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人教版 8年级上册Unit6书面表达训练
书面表达。(20分)
(A)David想选择一位同学,帮助他制订一个下学期计划。假如你是Lucy,很想帮 David 做规划,请你帮他写一封40词左右的计划吧。(5分)
提示:学习方面,运动方面,交际方面,人品性格方面…
要求:
1.文中必须包含以上内容,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,语法正确,字迹工整。
(A) One possible version :
Dear David,
Let me help you to make a plan next term!
First, in study: Use a schedule and review daily. Then, in exercise: Play basketball twice a week. After that, in socialize: Join clubs to meet friends. Finally, in character: Volunteer to help others.
I hope I ’ll help you track progress!
Yours,
Lucy
(A) 书面表达解析
题目分析
任务类型：这是一篇应用文写作，要求以 Lucy 的身份给 David 写一封计划信，帮助 David 制订下学期计划。
内容要求：需涵盖学习、运动、交际、人品性格等方面，可适当发挥。
字数要求：40 词左右。
其他要求：语句通顺，语法正确，字迹工整。
范文解析
格式：采用了书信的格式，有称呼 “Dear David,” 和结尾 “Yours, Lucy”，符合应用文写作规范。
内容结构：
开头：“Let me help you to make a plan next term!” 直接表明写信目的，即帮助 David 制订下学期计划。
主体：分别从学习（Use a schedule and review daily. 使用时间表并每天复习）、运动（Play basketball twice a week. 每周打两次篮球）、交际（Join clubs to meet friends. 加入俱乐部结交朋友）、人品性格（Volunteer to help others. 做志愿者帮助他人）四个方面提出计划，涵盖了题目要求的各个方面。
结尾：“I hope I ’ll help you track progress!” 表达了希望帮助 David 跟踪计划进展的愿望，使信件内容完整。
语言特点：语言简洁明了，使用了简单易懂的词汇和句式，符合 40 词左右的字数要求，且语法正确，语句通顺。
(B)2025年行至尾声,凡是过往皆为序章。面对即将到来的寒假,唯有不虚度,才能在新的一年里,距离自己的梦想近一点,再近一点。为了能度过一个充实且有意义的寒假,请你以“My Winter Holiday Plan”为题,结合下列要点写一写你的计划。(15分)
要点:
制订新年计划,合理规划学习时间和所学科目;
安排一些健康的休闲娱乐活动,和家人共度时光(如听音乐,运动等);
帮助父母做家务(至少包含两项劳动内容)。
要求:
内容积极向上,并包含所给要点;
条理清晰,内容完整,语句通顺,书写工整;
词数在80左右(开头已给出,不计人总词数)
My Winter Holiday Plan
As the winter holiday is coming, it means a new start to me.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(B) One possible version:
My Winter Holiday Plan
As the winter holiday is coming, it means a new start to me. I have a plan to make it meaningful and colorful.
First of all, the geography and biology exams in the coming year are important for me. To prepare for them, I decide to spend over two hours reading books about these two subjects every day. After study, I plan to go skating, because it's healthy for the mind and the body, l also expect to help with housework, such as cleaning my room, doing the dishes, cooking and so on. I’d like to learn to make soup for my family.
This plan will improve myself and help me get closer to my dreams.
Hope my dreams come true in the new year. The best is yet to come!
(B) 书面表达解析
题目分析
任务类型：这是一篇命题作文，要求以 “My Winter Holiday Plan” 为题，结合给定要点写一篇关于寒假计划的文章。
内容要点：
制订新年计划，合理规划学习时间和所学科目。
安排健康的休闲娱乐活动，和家人共度时光。
帮助父母做家务（至少包含两项劳动内容）。
其他要求：内容积极向上，条理清晰，内容完整，语句通顺，书写工整，词数在 80 左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
范文解析
开头：“As the winter holiday is coming, it means a new start to me. I have a plan to make it meaningful and colorful.” 直接点明寒假即将到来，对自己是新起点，并且表明有计划让寒假有意义且丰富多彩，引出下文。
主体：
学习计划：“First of all, the geography and biology exams in the coming year are important for me. To prepare for them, I decide to spend over two hours reading books about these two subjects every day.” 说明了因为来年的地理和生物考试重要，所以决定每天花两个多小时阅读相关书籍，合理规划了学习时间和科目。
休闲娱乐活动：“After study, I plan to go skating, because it's healthy for the mind and the body” 提到学习后计划去滑冰，因为这对身心有益，体现了安排健康的休闲娱乐活动。
做家务：“I also expect to help with housework, such as cleaning my room, doing the dishes, cooking and so on. I’d like to learn to make soup for my family.” 详细列举了打扫房间、洗碗、做饭等家务劳动，还特别提到想学做汤给家人，包含了多项家务内容。
结尾：“This plan will improve myself and help me get closer to my” 虽然结尾不完整，但可以推测作者想表达这个计划会提升自己并帮助自己接近目标之类的积极意义，整体内容积极向上。
语言特点：使用了 “First of all”“After” 等连接词，使文章条理清晰。语言简洁，符合 80 词左右的字数要求，且语句通顺，语法基本正确。

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