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Unit 7 Teenagers should be allowed to choose their own clothes.
人教新目标版 九年级上
Section B3a-Selfcheck
写作优质公开课课件
Learning objectives
1. 围绕家规的话题，通过看说写等活动搜集整理所需要的语言基础信息；
2. 能够正确使用含有情态动词的被动语态句型，介绍家规，发表意见。
3. 通过一系列的活动，能够内化有关的语言知识，在写作中注意语篇的整体性，结构性和逻辑性。
4.通过写作更好地理解父母希望我们做什么和我们应该做什么，培养学生对于各种规章制度的正确的态度，同时鼓励学生和父母提出自己的想法。
Warming-up
Let’s enjoy a video.
Liu Yu’s opinion: Running is more important .
Reasons：
1. He is a running _____ on the school team.　
2. He is ____________running. ________________he has ever wanted to do.
3.He understands the ___________ of working hard and entering university. And he knows his parents __________ what will happen if he doesn’t ________(success), but he _____ (succeed) because he is a ______ runner.
star
serious about
It’s the only thing
importance
worry about
succeed
will
quick
Conclusion：
He should be allowed to ________________ himself. Only then will he have the chance to ________________.
make the choice
achieve his dream
Revision
Parents’ opinions: Schoolwork is more important.
Reasons：
1. Liu Yu needs to think about ________________ if he doesn't _________ a professional runner. He needs to think about other ________ jobs.
2. Liu Yu should study ______ in the evening.
3. It is ________ to become a ____________ sports star.
Conclusion：
Liu Yu needs to_________________on his schoolwork.
what will happen
end up as
possible
hard
difficult
professional
spend more time
Revision
You shouldn’t be allowed to train in the evening.
I think it’s not fair.
The rule should be changed.
How do you think the rule should be changed
I think I should be allowed to train for an hour at night.
Free talk
can’t play computer games
can’t watch TV
can’t have my own hair-style
can’t stay up late
must get up early
must do homework first
can’t talk while eating
must do housework
can’t eat out with friends
What rules do you have at home
Brainstorm
Do you agree with these rules Why or why not
2. Which one do you think should be changed Why
Discussion
With a partner,discuss some rules at home that you agree or disagree with.Make notes in the chart.
Rule Why you agree or disagree with it How you think the rule should be changed
can’t play computer games
can’t watch TV
3a
Debating:
Positive side(正方)：
pay less attention on study
be bad for eyes and health
may not be able to go to university
Negative side(反方)：
have a rest
communicate with friends
get rid of stress
can’t play computer games
I agree.
I disagree.
Debating:
Negative side(反方)：
a waste of time
have no time
too much stress at school
Positive side(正方)：
develop good habits
look after themselves
understand parents.
Do housework
I agree.
I disagree.
Positive side(正方)：
Some TV programs are bad for students
…
Negative side(反方)：
not all TV programs are bad for students
need to relax sometimes ...
can’t watch TV
I agree.
I disagree.
Debating:
3b
Write a diary entry explaining which rule(s) you do not agree with at home and how you think the rule(s) should be changed.
Use the following expressions to help you:
I do not agree with…
I think I should be allowed to...
I would like to...
I could… if I...
审题
日记
文体
人称
时态
第一人称
一般现在时
Beginning
Lead in the topic:family rules
Body
which disagree+
ending
Outline
why disagree
How to change
lead in the topic
which disagree+why
There are some family rules at my home.
I can’t agree with the rule that I am not allowed to...
It’s unfair that I can’t..
I don’t agree that I must...
how to change
I think I should/can be allowed to…
I would like to...
It would be better
if I could…
There are many rules in my house.
I do not agree with the rule that I must be home for dinner every day. This is because the rule influences my social life. It takes away chances for me to spend time with my friends. As a result, my life is quite boring sometimes.
I think I should be allowed to have dinner with my friends once in a while.For example, I would like to eat out with my friends during
weekends.I hope my parents will allow me to do this if I promise not to stay out too late and if there is no important family activities on those days.
Thursday,December 12th
lead in the topic
which disagree+why
how to change
日记格式
本单元的话题是“Rules (规章制度)”。“规章制度”包括不同地方的规章制度；对规章制度的不同观点；如何遵守规章制度；制定相关的规章制度等几个方面。与之相关的话题作文主要是谈论“家规、校规和对规章制度的不同观点等。”
写作内容通常要求根据图表或文字提示介绍规章制度，或者针对不同的规章制度表达自己赞同或反对的观点，并给出合理的理由。
假如你叫李华, 是一名中学生。父母对你要求非常严格，你有很多家规。请以“My family rules”为题，根据提示，简要介绍你的家规，并谈谈你的看法。
提示：
1.不准穿耳洞，不准戴耳环，不准抽烟、喝酒；
2.先写作业再看电视;
3. 早睡早起，不准熬夜；
4.不和父母顶嘴, 关心家人和朋友，帮助父母做家务。
要求：
1.熟练运用所学知识，条理清楚，逻辑合理。
2.书写规范。
3.词数：80 左右
How many steps(步骤)of writing: _______
______________________________
______________________________
______________________________
______________________________
______________________________
5
1. Analyse the topic. “审”
2. List an outline. “列”
3. Connect sentences into an article. “连”
4. Correct the article. “改”
5. Copy it into the paper. “誊”
It’s time to write.
假如你叫李华, 是一名中学生。父母对你要求非常严格，你有很多家规。请以“My family rules”为题，根据提示，简要介绍你的家规，并谈谈你的看法。
提示：
1.不准穿耳洞，不准戴耳环，不准抽烟、喝酒；
2.先写作业再看电视;
3. 早睡早起，不准熬夜；
4.不和父母顶嘴, 关心家人和朋友，帮助父母做家务。
要求：
1.熟练运用所学知识，条理清楚，逻辑合理。
2.书写规范。
3.词数：80 左右
1. Analyse the topic. “审”
style of writing(体裁):__________
tense(时态)：___________
person(人称): ______
key points(要点):__________________
I
一般现在时
说明文
family rules
假如你叫李华, 是一名中学生。父母对你要求非常严格，你有很多家规。请以“My family rules”为题，根据提示，简要介绍你的家规，并谈谈你的看法。
提示：
1.不准穿耳洞，不准戴耳环，不准抽烟、喝酒；
2.先写作业再看电视;
3. 早睡早起，不准熬夜；
4.不和父母顶嘴, 关心家人和朋友，帮助父母做家务。
要求：
1.熟练运用所学知识，条理清楚，逻辑合理。
2.书写规范。
3.词数：80 左右
2. Make an outline. “列”
My family rules
how many paragraphs(段落): ____
para.1: ______________________________
para.2: ______________________________
______________________________
para.3: ______________________________
3
My name is___. I’m a___. I have ___.
my family rules
opinions (I think/agree that...)
(First...second...third...finally...)
Linking words(连接词):
表并列：and, both...and...
表转折：but, however...
表因果：because, so, as a result...
表递进：not only...but also..., what’s more
表结果：so...that..., such...that...
表先后：first, second, third, next, finally...
表时间：when, while, after, before...
3. Connect sentences into an article. “连”
Time for writing
Possible Version:
My name is Li Hua. I am a middle school student. My parents are strict with me. There are many rules in my family. Let me tell you about them.
First, I can’t get ears pierced or wear earrings. I am not allowed to smoke or drink, either. Second, I have to finish my homework before watching TV. What’s more, I must go to bed and get up early. Staying up late is not allowed for me. Last, I must not talk back to my parents. I need to care about my family and friends, and I am required to help with housework at home.
I think some of my family rules are strict. However, I know that they are made to make me become better and better.
My Family Rules
4. Correct the article. “改”
Peer-evaluation check list Yes No
1. Can you picture the experience the writer wrote about
2. Does it have a correct structure
3. Are there any spelling mistakes and punctuation errors
4. Are the verbs in proper tenses
5. Does it include all the information required
Exchange your articles, evaluate it and then help each other correct them. 交换文章，先做出评价然后互相帮助修改。
I never go shopping with my dad.
It is not easy to achieve my dream.
It is not allowed to take photos here.
You have to make a choice right now.
I want to do part-time work this summer.
It is not allowed to get ears pierced in school.
1.Match the words in the two columns.
Choose five phrases to make sentences.
be solved
be kept
not be allowed
be put
not be encouraged
无论我们有多少困难，我相信最终所有问题都可以被解决。
在开会期间手机应该被关掉。
十八岁以下的青少年一定不被允许吸烟 或喝酒。
许多父母认为上学必须被放在第一位，因此青少年不应该被鼓励做兼职工作。
2. Complete the sentences using the correct forms of
the words in brackets.
1.Polish your passage.
2.Talk about your home rules with your classmates and exchange your views.
Homework
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