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读后续写真题
2025年新高考I卷：
家庭关系与冲突
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试题再现
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试题分析
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写作思路
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范文赏析
目录
CONTENTS
2025
试题再现
历年高考英语读后续写真题分析
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My wife and I wanted to share our new home with family and friends by hosting a small gathering in the early summer. She had prepared lots of snacks, while my job was to have the backyard in order.
There was plenty of space for the kids to run and play. There was just one thing I hadn't counted on: My brother chose to bring his dog Toby, a 50 - pound ball of fire. Though friendly, he could easily knock over my niece's small boys and my six - month - old granddaughter. So, when my brother showed up, I asked him to watch Toby and keep him outside.
My plan was working out just fine. Toby was using up his energy by running back and forth in the backyard and giving the kids plenty of room. Unexpectedly, after supper, the weather changed. It started to rain and everyone went indoors.
It was an awkward moment. I didn’t want Toby to be running around in the house, and my brother wasn't happy with driving home with a wet dog. Eventually, my brother decided to leave rather than force the issue.
A few days passed, and I hadn't heard anything from my brother. I texted him and expressed wishes for him to come out again. His reply came as a surprise — a shock, actually: "Not a chance." Clearly, he was unhappy over the way we had parted. After all, I had left him little choice. Well, he'll get over it, I reasoned.
Two months passed. My wife suggested I get in touch with my brother, but I resisted, thinking he should call first. However, my conscience(良心) kept bothering me. I tried to put myself in my brother's shoes. He was facing health issues and his wife of thirty - five years had passed away a few months earlier. Toby was his constant companion, the one who kept him going.注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右; 2, 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: I realized it was me who was at fault.
Paragraph 2: With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother's door.
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
2025
试题分析
历年高考英语读后续写真题分析
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本文围绕家庭聚会展开，因兄弟带狗参加聚会,在天气变化后，狗的安置问题导 致兄弟间产生矛盾。之后主角经过反思，认识到自己的错误,带着诚意准备去和兄弟和解，体现了家庭关系中理解、反思与和解的重要性。
故事梗概
1.开始
兄弟之间因一次聚会中的意外情况（狗的问题）产生误会，
双方未能有效沟通需求和感受，导致矛盾升级。
2.发展
主角作为主人有责任确保聚会安全，但处理方式可能不
够圆滑；兄弟作为客人，带着重要的伴侣（狗），面临
被排斥的处境。兄弟近期丧妻且健康不佳，孤独感强烈，
托比是他重要的精神寄托。 主角通过尝试理解兄弟的处
境，才真正认识到问题的根源。主角最终认识到自己的过
错，放下自尊，主动寻求和解。
3.关键转折（反思与顿悟）
主角尝试站在兄弟的角度思考（put myself in my brother's shoes），
了解到兄弟面临的巨大困境（丧妻之痛、健康问题）以及托比
作为唯一伴侣的极端重要性。主角清晰地认识到：“是我错了”
（I realized it was me who was at fault）。 这是故事的核心转折点。
4.和解行动
主角放下自尊，带着妻子做的饼干（象征善意和弥补），
主动上门找兄弟和解（I arrived at my brother's door……）。
2025
写作思路
历年高考英语读后续写真题分析
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Tip1: finding the elements to filling the chart.[ Tense:___________ ]
where who when what why how
at the protagnonist’s new home
in the backyard and indoors
I
my wife;my brother
in the early summer
brother brought Toby
there was a problem with Toby’s placement
I didn’t want Toby in the house
brother didn’t want dog in the car

mind trick
past
Tip2: 人物性格分析
“我”：
有责任感：确保聚会安全，整理后院。
控制欲较强：希望一切按计划进行，对托比的安置有严格要求。
初期缺乏同理心：只关注自己作为主人的责任和潜在风险，未能体谅兄弟带狗的需求及其背后的情感寄托。要求兄弟“看着托比”时可能显得生硬。
后知后觉：冲突发生后未能立即意识到兄弟的受伤程度，低估了问题的严重性。
有良知：尽管拖延，但最终良心不安，促使反思。
关键成长点：通过换位思考，认识到自己的错误（未能体谅兄弟的处境和情感需求），并最终主动采取和解行动。体现了反思和改变的勇气。
兄弟：
经历巨大痛苦：失去相伴35年的妻子，健康不佳。
孤独感强烈：托比是他重要的情感依靠和日常伴侣（constant companion, the one who kept him going）。
自尊心强且敏感：被要求将托比隔离在室外（尤其在雨天无法进屋），感到被排斥和不被理解/欢迎。选择离开而非争论，以“没门”的强硬回复拒绝后续邀请，都显示他深受伤害且愤怒。
深爱托比：托比对他来说远不止是宠物，而是情感支柱。
妻子：
体贴（准备食物，后续建议联系兄弟），是主角的支撑力量。她的饼干成为和解的媒介。
托比：
不仅仅是宠物，是情节冲突的导火索，更是兄弟情感状态的象征（活力/陪伴）和兄弟与主角关系破裂的焦点。
Tip3: 前文线索文脉走向
时间线：early summer---a few days passed---two monthes passed
空间线：the protagonist’s new home
情感线：The expectation when hosting the gathering---the worry that Toby might knock over the children---the relief when the plan went smoothly---the awkwardness when it rained---the unease after the brother left---the surprise at receiving the brother’s refusal reply---the inner struggle and self-blame
情节线：The protagonist hosts a gathering to share the new home_the brother brings the dog Toby---arranging Toby outdoors goes smoothly---the weather suddenly changes and it rains,everyone goes indoors, and there is a problem with Toby’s placement---the brother leaves, and theprotagonist’s text invitation is rejected---the protagonist feels guilty and reflects on his own mistakes
After supper, rain came. “I” didn’t want Toby inside. “My” brother left. Later, “I” texted to “my” brother but got a “Not a chance” reply.

Two months later, “I” thought of “my” brother faced health issues and lost his wife. “I” realized “I” hurt him.
My wife and “I” hosted a home-gathering. “my” brother brought his dog Toby, which might knock over kids, so Toby was kept outside.
excited;
busy
worried
embarrassed;
dilemmatic
guilty;
sympathetic
uncaring
upset
concerned; worried
Tip3: Summarize the story line and the emotion line.
P1 I realized it was me who was at fault. P2 With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother's door.
①接P1： ⑥接P2：
② ⑦
③ ⑧
④ ⑨关键对话：递饼干，直接认错。
⑤接P2： ⑩升华
tip5：阅读段首两句十句定大纲+提问互动法
自我反思：承认未体谅兄弟的孤独（丧妻之痛、健康问题）。
Eva realized the trick was useful.
场景刻画：开门瞬间细节
兄弟的转折：原谅，可以利用托比破冰，让托比嗅/蹭主角
托比的意义：强调"Toby was his only true friend now, helping him through hard days"。
错误根源：指出那晚驱逐托比+冷战是双重伤害
妻子推动：结尾明确衔接饼干
兄弟状态：（健康问题+悲伤）
托比反应：（活力依旧，对比兄弟的憔悴）
With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother's door.
Tip6:analysis the style of the article ——确保续写内容上下文一致
描写方式：语言、动作、情绪、心理、环境、肖像描写



微技能1——对话和情绪描写

公式：① v.+adv. ②v.+adv. +with a+sth.③ v.+adv. +in a+sth.
eg.Tom担心地/着急地/不耐烦地/温和地/轻轻地/充满爱意地问， “..... ”
“..... ”asked Tom worriedly/ anxiously/ impatiently/ gently/ softly/ lovingly.
微技能2——动作情感描写素材
笑 开心 看 放松
sb.’s face lights up/ brightens stare at/take one’s eyes off sth. draw/take a deep breath
a big smile spread across her face widen/ narrow one’s eyes breathe a sign with relief
Tip7:analysis the style of the article ——确保续写内容上下文一致
微技能3——情感+动作描写
公式：人/主语+ v.+adv.副词/系表结构， with+sth. +v-ing +（adv.副词)+介词短语。
人/主语+ v.+adv.副词/系表结构， sth. +v-ing +（adv.副词）+介词短语。
eg. 她静静地站着，泪水顺着脸颊淌下来。
She stood silently, tears streaming down his cheeks.
微技能 4——动作三连 A, B and C
eg.“这个歌手唱歌”
想一想：歌手唱歌，这个动作前面或后面会有哪些动作？
歌手唱歌 = 扫视观众 + 深吸一口气 + 开始演唱
The singer glanced at the audience, took a deep breath and began to sing.
段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我意识到是我错了。” 可知，第一段可描写作者反思自己在聚会上只顾控制局面，忽视了Toby对弟弟的重要性，因骄傲迟迟未联系弟弟，最终通过电话留言道歉并约定见面。
②由第二段首句内容“带着妻子做的饼干，我来到了弟弟家门口。”可知，第二段可描写弟弟开门时的惊讶与沉默，兄弟俩拥抱和解，坐在门廊上谈心，看着Toby依偎在弟弟腿边，明白亲情修复的意义。
续写线索：
反思过错——电话留言道歉——约定见面——带饼干登门——拥抱沉默——谈心和解——领悟亲情
2025
范文赏析
历年高考英语读后续写真题分析
04
范文赏析
Para 1:
I realized it was me who was at fault. My brother had been going through
tough times, yet I was so thoughtless about his feelings that rainy day. Toby
wasn't just a pet; he was my brother's rock. How could I have forced him to
leave his dog out in the rain The more I reflected, the heavier my guilt grew.
I knew I had to make things right—S0 I turned to my wife for advice. She
offered to bake a batch of biscuits, hoping these small, warm gestures could
start to mend what I'd broken.
Para 2:
With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother's
door. My heart raced as I knocked, worried he'd turn me away.
When he finally opened the door, surprise flashed in his eyes.
“I'm sorry,” I blurted out, holding out the biscuits. “For
being so hard on you that day. Toby is family too, and I
should've known better.” My brother sighed, then pulled me
into a hug. Inside, Toby greeted me with a wagging tail. As
we chatted over the biscuits, laughter slowly filled the room,
bridging the gap between us.
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