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Unit 1
Reading for Writing
Figure out and summarize the structures and language features of a letter of advice.
Use the checklist to improve the draft.
Master and use some words and the expressions related to writing a letter of advice.
Learning Objectives:
At the end of this lesson, you are able to
Lead-in
Read the letter and answer the questions.
Pre-writing
What is Worried Friend’s problem
What advice does Susan Luo give
He is worried his friends plays computer games too often and spends too much time online..
She recommended that he talk to his friend and encourage him to try new hobbies.
Do you think Ms Luo’s advice is useful Why or why not
If you are his friend, what’s your advice to him
A I know what the problem is.
B I understand how you feel.
C This is my advice and reasons.
D I think my advice will help.
Pre-writing
Find and mark the parts of the letter that match the following points.
Pre-writing
What expressions does Ms Luo use to make suggestions
I recommend that…
I think you should…
Why not…
I suggest that…
I would recommend…
It’s might be a good idea to…
If I were you, I would…
Pre-writing
Essential parts
Date
Close
Signature
Greeting
Body
A I know what the problem is.
B I understand how you feel.
C This is my advice and reasons.
D I think my advice will help.
Pre-writing
Work in groups. Choose one to discuss his/her problem and brainstorm possible suggestions and reasons.
Pre-writing
Person Problem Suggestion Reason
Eric
Xu Ting
Min Ho
unhappy or upset, with little communication with his parents
Try listening to your parents. Invite them out for something to eat.
Maybe they don’t listen to you because you don't listen to them. This will give you a chance to speak to them without distractions..
lonely, with far - away parents
This will be a chance to be around other people, and help you realize that other people have problems, too. Parents because they are far away, it doesn't mean that you can't talk to them.
Join volunteer groups. Connect with parents online.
too shy to express feeling
Ask a mutual friend to introduce you to him. Find chances to get together where you are in a group member.
Your friend will be able to help you break the ice with him. You are in a group, it takes all the pressure off, and you can interact with him in a relaxing setting..
While-writing
Draft your letter according to the outline below.
Post-writing
Self-evaluation.
Punctuation
Capitalization
Spelling
Logic
Other….
Post-writing
Exchange your drafts. Use the checklist to give feedback on your partner’s draft.
Peer-evaluation
Yes/No
Are all the parts of a letter included and organized in a good order
Does the writer give reasons for the advice
Does the writer use proper expressions to give suggestions
Does the writer use commas and stops correctly
Is the handwriting easy to read
Get your draft back and revise it.
Sharing.
Date
Greeting
Body
End
Signature
Summary
Letter
Process of writing
Brainstorm
Outline
Draft
Write
Evaluate
Revise
Proof-reading
Share
Reflecting
Very well OK Needs work
Figure out and summarize the structures and language features of a letter of advice.
Use the checklist to improve the draft.
Master and use some words and the informal expressions related to writing a letter of advice.
Homework
Read through the passage on Page 75. Choose one of the questions and then write a letter of advice.
Thanks for listening

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