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Food and Culture
Reading for Writing
Unit 3
To read a passage about healthy eating.
To learn to write about a healthy diet.
Which one do you like most
cake
milk tea
potato chips
barbecue
cereal milk
hotpot
Macaron
spicy strip
fresh vegetables
instant noodles
Lead-in
1. What do you think makes up a healthy diet
2. What are some rules for healthy eating
Think and share
Lead-in
A healthy diet, a healthier world
A. Slow Eating is Good
B. Reducing Sweets is Key
C. The Real Killer is Sugar
D. The Way you look at Food is Most Important
E. Keep it Fresh and Balanced
1
2
3
4
5
Match the subheadings with the paragraphs.
Reading for the main idea and structure
How many parts can we divide it into
Introduce a topic or a phenomenon
(Para 1)
Advice on healthy eating
(Para 2-4)
Conclusion (Para 5)
Skimming
Data and example Support: Reference to a study published in the Journal of the American Medical Association (25% sugar intake linked to heart disease).
What are the key details that support each point
Contrasting Perspectives: Begins by highlighting the conflict between traditional beliefs (fat as the enemy) and emerging evidence (sugar’s dangers)
tips:pay attention to “but,however,whhile, though...”
Point A:
Data and example Support: Reference to a study published in the Journal of the American Medical Association (25% sugar intake linked to heart disease).
How does the author introduce the topic
Detailed-reading
Content
Discussing
Para. 2: Find out the topic sentence and supporting details.
Details
Topic sentence
What should we do to keep fit
Cut down on desserts, and cut out sweet drinks altogether.
Much of this extra sugar comes from sweets and sweet drinks. The average American gets 1/3 of his or her sugar through sweet drinks alone. The American Heart Association recommends that we limit ourselves to less than 100-150 calories a day from sugar, which is less than what is usually contained in one can of sweet drink or in a single candy bar. In other words, if you want to be healthy, you have to cut down on desserts, and cut out sweet drinks altogether.
Content
Detailed-reading
Para. 3: Find out the topic sentence and supporting details.
The way of argumentation:
Making contrast
Topic sentence
Giving reasons
Beyond this, you can keep healthy by consuming different categories of fresh foods, especially fruit and vegetables, which are full of vitamins and fibre, rather than processed foods. Processed foods often contain less nutrition, and have higher quantities of sugar, salt,and fat than fresh ingredients. Besides this, it is also important to have some meat, beans, or dairy products in your diet, as they provide the necessary protein for strong bones and muscle growth. As with everything in life, moderation is key. The ideal diet is a balanced one, without too much or too little of any one thing.
Details
Content
Detailed-reading
Give reasons (说理）
20min.
mouth
brain
Finally, a fundamental key to healthy eating is to eat slowly. It takes about twenty minutes from the time you start eating for your brain to tell your body that you are full. What this means is that people who chew too quickly end up eating too much food because they still feel hungry. Eating slowly also allows your body to digest your food better, and will allow you to enjoy your food more. In addition, studies show that consistent eating habits, for example, taking three meals a day at the same time each day, are better for our health. It is also better to eat a modest amount of food each time, rather than to eat a lot in one meal, and then a little in the next.
Point 1
Details
How does the writer support his point
Point 2
Point 3
Cite research findings and give explanations
According to this paragraph, how to have a helathy eating
Eat slowly, regularly and eat in moderation.
Make contrasts
Detailed-reading
There is no one trick to healthy eating. Rather, healthy eating starts with having a healthy attitude towards food. One question you can ask yourself is, “Do I eat to live, or live to eat ” If you are using food mostly for nutrition , then you are on the right track with your diet. However, if food has become the centre of your life, you might be on the road to bad health. It is up to you to decide how you want to live, and to make the right decisions about your diet.
Your attitude depends on
how you want to live, and to make the right decisions about your diet.
Conclusion and Theme Elevation:
A healthy diet is a matter of attitude ("eating to live" VS "living to eat").
Detailed-reading
use linking words：
关联词
Put more simply
In other words
What this means is that
·contrasting ideas
对比/相反的观点
However
rather than
rather than
Rather
However
make the text coherent
·list or add information
列举、补充/增加
·give examples
举例
Besides this
In addition
For examplele
For example
also
·use another way to express
引入另一种表达方式
Content
Reading for structure
The structure of the text
Para. 1
Para. 3
The Real Killer is Sugar
Para. 2
Reducing Sweets is Key
Para. 4
Para. 5
Keep It Fresh and Balanced
Slow Eating is Good
The Way You Look at Food is Most Important
problem
some advice
conclusion
How to organize
a passage
Point of view
Supporting details
linking words
figures
examples
research results
Summary
假定你是李华，你校英文报正在征集怎样做才能保持身体健康的短文。请根据以下提示，写一篇短文。
①健康的饮食；
②适当的运动；
③良好的生活习惯。
注意：①词数80左右；
②可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Writing
一审
审定体裁和主题
体裁-应用文-征文
主题-如何才能保持身体健康
二定
确定时态人称
时态-一般现在时
人称-第二人称为主
三明确
明确写作要点
1，健康饮食
2，适当的运动
3，良好的生活习惯
四分段
黄金法则：结合要点分三段
1 写作目的
2 保持健康的方法
3 总结
Writing
One possible version:
Health is fundamental to our physical and mental development.Here are some suggestions on how to keep fit.
For one thing, have a healthy diet. Try to consume vegetables and fruit, which are rich in vitamins and fibre. Meanwhile, you should have some pork, beef and lamb. For another, taking certain quantities of exercise every day is necessary. Exercise can prevent you from feeling tired and make you energetic. Moreover, form a good habit by going to bed early and getting up early.
Overall, a healthy diet, moderate exercise and a good life habit are beneficial to your health.
Yours
Li Hua
Thanks!

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