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(
期中考试复习
)Unit 4 Amazing Plants and Animals
作文押题
作文预测一：介绍一种神奇的植物
植物世界充满了奇迹。请选择一种你认为非常奇特的植物（如捕蝇草(Venus flytrap)、含羞草(Mimosa)、仙人掌(cactus)等），以“A Amazing Plant — The ________”为题，写一篇短文介绍它。
要求：
将题目补充完整；
2. 介绍其外观、习性及神奇之处；
3. 词数不少于70。
【基础篇范文】 (词数：82词)
A Amazing Plant — The Venus Flytrap
The Venus Flytrap is a very amazing plant. It looks strange with its special leaves that look like a trap.
Its most amazing habit is that it can eat insects. When a fly or an ant touches the small hairs inside the trap, the trap will close very quickly. Then, the plant slowly eats the insect. It does this because it lives in poor soil and cannot get enough food from it. This plant is not only interesting but also shows us how smart nature is.
【范文解析】
内容清晰：准确描述了捕蝇草的外观、捕食习性和原因。
语言规范：使用`with its...`结构、`When`引导的时间状语从句和`because`引导的原因状语从句，均为初中核心语法。
词汇达标：`trap`, `insects`, `soil`等均为课标内词汇，`amazing`, `interesting`为本单元重点形容词。
【升华篇范文】 (词数：95词)
An Amazing Plant — The Venus Flytrap
The Venus Flytrap is one of the most surprising plants in the world. What makes it special are its unique leaves, which form a "mouth" that can catch prey.
This plant has an unbelievable ability—it feeds on small insects. The moment an insect touches the sensitive hairs inside its trap, the two halves snap shut in less than a second. Actually, this special skill helps it survive in places where the soil lacks enough nutrition. The Venus Flytrap is a perfect example of nature's wisdom, reminding us that life always finds a way.
【范文解析】
语言升级：
开头用`one of the most surprising plants`替代`a very amazing plant`，表达更地道。
使用`What makes it special...`主语从句和`which`引导的非限制性定语从句，句式更丰富。
运用`The moment...`（一...就...）、`reminding us that...`（现在分词作状语）等高级结构。
逻辑深化：结尾句“生命总能找到自己的出路”提升了文章立意，但用词`finds a way`简单而传神。
作文预测二：论述保护野生动物的重要性
目前，许多野生动物正面临灭绝的威胁。请以“Why We Need to Protect Wild Animals”为题，写一篇短文，谈谈你的看法。
要求：
观点明确，理由充分；
2. 词数不少于70。
【基础篇范文】 (词数：78词)
Why We Need to Protect Wild Animals
Many wild animals are in danger today. I believe it is very important for us to protect them.
First, every animal plays a part in keeping the balance of nature. For example, wolves eat some plant-eating animals and this helps plants grow better. Second, animals make our world more lively and beautiful. Imagine a forest without the sound of birds—how quiet and sad it would be!
Therefore, we should take action to protect wild animals and their homes.
【范文解析】
结构工整：采用“提出问题-陈述理由-总结”的议论文结构。
论证有力：使用`First, Second`分点论述，并举例(`wolves`)和假设(`Imagine...`)来支持观点。
单元句型：成功运用`play a part in...`, `Imagine how...`等单元重点句型。
【升华篇范文】 (词数：92词)
Why We Need to Protect Wild Animals
Today, an increasing number of wild animals are facing the threat of disappearance. In my opinion, protecting them is not just a good idea, but something we must do.
There are two key reasons. Firstly, all animals, big or small, play a vital role in the ecosystem. The loss of one species can break the natural balance. Secondly, wild animals bring beauty and wonder to our planet. Without them, our world would become a much poorer place. For this reason, we humans have the responsibility to make sure these amazing animals can live safely on Earth.
【范文解析】
语言升级：
开篇用`an increasing number of`和`facing the threat of`替换简单表达，更显书面化。
使用`not just... but...`（不仅...而且...）结构，加强语气。
`big or small`（无论大小）插入语使表达更流畅。
逻辑深化：将保护野生动物从“重要”提升到“责任”，并点明其对于地球生态和人类精神世界（`beauty and wonder`）的双重价值。
作文预测三（修订版）：议论文——如何保护野生动物
保护野生动物是每个人的责任。请以“What Can We Do to Protect Wild Animals ”为题，写一篇短文，提出你的建议。
要求：
建议具体、可行；
2. 词数不少于70。
【基础篇范文】 (词数：78词)
What Can We Do to Protect Wild Animals
Wild animals are our friends, but many of them are in danger. Here is what we can do to help.
First, we must protect their homes. We should not cut down too many trees or pollute rivers. Second, we can learn more about animals and tell others about their importance. For example, we can watch documentaries and share the information with our family. Also, we should never buy products made from wild animals.
If everyone plays a part, we can make a big difference for our animal friends.
【范文解析】
结构清晰：采用“提出问题-分点建议-总结呼吁”的经典结构，条理清楚。
建议具体：从“保护栖息地”、“学习宣传”、“拒绝购买动物制品”三个角度提出切实可行的建议。
单元词汇：成功运用了`in danger`, `importance`, `play a part`等单元核心词汇和短语。
【升华篇范文】 (词数：98词)
What Can We Do to Protect Wild Animals
It is sad that many wild animals are facing the threat of disappearing. Actually, each of us can take action to protect them in the following ways.
To start with, we need to help take care of their habitats. This means we should save water, reduce pollution, and support the building of nature reserves. Moreover, we can become a voice for animals. By sharing their stories on social media, we let more people understand the importance of wildlife protection. Most importantly, we must refuse to buy any products that come from wild animals.
Remember, every small action counts. Let's work together to create a safer world for all living things.
【范文解析】
语言升级：
使用`facing the threat of disappearing`, `take action`, `become a voice for`等更高级的短语。
运用`To start with`, `Moreover`, `Most importantly`等连接词，逻辑层次更分明。
`every small action counts`（每一个小小的行动都很重要）是地道且有力的表达。
建议深化：将基础的建议具体化为“节约用水”、“减少污染”、“支持建立自然保护区”、“在社交媒体发声”等，更具时代感和可操作性。
立意提升：结尾呼吁“为所有生命共创一个更安全的世界”，格局更大，情感更真挚。

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