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Unit 1 Teenage Life
—Reading for Writing
As a teenager, what problems do you have
in your daily life
...
...
Step1 Lead-in
cyber addiction
bullying
feel lonely and
isolated
generation gaps
with parents
high expectations
from parents
and teachers
What advice will you give if you have friends with such problems
pressure from
heavy school work
depression
Facing these problems, how will you seek for help
1
communicating face to face with the person concerned
2
turning to friends for help
3
asking for advice on social media
4
writing a letter to a professional adviser
5
ringing help hotlines
...
Step1 Lead-in
My parents won’t listen when
I tell them things. I guess it’s
because they’re adults and
can’t understand me. Do
you have any suggestions
I always feel lonely after
school because my parents
work in another city. What
can I do
There is a girl I like in my
class, but I’m too shy to talk to her. Please help me!
My friend, Chen Lei, plays computer games too often and spends too much time online. I’m very worried about him. What should I do
Eric, 15, Chicago
Min Ho, 15, Seoul
Xu Ting, 14, Hangzhou
a Worried Friend
10 September 2018
Dear Worried Friend,
But spending too much time online is
unhealthy and makes it very difficult
to focus on other things in life. Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on
school and family life. I think you
should encourage your friend to try
new hobbies. Why not discuss the problem together I am sure he will
listen to you, since you are his good friends.
I recommend that you talk to your
friend about his behavior. It is not unusual for teenagers of your
generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world.
You wrote that you are very worried about your friend, Chen Lei. I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible. You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
All the best,
Susan Luo
Date
Greeting
Body
Close
Signature
A Letter of Advice
The most important part
1.Mark the body parts of the letter that match the following points.
A. I know what the problem is.
B. I understand how you feel.
C. This is my advice and reason.
D. I think my advice will help.
Step2 Reading
A. I know what the problem is.
B. I understand how you feel.
D. I think my advice will help.
C. This is my advice and reason.
2.What is Worried Friend's problem
3.What suggestions does Susan Luo give to Worried Friend
4.Besides suggestions, what else does Susan Luo say in her letter
She talks about the negative effects of computer addiction.
reasons
②
③
①
Step2 Reading
Considerate & Courteous
Concrete & Convincing
Language Features
5.What expressions does Susan Luo use to make suggestions Circle them in the letter.
Step3 Conclusion
首段Beginning—your point of view
中段Body
—your advice
尾段Ending
—your wishes

提出有针对性的建议，给出理由。
Body

希望自己的建议能对对方有所帮助，同时阐明你所提供的建议仅供对方参考。
Ending
一般指明建议的前提和事情的原委，对自己的立场作一些解释。
Beginning
建议信的正文通常采取“三段式结构”：
01
02
03
知道/听到你现在在……方面有些麻烦, 我很抱歉。
I'm sorry to know/hear that you are now having trouble ( in) doing sth… .
很高兴收到你就……征求建议的来信。
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on...
我的建议如下/这里有帮助你的一些建议。
My advice /suggestions are as follows./ The following is my advice.
/ Here are some tips to help you.
Beginning：交代背景+写信目的（1+3 或2+3）
Sentence patterns
1
2
3
First/First of all ，why not...？If you do this，you can….
Secondly/What's more, you should / had better do...
It is also helpful/useful to do..., which will …
I think it could be more beneficial if you could ...
Thirdly/ In addition/Besides, it would be a good idea if....
By doing this,....
As far as I'm concerned/Last but not least, doing ... is a better choice.
When it comes to this problem, I suggest that you should....
If I were you (in your situation) / in your shoes, I would...
Body：介绍详情、提出建议和理由根据问题给出建议
（3个左右为宜）
4
1
Ending：提出希望采纳建议+感谢+盼望回复（1+2或1+3）
I hope you will find these ideas useful.
我希望你会发现这些办法有用。
I believe/am sure that if you follow my advice，you’ll… .
我相信，如果你听从我的建议，你会……。
I would be grateful if you could consider my advice.
I would appreciate it if you could take my adice into consideration.
如果你能考虑我的建议我将不胜感激。
Looking forward to your early reply.
盼望你的早日回复。
2
3
Let's polish
I am sorry to hear that and here are some suggestions for you.
First of all,
Secondly,
Finally,
I hope you will find my suggestions helpful.
建议信
首段：写信原因（目的）
中间段：列出具体建议+原因
尾段：表达愿望.
Dear ...... ,
I'm sorry to hear that you are ________________________________________（引出对方需要建议的主题）.I'm writing to ······/Here are some suggestions.
To begin with, you'd better do sth./ It would be a good idea to do sth. If you do this, you can not only ___________but also__________ Besides/In addition,it also helps to do sth.By doing this, you will _____________.Last but not least, doing sth is also a good choice, only in this way will you
I hope you will find these suggestions practical/useful/helpful./I would appreciate it very much if you consider my suggestions.
建议句型：It is helpful to do sth. Doing sth. is of great benefit to sb.
I suggest that you’d better do sth. Doing sth is also a good choice.
My parents won’t listen when
I tell them things. I guess it’s
because they’re adults and
can’t understand me. Do
you have any suggestions
I always feel lonely after
school because my parents
work in another city. What
can I do
There is a girl I like in my
class, but I’m too shy to talk to her. Please help me!
My friend, Chen Lei, plays computer games too often and spends too much time online. I’m very worried about him. What should I do
Eric, 15, Chicago
Min Ho, 15, Seoul
Xu Ting, 14, Hangzhou
a Worried Friend
Dear _________,
Best wishes!/Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours
Li Hua
I understand how you feel.
This is my advice and reasons.
I know what the problem is.
I hope my advice will help.
While- writing
Body
Beginning
Ending
建议信
首段：写信原因（目的）
中间段：列出具体建议+原因
尾段：表达愿望.
Dear ...... ,
I'm sorry to hear that you are ________________________________________（引出对方需要建议的主题）.I'm writing to ······/Here are some suggestions.
To begin with, you'd better do sth./ It would be a good idea to do sth. If you do this, you can not only ___________but also__________ Besides/In addition,it also helps to do sth.By doing this, you will _____________.Last but not least, doing sth is also a good choice, only in this way will you
I hope you will find these suggestions practical/useful/helpful./I would appreciate it very much if you consider my suggestions.
建议句型：It is helpful to do sth. Doing sth. is of great benefit to sb.
I suggest that you’d better do sth. Doing sth is also a good choice.
Use the checklist to give feedback on your partner's draft.
Checklist
Evaluation
Step5 Assignments
Polish you passage with the skills we have learnt this class.
Thank You
Goodbye
Dear Lisa,
How is everything going I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble adapting to your new high school life and feeling anxious about both your studies and making friends. I'm writing to share some practical suggestions.
To begin with, I recommend that you talk openly with your classmates or teachers about your worries. If you do this, you can not only let out the pressure that’s been building up inside you but also get professional advice tailored to your situation. In addition, why not join one or two school clubs that match your hobbies, like the book club or the art club. By doing this, you will meet classmates who share the same interests, which makes it easier to build friendships. Last but not least, doing a 10-minute daily review of what you learned in class is also a good choice. Only in this way will you keep up with the course progress, reduce your anxiety about studies, and even improve your test scores gradually.
Hope my suggestions can help you get through this period smoothly. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours
Li Hua

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