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高考英语一轮复习 应用文写作
一．书面表达（共20小题）
1．（2025 云安区模拟） 你校《英语周刊》将举办一场原创英文诗歌比赛，现面向全校学生征集稿件。请你写一则通知，内容包括：
（1）比赛目的；
（2）稿件要求；
（3）投稿方式和截止日期。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Welcome to join the English Poetry Contest
______
2．（2025 吉林模拟） 假定你是李华，你最近受邀请参加了纽约举行的国际模拟联合国大会（ModelUN），并在一场关于气候变化的全体会议中代表中国发言。以此经历，请给你的英国笔友Maddy写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
（1）会议前的准备工作；
（2）辩论中阐述的主要观点；
（3）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80词左右；
（2）结构清晰，逻辑严密，语法准确，用词得当；
（3）请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Maddy，
______
3．（2025 下陆区校级模拟） 英语口语课上，老师要求围绕"carrier pigeon（信鸽），postman，smartphone"展开联想，并发表自己的看法。请你据此写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
（1）信息传递方式的变化；
（2）你的看法。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Hello everyone，
______
Thanks for your listening!
4．（2025 吉州区校级模拟）你校英文报正在举办主题为"用英语讲中国故事"的征文活动。请你以一个中国寓言故事为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
（1）寓言故事简介；
（2）意义或启示。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The Fable Story in China
________
5．（2025 惠农区校级三模）你们学校正在征集有关"2025年春晚机器人扭秧歌"节目的英语稿件，请你以"The Robots' Yangko Dance at the Spring Festival Gala"为话题，写一篇征文稿，描述该节目并谈谈你的感受和评价。
要求：
（1）词数80左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：traditional costumes传统服装
a combination of technology and culture科技和文化的结合
The Robots' Yangko Dance at the Spring Festival Gala
6．（2025 碧江区 校级模拟） 你校英语社团举办以"Without Labor，Without Joy"为主题的演讲活动，请你用英语写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
（1）劳动的益处；
（2）自己的劳动体验；
（3）呼吁大家热爱劳动。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）标题已为你拟好，不计入总词数。
Without Labor，Without Joy
______
7．（2025 碑林区校级模拟）假设你是李华，你校将举办以"非遗集市"（Intangible Cultural Heritage Market）为主题的庆祝活动.请你写一封邮件邀请你的英国交换生朋友Jack一起参与，内容包括：
（1）活动目的；
（2）活动具体安排；
（3）邀请参与。
注意：
（1）写作词数应100左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
8．（2025 金安区校级模拟）假设你是高三学生李华，高考以后即将迎来一个长暑假。请你以"我的暑期成长计划"为题，写一篇短文，向校英语报"畅想未来"栏目投稿，内容包括：
（1）提出你想实现的一个目标；
（2）阐述你的理由。
注意：
（1）写作字数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Summer Growth
________
9．（2025 鄢陵县三模）假如你是某校高三学生李华，在外教Matthew的课上，同学们分组讨论"在人工智能时代，是否还有必要学习外语"。请你代表小组总结发言，内容包括：
（1）小组观点；
（2）陈述理由。
注意：（1）词数80左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
10．（2025 蕲春县校级四模） 假定你是李华，校英语俱乐部正在征集"英语节"活动创意，请写一封邮件，向英语俱乐部负责人推荐你设计的一项活动。内容包括：
（1）活动形式；
（2）设计亮点；
（3）预期效果。
注意：
（1）词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）不得透露学校、姓名等个人信息。
Dear Sir or Madam，
For the upcoming English Festival，I'd like to propose ...
______
I hope my idea will be taken into account.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
11．（2025 武功县校级模拟） 假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike来信说他每天都感觉不到快乐，向你咨询怎样才能得到快乐。请你写一封回信给他一些建议，内容包括：
（1）健康是快乐的要诀；（2）快乐在于知足。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80左右；（2）请按如下格式作答。
Dear Mike，
_____________________
Yours，
Li Hua
12．（2025 江苏模拟）假定你是李华，上周六你参加了流浪动物认领收养志愿服务活动。请你给英国朋友 Chris写一封邮件分享此次活动，内容包括：
（1）服务内容；
（2）你的感受。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris，
I'm writing to share with you my volunteering at an animal adoption last Saturday._______
Yours，
Li Hua
13．（2025 聊城三模） 假定你是红星中学学生李华、你的美国好友Jim在你校网站上看到了你们参加学农活动的照片，对此很感兴趣并询问相关信息。请你给他回封邮件，内容包括：
（1）活动的内容和安排；
（2）你的感受。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jim，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
14．（2025 广西模拟） 你校英语报正组织关于校食堂最受学生欢迎的美食的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
（1）你心目中最受欢迎的美食；
（2）说明理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The most popular dish in our school canteen
______
15．（2025 金安区校级模拟）最近，你班越来越多的同学使用AI助手完成学习任务，请你就该现象写一篇短文投稿校英文刊，内容包括：
（1）你的看法；
（2）你的建议。
注意：写作词数应为80词左右。
请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
______
16．（2025 浙江模拟） 你校上周举办"中国古代诗词进校园"中英文化弥合活动。请你记录这次活动并投稿到校英文报上，具体要求如下：
（1）结合具体中国古代诗词记录活动内容；
（2）表达期待。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
______
17．（2025 吉州区校级模拟）假定你是李华。毕业在即，你班计划向母校赠送一份礼物。请你给英国朋友David写一封邮件，分享你们的设想，并咨询他的建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David，
I'm writing to share a plan with you.________
Yours，
Li Hua
18．（2025 河北三模）假定你是李华，你所在的星水文学社团正在筹备"中国古典小说"欣赏活动。请你给交换生Chris写一封邮件。内容包括：
（1）活动介绍；
（2）邀请参加。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris，
______
Yours lovingly，
Li Hua
19．（2025 忻州三模） 假定你是李华，上周日你校举行了师生徒步远足活动。在此期间发生了很多感人的事，请你写一篇英语短文，发表在校英文报上，内容包括：
（1）列举一两件感人的事迹；
（2）你的感想。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
20．（2025 上杭县校级模拟）近期，我校学生会对高中生在家做家务的情况做了一个调查，调查结果如下。请简要描述调查结果，并谈谈你对高中生是否应该做家务的看法。注意：
（1）写作词数应为 80 左右；
（2）请在答题纸的相应位置作答。
______
高考英语一轮复习 应用文写作
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共20小题）
1．（2025 云安区模拟） 你校《英语周刊》将举办一场原创英文诗歌比赛，现面向全校学生征集稿件。请你写一则通知，内容包括：
（1）比赛目的；
（2）稿件要求；
（3）投稿方式和截止日期。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Welcome to join the English Poetry Contest
______
【答案】
Welcome to join the English Poetry Contest
Aiming to promote our appreciation of English poetry，our school's English Weekly magazine is to hold the English Poetry Contest.
Firstly，all entries must be written in English，no more than 20 lines，demonstrating originality and clarity.In addition，there is no specific theme，as long as it is positive，so you can freely express yourself.
Most importantly，don't forget to submit your entry via email by next Friday.
All students who are interested are welcome to participate.Don't hesitate to let your creativity flow!
【分析】高分句型一：Aiming to promote our appreciation of English poetry，our school's English Weekly magazine is to hold the English Poetry Contest.
翻译：为了提高我们对英语诗歌的欣赏，我们学校的《英语周刊》将举办英语诗歌比赛。
分析：本句运用了现在分词短语Aiming to promote our appreciation of English poetry作状语。
高分句型二：All students who are interested are welcome to participate.
翻译：欢迎所有感兴趣的同学参加。
分析：本句运用了who引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】
Welcome to join the English Poetry Contest
Aiming to promote our appreciation of English poetry，our school's English Weekly magazine is to hold the English Poetry Contest.【高分句型一】（比赛目的）
Firstly，all entries must be written in English，no more than 20 lines，demonstrating originality and clarity.In addition，there is no specific theme，as long as it is positive，so you can freely express yourself.（稿件要求）
Most importantly，don't forget to submit your entry via email by next Friday.（投稿方式和截止日期）
All students who are interested are welcome to participate.【高分句型二】Don't hesitate to let your creativity flow!（欢迎参加）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
2．（2025 吉林模拟） 假定你是李华，你最近受邀请参加了纽约举行的国际模拟联合国大会（ModelUN），并在一场关于气候变化的全体会议中代表中国发言。以此经历，请给你的英国笔友Maddy写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
（1）会议前的准备工作；
（2）辩论中阐述的主要观点；
（3）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80词左右；
（2）结构清晰，逻辑严密，语法准确，用词得当；
（3）请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Maddy，
______
【答案】Dear Maddy，
How is it going？I'm excited to share my experience at the Model UN in New York.
Before the conference，I did extensive research on China's climate policies and collected much data.During the plenary session on climate change，I presented China's efforts like promoting clean energy and carbon neutrality goals.
It was an amazing experience.Not only did I enhance my understanding of global issues but I also felt proud to represent my country on an international stage.
What about you？Have you had any similar experiences？
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Before the conference，I did extensive research on China's climate policies and collected much data.
翻译：会前，我对中国的气候政策进行了广泛的研究，收集了大量数据。
分析：本句使用了介词短语on China's climate policies作后置定语。
高分句型二：Not only did I enhance my understanding of global issues but I also felt proud to represent my country on an international stage.
翻译：我不仅增进了对全球问题的理解，而且为能在国际舞台上代表我的国家感到自豪。
分析：本句使用了not only置于句首引起的部分倒装。
【解答】Dear Maddy，
How is it going？I'm excited to share my experience at the Model UN in New York.（写信目的）
Before the conference，I did extensive research on China's climate policies and collected much data.【高分句型一】（会议前的准备工作）During the plenary session on climate change，I presented China's efforts like promoting clean energy and carbon neutrality goals.（辩论中阐述的主要观点）
It was an amazing experience.Not only did I enhance my understanding of global issues but I also felt proud to represent my country on an international stage.【高分句型二】（个人感想）
What about you？Have you had any similar experiences？
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
3．（2025 下陆区校级模拟） 英语口语课上，老师要求围绕"carrier pigeon（信鸽），postman，smartphone"展开联想，并发表自己的看法。请你据此写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
（1）信息传递方式的变化；
（2）你的看法。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Hello everyone，
______
Thanks for your listening!
【答案】Hello everyone，
It's my great honor to deliver a speech on changes in the ways of conveying information to you today.
In earlier times，people used carrier pigeons to send messages，which was slow and unreliable.Then，with the postal system evolving，mail delivery became postmen's job.Today，in the digital age，smartphones have revolutionized communication，enabling people to pass on information globally in seconds with just a few clicks.
From waiting for a pigeon to receiving a text instantly，we've seen a remarkable transformation.As we continue to innovate，the future of communication is bound to be more exciting and amazing.
Thanks for your listening!
【分析】高分句型一：In earlier times，people used carrier pigeons to send messages，which was slow and unreliable.
翻译：在早期，人们用信鸽传递消息，这种方式既缓慢又不可靠。
分析：句中运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：As we continue to innovate，the future of communication is bound to be more exciting and amazing.
翻译：随着我们不断创新，通信的未来注定会更加令人兴奋和惊叹。
分析：句中运用了As引导的时间状语从句。
【解答】Hello everyone，
It's my great honor to deliver a speech on changes in the ways of conveying information to you today.
In earlier times，people used carrier pigeons to send messages，which was slow and unreliable.【高分句型一】Then，with the postal system evolving，mail delivery became postmen's job.Today，in the digital age，smartphones have revolutionized communication，enabling people to pass on information globally in seconds with just a few clicks.（信息传递方式的变化）
From waiting for a pigeon to receiving a text instantly，we've seen a remarkable transformation.As we continue to innovate，the future of communication is bound to be more exciting and amazing.【高分句型二】（自己的看法）
Thanks for your listening!
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
4．（2025 吉州区校级模拟）你校英文报正在举办主题为"用英语讲中国故事"的征文活动。请你以一个中国寓言故事为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
（1）寓言故事简介；
（2）意义或启示。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The Fable Story in China
________
【答案】
The Fable Story in China
Long long ago，the Foolish Old Man，or Yugong，and his family lived in mountains that blocked their way in and out.To facilitate movement for themselves and the future generation，Yugong，approaching his 90s，was determined to remove the mountains，shovel by shovel.In the end，God was touched by Yugong's perseverance and sent two titans from heaven to help move the mountains away.
The fable Yu gong Yi Shan has become a synonym for forging ahead while facing enormous difficulties and persevering to the end.
【分析】高分句型一：Long long ago，the Foolish Old Man，or Yugong，and his family lived in mountains that blocked their way in and out.
翻译：很久很久以前，愚公和他的家人住在山上，堵住了进出的路。
分析：本句使用了that引导的限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：To facilitate movement for themselves and the future generation，Yugong，approaching his 90s，was determined to remove the mountains，shovel by shovel.
翻译：为了方便自己和下一代的行动，接近90多岁的愚公决心一铲铲一铲地移山。
分析：本句使用了不定式短语To facilitate movement for themselves and the future generation作目的状语；现在分词短语approaching his 90s作定语。
【解答】
The Fable Story in China
Long long ago，the Foolish Old Man，or Yugong，and his family lived in mountains that blocked their way in and out.【高分句型一】To facilitate movement for themselves and the future generation，Yugong，approaching his 90s，was determined to remove the mountains，shovel by shovel.【高分句型二】In the end，God was touched by Yugong's perseverance and sent two titans from heaven to help move the mountains away.（寓言故事简介）
The fable Yu gong Yi Shan has become a synonym for forging ahead while facing enormous difficulties and persevering to the end.（意义）
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
5．（2025 惠农区校级三模）你们学校正在征集有关"2025年春晚机器人扭秧歌"节目的英语稿件，请你以"The Robots' Yangko Dance at the Spring Festival Gala"为话题，写一篇征文稿，描述该节目并谈谈你的感受和评价。
要求：
（1）词数80左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：traditional costumes传统服装
a combination of technology and culture科技和文化的结合
The Robots' Yangko Dance at the Spring Festival Gala
【答案】
The Robots' Yangko Dance at the Spring Festival Gala
The robots' Yangko dance at the 2025 Spring Festival Gala amazed the audience.Dressed in traditional costumes，16 robots performed the lively Yangko dance with perfect rhythms and flexible movements.They even interacted with dancers on stage，presenting various formations.
This show is a great combination of technology and culture.It not only displays China's advanced robot technology but also spreads traditional folk art.I'm proud of such a creative and fantastic performance.
【分析】高分句型一：They even interacted with dancers on stage，presenting various formations.
翻译：它们甚至在舞台上与舞者互动，呈现出各种队形。
分析：句中运用了现在分词短语presenting various formations作状语。
高分句型二：It not only displays China's advanced robot technology but also spreads traditional folk art.
翻译：它不仅展示了中国先进的机器人技术，还传播了传统民间艺术。
分析：句中运用了not only...but also...连接并列谓语结构。
【解答】
The Robots' Yangko Dance at the Spring Festival Gala
The robots' Yangko dance at the 2025 Spring Festival Gala amazed the audience.Dressed in traditional costumes，16 robots performed the lively Yangko dance with perfect rhythms and flexible movements.They even interacted with dancers on stage，presenting various formations.【高分句型一】（感受）
This show is a great combination of technology and culture.It not only displays China's advanced robot technology but also spreads traditional folk art.【高分句型二】I'm proud of such a creative and fantastic performance.（评价）
【点评】写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
6．（2025 碧江区 校级模拟） 你校英语社团举办以"Without Labor，Without Joy"为主题的演讲活动，请你用英语写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
（1）劳动的益处；
（2）自己的劳动体验；
（3）呼吁大家热爱劳动。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）标题已为你拟好，不计入总词数。
Without Labor，Without Joy
______
【答案】
Without Labor，Without Joy
Good morning，everyone!Today，I'm so honored to be here and deliver the speech which is titled "Without Labor，Without Joy".
It's well﹣known that Chinese people attach great importance to labor，for it not only creates a better environment for us to live in but also advocates the spirit of diligence.As for me，there are various kinds of labor tasks to do，such as helping clean the house，washing dishes after dinner and sweeping the floor.Besides，I also work as a volunteer for the school library，where I help to clean the shelves and sort the books.Doing all these chores helps me learn to be more independent and responsible，thus making me feel a sense of achievement.
Labor can bring us joy!Let's joy labor together.
【分析】高分句型一：It's well﹣known that Chinese people attach great importance to labor，for it not only creates a better environment for us to live in but also advocates the spirit of diligence.
翻译：众所周知，中国人非常重视劳动，因为它不仅为我们创造了一个更好的生活环境，而且提倡勤奋的精神。
分析：本句运用了it作形式主语，that引导的从句作真正的主语。
高分句型二：Besides，I also work as a volunteer for the school library，where I help to clean the shelves and sort the books.
翻译：此外，我还担任学校图书馆的志愿者，在那里我帮助清理书架和整理书籍。
分析：本句运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】
Without Labor，Without Joy
Good morning，everyone!Today，I'm so honored to be here and deliver the speech which is titled "Without Labor，Without Joy".（开篇点题）
It's well﹣known that Chinese people attach great importance to labor，for it not only creates a better environment for us to live in but also advocates the spirit of diligence.【高分句型一】（劳动的益处）As for me，there are various kinds of labor tasks to do，such as helping clean the house，washing dishes after dinner and sweeping the floor.Besides，I also work as a volunteer for the school library，where I help to clean the shelves and sort the books.【高分句型二】Doing all these chores helps me learn to be more independent and responsible，thus making me feel a sense of achievement.（自己的劳动体验）
Labor can bring us joy!Let's joy labor together.（呼吁大家热爱劳动）
【点评】 写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
7．（2025 碑林区校级模拟）假设你是李华，你校将举办以"非遗集市"（Intangible Cultural Heritage Market）为主题的庆祝活动.请你写一封邮件邀请你的英国交换生朋友Jack一起参与，内容包括：
（1）活动目的；
（2）活动具体安排；
（3）邀请参与。
注意：
（1）写作词数应100左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jack，
I hope this email finds you well!I'm excited to invite you to our school's upcoming celebration event，the Intangible Cultural Heritage Market，which aims to showcase and preserve the rich culture of China and bring the spirit of New Year to life through traditional arts and crafts.
The event will take place on January 15th from 10：00 a.m.to 4：00 p.m.in the school auditorium.It will offer a rich exploration of Chinese culture.We can experience live performances of Chinese folk music and dance，visit various booths showing traditional arts and even participate in workshops to try our hands at paper﹣cutting and lantern﹣making.There will also be a display of traditional Chinese food and snacks，allowing us to taste the flavors of the season.
I do hope you can join us and experience this cultural celebration firsthand.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I'm excited to invite you to our school's upcoming celebration event，the Intangible Cultural Heritage Market，which aims to showcase and preserve the rich culture of China and bring the spirit of New Year to life through traditional arts and crafts.
译文：我很高兴邀请您参加我们学校即将举行的庆祝活动，即非物质文化遗产市场，该市场旨在展示和保护中国丰富的文化，并通过传统工艺美术将新年精神带入生活。
分析：这句话使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：There will also be a display of traditional Chinese food and snacks，allowing us to taste the flavors of the season.
译文：还将展示中国传统美食和小吃，让我们品尝这个季节的味道。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语allowing us to taste the flavors of the season作状语。
【解答】Dear Jack，
I hope this email finds you well!I'm excited to invite you to our school's upcoming celebration event，the Intangible Cultural Heritage Market，which aims to showcase and preserve the rich culture of China and bring the spirit of New Year to life through traditional arts and crafts.【高分句型一】（活动目的）
The event will take place on January 15th from 10：00 a.m.to 4：00 p.m.in the school auditorium.It will offer a rich exploration of Chinese culture.We can experience live performances of Chinese folk music and dance，visit various booths showing traditional arts and even participate in workshops to try our hands at paper﹣cutting and lantern﹣making.There will also be a display of traditional Chinese food and snacks，allowing us to taste the flavors of the season.【高分句型二】（活动具体安排）
I do hope you can join us and experience this cultural celebration firsthand.（邀请参与）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
8．（2025 金安区校级模拟）假设你是高三学生李华，高考以后即将迎来一个长暑假。请你以"我的暑期成长计划"为题，写一篇短文，向校英语报"畅想未来"栏目投稿，内容包括：
（1）提出你想实现的一个目标；
（2）阐述你的理由。
注意：
（1）写作字数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Summer Growth
________
【答案】
My Summer Growth
After the National College Entrance Examination，my top priority is to lay a solid foundation for my upcoming university studies.Specifically，I plan to improve my English proficiency and preview core courses related to my major through online resources.
This preparation is crucial for three reasons.Firstly，university courses have higher academic demands and early exposure will ease my transition to intensive learning.Secondly，enhancing English skills will help me access global research materials and communicate confidently in an international environment.Moreover，cultivating self﹣study habits during this summer will strengthen my time management abilities，which are vital for balancing future academic and social commitments.
By investing time in these preparations for study，I aim to enter university not only with knowledge but also with readiness to embrace challenges.
【分析】高分句型一：Secondly，enhancing English skills will help me access global research materials and communicate confidently in an international environment.
翻译：其次，提高英语技能将帮助我获取全球研究材料，并在国际环境中自信地交流。
分析：运用了动名词短语enhancing English skills作主语。
高分句型二：Moreover，cultivating self﹣study habits during this summer will strengthen my time management abilities，which are vital for balancing future academic and social commitments.
翻译：此外，在这个夏天培养自学习惯将加强我的时间管理能力，这对于平衡未来的学术和社会承诺至关重要。
分析：运用了which引导非限制性定语从句。
【解答】
My Summer Growth
After the National College Entrance Examination，my top priority is to lay a solid foundation for my upcoming university studies.Specifically，I plan to improve my English proficiency and preview core courses related to my major through online resources.（提出你想实现的一个目标）
This preparation is crucial for three reasons.Firstly，university courses have higher academic demands and early exposure will ease my transition to intensive learning.Secondly，enhancing English skills will help me access global research materials and communicate confidently in an international environment.【高分句型一】Moreover，cultivating self﹣study habits during this summer will strengthen my time management abilities，which are vital for balancing future academic and social commitments.【高分句型二】（阐述你的理由）
By investing time in these preparations for study，I aim to enter university not only with knowledge but also with readiness to embrace challenges.
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
9．（2025 鄢陵县三模）假如你是某校高三学生李华，在外教Matthew的课上，同学们分组讨论"在人工智能时代，是否还有必要学习外语"。请你代表小组总结发言，内容包括：
（1）小组观点；
（2）陈述理由。
注意：（1）词数80左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】Ladies and gentlemen，
Our group firmly believes that learning foreign languages remains essential even in the era of artificial intelligence.
Firstly，language is not just a tool for communication；it is a window into different cultures and ways of thinking.Understanding a foreign language allows us to appreciate the tiny differences and subtleties of other societies，promoting cultural empathy and global understanding.Secondly，while AI can translate languages，it cannot fully grasp the context and emotions behind human communication.Human interaction requires a level of sensitivity and adaptability that AT cannot yet replicate.Finally，foreign language skills enhance human﹣to﹣human interaction.
Therefore，learning foreign languages continues to be a valuable skill in our increasingly interconnected world.
Thanks for your listening!
【分析】高分句型一：Our group firmly believes that learning foreign languages remains essential even in the era of artificial intelligence.
翻译：我们小组坚信，即使在人工智能时代，学习外语仍然是必不可少的。
分析：本句使用了that引导的宾语从句及动名词短语learning foreign languages作主语。
高分句型二：Understanding a foreign language allows us to appreciate the tiny differences and subtleties of other societies，promoting cultural empathy and global understanding.
翻译：理解一门外语使我们能够欣赏其他社会的细微差异和微妙之处，促进文化同理心和全球理解。
分析：本句使用了动名词短语understanding a foreign language作主语及现在分词短语promoting cultural empathy and global understanding作状语。
【解答】Ladies and gentlemen，
Our group firmly believes that learning foreign languages remains essential even in the era of artificial intelligence.【高分句型一】（小组观点）
Firstly，language is not just a tool for communication；it is a window into different cultures and ways of thinking.Understanding a foreign language allows us to appreciate the tiny differences and subtleties of other societies，promoting cultural empathy and global understanding.【高分句型二】Secondly，while AI can translate languages，it cannot fully grasp the context and emotions behind human communication.Human interaction requires a level of sensitivity and adaptability that AT cannot yet replicate.Finally，foreign language skills enhance human﹣to﹣human interaction.（陈述理由）
Therefore，learning foreign languages continues to be a valuable skill in our increasingly interconnected world.（总结陈述）
Thanks for your listening!
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
10．（2025 蕲春县校级四模） 假定你是李华，校英语俱乐部正在征集"英语节"活动创意，请写一封邮件，向英语俱乐部负责人推荐你设计的一项活动。内容包括：
（1）活动形式；
（2）设计亮点；
（3）预期效果。
注意：
（1）词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）不得透露学校、姓名等个人信息。
Dear Sir or Madam，
For the upcoming English Festival，I'd like to propose ...
______
I hope my idea will be taken into account.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam，
For the upcoming English Festival，I'd like to propose organizing a drama show titled "The World Meets China".
Students are asked to perform short plays adapted from stories in our textbooks.Besides，Chinese traditions like folk music or classic poetry are expected to be presented in the form of Western theater styles.What's more interesting is that AI technology such as voice effects or interactive games is encouraged to apply to attract more audience.
I believe this event will not only make English learning more fun but also broaden students' perception of different cultures.It will surely be a huge success.
I hope my idea will be taken into account!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：What's more interesting is that AI technology such as voice effects or interactive games is encouraged to apply to attract more audience.
翻译：更有趣的是，诸如音效或互动游戏等人工智能技术被鼓励应用，以吸引更多观众。
分析：句中运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句。
高分句型二：I believe this event will not only make English learning more fun but also broaden students' perception of different cultures.
翻译：我相信这次活动不仅会让英语学习更有趣，还能拓宽学生对不同文化的认知。
分析：句中运用了not only...but also..."不但......而且......"连接并列谓语结构。
【解答】Dear Sir or Madam，
For the upcoming English Festival，I'd like to propose organizing a drama show titled "The World Meets China".（活动形式）
Students are asked to perform short plays adapted from stories in our textbooks.Besides，Chinese traditions like folk music or classic poetry are expected to be presented in the form of Western theater styles.What's more interesting is that AI technology such as voice effects or interactive games is encouraged to apply to attract more audience.【高分句型一】（设计亮点）
I believe this event will not only make English learning more fun but also broaden students' perception of different cultures.【高分句型二】It will surely be a huge success.（预期效果）
I hope my idea will be taken into account!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
11．（2025 武功县校级模拟） 假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike来信说他每天都感觉不到快乐，向你咨询怎样才能得到快乐。请你写一封回信给他一些建议，内容包括：
（1）健康是快乐的要诀；（2）快乐在于知足。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80左右；（2）请按如下格式作答。
Dear Mike，
_____________________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mike，
I'm sorry to hear that you don't feel happy every day.If you wish to know how to get happiness，you must pay attention to the followings.
Firstly，health is the key to happiness.Only a strong man can enjoy the pleasure of life.Secondly，happiness consists in contentment.A man who is dissatisfied with his present condition is always in depression。Finally，keep a positive attitude and face life with optimism.Try to see the good in life，and believe that everything will get better.Happiness is not something remote；rather，it resides in the ordinary things of daily life.
I hope everything goes well and look forward to your good news.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：If you wish to know how to get happiness，you must pay attention to the followings.
翻译：如果你希望知道如何获得幸福，你必须注意以下几点。
分析：本句运用了if引导的条件状语从句。
高分句型二：A man who is dissatisfied with his present condition is always in depression.
翻译：一个不满于现状的人总是处于沮丧之中。
分析：本句运用了who引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Mike，
I'm sorry to hear that you don't feel happy every day.If you wish to know how to get happiness，you must pay attention to the followings.【高分句型一】（写信目的）
Firstly，health is the key to happiness.Only a strong man can enjoy the pleasure of life.（健康是快乐的要诀）Secondly，happiness consists in contentment.A man who is dissatisfied with his present condition is always in depression（快乐在于知足）.Finally，keep a positive attitude and face life with optimism.【高分句型二】Try to see the good in life，and believe that everything will get better.Happiness is not something remote；rather，it resides in the ordinary things of daily life.（保持乐观积极的生活态度）
I hope everything goes well and look forward to your good news.（表达希望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
12．（2025 江苏模拟）假定你是李华，上周六你参加了流浪动物认领收养志愿服务活动。请你给英国朋友 Chris写一封邮件分享此次活动，内容包括：
（1）服务内容；
（2）你的感受。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris，
I'm writing to share with you my volunteering at an animal adoption last Saturday._______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris，
I'm writing to share with you my volunteering at an animal adoption last Saturday.
I helped clean the shelters，feed the stray cats and dogs，and introduced their stories to potential adopters.Some animals were shy at first but became friendly after gentle touches.One little dog even wagged its tail and licked my hand，melting my heart.
This experience made me realize every life matters.I felt so proud seeing many animals find new homes.I hope that more people can join to show love for these lovely creatures.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：One little dog even wagged its tail and licked my hand，melting my heart.
翻译：一只小狗甚至摇着尾巴，舔了舔我的手，这让我倍感温暖。
分析：句中运用了现在分词短语melting my heart作状语。
高分句型二：I hope that more people can join to show love for these lovely creatures.
翻译：我希望有更多的人能加入进来，向这些可爱的生灵表达关爱。
分析：句中运用了that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Chris，
I'm writing to share with you my volunteering at an animal adoption last Saturday.
I helped clean the shelters，feed the stray cats and dogs，and introduced their stories to potential adopters.Some animals were shy at first but became friendly after gentle touches.One little dog even wagged its tail and licked my hand，melting my heart.【高分句型一】（服务内容）
This experience made me realize every life matters.I felt so proud seeing many animals find new homes.I hope that more people can join to show love for these lovely creatures.【高分句型二】（自己的感受）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
13．（2025 聊城三模） 假定你是红星中学学生李华、你的美国好友Jim在你校网站上看到了你们参加学农活动的照片，对此很感兴趣并询问相关信息。请你给他回封邮件，内容包括：
（1）活动的内容和安排；
（2）你的感受。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jim，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim，
Delighted to know that you are fascinated by our activity called "Learning From Farmers"，I'm writing to tell you some relevant details.
Last Friday，we joined in the activity organized by our school.Upon arriving at the farm，we were deeply attracted by the local rural landscape.Under the precise instruction of experienced farmers，we learned to perform various tasks such as helping the owner of a farm to plant trees，sowing seeds in rows and feeding ducks.Contentment replaced the tiredness when we completed the tasks.
Everyone of us considered the activity both meaningful and rewarding，for we not only gained knowledge of farming but also had a better understanding of nature.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Delighted to know that you are fascinated by our activity called "Learning From Farmers"，I'm writing to tell you some relevant details.
翻译：很高兴知道您对我们的"向农民学习"活动着迷，我写信告诉您一些相关细节。
分析：本句使用了形容词短语Delighted to know that you are fascinated by our activity called "Learning From Farmers"作状语；that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：Contentment replaced the tiredness when we completed the tasks.
翻译：当我们完成任务时，满足感取代了疲惫。
分析：本句使用了when引导的时间状语从句。
【解答】Dear Jim，
Delighted to know that you are fascinated by our activity called "Learning From Farmers"，I'm writing to tell you some relevant details.【高分句型一】
Last Friday，we joined in the activity organized by our school.Upon arriving at the farm，we were deeply attracted by the local rural landscape.Under the precise instruction of experienced farmers，we learned to perform various tasks such as helping the owner of a farm to plant trees，sowing seeds in rows and feeding ducks.Contentment replaced the tiredness when we completed the tasks.【高分句型二】（活动的内容和安排）
Everyone of us considered the activity both meaningful and rewarding，for we not only gained knowledge of farming but also had a better understanding of nature.（自己的感受）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
14．（2025 广西模拟） 你校英语报正组织关于校食堂最受学生欢迎的美食的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
（1）你心目中最受欢迎的美食；
（2）说明理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The most popular dish in our school canteen
______
【答案】
The most popular dish in our school canteen
The school canteen is a source of delight after a day's hard work，and one dish stands out as a favorite among us students：the Chicken Soup Noodle.
This classic dish combines chicken，vegetables，and tasty soup，all cooked to perfection.Its popularity arises from its delicious taste and nourishing qualities.Whether enjoyed on a bitter day or as a comforting meal during the exam season，the Chicken Soup Noodle never fails to warm both the body and the soul.Additionally，not only is it affordable but it also quick to serve.
This dish deserves its reputation as a beloved comfort food that brings joy to students.
【分析】高分句型一：Additionally，not only is it affordable but it also quick to serve.
翻译：此外，它不仅价格实惠，而且服务快捷。
分析：本句使用了not only置于句首引起的部分倒装。
高分句型二：This dish deserves its reputation as a beloved comfort food that brings joy to students.
翻译：这道菜当之无愧地被誉为给学生带来快乐的受人喜爱的慰藉食物。
分析：本句使用了that引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】
The most popular dish in our school canteen
The school canteen is a source of delight after a day's hard work，and one dish stands out as a favorite among us students：the Chicken Soup Noodle.（心目中最受欢迎的美食）
This classic dish combines chicken，vegetables，and tasty soup，all cooked to perfection.Its popularity arises from its delicious taste and nourishing qualities.Whether enjoyed on a bitter day or as a comforting meal during the exam season，the Chicken Soup Noodle never fails to warm both the body and the soul.Additionally，not only is it affordable but it also quick to serve.【高分句型一】（说明理由）
This dish deserves its reputation as a beloved comfort food that brings joy to students.【高分句型二】
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
15．（2025 金安区校级模拟）最近，你班越来越多的同学使用AI助手完成学习任务，请你就该现象写一篇短文投稿校英文刊，内容包括：
（1）你的看法；
（2）你的建议。
注意：写作词数应为80词左右。
请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
______
【答案】
Embracing AI Assistants Wisely
Recently，more classmates have turned to AI assistants for academic tasks.While AI tools boost efficiency and offer instant solutions，over﹣reliance risks undermining independent learning.Students may grow dependent，losing opportunities to hone critical thinking and problem﹣solving skills.
To maximize benefits，I suggest using AI as a supplementary tool rather than a replacement.Set clear goals before seeking AI help — for example，verify answers after attempting tasks independently.Additionally，allocate time for self﹣study to strengthen foundational knowledge and self﹣discipline.
Only by striking a balance between technology and personal effort，can we harness AI's potential without compromising academic growth.
【分析】高分句型一：Students may grow dependent，losing opportunities to hone critical thinking and problem﹣solving skills.
翻译：学生可能会产生依赖，从而失去磨砺批判性思维和问题解决能力的机会。
分析：句中运用了现在分词短语losing opportunities to hone critical thinking and problem﹣solving skills作状语。
高分句型二：Only by striking a balance between technology and personal effort，can we harness AI's potential without compromising academic growth.
翻译：只有在技术与个人努力之间取得平衡，我们才能在不损害学术成长的前提下充分利用人工智能的潜力。
分析：句中运用了"only+介词短语"置于句首，句子应用部分倒装结构。
【解答】
Embracing AI Assistants Wisely
Recently，more classmates have turned to AI assistants for academic tasks.While AI tools boost efficiency and offer instant solutions，over﹣reliance risks undermining independent learning.Students may grow dependent，losing opportunities to hone critical thinking and problem﹣solving skills.【高分句型一】（我的看法）
To maximize benefits，I suggest using AI as a supplementary tool rather than a replacement.Set clear goals before seeking AI help—for example，verify answers after attempting tasks independently.Additionally，allocate time for self﹣study to strengthen foundational knowledge and self﹣discipline.（我的建议）
Only by striking a balance between technology and personal effort，can we harness AI's potential without compromising academic growth.【高分句型二】
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
16．（2025 浙江模拟） 你校上周举办"中国古代诗词进校园"中英文化弥合活动。请你记录这次活动并投稿到校英文报上，具体要求如下：
（1）结合具体中国古代诗词记录活动内容；
（2）表达期待。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
______
【答案】
When Verses Build Bridges：A Chronicle of Cultural Harmony
Last week's "Chinese ancient poetry enters schools" event unveiled the timeless charm of Chinese classics while weaving cultural threads between East and West.Designed to foster cross﹣cultural empathy，the activity transformed our campus into an aesthetic dialogue platform.
Students staged bilingual poetry recitals，breathing life into Li Bai's "Toasting the moon，my shadow makes us three" with immersive projections.Calligraphy workshops decoded Wang Wei's landscape imagery through brushstrokes and VR technology，allowing international peers to grasp "empty mountains echoing with rain" beyond linguistic barriers.The highlight was collaborative translation contests，where teams reinterpreted Su Shi's philosophical resilience in "How can we fear life's winds and rains？" through modern slam poetry.
As Du Fu envisioned "Words that startle heaven and earth，" this poetic rendezvous proved cultural boundaries dissolve when hearts resonate with universal beauty.The echoes of quatrains shall continue nurturing our shared humanity.
【分析】高分句型一：Last week's "Chinese ancient poetry enters schools" event unveiled the timeless charm of Chinese classics while weaving cultural threads between East and West.
翻译：上周的"中国古代诗词进校园"活动在编织东西方文化线的同时，展示了中国经典的永恒魅力。
分析：本句使用了while引导的时间状语从句的省略。
高分句型二：The highlight was collaborative translation contests，where teams reinterpreted Su Shi's philosophical resilience in "How can we fear life's winds and rains？" through modern slam poetry.
翻译：亮点是协作翻译比赛——各团队通过现代口语诗（slam poetry）重新诠释了苏轼在"人生风雨何足惧？"中蕴含的哲思与韧性。
分析：本句使用了where引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】
When Verses Build Bridges：A Chronicle of Cultural Harmony
Last week's Chinese ancient poetry enters schools" event unveiled the timeless charm of Chinese classics while weaving cultural threads between East and West.【高分句型一】Designed to foster cross﹣cultural empathy，the activity transformed our campus into an aesthetic dialogue platform.（活动简介）
Students staged bilingual poetry recitals，breathing life into Li Bai's "Toasting the moon，my shadow makes us three" with immersive projections.Calligraphy workshops decoded Wang Wei's landscape imagery through brushstrokes and VR technology，allowing international peers to grasp "empty mountains echoing with rain" beyond linguistic barriers.The highlight was collaborative translation contests，where teams reinterpreted Su Shi's philosophical resilience in "How can we fear life's winds and rains？" through modern slam poetry.【高分句型二】（结合具体中国古代诗词记录活动内容）
As Du Fu envisioned "Words that startle heaven and earth，" this poetic rendezvous proved cultural boundaries dissolve when hearts resonate with universal beauty.The echoes of quatrains shall continue nurturing our shared humanity.（表达期待）
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
17．（2025 吉州区校级模拟）假定你是李华。毕业在即，你班计划向母校赠送一份礼物。请你给英国朋友David写一封邮件，分享你们的设想，并咨询他的建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David，
I'm writing to share a plan with you.________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David，
I'm writing to share a plan with you.As graduation approaches，our class intends to give a meaningful gift to our school，and I'd like to get your opinions.
After heated discussions，we've come up with two ideas.One option is to donate a collection of classic literature，aiming to enrich the school library and inspire the younger students' love for reading.Another proposal is to plant a memorial tree on campus，symbolizing our eternal bond with the school.This tree would grow alongside future generations of students，bearing witness to their growth.
I'm eager to hear your thoughts.Which idea do you think is more appealing？Or do you have any other creative suggestions？Your advice would be invaluable to us.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：One option is to donate a collection of classic literature，aiming to enrich the school library and inspire the younger students' love for reading.
译文：一种选择是捐赠一批经典文献，旨在丰富学校图书馆，激发年轻学生对阅读的热爱。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语aiming to enrich the school library and inspire the younger students' love for reading作状语。
高分句型二：Another proposal is to plant a memorial tree on campus，symbolizing our eternal bond with the school.
译文：另一个建议是在校园里种一棵纪念树，象征着我们和学校永恒的联系。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语symbolizing our eternal bond with the school作状语。
【解答】Dear David，
I'm writing to share a plan with you.As graduation approaches，our class intends to give a meaningful gift to our school，and I'd like to get your opinions.（写信目的）
After heated discussions，we've come up with two ideas.One option is to donate a collection of classic literature，aiming to enrich the school library and inspire the younger students' love for reading.【高分句型一】Another proposal is to plant a memorial tree on campus，symbolizing our eternal bond with the school.【高分句型二】This tree would grow alongside future generations of students，bearing witness to their growth.（设想）
I'm eager to hear your thoughts.Which idea do you think is more appealing？Or do you have any other creative suggestions？Your advice would be invaluable to us.Looking forward to your reply.（咨询他的建议）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
18．（2025 河北三模）假定你是李华，你所在的星水文学社团正在筹备"中国古典小说"欣赏活动。请你给交换生Chris写一封邮件。内容包括：
（1）活动介绍；
（2）邀请参加。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris，
______
Yours lovingly，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris，
I'm Li Hua.Our Xingshui Literature Club is planning an activity，themed "Appreciation of Chinese Classical Novels"，to appreciate Chinese classical novels.The activity will be held in the school hall next Friday，where will be lectures on famous novels like Romance of the Three Kingdoms，and a discussion﹣sharing session.It's a great chance to explore Chinese traditional culture.
I sincerely invite you to join us.I believe you'll enjoy it.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours lovingly，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Our Xingshui Literature Club is planning an activity，themed "Appreciation of Chinese Classical Novels"，to appreciate Chinese classical novels.
翻译：我们兴水文学社团正在筹划一项以 "中国古典小说鉴赏" 为主题的活动，旨在欣赏中国古典小说。
分析：运用了过去分词短语themed "Appreciation of Chinese Classical Novels"作后置定语。
高分句型二：The activity will be held in the school hall next Friday，where there will be lectures on famous novels like Romance of the Three Kingdoms，and a discussion﹣sharing session.
翻译：该活动将于下周五在学校礼堂举办，届时会有关于《三国演义》等著名小说的讲座，以及一场讨论分享会。
分析：运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Chris，
I'm Li Hua.Our Xingshui Literature Club is planning an activity，themed "Appreciation of Chinese Classical Novels"，to appreciate Chinese classical novels.【高分句型一】The activity will be held in the school hall next Friday，where there will be lectures on famous novels like Romance of the Three Kingdoms，and a discussion﹣sharing session. 【高分句型二】It's a great chance to explore Chinese traditional culture.（活动介绍）
I sincerely invite you to join us.I believe you'll enjoy it.Looking forward to your reply.（邀请参加）
Yours lovingly，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
19．（2025 忻州三模） 假定你是李华，上周日你校举行了师生徒步远足活动。在此期间发生了很多感人的事，请你写一篇英语短文，发表在校英文报上，内容包括：
（1）列举一两件感人的事迹；
（2）你的感想。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
【答案】 Last Sunday，our school held a hiking event for teachers and students，during which many touching incidents took place.
One unforgettable moment was when our head teacher，Ms.Zhang，who was usually strict，carried a student's water bottle for him after he felt too tired to hold it.Another student，Tom，tripped and fell，but several peers immediately stopped to help him up，dusting off his clothes and comforting him until he was okay again.
These small yet meaningful acts of kindness truly warmed my heart.They reminded me that care and support are always around us，making our journey together even more enjoyable.
【分析】高分句型一：Last Sunday，our school held a hiking event for teachers and students，during which many touching incidents took place.
翻译：上周日，我们学校为师生们举办了一场徒步活动，期间发生了许多感人的事情。
分析：句中运用了介词+which引导的非限定性定语从句。
高分句型二：Another student，Tom，tripped and fell，but several peers immediately stopped to help him up，dusting off his clothes and comforting him until he was okay again.
翻译：另一个学生汤姆绊倒了，摔了一跤，但几个同伴立刻停下来扶他起来，帮他拍掉衣服上的灰尘，还一直安慰他，直到他没事了才放心。
分析：句中运用了现在分词短语dusting off his clothes and comforting him作状语和until引导的时间状语从句。
【解答】 Last Sunday，our school held a hiking event for teachers and students，during which many touching incidents took place.【高分句型一】
One unforgettable moment was when our head teacher，Ms.Zhang，who was usually strict，carried a student's water bottle for him after he felt too tired to hold it.Another student，Tom，tripped and fell，but several peers immediately stopped to help him up，dusting off his clothes and comforting him until he was okay again.【高分句型二】（列举一两件感人的事迹）
These small yet meaningful acts of kindness truly warmed my heart.They reminded me that care and support are always around us，making our journey together even more enjoyable.（自己的感想）
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
20．（2025 上杭县校级模拟）近期，我校学生会对高中生在家做家务的情况做了一个调查，调查结果如下。请简要描述调查结果，并谈谈你对高中生是否应该做家务的看法。注意：
（1）写作词数应为 80 左右；
（2）请在答题纸的相应位置作答。
______
【答案】 Recently，the Students' Union of our school have made a survey concerning doing housework at home among high school students.
According to the pie chart，55% of the students never do housework at home，while 10% of the students do.12% of the students do chores occasionally，namely one or two times a week.And the students who do housework three or four times a week accounts for 23%.
From my point of view，it is good for students to do housework.Firstly，doing some housework can practice both our hands﹣on living skills and independence to well prepare for our future life.Besides，the diverse housework can be served as a kind of physical exercise which enables us to keep healthy and strong.What's more，doing some housework means sharing our parents' workload，which not only releases their daily burden but also helps us learn to shoulder the responsibility as a family.So I believe it is definitely good for students to do some housework.
【分析】高分句型一：And the students who do housework three or four times a week accounts for 23%.
翻译：每周做三四次家务的学生占23%。
分析：句中运用了who引导的限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：What's more，doing some housework means sharing our parents' workload，which not only releases their daily burden but also helps us learn to shoulder the responsibility as a family.
翻译：此外，做一些家务意味着分担父母的工作量，这不仅能减轻他们的日常负担，还能帮助我们学会承担家庭责任。
分析：句子运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句以及not only…but also…"不但......而且......"连接两个并列谓语结构。
【解答】 Recently，the Students' Union of our school have made a survey concerning doing housework at home among high school students.
According to the pie chart，55% of the students never do housework at home，while 10% of the students do.12% of the students do chores occasionally，namely one or two times a week.And the students who do housework three or four times a week accounts for 23%.【高分句型一】（描述调查结果）
From my point of view，it is good for students to do housework.Firstly，doing some housework can practice both our hands﹣on living skills and independence to well prepare for our future life.Besides，the diverse housework can be served as a kind of physical exercise which enables us to keep healthy and strong.What's more，doing some housework means sharing our parents' workload，which not only releases their daily burden but also helps us learn to shoulder the responsibility as a family.【高分句型二】So I believe it is definitely good for students to do some housework.（谈谈自己对高中生是否应该做家务的看法）
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
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