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Write a letter of advice
Unit 1 Teenage Life
假定你是李枫，你的英国笔友杰克刚升入高中，但他一时无法适应新的校园生活，写信向你征求建议。请你就此问题给他回一封信，主要内容包括：
1.制定合理的学习计划
2.结识新朋友
3.参加课外活动
参考词汇：适应 adapt to sth
Writing assignment
注意：
1.词数100-110左右(高三九调13行)
2.适当拓展细节
3.词和短语多样，句式丰富，学以致用
4.每段开头空2格，标点符号，大小写
5.书写(handwriting) 打草稿
1. Type
2. Person
3. Topic
4. Tense
a Letter of Advice
the First & the Second
Problems & Suggestions
Simple Present & Simple Future
Analysis
Organization\ Structure
Para.1
Introduction
背景信息
+写信目的
Body
建议+理由
Conclusion
希望建议有帮助+祝愿
Para.2
Para.3
Para.1
Introduction
背景信息：1.问题+理解
2.写信目的
Para.1-2-1 Introduction 问题与理解
得知你无法适应新的校园生活，我非常理解你既焦虑又忐忑的心情。
Learning that... 得知... have trouble (in) doing sth
I understand quite well that ... adapt to sth 适应...
both ...and ... 既...又...
Dear Jack,
Learning that you have trouble adapting to your new campus life , I understand quite well that you feel both anxious and upset.
Para.1-2-2 Introduction 写信目的
I am writing to share some useful suggestions with you.
我现在正在写信给你分享一些有用的建议。
share sth with sb 与...分享 ...
Para.2
Body
建议1 + 理由1
建议2 + 理由2
建议3 + 理由3
First, I recommend that you should make a workable schedule for your studies. It will help you get used to the new environment in a short time.
Para.2-4-1 Body 建议1 + 理由1
首先，我建议你应该对学习制定一个可行的计划，这将有助于你很快习惯新环境。
I recommend that sb should do sth 我建议
make a workable schedule for ... 制定一个可行的时间表
get used to sth 习惯 ...
, which
, which 升级
In addition, you are expected to meet some friends with the same interests. In this way, you can spend a wonderful time with them to ease anxiety.
Para.2-4-2-3 Body 建议2 + 理由2
此外，你应该结识一些有相同兴趣的朋友。这样的话，你们在一起可以度过美好的时光来缓解焦虑。
be expected/supposed to do sth 应该做 ...
spend ... with sb 与...共度...
in this way 这样的话，
ease / relieve anxiety 缓解焦虑
More importantly, it is advisable for you to take part in extra-curricular activities because meaningful experiences can both broaden your horizons and refresh yourself.
Para.2-4-4 Body 建议3 + 理由3
更重要的是，对你而言，参加课外活动是明智的，因为有意义的经历可以开阔视野和精神焕发。
It is advisable for sb to do sth 对...而言做...是明智的。
broaden sb’s horizons 开阔视野
refresh oneself 精神焕发
Para. 3
Conclusion
希望建议有帮助 + 祝愿
As an old English saying goes, “Well begun is half done.” I sincerely hope that my advice is of great benefit to you. I wish you a pleasant campus life!
Yours,
Li Hua
Para.3-1-2 Conclusion 希望建议有帮助 + 祝愿
俗话说，良好的开始是成功的一半。我真诚地希望我的建议对你有用。祝你校园生活愉快。
be of great help\benefit to sb 对...有帮助
sincerely 真诚地
wish sb sth 祝福某人...
Summary
Dear Jack,
Learning that you have trouble adapting to your new campus life , I understand quite well that you feel both anxious and upset. I am writing to share some useful suggestions with you.
First, I recommend that you should make a workable schedule for your studies , which will help you get used to the new environment in a short time. In addition, you are expected to meet some friends with the same interests. In this way, you can spend a wonderful time with them to ease anxiety. More importantly, it is advisable for you to take part in extra-curricular activities because meaningful experiences can both broaden your horizons and refresh yourself.
As an old English saying goes, “Well begun is half done.” I sincerely hope that my advice is of great benefit to you. I wish you a pleasant campus life!
140 Words
Yours,
Li Hua
Para.1-2
Para.2-4
Para.3-3
Are all the parts of a letter included and organized in good order
Does the writer give reasons for the advice
Does the writer use proper expressions to give suggestions
Does the writer use commas and stops correctly
Is the handwriting easy to read
Checklist
Revising and sharing
Get your draft back and revise it.
Recommend one group member to share his/ her letter of advice.
Select the “Best Adviser of the Class”.
Those who haven't shared in class put up the letters onto the “Advice Corner” in the classroom.
Thank you !

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