我轻轻敲着那扇木门，一股怀旧情绪涌上心头。
My father opened the trunk and started loading our bags carefully.
爸爸打开后备箱，小心地装上我们的行李。
We strolled along the dusty path, laughing as we shared childhood stories.
我们沿着尘土飞扬的小路漫步，边笑边讲童年趣事。
She crouched to smell the blooming jasmine by the fence.
她蹲下闻篱笆边盛开的茉莉花香。
I handed over my scorecard, barely able to contain my excitement.
我递上成绩单，几乎抑制不住内心的喜悦。
Grandpa patted me gently on the shoulder, his eyes full of pride.
爷爷轻轻拍了拍我的肩膀，眼中满是自豪。
心理描写
My chest tightened with anticipation as I waited for the results.
等待成绩时，我的胸口因期待而发紧。
A wave of regret washed over me as I realized how long it had been.
意识到已经很久没见祖父母，一股悔意涌上心头。
I felt an odd warmth spreading in my chest.
我感到一种奇异的温暖在胸口蔓延。
A spark of hope lit up in my mind.
一丝希望在我心头燃起。
I was overwhelmed by a sense of belonging.
我被一种归属感深深包围。
A mix of nervousness and joy danced inside me.
内心交织着紧张和喜悦的情绪。
Guilt prickled me as I recalled how I’d neglected them.
当我想起自己对祖父母的冷漠，内疚刺痛了我。
My heart swelled with gratitude.
我的心中满是感激之情。
I was struck by how much I had missed this.
我震惊于自己竟如此怀念这一切。
Tears welled up in my eyes, but I smiled through them.
泪水涌上眼眶，但我仍笑着面对。
环境描写
The air smelled of damp earth and blooming flowers.
空气中弥漫着湿润泥土和盛开的花香。
The sun beat down relentlessly, casting shimmering waves on the road.
太阳毫不留情地炙烤大地，路面上泛起耀眼波光。
The old house stood quietly, surrounded by overgrown grass and buzzing cicadas.
老房子静静伫立，四周是杂草丛生与蝉鸣阵阵。
The wooden floor creaked beneath our feet, echoing with memories.
木地板在我们脚下嘎吱作响，仿佛回响着往日记忆。
Chickens clucked in the distance, blending with the rustle of leaves.
远处鸡鸣与树叶沙沙声交织成田园交响曲。
The village was bathed in golden light, calm and timeless.
村庄沐浴在金色阳光下，宁静而永恒。
The scent of homemade food wafted through the open windows.
家常菜香从开着的窗户飘进来。
A soft breeze stirred the curtains, carrying in the sound of laughter.
柔风拂动窗帘，带来远处传来的欢笑声。
Dust rose as we walked the sun-baked path toward the house.
我们走在被太阳烤热的小路上，尘土随脚步飞扬。
The garden was a tangle of color—roses, marigolds, and wild herbs.
花园里五彩缤纷，玫瑰、万寿菊和野草交错生长。
高级词替换词（按读后续写情境分类总结）
场景 常用词 → 高级词
开心/高兴 happy → delighted / overjoyed / thrilled / elated / on cloud nine
伤心 sad → sorrowful / heartbroken / downcast / gloomy / devastated
感动 touched → moved / stirred / overwhelmed / deeply affected
想念 miss → long for / yearn for / be nostalgic about / pine for / crave
改变 change → transform / shift / alter / evolve / undergo a change
4. 地道搭配与语法解析
地道搭配现象
throw oneself into sth → 全身心投入（e.g. I threw myself into exam revision.）
beam with joy/pride → 满面笑容地表现出…（e.g. He beamed with pride as he spoke of his village.）
muster up the courage → 鼓起勇气（e.g. I mustered up the courage to ask.）
get tired of → 厌倦了…（e.g. Don’t you get tired of going back every year ）
make a trip → 去旅行/探亲（e.g. We’ll make the trip if you do well.）
tight neighborhood crew → 关系紧密的伙伴群体（文中地道口语化表达）
可积累语料与生词讲解
twinkle
词性：v./n.
释义：闪烁，闪光（多指眼神/星星）
近义词：sparkle, shine
反义词：dull, fade
例句：Her eyes twinkled with excitement. / Stars twinkled above us.
muster (up)
词性：v.释义：鼓起（勇气、信心）
近义词：gather, summon
反义词：lose, scatter
例句：He mustered up the courage to speak. / She could hardly muster the strength to go on.
nostalgia
词性：n.释义：怀旧，思乡
近义词：longing, reminiscence
反义词：indifference, forgetfulness
例句：A sudden wave of nostalgia hit me. / The photo album filled me with nostalgia.
hesitantly
词性：adv.释义：犹豫地，迟疑地
近义词：reluctantly, uncertainly
反义词：confidently, boldly
例句：She hesitantly opened the envelope. / He answered hesitantly, unsure of himself.
transformation
词性：n.释义：彻底变化，转变
近义词：change, shift, metamorphosis
反义词：stagnation, sameness
例句：His attitude showed a remarkable transformation. / The garden underwent a spring transformation.
Possible Versions
Version1
Paragraph 1:
I rushed home and immediately handed my parents my score card and a note with "PLEASE." Seeing my score cards(现在分词做伴随动作), my dad raised his eyebrows, then broke into a rare smile. “Looks like someone really meant it”, he chuckled, handing the note to Mom(现在分词做伴随动作). Without hesitation, they nodded in agreement. The very next week, we packed our bags and boarded the train. On stepping into the village, the familiar scent of blooming flowers and the warmth of the sun on the tiled roofs instantly brought back memories(无灵主语句). Grandpa stood at the gate, waving with that same gentle smile(现在分词做伴随动作). During the visit, we worked together in the long garden, picking vegetables and watering the plants(动作串描写). I spent hours with my family under the shade of old trees, laughing(现在分词做伴随动作)just like we did when I was kids. The streets, though quieter than before, still echoed with the joy of our childhood(无灵主语句). Everything seemed slower, simpler—and somehow more real(环境描写). That week was filled with peaceful moments, shared stories, and a renewed sense of connection(名词并列). It wasn’t just a vacation; it was like finding a missing piece of myself(递进描写).
Paragraph 2:
I saw my mom had tears in her eyes when leaving them. She gave Grandma one last hug, her voice trembling(独立主格刻画人物神态), “We shouldn’t have waited so long.” As we drove away, silence filled the car(无灵主语句). Looking out the window(现在分词做伴随动作), I watched the dusty roads disappear behind us, and with them, a part of me stayed(情绪渲染). That summer had changed everything—not just my exam results, but my understanding of love and home. I finally grasped what my friend meant: the most valuable treasures are not bought, but felt—through shared meals, quiet moments, and hands(名词并列) held in silence(过去分词做后置定语). Ever since that trip, returning to our village(动名词短语做主语) became more than a holiday; it was a ritual of remembrance and rediscovery.
动作描写：raised his eyebrows, boarded the train, packed our bags, greeted us with open arms, hugged tightly
心理描写词汇：warm memories flooded my mind, heart beat in tune, a part of me stayed
地道搭配：board the train, flooded with memories, beat in tune, shared laughter, dusty roads disappear
情绪描写：tears in her eyes, voice trembling, silence filled the car
词汇升级：
“happy” → “joyful”, “delighted”
“big” → “spacious”, “vast”
“nice” → “heartwarming”, “comforting”
“remember” → “recall”, “reminisce”
“say” → “whisper”, “murmur”
Version 2
Paragraph 1:
I rushed home and immediately handed my parents my score card and a note with "PLEASE." Dad raised his eyebrows, exchanged a glance with Mom, and both burst into smiles(动作串描写). “You did it!” Mom said, giving me a tight hug(现在分词做伴随动作). Soon, we packed our bags and boarded the train to the village. When we arrived, the sight of our old home warmed my heart(无灵主语句). Grandpa greeted us at the gate with open arms, his voice shaky yet cheerful(独立主格刻画人物状态). We spent the week harvesting vegetables, sharing laughter at dinner, and listening to Grandma’s tales under the stars(现在分词短语做动作串描写). I found joy in simple things — feeding chickens, drawing water from the well, or sitting quietly by the pond, listening to the frogs croak and the wind rustle the trees(现在分词短语并列).My heart, once distant from it(对比描写), beat in tune with its rhythm again.
Paragraph 2:
I saw my mom had tears in her eyes when leaving them. Grandma held her hand and whispered, “Come back soon.” Mom smiled through her tears and nodded. As the car started, I looked back to see Grandpa waving, his figure growing smaller(独立主格). On the road, I found myself silently promising to return. That trip taught me that roots, once ignored(对比描写), don’t vanish; they wait patiently to be found again. Back in the city, everything felt faster, louder(无灵主语，主动表被动), but I tresured this trip and what my best friend meant: the most valuable thing is spending time with the people I love and who love me. From that year on, visiting my grandparents(现在分词短语做主语) was not an option—it became a heartfelt need(递进句式). And with every return, my connection to them, and to myself, deepened.
心理动作描写：eyes widened with surprise, hearts softened with pride, silently promising
固定搭配：sense of simplicity, faded into distance, held her hand, smiled through tears
同义/替换词：
“fast” → “rapid”, “hurried”
“look” → “gaze”, “glance”
“feel” → “sense”, “experience”
“start” → “begin”, “set off”
官方：
I rushed home and immediately handed my parents my score card and a note with "PLEASE."This time, they instantly agreed. The next day, we set out for our hometown. Every one, be it relatives or neighbors(补充说明主语), greeted us with smiles, treating me like their own son(现在分词做伴随动作). Every day brought new happiness(无灵主语句) –- digging with Grandpa in the garden, playing games with cousins until sunset, roaming around familiar streets with loved ones and even joining the local kids in their football matches(动名词短语做动作串描写). The days passed as we had a wonderful time together. Truth be told, everything was more fun in a big family. When departure day came, my heart ached.
I saw my mom had tears in her eyes when leaving them. She wiped them away and smiled, saying(现在分词做伴随动作), “I didn’t realize how much I missed the village until now. It’s not just a place; it’s where our roots are(递进描写).” As we drove away, I felt a mix of excitement and nostalgia. I realized that the real adventure wasn’t about exploring far-off places but about reconnecting with family and our heritage(递进描写). This trip wasn’t just for me; it was a reminder for all of us that family is the true treasure of life(同位语从句). From then on, visiting Grandma and Grandpa(动名词短语做主语) became our annual tradition, a time to cherish love, laughter, and the simple joys of being together(名词并列).

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