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Unit1 People of Achievement
Using Language
（人教版高中英语选择性必修一
Using Language:
Introduce someone you admire
CONTENTS
01
Lead in
02
Reading
03
Writing
Unit1 People of Achievement
Learning Objectives
1. Understand the structure of an introduction to someone you admire.
2. Write an introduction to someone you admire on your own.
Unit1 People of Achievement
Part 01 Lead in
Part 02 Reading
Reading: read for the type & main idea
What's the type of the text
A. Exposition
B. Biography
C. Argumentation
D. Practical writing
The text mainly talks about
Albert Einstein's _________and__________
life story
achievements
Reading: read for the structure
Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Introduction
(general information about Albert Einstein: identity, great achievement and personal qualities)
Body (Albert Einstein’s important life experiences, apprearance, personalities...)
Ending ( judgement and appreciation )
Conclude: How to organise your own short biography
Structure
part1
part2
part3
Introduction ( identity, great contributions and personal qualities)
Body (important life experiences)
Ending ( judgement and appreciation )
Part one : Introduction part
E equals m c squared
仿写
作为当代中国最伟大的人物之一，钱学森被誉为中国的“航天之父”。
Qian Xuesen, who is one of the greatest figures in modern China, is widely known as the “ the father of China’s space program”.
钱学森不仅仅是一位杰出的科学家，他还爱好广泛，例如喜欢听音乐和绘画。
Qian was not only an outstanding scientist; he was also a person who had a wide range of hobbies, like listening to music and drawing.
Albert Einstein,who is perhaps the greatest scientist in modern physics, is often considered one of the smartest men who ever lived .
Einstein was not only a genius; he was a courageous and kind figure loved by many people.
Part Two: Body Part
How does the writer develop the passage
In time order.
time expressions
when sb. was ......
after doing for...year(s)
after...years of doing...
that same year, which was recorded as...
following this
after...years
in ..., when...
Conclusion:When telling a story, we’d better integrate time expressions and numbers to have the story flow better.
Part Two: Body part
Conclusion: It’s a good idea to describe the figure’s appearance and to reflect his/her personality by some descriptive words.
在中晚年时期，，钱学森经常留着整齐的银灰色头发，显得干净利落且从容不迫。他的面部线条柔和，鲜有锐利之感。眼睛是他最令人印象深刻的部位：清澈明亮，仿佛始终饱含着对科学探索的好奇和专注。
In his middle and later years, he often had _______, ________hair, giving him a _______ and __________look. His face, with _____ lines, rarely showed sharp edges; His eyes were particulary impressive: _________ and__________, as if always filled with curiosity and focus for scientific exploration.
neat
silvery-gray
neat
unhurried
soft
clear
bright
Part Three: Ending Part
1. In 2009, Qian Xuesen passed away in Beijing. （2009年，钱学森在北京逝世）
2. His death marked the end of an era for China’s science and technology.（他的逝世为中国科技界画上了一个时代的句号）(请把这两句话合成一句话）
Qian Xuesen passed away in 2009 in Beijing, which marked the end of an era for China’s science and technology.
Summary: How to write a biography
Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Introduction
(general information about the character: identity, great achievement and personal qualities)
Body (the character’s important life experiences, apprearance, personalities...)
Ending ( judgement and appreciation )
biography
Part 03 Writing
根据以下内容写一篇短文介绍你最喜爱的中国科学家钱学森。
1. 1911 年出生于上海，1935年赴美留学，成绩优异，受到当时著名科学家冯. 卡门的赞誉。
2. 1939年在美国获航空、数学博士学位。
3. 1948年祖国解放事业胜利在望，钱学森开始准备回国，他克服了种种困难，最终于1955年回到祖国。
4. 1957年起长期担任航空航天研究工作，为中国的航天事业作出了巨大贡献，被誉为“航天之父”。
5. 2009年于北京去世。
参考词汇： 航空航天科学技术：aerospace science and technology.
Exchange your draft with a partner
1. Use the checklist to help you review your partner’s draft.
√ Does the writer describe the person’s appearance and personality
√ Does the writer tell an impressive story of the oerson’s life
√ Does the writer say why the person is great
√ Does the writer sum up how he/she feels about this person
2. Take your draft back and revise it.
Qian Xuesen, who was regarded as the father of China’s space program, was born in 1911 in Shanghai.
In 1935, Qian went to America for futher study and was highly thought of by the famous scientist Von Karman at the time because of his excellent marks. Four years later, he earned a doctorate in aerospace science and mathematics in the US. In 1948, with the victory of the motherland’s liberation in sight, Qian began to make preparations for returning to China. He overcame a variety of difficulties and finally succeeded in coming back to homeland in 1955. Since 1957 he had been devoted to aerospace science and technology and made great contributions to the cause of China’s aerospace.
In 2009, he passed away in Beijing and the whole country mourned the great loss of a briliant scientist.
Try to become not a man of success, but try rather to become a man of value.
--Albert Einstein
Homework
Write an introduction about someone you admire.
1. Choose the person you are going to write about. It should be someone you think is great in some way. It can be an ordinary person, such as a parent, a relative, or a friend.
2. Make a list of things that need to be included in your introduction.
3. Use your notes to write your introduction and sum up how you feel about this person.
注意：写作词数应为80左右。
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