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2025-2026学年七年级英语上册期中复习考点突破译林版（2024）
突破01 书面表达-话题作文
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假设你是鲍勃·史密斯(Bob Smith)，来自英国。经过一个多月的学习生活，相信你已经认识了不少新同学。为了让大家更好地了解你，并结交更多的朋友，请你做一个简单的自我介绍。
写作要求：
1. 不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名；
2. 语句连贯，词数60左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
My self-introduction
Good morning, everyone. I want to introduce myself here.
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2．根据提示写一篇50～60词的短文：
假如你是Kate，刚来中国，想写一个自己的个人档案。要求包括年龄、生日、出生地、外貌、兴趣爱好等。
要求：1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；
4. 词数：不少于50词(开头已给出，但不计入总词数)。
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3．假如你是李蕾，请用英语介绍你在学校的一天生活。以“My School Day”为题写一篇英语小短文。所给词汇：get up；begin；go to bed；usually；in the morning
要求：
1. 短文须包含所给词汇，其他可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现所在学校的校名和师生的真实姓名；
3. 词数60左右。
My School Day
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4．随着初中新生活的开启，你们将会认识很多新朋友。为了增进彼此之间的了解，英语老师组织大家进行自我介绍。请按要求写一份英文稿，在英语课堂上介绍自己吧。
要求：
(1) 书写规范；
(2) 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
(3) 词数40词左右。
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5．同学们即将成为初中生，为了成为一名优秀的初中生，我们要养成良好的学习习惯和生活习惯，你准备养成什么好习惯，改掉什么坏习惯呢？请以“To be a good middle school student”为题，写写你的计划和打算吧！
要求：
1．语句通顺，表达完整，意思连贯；
2．时态、语法正确；
3．书写工整，不少于5句话，不包括开头给出的句子。
To be a good middle school student
I will be a middle school student this September. To be a good middle school student, I will
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6．自我介绍可以提高自身的人际交往能力，通过自我介绍可以建立起良好的人际关系。假如你叫Dave，来自俄罗斯(Russia)，即将作为一名交换生(exchange student)在太原五中学习。为了让同学们进一步了解你，认识你，更快地和你交朋友，请你用英语写一篇短文介绍自己。
内容包括：◆your name, age, country;
◆favourite things like food, colour, animal and so on;
◆your hobbies.
要求：1.词数不少于60词；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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7．我们进入初中生活已经两个月了！迎来了期中考试，借此请你以“My self-introduction”为题写一篇自我介绍，内容包括姓名（用英文名代替）、年龄、喜爱的运动和食物及其他爱好等。
要求：
1. 表达正确，语句通顺；
2. 字迹工整，书写规范；
3. 不少于60词；
4. 不得出现真实的人名和校名。
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8．亲爱的同学，自从你踏进新的初中校园起，一定在学校或班级中结交了许多新朋友。请你以“My new friend and I”为题，写一篇英文短文，介绍一下你的一个朋友。
要求：
1.单词数不少于60；
2.不得在作文中使用中文或拼音代替，代替部分为0分；
3.不得抄袭阅读，抄袭部分为0分；
4.文中不得使用真实的姓名或校名。
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9．Write at least 60 words on the topic “My ideal school” (以“我理想中的校园生活”为题，写一篇不少于 60 个单词的短文，要求内容适切，意思连贯，标点符号不占格。)
(注意：作文中不得出现考生的中文姓名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)
Suggested questions：
1. What changes would you like to see in your school
2. What do you think of these changes
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10．人们常说：“我运动，我健康，我快乐。”你喜欢哪些运动？你有哪些体育用品？请以“My Favorite Sports”为题用英文写一篇短文，介绍你喜欢的运动及看法。
要求：
1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
2. 文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。
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11．请根据要求完成短文写作，题目：请以“My School Life”为题，写一篇关于你的学校生活的短文。
要求：1.包含学校的环境、喜欢的科目、老师、朋友以及课后活动等内容。
2.语句通顺，语法正确，不少于60词。
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12．请以 “My School” 为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你们学校的建筑物的布局，可适当发挥你的想象力。
词数不少于60，要求：1. 要点要全，可适当发挥。2. 书写规范，思路连贯。3. 字数60词左右，不能出现自己的真实信息。
My School
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13．假定你是李华，刚刚作为一名初中生进入了新学校，新学校的名称叫“光明中学”（Guangming Middle School）, 请以My new school为题写一段文字介绍你的新学校。文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名，词数60个左右。
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14．假设你是李华，今年13 岁，是建华中学一名七年级学生，请以“My Daily Life”为题写一篇90词左右的英语短文，向大家介绍你的日常生活及感受。
My Daily Life
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15．时间过得真快，不知不觉一学期快要结束了，你已成为一名中学生好几个月了，你的中学生活一定丰富多彩，请结合你的校园、学习科目、课外活动、学校生活等以“My School Life”为题，介绍一下你的校园生活，并谈谈你的真实感受。
要求：
1）语言流畅、书写规范，卷面整洁，词数不少于60个。
2）文中不得使用真实姓名和校名，如需使用姓名，请用Mike, Mary等名字，校名统一使用Xinhua Middle School。
3）抄袭试卷中相关材料的，抄袭部分不给分。
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16．One of My School Days 提示：新学期，你成为了一名中学生，体验了不一样的学校生活。请以“One of My School Days”为题目，写一篇英语作文，介绍你上学的一天。
要求：
1.紧扣主题、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于80个；
2.文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。
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17．某英文网站正在开展以“我最喜欢的科目”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请用英文写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你最喜欢哪一个学科，喜欢的原因，以及你在课上做什么。
提示词语：English, history, important, useful, teacher
内容提示：● What’s your favourite subject
●Why do you like it
●What do you often do in class
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18．请你以My Favorite Weekday为题写一篇作文。介绍一下你最喜欢的上学日，并说明理由。
1. 这一天有你最喜欢的科目
2. 这一天有你最喜欢的老师
写作要求：
① 字数：60词左右；
② 书写规范、语句通顺、意思连贯、语法正确；
③ 写作要点齐全，可适当发挥；
④ 文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。
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19．亲爱的同学，你已经成为一名七年级的新生，开启了新的人生旅程。在这里，你结识新朋友、学习新课程、参加丰富多彩的活动。请根据下列提示，以“My new school life”为题，选择或自拟三个方面介绍一下你的初中生活。
要求：
1.文中不得提及真实校名、人名等信息。
2.内容全面，语言通顺，条理清晰。
3.词数90词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My new school life
I like my new school life. Let me tell you something about it.
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20．假如你是李明，你想要参加英语报开展的以“My Favourite School Day”为题的英语征文活动。你很喜欢你的学校生活，请你用英语写一篇文章进行投稿，介绍你自己喜欢的上学日、你喜欢这一天的原因以及你的感受。
要求：1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名；
3. 70词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Favourite School Day
Hi! I’m Li Ming. I’m a middle school student in Grade Seven.
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参考答案及试题解析
1．参考范文
My self-introduction
Good morning, everyone. I want to introduce myself here.
I am Bob Smith and I am from England. I am 12 years old. I study in No.1 Middle School and I’m in Class 3, Grade 7. I like basketball very much because I think it’s interesting. I like playing basketball after school. My favourite colour is blue, so many of my school things are blue, such as my schoolbag, rulers and pens. My best friend is Eric, but he is in England now. I am glad to meet all of you here. If you want to make friends with me, I’ll be very happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态是“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题干进行写作，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、点明主题，想向大家介绍自己；
第二步、具体阐述写作内容，介绍自己的姓名、国籍、年龄、学校、爱好、最喜欢的颜色和最好的朋友等信息；
第三步、表达想交友的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be from来自
②such as例如
③be glad to do sth.高兴做某事
[高分句型]
I like basketball very much because I think it’s interesting.(because引导的原因状语从句)
2．例文：
I’m a girl from America. My name is Kate. Now I’m a new student in Beijing Sunshine School. I’m 13 years old. My birthday is on October 1st. I’m a little fat and tall. I like eating fried food very much. I like juice as well. I like playing the piano after school. I want to be an artist when I grow up.
【总体分析】 ①题材：话题作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：围绕自身，从身份、姓名、所在学校、年龄、生日、外貌、饮食喜好、课后活动、理想等角度展开介绍。
【写作步骤】第一步：介绍基本身份信息，包括来自哪里、姓名、所在学校；
第二步：阐述个人情况，比如年龄、生日、外貌、饮食喜好；
第三步：说明兴趣爱好和理想。
【亮点词汇】①fried food 油炸食品
②grow up 长大
【高分句型】①I like playing the piano after school. （like doing sth.结构）
②I want to be an artist when I grow up.（when引导的时间状语从句）
3．例文
My School Day
My name is Li Lei. I study in a big school.
I usually get up at six o’clock in the morning. Then I wash my face, brush my teeth and have breakfast quickly. Classes begin at eight. In class, I study hard and listen to the teachers carefully. After school, I do my homework. I often go to bed at nine o’clock.
I’m busy but happy on school days.
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示词完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误，可适当发挥。
［写作步骤］
第一步，开篇点题。介绍自己的基本信息；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍每天早上上学前的活动，在学校上课的情况，放学后的活动等；
第三步，表达自己对学校生活的感受。
［亮点词汇］
①get up 起床
②in the morning 在早上
③go to bed 上床睡觉
［高分句型］
I’m busy but happy on school days.(并列连词but连接两个具有转折关系的句子)
4．例文
My name is Liu Xing. I’m from Guiyang, China. I’m 12 years old. I’m in Class Four, Grade Seven. I have a round face and small eyes. I have short hair. I am tall and strong. I like playing basketball. My favourite subject is English because I think it is interesting. If I have time, I often go to the park to play basketball with my friends on weekends. My favorite actor is Jackie Chan. I hope to make new friends here. Thank you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的基本信息；
第二步，介绍自己的科目和爱好；
第三步，表达想交友的愿望，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①play basketball打篮球
②on weekend周末
[高分句型]
①My favourite subject is English because I think it is interesting.（原因状语从句）
5．例文
To be a good middle school student
I will be a middle school student this September. To be a good middle school student, I will develop good habits of living and learning. I will eat healthy food and exercise more. Also, I will listen to the teachers carefully and finish homework on time. I will obey the school rules. What’s more, I will spend less time on computer games because I think it is bad for my health.
I think I will become a good middle school student.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为一般将来时；
③提示：根据提示信息介绍如何成为一名优秀的初中生，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍自己准备养成什么好习惯，改掉什么坏习惯；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①listen to听
②on time准时
[高分句型]
I will spend less time on computer games because I think it is bad for my health. (because引导的原因状语从句)
6．例文
My name is Dave. I am 15 years old. I come from Russia. I am an exchange student and I am going to study at Taiyuan No.5 Middle School. I like eating Chinese food, especially dumplings. My favourite colour is blue. My favourite animal is the panda because it is very cute. I have many hobbies. I like playing basketball and football. I also like reading books and listening to music. I hope to make more friends in China and learn more about Chinese culture.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的基本信息；
第二步，根据题干的要点，分享自己的爱好，喜欢的食物，颜色等情况；
第三步，表示希望交更多好朋友。
[亮点词汇]
①come from来自
②make friends交朋友
[高分句型]
①My favourite animal is the panda because it is very cute.（原因状语从句）
②I hope to make more friends in China and learn more about Chinese culture.（不定式作宾语）
7．范文：
My Self-Introduction
Hello! My name is Lily, and I’m a fresh start in the seventh grade. I’m 12 years old and full of energy.
When it comes to sports, I’m really into badminton. I love the fast pace and the way it gets my heart racing. As for food, I’m a big fan of pizza. I could eat it every day and never get tired of it! Apart from sports and food, I have a few other interests. I love to draw in my free time. I find it very relaxing and it’s a great way to express myself. I also enjoy playing the guitar. I’ve been learning for a couple of years now, and I’m getting pretty good at it.
I’m really excited to be in middle school and to meet all of you. I can’t wait to make new friends and learn new things together. Let’s have a great year ahead! Thank you for listening to my introduction.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，引出话题，介绍姓名、年龄等基本信息。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“喜爱的运动和食物及其他爱好”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。
第三步，书写结语，表达期待和感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①When it comes to当提及……时
②every day每天
③get tired of 对……感到疲倦
④apart from除……之外
⑤love to do sth喜欢做某事
⑥be good at擅长
⑦be excited to do 对做某事感到兴奋
⑧can’t wait to do sth迫不及待做某事
⑨let sb do sth让某人做某事
⑩thank sb for doing sth因做某事而感谢某人
[高分句型]
①My name is Lily, and I’m a fresh start in the seventh grade. (并列句)
②I love the fast pace and the way it gets my heart racing. (定语从句)
③I find it very relaxing and it’s a great way to express myself. (it作形式主语的固定句型和并列句)
8．
My new friend and I
I have made a new friend at school. Her name is Lily. She is tall and has long black hair. She is very kind and helpful.
We are in the same class. We often study and play together. I am good at English, and she is good at math. So, we help each other with our homework. After class, we like to play volleyball on the playground. Sometimes we talk about our favorite books and movies.
Lily makes me laugh a lot. I am happy to have her as my friend. I hope we can be best friends forever.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：“一般现在时”；
③提示：考生写作时要做到文章结构清晰，内容完整，逻辑连贯，要符合介绍人物的写作框架。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇介绍朋友基本信息。点明交友场景，描述朋友的姓名、年龄、外貌等；
第二步，描述共同经历与相处细节。说明两人的关系，列举具体活动，体现友谊的互动性；
第三步，表达感受与期望。总结朋友的性格或相处感受，以希望或祝福结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②help each other互相帮助
③make sb laugh让某人开心
[高分句型]
①I am good at English, and she is good at math.（并列句）
s②I am happy to have her as my friend.（动词不定式作原因状语）
9．例文
My ideal school
In my ideal school, I would like to see some changes. First, there should be more fun activities like sports and art classes. Second, the classrooms could be bigger and brighter. I think these changes are great because they can make school life more enjoyable and help us learn better. For example, with more activities, students can develop their interests. Also, a better environment can improve our mood. Overall, my ideal school is a place where everyone is happy and excited to learn.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材： 本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开头直接点题，介绍理想中的学校；
第二步：描述希望发生的变化，并表达了对这些变化的看法；
第三步：结尾总结理想学校的愿景。
[亮点词汇]
①would like to想要做某事
②develop their interests培养他们的兴趣
③improve our mood改善心情
[高分句型]
①I think these changes are great because they can make school life more enjoyable and help us learn better. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②Overall, my ideal school is a place where everyone is happy and excited to learn. (where引导的定语从句)
10．例文：
My Favorite Sports
There are many kinds of sports that I enjoy, such as swimming, running, and dancing. However, the sports that I like most are basketball and swimming.
When I was in junior high, I started to play basketball. I have many basketballs. I often go to swim with my good friend Lily. When I am swimming in the pool, I am very happy. I look like a lovely fish in the pond.
I enjoy doing sports, because it can make me strong and healthy. Sports can also bring me a lot of happiness.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态主要为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示和要求进行写作，介绍最喜欢的运动。写作中适当使用连接词、短语和句型，确保行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，介绍最喜欢的运动是什么；
第二步，具体介绍最喜欢的运动；
第三步，结尾总结。
[亮点词汇]
①kinds of 各种各样的
②look like 看起来像
③a lot of 许多
[高分句型]
①There are many kinds of sports that I enjoy, such as swimming, running, and dancing. (定语从句)
②When I am swimming in the pool, I am very happy. (状语从句)
11．例文
My School Life
My school is big and beautiful. There are many trees and flowers around the teaching building. My favorite subject is English because my teacher, Miss Wang, makes it fun. She often plays games with us in class. My best friend is Lily. We always study and play together. After school, we sometimes join the art club to draw pictures. I love my school life—it’s colorful and happy!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时态”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当添加细节，无语法和拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开门见山，直接描述学校的整体环境；
第二步：具体阐述学校生活的核心内容，先说明最喜欢的科目、老师，解释原因，再介绍最好的朋友莉莉及两人的日常，最后补充课后活动；
第三步：书写结语，总结对学校生活的感受，表达对学校生活的喜爱之情。
[亮点词汇]
①make it fun 使它有趣
②play…with与……一起玩耍
[高分句型]
My favorite subject is English because my teacher, Miss Wang, makes it fun.（because引导原因状语从句）
12．例文：
My School
This is a map of my school. When you enter the gate of our school, you can see a large sports field in front of you. On the left side of it, there is a dining hall, a science building and a sports hall. On the right side, there is a library, a classroom building and a teachers’ building. Our school is not big, but it is very beautiful. We are very happy here every day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己的学校；
第二步，具体介绍学校的建筑物的布局；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①in front of在……前面
②beautiful美丽的
③every day每天
[高分句型]
When you enter the gate of our school, you can see a large sports field in front of you. (when引导的时间状语从句)
13．例文
My new school
I am in Guangming Middle School. This is my new school. It’s big and nice.
There are seven buildings in my school. They are two classroom buildings, one office building, a science building, a sports hall, a dining hall and a library. My school is very beautiful because there are also a lot of flowers and trees in my new school.
I love my school very much.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：本文主要是介绍自己的新学校，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇引出要介绍学校的话题；
第二步，介绍学校的相关信息；
第三步，表达对学校的喜爱之情。
[亮点词汇]
①classroom building教学楼
②a lot of很多
③very much非常
[高分句型]
①There are seven buildings in my school.（there be句型）
② My school is very beautiful because there are also a lot of flowers and trees in my new school.（原因状语从句）
14．范文：
My Daily Life
I’m Li Hua and I’m in Grade 7 in Jianhua Middle School.
I get up at six thirty every day. After that I have breakfast at half past seven. Then, I go to school by bike. I have four lessons in the morning and three in the afternoon. I like Maths best. In my free time, I often play basketball with friends because it is good for us. After supper I read newspapers or watch TV for half an hour. I get ready for my lessons between half past seven and nine. I go to bed at ten o’clock.
In a word, my daily life is quite busy but colourful and interesting.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：要求以“My Daily Life”为题写一篇短文，考生应着重描述自己的日常生活和感受，适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，介绍自己的姓名、学校、班级等；
第二步，详细介绍自己一天的学习和活动情况；
第三步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①get up 起床
②have breakfast 吃早餐
③by bike 骑自行车
④in a word 总之
[高分句型]
In my free time, I often play basketball with friends because it is good for us. (because引导原因状语从句)
15．例文
My School Life
I would like to tell you something about the life in my school. It has been one year since I came to the school.
My school is beautiful and there are many beautiful flowers and trees. The teachers are so kind though there is always too much homework. My classmates are all very friendly to each other. We always help each other. I have learned a lot from them and made a lot of friends. In school, I study English, mathematics, Chinese, physical education, biology, geography, and so on. In study, I am good at Chinese and English, while math is my weakness. Mr. Li is my math teacher. He often helped me with my studies very patiently. With his help, I made great progress in math and caught up with my classmates. I like music room. Because I love dancing. Dancing is relaxing.
I like my school life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，短文必须包含写作要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的校园；
第二步，介绍自己的老师和同学；
第三步，介绍自己的学习科目。
[亮点词汇]
①each other互相
②learn from sb.向某人学习
③and so on等等
[高分句型]
①It has been one year since I came to the school. （since引导的时间状语从句）
②The teachers are so kind though there is always too much homework.（though引导的让步状语从句）
16．例文
One of My School Days
I have just started my new school year as a middle school student. Let me share one of my school days with you.
I usually get up at 6:30 a.m. After having breakfast, I go to school by bike. My classes start at 8:00. In the morning, we have four lessons including Chinese, Maths, English, and History. My favorite subject is English because I like learning new languages.
In the afternoon, we have three more lessons. After school, I often go to the library to read books or finish my homework. I go back home at around 5:30 p.m. I feel a bit tired but very happy because I have learned a lot of new things.
I enjoy my school life very much.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先介绍上学的上午日常时间安排；
第二步，接着介绍下午的日常活动；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①get up起床
②in the morning早上
③go back home回家
④a lot of很多
[高分句型]
My favorite subject is English because I like learning new languages. (because引导的原因状语从句)
17．例文：
My Favourite Subject
My favourite subject is English. It’s important and useful in our daily life. I enjoy learning English because it opens up a world of opportunities and allows me to communicate with people from different cultures.
In class, I often listen carefully to our teacher, who is very knowledgeable and patient. I participate in discussions, practice speaking, and work on my grammar and vocabulary. I also enjoy reading English books and articles, which help me improve my reading skills and broaden my horizons.
English is not just a subject; it’s a tool that connects me with the world.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，主题为“我最喜欢的科目”；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：确保包含所有要点，即最喜欢的科目是什么、为什么喜欢它、以及在课上做什么，同时保持了文章的逻辑连贯和结构清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，明确主题，即介绍自己最喜欢的科目是英语；
第二步，阐述喜欢英语的原因，包括其重要性和实用性，以及学习英语带来的好处；
第三步，详细描述在英语课上的活动，如认真听讲、参与讨论、练习口语、提升语法和词汇等；
第四步，总结对英语的看法，强调英语不仅是学科，更是连接世界的工具。
[亮点词汇]
①open up打开
②communicate with与……交流
③broaden one’s horizons开阔眼界
[高分句型]
①I enjoy learning English because it opens up a world of opportunities and allows me to communicate with people from different cultures.(原因状语从句，清晰表达喜欢英语的原因)
②English is not just a subject; it’s a tool that connects me with the world.(定语从句，强调英语作为连接世界的工具的重要性)
18．例文：
My Favorite Weekday
My favorite weekday is Tuesday.
On this day, I have my favorite subject, which is science. I love exploring the mysteries of the natural world and conducting experiments. Additionally, Tuesday is when I have classes with my favorite teacher, Mr. Smith. He has a unique way of making learning fun and engaging. He always encourages us to think creatively.
These are the reasons why Tuesday is my favorite day at school. What is your favorite weekday
【详解】[总体分析]
① 本文是一篇材料作文。
② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明自己最喜欢的上学日——星期二；
第二步，说明喜欢这一天的原因，从科目和老师两方面介绍；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①exploring the mysteries of the natural world 探索自然世界的奥秘
②making learning fun and engaging让学习变得有趣和有吸引力
③encourages us to think鼓励我们思考
[高分句型]
①On this day, I have my favorite subject, which is science. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②Additionally, Tuesday is when I have classes with my favorite teacher, Mr. Smith. (表语从句)
19．例文
My new school life
I like my new school life. Let me tell you something about it.
I have a new friend named Mike in my new school. He wears a pair of glasses. He is good at playing basketball, so we often play basketball together after class. We are good friends now.
We have six lessons every day. I like geography best because it’s very interesting. I can learn a lot from it. I hope to travel around the world in the future.
After class, we have many activities, such as playing basketball and drawing pictures. We also have a “class farm”. We water the plants there. This helps us learn how to take care of them and about teamwork.
My school life is very interesting. I like my new school life very much.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态是“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山。引出下文具体介绍学校生活。（开头已给出）
第二步，具体阐述。根据提示，从朋友、老师、课程、活动等方面中任选三个方面展开介绍。
第三步，书写结语。总结学校生活，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① wear a pair of glasses 戴眼镜
② be good at doing sth. 擅长做某事
③ travel around the world 环游世界
④ such as 比如
⑤ take care of 照顾
[高分句型]
① I have a new friend named Mike in my new school.（named过去分词作后置定语）
② I like geography best because it’s very interesting.（because引导原因状语从句）
20．例文
My Favourite School Day
Hi! I’m Li Ming. I’m a middle school student in Grade Seven.
I go to school from Monday to Friday. My favourite school day is Friday because we have history and science lessons on Friday morning. They are my favourite subjects because they are interesting. On Friday afternoon, there are only three classes, so I can go back home earlier. Besides, I don’t have to do my homework on Friday night. So after dinner, I often take a walk with my family.
It’s a great school day—relaxing and fun. I like my school life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：考生应注意不要漏写你的感受，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明你自己喜欢的上学日是哪一天；
第二步，介绍你喜欢这一天的原因；
第三步，谈谈你的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①interesting有趣的
②take a walk散步
③relaxing令人放松的
[高分句型]
①My favourite school day is Friday because we have history and science lessons on Friday morning. They are my favourite subjects because they are interesting.（because引导的原因状语从句）
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