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Reading for Writing
Unit 4
Journey across a vast land
What is the relationship between these two passages according to the titles
Seeing the True North via Rail: Vancouver and the Heart of Canada
Seeing the True North via Rail:
Toronto and Montreal
The first part of Li Daiyu and her cousin’s journey
The next leg of their trip
A leg of a long journey is one part of it, usually between two points where you stop. 一段旅程
Part 3 : Para ___________
Read for structure
记
TRAVEL
Part 1 : Para ___________
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10
Part 2 : Para ___________
What they experienced in Toronto.
What they experienced in Montreal.
Time on the train to Halifax.
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food
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memory
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How can we make the description of the travel appealing
In addition to spectacular mountain peaks and forests, one highlight of their trip was being able to see many different creatures.
... the blue water literally took their breath away with its exceptional beauty.
The bushes and maple trees outside their windows were red, gold, and orange, and there was frost on the ground...
Montreal is a city with wonderful sights and sounds. Most of us speak both English and French, and the city has unique Quebec culture and traditions. There are fantastic restaurants and clubs around, too.
Use accurate and
picturesque adjectives
to describe the characteristics or state of the subject or to show subjective feeling
Analyze language features
Use vivid verbs
... the blue water literally took their breath away with its exceptional beauty.
The train thundered on, through the rolling hills.
The girls saw hundreds of skyscrapers of glass and steel, and old-fashioned cars rolling by.
That night the train was speeding along the St Lawrence River.
How can we make the description of the travel appealing
to describe activities and actions
When they stood in the distance, they were astonished to see misty clouds was rising from the great Niagara Falls. Water from the lakes flows into the Niagara River, over the falls and goes to the sea. The girls then saw skyscrapers, and cars were passing by.
Standing in the distance, they were astonished to see misty clouds rising from the great Niagara Falls. Water from the lakes flows into the Niagara River and over the falls making its way to the sea. The girls then saw hundreds of skyscrapers of glass and steel, and old-fashioned cars rolling by.
Example
To make your description more appealing, try to use concrete adjetives,vivid verbs,-ed,-ing forms and figures of speech.
Summary
Travel Journal
Introduction:
Body
Ending:
What we saw
what we did
How we felt:
——impressive activities
——Personal emotions and thoughts
In the order of time/place
Descriptive language
final thoughts
——stops / attractions
Writing
Travel Journal
假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Tracy来信询问你一次最难忘的旅行经历。请给她回信，内容包括：
1．旅行时间、地点；
2．旅行经过；
3．旅行感触。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Introduction
目的
期望
旅游景点
目的地
人文景观
风俗
特色
旅游活动
购物
美食
社交
新朋友
saw
felt
thoughts
启示
总结
收获
计划
四、游记常用句式梳理及重点语块填空
Introduction
旅行背景介绍：This travel was planned months ago___________________celebrate our graduation.
（这次旅行是几个月前计划的，作为庆祝我们毕业的一种方式。）
出发地点与目的地：We ___________from Beijing and our destination was the beautiful _________city of Qingdao.
（我们从北京出发，目的地是美丽的海滨城市青岛。）
旅行目的和期望：Our aim was to relax and______________________________, and we hoped to make some _________________.
（我们的目的是放松并体验当地文化，希望能留下一些难忘的回忆。）
as a way to
set off
coastal
experience the local culture
unforgettable memories
Body
What we saw
旅游景点介绍：One of the most famous attractions we visited was the May Fourth Square, which _______________________ the city.
（我们参观的最著名景点之一是五四广场，它是这座城市的象征。）
自然风光与人文景观：The natural scenery of Golden Beach was __________________, and the historical architecture in the old town _______________the city's long - standing culture.
（金沙滩的自然风光令人惊叹，老城区的历史建筑反映了这座城市悠久的文化。）
当地特色与风俗：We were lucky _________________ the Tsingtao Beer Festival, a _____________________ full of joy and excitement.
（我们很幸运地见证了青岛啤酒节，这是一个充满欢乐和激情的独特地方风俗。）
is a symbol of
breathtaking
reflected
to witness
unique local custom
What we did
参与的旅游活动：We ____________________ on the beach and also _________________ around the bay.（我们在海滩上冲浪，还乘船游览了海湾。）
尝试的美食与购物体验：We tasted the ______________________ and bought some local handicrafts as_______________.
（我们品尝了美味的海鲜，还买了一些当地手工艺品作为纪念品。）
社交互动与结识新朋友：We _____________________ some_________ from other cities in a local pub, __________ our travel stories.
（我们在当地一家酒吧里结识了一些来自其他城市的游客，分享了我们的旅行故事。）
went surfing
took a boat
delicious seafood
souvenirs
made friends with
tourists
sharing
How we felt
旅行中的情绪变化：At first, we ___________________________________, but during the long journey, we also felt __________________. However, the beautiful scenery soon ________________ us.
（一开始，我们充满了兴奋，但在漫长的旅途中，我们也感到有点疲惫。然而，美丽的风景很快让我们恢复了精神。）
遇到的挑战与困难：We had some trouble finding the right bus routes, but with the help of kind locals, we managed to solve the problem.（我们在找合适的公交线路时遇到了一些困难，但在热心当地人的帮助下，我们设法解决了问题。）
获得的启示与感悟：This trip taught us that keeping flexible and open - minded can_______________________________.
（这次旅行让我们明白，保持灵活性和开放的心态可以让我们的旅程更加愉快。）
were filled with excitement
a bit tired
refreshed
make our journey more enjoyable
Ending (Final Thoughts)
对旅行的总结：Overall, this trip to Qingdao was a wonderful experience that combined relaxation, adventure and ________________________.
（总的来说，这次青岛之行是一次美妙的经历，融合了放松、冒险和文化探索。）
旅行的收获与意义：We not only _________________ the daily hustle and bustle but also ______________________
and gained a deeper understanding of the local culture.（我们不仅摆脱了日常的喧嚣，还拓宽了视野，对当地文化有了更深入的了解。）
未来旅行的计划与展望：We _________________________________ our next trip, perhaps to a mountainous area to experience a different kind of beauty.（我们已经在期待下一次旅行了，也许会去一个山区，体验另一种美。）
cultural exploration
got away from
broadened our horizons
are already looking forward to
(1)Dear Richard,
Thank you for your letter about your trip in Xi'an, which is _____________(amaze). I am writing to tell you something about my plans for the ___________(come) holidays.
With the National Day coming, I am going to travel to Hainan Island _________(see) its beautiful scenery with my family. We will spend 6 days there, from Oct. 1th to Oct. 6th. It’s because ______ its beautiful scenery that we choose to travel to Hainan Island. Other ________ hiking on the island, we _________________ (plan) many other activities like surfing in the water, spending the nights in the ________(tent). I am sure we will have a wonderful holiday.
In my opinion, travel can not only enrich my knowledge, but also _______________(broad) my horizons.
Look forward to your early reply.
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(2)Dear Peter,
Glad to hear that you’re traveling to China, I’m writing to make_________________________ (recommend) to you.
I’ m ______________(convince)that Guilin is ____second-to-none choice for you! For one thing, you’ll find__________ (you) surrounded by the unique karsts, a kind of steep hills ____________(stick) up into the sky formed over thousands of years. ________ another, a raft trip down the Lijiang River will take you on a_____________ (thrill) journey to immerse yourself in the spectacles with the raft hitting the rapids. Best of all, you will also head out for an adventure to be every bit as beautiful _______ you may expect.
I surely believe this trip will live up to your expectation.
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Dear Tom，
　　I’ m glad to share a truly _____________(fascinate) travel experience that I had during my last summer holiday with you.
　　On July 7, my parents and I _______(take) a bus to Leshan, Sichuan Province,___________ is famous for the Giant Stone Buddha. The Buddha is literally big. ____________(look) up at the large head and down at the large feet, I felt I was so small. The next day, we climbed Mount Emei, _____________ the beautiful scenery took our breath___________. There are many old temples and wild monkeys. At dusk, we made our way back. We were all tired, but our trip to Leshan was really unforgettable.______ possible, I am bound to pay____ visit to Leshan again.
　　I’m looking forward to going there with you next time.
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(4)Dear Jimmy,
During the National Day, with great excitement, I visited one of the most famous tourist________ (sight) in Beijing-the Great Wall.
I _________(arise) early to take the coach to the Great wall, _________ is located in the north-west of Beijing. ____ is typical of Beijing, it was mild and clear. Seen from the top, the rolling hills and forests___________ (look) massive, which took my breath away with its_______________ (except) beauty. ___________ impressed me most was the cultural heritage site dating back to over 3000 years. In addition to ___________(see) spectacular mountain peaks and forests, one highlight of my trip was being able to buy____________ (vary) crafts and antiques.
Looking at the_______________ (impress) scenery, I agreed that it was the most awesome journey I had ever taken.
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