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Writing about a sporting moment
Unit 3 Developing ideas
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文本解读
1.文体类型:描写一个体育场景,属于记叙文范畴,常用于记人、叙事。
2.要点内容:(1)一次4×100米接力赛;(2)自己观看比赛时的感受。
time
place
name
Structure
Beginning
Body
Ending
time / place /name/
remark :
before the event
during the event
after the event
feelings / opinions
feelings and opinions
electric
impressive
unforgettable
thrilling
breathtaking

Tip 1: write in the order of time.
the process of the event
before the event
What key elements are mentioned
in the passage
general introduction
remark
during the event
after the event
extraodinary
before the event
atmosphere
quiet / still/
intense...
made full preparations / warmed up / took a deep breath/ stood on the starting line / waited for the starting gun
Language
gathered on the playground / waited for the electric moment...
athletes’ actions
crowd’s actions
waited for the electric moment nervously / with excitement
gathered early on the playground / gathered on the playground with excitement
Tip 2: describe from many angles(角度)
Tip3: describe by using adverbs or prepositional phrases
The race was coming. So what was the atmosphere
warmed up attentively
How did the crowd feel What did they do
How did athletes feel before the match
What would they do before the match
[思路指引]
实用表达
1.首段常用句式。
I watched the final of the 4×100m relay at our sports meeting held on Monday.
在星期一举行的运动会上,我观看了4×100米接力赛的决赛。
A sports meeting was held in my school on 15 September.Some joined in the competitions while some just watched them.
9月15日,我校举行了一场运动会。有些人参加了比赛,有些人只是观看了比赛。
What impressed me most was the football match.
让我印象最深刻的就是足球比赛了。
It is one of the unforgettable moments that I have ever experienced.
这是我所经历过的难忘的时刻之一。
We held a sports meeting in the school stadium,during which we were in high spirits.
我们在学校体育场举行了一场运动会,运动会期间我们都情绪高昂。
2.中段常用句式。
Before the race,every competitor was quiet and still.I had never imagined that the atmosphere at a sports event could be so intense.
比赛前,每位选手都静止不动。我从未想到一项体育赛事的气氛会如此
紧张。
He stood at the starting line,looking relaxed and confident.
他站在起跑线上,看上去轻松又自信。
When the runners set off,everyone went wild!
当赛跑运动员们起跑时,大家都疯狂起来!
I could see the runners running as fast as they could.
我看到赛跑运动员们都尽力奔跑。
Unfortunately,he fell down and his left foot was badly hurt.
不幸的是,他摔倒了,左脚严重受伤。
Everyone was on their feet,cheering.I was also caught up in the excitement and cheered so hard that I thought my lungs would burst!
大家都站起来欢呼。我也沉浸在兴奋之中,用力欢呼,我觉得自己的肺都快要爆裂了!
3.尾段常用句式。
I believe this moment will remain a precious memory for all of us.
我相信这一时刻将成为我们所有人的珍贵回忆。
It was such a wonderful moment that I enjoyed its speed and passion.
这是如此精彩的时刻,我享受这一刻的速度和激情。
Though he didn’t win the race,he won our admiration.
尽管他没有赢得赛跑,但他赢得了我们的赞赏。
The sports meeting was successfully completed.Not only did we have fun,but we learnt to take pride in our partners,cheer for them and help them when they were in need.
运动会圆满结束。我们不仅玩得开心,而且还学会了以我们的伙伴为傲,为他们欢呼,并在他们需要时帮助他们。
佳作建构
上个星期,你校举办了运动会。你班的李华同学报名参加了100米短跑比赛,他在运动会中的表现让全班非常感动。请你用英语为校报写一篇短文。要点如下:
1.赛场上的情景。
2.你的感受。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
审题谋篇
Ⅰ.对接单元词汇
1.　　　　　　　 　 n.队友
2.　　　　　　　 　 超出某人的预期
3.　　　　　　　 　 n.自信
4.　　　　　　 　　 adj.非凡的;不寻常的
5.　　　　　　　 　 n.(竞争、比赛等的)对手
6.　　　　　　　 　 v.战胜,打败
7.　　　　　　 　　 奋力前行;克服困难
teammate
beyond one’s expectations
self-belief　
remarkable
opponent
defeat
fight one’s way
Ⅱ.巧用单元句式、语法
1.上个星期,一场运动会在我们学校的操场上举行。100米短跑让我印象
深刻。
Last week,　　　　　　　　　 　　 on our school’s playground.And the 100-metre dash left a deep impression on me.
2.比赛前,所有运动员都站在起跑线上,他们的眼中充满了决心和自信。
Before the race,all the athletes stood at the starting line and their eyes were filled with 　　　　　　 　　　　　　.
a sports meeting was held
determination and self-belief
3.随着发令枪响,他们像箭一样向前冲去。
As the starting gun fired,　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　.
4.其中最出色的选手之一是我们班的李华。他在激烈的竞争中奋力拼搏。
　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　 was Li Hua from our class.He
　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　.
5.他一个接一个地超越对手,这真的出乎我们的意料。
He surpassed his opponents one after another,
　　　　　　　　　.
they dashed forward like arrows
One of the most remarkable runners
fought his way in the fierce competition
which was truly beyond
our expectations
6.虽然他没有击败所有对手,但他的表现仍然很出色。他的队友张鹏赢得了第一名。
Although he 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　,his performance was still outstanding.His teammate,Zhang Peng,won first place.
7.最后,这不仅是速度的展示,更是永不放弃精神的体现,这给每一个目睹这场激动人心比赛的人都留下了深刻的印象。
In the end,it was a display of
　　　　　　　,which left a deep impression on everyone who witnessed this thrilling race.
didn’t defeat all the opponents
not only speed but also the spirit of never
giving up
亮点提升
1.将第1句用主语从句进行改写升级。
Last week,a sports meeting was held on our school’s playground.What impressed me most was the 100-metre dash.
2.将第2句用with复合结构进行改写升级。
Before the race,all the athletes stood at the starting line,with their eyes filled with determination and self-belief.
3.将第4句用非限制性定语从句进行改写升级。
One of the most remarkable runners was Li Hua from our class,who fought his way in the fierce competition.
4.将第7句用现在分词短语作状语进行改写升级。
In the end,it was a display of not only speed but also the spirit of never giving up,leaving a deep impression on everyone who witnessed this thrilling race.
范文展示
　　Last week,a sports meeting was held on our school’s playground.What impressed me most was the 100-metre dash.
Before the race,all the athletes stood at the starting line,with their eyes filled with determination and self-belief.As the starting gun fired,they dashed forward like arrows.One of the most remarkable runners was Li Hua from our class,who fought his way in the fierce competition.
He surpassed his opponents one after another,which was truly beyond our expectations.Although he didn’t defeat all the opponents,his performance was still outstanding.His teammate,Zhang Peng,won first place.
In the end,it was a display of not only speed but also the spirit of never giving up,leaving a deep impression on everyone who witnessed this thrilling race.
写作练习
上个星期你校举办了运动会,请你为学校英文报写一篇短文记录这次运动会。内容包括:
1.你在运动会上的所见所闻。
2.你的感受。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右。
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
写作指导
　　One possible version:
Our school held a sports meeting last week on the sports field,which was an event full of excitement.
On the field,I witnessed remarkable performances by the athletes.In the events like high jump and javelin (标枪比赛),athletes demonstrated their exceptional athletic abilities and steely willpower.Behind the scenes,volunteers worked tirelessly to ensure the event ran smoothly.Without their efforts,the sports meeting wouldn’t have been so successful.
I’m eager to participate in the event or serve as a volunteer for the next sports meeting.
I was not only impressed by athletes’ speed,strength and perseverance,but also motivated by the volunteers’ commitment to the sports meeting,which made it truly enjoyable and memorable.
读后续写微技能之“点—线—面”
读后 续写 微技能之“点” 情感描写 相关词语 self-belief n.自信　intense adj.紧张的,激烈的
动作描写 相关词语 give way 倒塌,向下垮　bounce v.(使)弹起,(使)反弹　sharpen v.使提高,使改进　cheat v.欺骗,作弊　burst v.突然出现　seize v.夺取　assign v.分配,分派　defeat v.战胜,打败
人物描写 相关词语 follow in one’s footsteps仿效某人;继承某人(尤指家人)的事业　carry on 继续　cooperation n.合作,协作　remarkable adj.非凡的;不寻常的　teamwork n.合作,协作　steely adj.钢铁般的;坚定的　nerve n.意志力
读后 续写 微技能之“线” Through self-belief,hard work,perseverance and some help from an old hoop,he has shown that anything is possible.(描写人物的品质)
At last,showing a strong will and the steeliest nerves,they played a close match against Serbia to seize gold in the final.(人物描写)
We all stood up and started cheering and shouting.It was like being hit by a huge wave of excitement.(动作描写+情感描写+
明喻)
Everyone was on their feet,cheering.I was also caught up in the excitement and cheered so hard that I thought my lungs would burst!(动作描写+情感描写+夸张)
读后 续写 微技能之“面”
读后续写——百米赛跑
百米短跑比赛即将开始。起跑线上,运动员们之间的气氛极其紧张。在他们当中,有一位名叫本的年轻运动员,他有着强烈的自信。随着发令枪响,他们飞奔向前。本全力以赴地奔跑着,额头的汗珠滴在跑道上。在最后的冲刺阶段,本抓住了机会。他突然加速,接连超过了几名对手。他出色的表现和钢铁般的意志力让观众大为惊叹。最终,他获得了不错的名次。本很开心,他知道这是他自己努力以及与教练配合的结果。
The 100-metre dash was about to start.The atmosphere among the athletes at the starting line was extremely intense.Among them was a young athlete named Ben,who 1.　　　　　　　　　　　 　.With the starting gun fired,they dashed forward.Ben was running with all his strength.The beads of sweat on his forehead dripped onto the track.In the final sprint,Ben
2.　　　　　　　　　　.He suddenly accelerated and surpassed several opponents in a row.His 3.　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 amazed the audience.Eventually,he got a good ranking.Ben was delighted and he knew that this was the result of his own efforts and 4.　　　　 　　　 　　　　　.
had strong self-belief
seized the opportunity
excellent performance and steely willpower
the cooperation with his coach
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