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2026届高三起点考试 英语
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I almost lost him
I love writing in my diary. It's how I get all the thoughts and worries out of my head and make sense of them. There are so many extra memories in the pages of this one if I turn back to last September. I'll never forget that day. That week. It was the worst of my life.(给出背景信息，整体评价)
Stormy-- a sheepdog-- has always been a part of our family. I remember when I was old enough I learned to play with him. He seemed to be my brother. Next to my diary, he's always been the person I tell everything to. And I got into the habit of taking my books up to the paddock(牧场)to study, leaning on the shelter and watching Stormy herd the sheep(现在分词短语做伴随动作).
It was a sunny, cool evening. I was just closing my books when my eye was drawn to Stormy. He was standing in the far corner of the paddock, where the flies are the worst, and looking at his belly. Something was different about him, but I couldn't work out what. I walked down the field towards him and he wandered off up the hill. Maybe it had just been the flies But the nagging feeling I'd had earlier just wouldn't go away. After dinner I asked Mum for a ham sausage from the fridge and went back up the field.
He was pawing at the ground and didn't even seem to notice me approach. I noticed straight away that he looked quite sweaty, even in the cool evening breeze, and he completely ignored the sausage when I offered it to him. My heart sank-I knew right then that something was really wrong. Mum still says she's never heard me shout as loud as I did then(高潮). All I remember is the sound of the gate opening and her rushing through, closely followed by Dad.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Maybe I'd over-reacted
Paragraph 2: Over the next week, Stormy had to stay in the recovery room of the hospital.
湖南省·天壹名校联盟2026届高三起点考试 英语
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I almost lost him
I love writing in my diary. It's how I get all the thoughts and worries out of my head and make sense of them, There are so many extra memories in the pages of this one if I turn back to last September, I'll never forget that day. That week, It was the worst of my life.
Stormy a sheepdog has always been a part of our family. I remember when I was old enough I learned to play with him. He seemed to be my brother. Next to my diary, he's always been the person I tell everything to. And I got into the habit of taking my books up to the paddock(牧场)to study, leaning on the shelter and watching Stormy herd the sheep.
It was a sunny,cool evening.I was just closing my books when my eye was drawn to Stormy. He was standing in the far corner of the paddock, where the flies are the worst, and looking at his belly(肚子). Something was different about him, but I couldn't work out what. 1walked down the field towards him and he wandered off up the hill. Maybe it had just been the flies But the nagging(让人不安的) feeling I'd had earlier just wouldn't go away. After dinner I asked Mum for a ham sausage from the fridge and went back up the field.
He was pawing at the ground and didn't even seem to notice me approach. I noticed straight away that he looked quite sweaty, even in the cool evening breeze, and he completely ignored the sausage when I offered it to him. My heart sank-I knew right then that something was really wrong. Mum still says she's never heard me shout as loud as I did then, All I remember is the sound of the gate opening and her rushing through, closely followed by Dad.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Maybe I'd over-reacted
Paragraph 2: Over the next week, Stormy had to stay in the recovery room of the hospital.
1. 文章分类及续写思路分析
文章类型：人与动物的情感纽带 + 危机事件
续写思路：
情感主线：通过主人公对牧羊犬Stormy的担忧、自责和最终康复的喜悦，强化人与动物的深厚情感。
冲突解决：需围绕Stormy的病情展开，通过兽医诊断、家庭支持、主人公的心理成长完成故事闭环。
伏笔呼应：需回应原文中“flies”“sweaty”“ignored sausage”等细节，暗示Stormy的健康问题（如中暑、中毒或寄生虫感染）。
续写布局：
段落 内容框架 关键任务
第一段 自我怀疑→紧急送医 衔接“shout”“parents rushing”动作，过渡到兽医诊断
第二段 康复过程→情感升华 描写Stormy的恢复和主人公的心理成长
续写注意事项：
承接原文：
动作链：父母冲进牧场→送医→兽医检查（需与“pawing ground”“sweaty”关联）。
心理描写：延续“nagging feeling”到自责（“Maybe I'd over-reacted ”）。
设计技巧：
加入兽医对话解释病因（如中暑），呼应“sunny evening”“flies”。
用环境描写烘托情绪（如医院冷光灯→康复后阳光）。
2. 故事山模式与原文分析
故事山：
开端：主人公与Stormy的日常（牧场学习、倾诉习惯）。
发展：发现Stormy异常（抓地、流汗、拒食）。
高潮：尖叫呼救，父母赶来。
回落：送医诊断（续写段落1）。
结局：康复与情感升华（续写段落2）。
衔接点与关键分析：
分析角度 内容 原文反应句/细节
人物刻画 主人公敏感、依赖Stormy “next to my diary, he's been the person I tell everything to”
情感层次 从担忧→恐慌→自责→释然 “My heart sank”“nagging feeling”
关键情节点 Stormy异常行为引发危机 “pawing at ground”“ignored sausage”
语言特色 口语化、内心独白 “Maybe it had just been the flies ”
心理描写 不安感持续 “the nagging feeling wouldn't go away”
动作描写 Stormy的异常动作 “standing...looking at belly”“wandered off”
环境描写 天气暗示潜在病因（炎热） “sunny, cool evening”“flies are the worst”
隐含主题 人与动物的无条件信任与救赎 日记象征情感寄托，Stormy象征家庭纽带
伏笔/冲突点 Stormy的健康危机（中暑/中毒） “flies”“sweaty”“ignored food”
解决方案 紧急送医+专业治疗 续写需通过兽医对话明确病因
续写段落设计
Paragraph 1:
承接“shout”：父母冲进牧场，父亲抱起Stormy冲向卡车，母亲安慰哭泣的“我”。
兽医检查时，“我”自责是否反应过度（呼应开头日记功能）。
兽医指出中暑症状（链接“sunny”“sweaty”），需立即输液。
Paragraph 2:
康复期：Stormy虚弱但尾巴轻摇，主人公每天读日记给它听。
环境对比：医院消毒水味→牧场青草香，Stormy重新追逐羊群。
主题升华：日记最后一页写“Stormy taught me to trust my instincts”。
3. 读后续写动作/环境/心理描写语料
动作描写类
He pawed at the ground anxiously.
　他焦躁不安地抓着地面。
She bent down to check his breathing.
　她弯下身查看它的呼吸。
Stormy staggered a few steps and collapsed.
　Stormy踉跄几步后倒下了。
I rushed forward, barely holding back tears.
　我冲上前去，几乎忍不住眼泪。
He turned his head away from the food.
　它把头转向一边，不理食物。
Dad dashed through the gate at my cry.
　听到我喊声，爸爸冲进了栅栏。
Stormy raised his eyes slowly, his tail still.
　Stormy慢慢抬起眼睛，尾巴一动不动。
I reached out my trembling hand to touch him.
　我颤抖地伸出手去触碰他。
He nudged my hand weakly with his nose.
　它用鼻子微弱地碰了碰我的手。
She held the leash tightly, heart pounding.
　她紧紧抓住牵引绳，心跳加速。
心理描写类
A wave of dread washed over me.
　一股恐惧的浪潮涌上心头。
I couldn't shake off the nagging feeling.
　我无法摆脱那种挥之不去的不安。
My heart sank at the sight.
　看到那一幕，我心里一沉。
A thousand terrifying thoughts crowded my mind.
　无数可怕的念头涌上心头。
I was torn between hope and fear.
　我在希望与恐惧之间挣扎。
My breath caught in my throat.
　我呼吸一滞，喉咙发紧。
I felt a lump rising in my throat.
　我喉咙哽咽，一阵哽咽涌上来。
Relief flooded my body when I saw him wag his tail.
　当我看到它摇尾巴时，全身涌上一阵轻松。
I kept blaming myself for not noticing earlier.
　我不停地责备自己没早点发现。
Deep down, I feared the worst.
　在内心深处，我最担心最坏的结局。
环境描写
The evening sun dipped low behind the hills.
　夕阳缓缓落下，躲在山后。
The cool breeze carried the scent of grass.
　凉爽的微风中带着青草的味道。
A blanket of silence fell over the field.
　牧场陷入一片寂静。
Crickets chirped faintly in the distance.
　远处蟋蟀隐约叫着。
The sky turned from gold to dusky grey.
　天空由金色变为暗灰。
The paddock was bathed in fading light.
　牧场沐浴在渐渐消失的光线中。
Stormy stood still as shadows stretched.
　随着影子拉长，Stormy一动不动地站着。
The lights from the house blinked in the distance.
　远处的屋子亮起了灯。
A hush fell over the surroundings as I waited.
　我等着时，四周一片寂静。
The soft rustle of leaves echoed my unease.
　树叶轻轻的沙沙声仿佛回应了我的不安。
高级词替换
基础词 高级替换词 场景分类
sad devastated, grief-stricken 心情低落、担忧
run dash, sprint, race 紧急奔跑，情绪紧张
look gaze, glance, stare, observe 情感动作、细节观察
say murmur, whisper, cry, shout 表达强度、情绪递进
walk wander, stumble, stride 动作细节、情绪体现
固定搭配与词法解析
paw at sth
　 意为“用爪子扒、挠”；常用于动物焦躁/本能动作
　 例句：The dog kept pawing at the door.
a nagging feeling
　 意为“挥之不去的不安感”，形容内心预感或焦虑；常用于心理描写
　 例句：I had a nagging feeling that something was wrong.
heart sank
　 “心沉了下来”，形容失落或突然的惊恐
　 例句：Her heart sank when she saw the empty kennel.
ignore sth
　 “忽视”，写动物反常行为时常用
　 例句：He ignored his favorite toy completely.
shout at the top of one’s lungs
　 “拼命地喊叫”，表达极度焦急或恐慌
　 例句：I shouted at the top of my lungs for help.
可积累词汇与短语
词汇/短语 词性 词义 近义词 反义词 例句1 例句2
stagger v. 踉跄地走 stumble stride He staggered back, barely able to stand. Stormy staggered a few steps, then lay down.
recovery n. 康复；恢复 healing, restoration deterioration His recovery took a week. Stormy's recovery was slow but steady.
collapse v./n. 倒下；崩溃 fall down, faint rise He collapsed from exhaustion. The dog collapsed near the fence.
anxiously adv. 焦急地；担忧地 nervously, uneasily calmly I waited anxiously for news. She watched Stormy anxiously.
breeze n. 微风 wind, gust stillness A breeze stirred the trees. The breeze carried the scent of hay.
Possible Version(3)
Version 1
Paragraph 1: Maybe I'd over-reacted Maybe I had just been overly sensitive after a long day. But the moment Dad touched Stormy’s belly, his smile vanished. “He’s not reacting well,” he said in a low voice, glancing at(现在分词短语做伴随动作)Mum with concern written all over his face(过去分词短语做后置定语). Without saying another word, they grabbed a blanket, wrapped Stormy carefully, and rushed him to the animal hospital(动作串并列), headlights cutting through the dusk(独立主格). I sat in the backseat, gripping my diary tightly(现在分词做伴随动作), my heart pounding like a drum(独立主格刻画人物情绪). When we arrived, the vet ran a quick scan, then shook his head. “It’s stomach torsion — we need to operate right away.” His words hit me like a cold wave. Tears welled up in my eyes as they took Stormy into the operating room. Minutes crawled by like hours, the clock ticking louder with each passing second (独立主格，拟人). When the vet finally emerged with a tired but reassuring smile, we breathed a collective sigh of relief. Stormy had made it.
Paragraph 2: Over the next week, Stormy had to stay in the recovery room of the hospital. I visited him every afternoon, setting my diary beside his cage and softly reading aloud(现在分词短语做伴随动作), even when he seemed too sleepy to notice. I told him about my day, about school, and even the sheep(名词并列) he usually watched from the field. On the third day, he lifted his head slightly at the sound of my voice, his ears twitching just a little(独立主格). That tiny response filled me with hope. The vet said his recovery was going well, mainly because we had acted so quickly. Once he came home, I moved my study spot closer to where he rested, so I could keep him company as he healed. Slowly, his energy returned. Months later, he was strong enough to chase butterflies in the field again. And now, as I sit leaning against the paddock shelter(现在分词短语做伴随动作), diary open on my lap and Stormy trotting around the sheep like old times(独立主格), I realize this moment is a gift. My words no longer carry fear, but quiet joy — the kind that comes from knowing what almost slipped away.
亮点语言点
类别 表达方式 示例句
现在分词做伴随状语 gripping my diary tightly, reading aloud “I sat in the backseat, gripping my diary tightly…”
独立主格结构 the clock ticking louder with each passing second “Minutes crawled by, the clock ticking louder…”
比喻/拟人 my heart pounding like a drum 形象表达紧张情绪
过去完成时 Stormy had made it. 用于事件发生先后
情绪描写层递 concern written all over his face, hit me like a cold wave 情绪多层表达与升级
语料与替换表达积累：
原词 升级表达 同义词 例句
tired exhausted / drained / worn out sleepy, weak His eyes looked exhausted, but he lifted his head.
serious critical / life-threatening severe The vet said it was a critical condition.
said muttered / whispered / announced / responded stated Dad muttered, “He’s not reacting well.”
tears tears streamed / welled up / brimmed over sobs Tears welled up in my eyes as they took Stormy away.
look gaze / glance / stare / observe peer He glanced at Mum with concern in his eyes.
Version 2
Paragraph 1: Maybe I'd over-reacted Yet the sight of Stormy lying on the cold examination table(现在分词短语做后置定语) made my stomach twist with anxiety. The vet gently pressed his belly and frowned slightly. “He may have eaten something bad,” she said, “We'll run some tests, just in case.” I nodded, though my mind was spinning. I couldn’t bear the thought of going home without him. As Mum tried to calm me down, I sat in silence, clutching the collar(现在分词做伴随动作) I'd taken off his neck. The room smelt of antiseptic and fear(无灵主语句，主动表被动). Through the glass window, I could see Stormy’s eyes following me. That single look said more than words ever could—trust, confusion, and pain(名词并列). If only I had noticed his symptoms earlier(虚拟语气). Maybe I wouldn’t be sitting here, helpless(adj做主语补语). The guilt gnawed at me. For the first time, I realized how deeply responsible I felt for him.
Paragraph 2: Over the next week, Stormy had to stay in the recovery room of the hospital. Every day after school, I rushed to visit him, bringing(现在分词短语做伴随动作)along his favorite toy and reading aloud from my diary. At first, he barely reacted. But by the third day, he lifted his head weakly and gave a tiny wag of his tail. My heart soared. I began to write in my diary again, not just to pour out my worries, but to record each small sign of his recovery. On Friday, when the vet finally said he could come home, I burst into tears. Standing at the paddock that weekend(现在分词短语做伴随动作), Stormy beside me and sheep in the distance(独立主格), I felt a calmness I hadn’t known in days. I laid out my books, leaning against the shelter like before(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Life returned to normal—only now, it felt deeper. I had almost lost him(虚拟语气), but I gained something more: a sense of what love and responsibility truly meant.
地道搭配与替换：
gnaw at sb → worry, haunt
burst into tears → break down, start crying suddenly
my heart soared → I felt overwhelmed with joy
record signs of his recovery → track his improvement
情绪/动作亮点词汇：
情绪：twist with anxiety, trust, confusion, pain, guilt gnawed
动作：clutch, follow with his eyes, wag of his tail
Version 3
Paragraph 1: Maybe I'd over-reacted But as Dad sped toward the animal hospital, Stormy’s labored breathing and glazed eyes told me otherwise. My hands trembled as I clutched his fur, whispering(现在分词短语做伴随动作), “Hold on, boy.” Mom squeezed my shoulder, her voice steady but warm(独立主格): “We’ll get him help.” The moment the vet took Stormy from Dad’s arms, my throat tightened. The sterile smell of antiseptic filled the air, and fluorescent lights cast harsh shadows on the white walls. The vet, after a quick examination, said grimly, “Heatstroke. His temperature’s dangerously high.” My stomach twisted—had I ignored the signs earlier (had型虚拟语气)The flies, his restlessness… I should’ve known.
Paragraph 2: Over the next week, Stormy had to stay in the recovery room of the hospital. Each day after school, I rushed to his side, reading aloud from my diary(现在分词短语做伴随动作)—the same stories I’d once told him in the paddock. His ears twitched weakly at my voice, and though his tail barely wagged, the vet assured me he was improving. By the fifth day, he managed a small lick on my hand, and relief flooded me like sunlight breaking through storm clouds. When we finally brought him home, he limped straight to his favorite spot where he usually standing. Watching him nap peacefully(现在分词做伴随动作), I realized how close I’d come to losing him—and how fiercely I’d fight to keep him safe.
官方：
Maybe I'd over-reacted Maybe Stormy was just tired But as my parents examined Stormy, their faces turned serious. Dad gently pressed Stormy's belly. “It's a little serious," Dad muttered, exchanging a worried glance with Mum(现在分词做伴随动作). Without hesitation, they lifted Stormy into the car and sped to the vet. My hands trembled as I clutched my diary in the backseat, praying silently(现在分词短语做伴随动作). The vet confirmed our fears Stormy had a twisted stomach, a life-threatening condition(同位从). Tears streamed down my face as they rushed him into surgery. The waiting felt endless, each tick of the clock echoing my fear(独立主格). Mum held my hand, trying to reassure me(现在分词做伴随动作) that everything would be alright. After what seemed a century, the vet came smiling at us(现在分词做伴随动作) and explained that Stormy's surgery had been complicated, but successful.
Over the next week, Stormy had to stay in the recovery room of the hospital. Every day after school, I would rush to the hospital, sit by his side, and read gently from my diary(动词短语并列), hoping to comfort him(现在分词短语做伴随动作). His tail wagged weakly when he heard my voice, though his eyes still looked tired. The vet said his progress was remarkable, thanks to our quick action. Back home, I rearranged my study spot closer to Stormy, keeping him nearby(现在分词做伴随动作) as he regained strength. Five months later, we could begin walking him in hand. And today Well, I'm writing in my diary, sitting in my usual spot leaning against the field shelter, watching Stormy herd the sheep(现在分词短语并列做伴随动作动作). My diary pages hold not just worry, but also gratitude: Stormy is still with me, healthy and happy, as a family member.

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