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茂名市第一中学2025—2026学年度第一学期期中考试
高二英语试卷
考试时间：120分钟 总分：130分
第二部分 阅读理解（共两节，满分50分）
第一节（共15小题; 每小题2.5分，满分37.5分）
阅读下列短文，从每题所给的A 、B 、C 、D 四个选项中选出最佳选项。
A
Just what is about roller coasters It seems we just can’t get enough of them. This week we take a look at some of the top amusement parks and the roller coasters that have helped make them famous.
Holiday World
It is a family park in the sense that resists the exciting atmosphere of its competitors and instead offers a more relaxing and friendly experience. Rare in that it is privately owned and it has many features that other parks often can’t match. There is lots of entertainment for youngsters, so parents appreciate the park’s family-friendly policy of free entry to the water park, reasonable food prices and unlimited soft drinks free of charge.
Lake Compounce
Lake Compounce, being one of America’s more traditional parks, is a rare find indeed. As the oldest continuously operating amusement park in the US, it has been a popular family spot since 1846. Like many old-time parks, it fell on hard times and was in danger of being closed. Luckily, in 1977, a well-known company came to its rescue with huge infusions (注入) of cash. The transformed park with its new rides is attracting many new fans.
Knott’s Berry Farm
As one of America’s favourite theme parks, Knott’s has something for everyone. For those seeking a breathtaking rush, try the roller coaster, Ghost Rider or the Xcelerator. Ghost Rider is the single largest attraction in amusement park history and one of the longest and tallest wooden roller coasters in the world. If you are after something a little less exciting, go to Camp Snoopy or visit the heart of Knott’s, Ghost Town, for a glance of life in the Wild West of the 1880s. With its cowboys, carriages, steam trains and historic buildings— many transported from mining towns — Ghost Town will let you relive a piece of the past.
Islands of Adventure
In the style of Walt Disney World, Islands of Adventure (IOA) is divided into themed “lands”. Unlike the sugar-coated Magic Kingdom, however, IOA features attractions guaranteed to set the heart racing. Its roller coasters are state-of-the-art fun. While the Spider-man is fantastic, you haven’t truly lived until you’ve experienced the Incredible Hulk’s wild and unique uphill launch. The effect is like being trapped inside an airplane that’s flying out of control.
21. What is special about Holiday World
A. It belongs to an individual. B. It creates the exciting atmosphere.
C. It provides free food. D. It owns the latest ride technology.
22. Which park takes visitors back to earlier times
A. Lake Compounce. B. Holiday World.
C. Islands of Adventure. D. Knott’s Berry Farm.
23. Why is Islands of Adventure different from Magic Kingdom
A. It plays many famous movies. B. It is divided into different lands.
C. It has more visitors waiting in line. D. It provides a very exciting experience.
B
From a young age, I collected role models. In school, as a teenager, I tried to channel Whitney Houston. In the working world, I paid close attention to our female senior managers. By watching and imitating others—especially women of color who looked or sounded like me—I gained confidence in my own abilities.
But when I started my own company, my pool of role models became smaller. Only 2.1% of risk investment goes to women-founded companies. “Who can I look up to ” I wondered. “Who can I learn from ” I decided to create an inspiration wall in my office, with photos of the role models I could see—women like Oprah, Michelle Obama, and Vicky, co-founder of a skincare brand. I never thought I’d meet these women, but their success gave me hope.
Then one day, a couple of years ago, I surprised myself with a thought: what if I did reach out to one of my role models I feared rejection, but my desire for connection was stronger. I chose Vicky, whose journey had long inspired me. I didn’t have her email address. So I tried a cold Instagram message, and she responded the next day!
That was in 2022. We’ve spoken numerous times since, and the conversations have been invaluable. They’re rare chances to gain guidance from a successful woman. But here’s the most valuable lesson I gained: when Vicky first replied to me, I wasn’t the only one excited. Vicky was excited too because she’s always looking for ways to support other women. All my life, I’d thought of role models as a one-way relationship: I’d gain strength from someone stronger. But the situation is more than that.
I once sent Vicky a care package from my sunglasses company. She wrote me a thank-you note, and texted a selfie of her and her daughter wearing my products. Today, I keep that letter on my desk next to my keyboard—a reminder that just as I believe in her, she believes in me. We’re all here to help each other grow.
24. How did the author build up her confidence
A. By observing and copying her models. B. By making friends with persons like her. C. By cooperating with women of color. D. By starting her own sunglasses company.
25. What is the author’s intention of creating an inspiration wall in her office
A. To inspire her employees’ creativity.
B. To encourage herself to achieve success.
C. To make her workplace more attractive.
D. To improve her employees’ work efficiency.
26. Why did the author choose to reach out to Vicky
A. She was afraid of being rejected.
B. She only had Vicky’s email address.
C. Vicky’s story had always motivated her.
D. Vicky liked giving guidance to other women.
27. What can be concluded according to the text
A. Strength flows both ways. B. Practice makes perfect.
C. A good beginning is half done. D. Actions speak louder than words.
C
Summer mornings at Wangjiangjing town’s Kaisen (Happy) Tribe in Jiaxing, Zhejiang, feature soft light over grassland paths and the pleasant smell of lotus from nearby wetlands. Opened last October, this rural retreat(度假村) combines village landscapes with children’s play, camping, farming, and environmental education, attracting urban travelers, especially from Shanghai.
“Our core philosophy is creating a boundless classroom in nature,” states Mo Xiaohua, Kaisen Tribe Operations Lead. The project embraces forest-style education and community growth, aligning(使一致) with Wangjiangjing’s vision for canal-themed experiential learning and cultural tourism as a new family destination.
The Grand Canal, which long shaped the town’s identity, saw its bustling past fade with modernization. Renewed national focus on canal preservation drives local efforts to repurpose idle resources.
Guided by green development principles, the project revived an abandoned village. Designers integrated playgrounds, fishponds, farms, and paddies into existing forests, fields, and ponds, achieving ecological transformation. This draws up to 10,000 visitors on peak days, with plans for more uniquely themed hotel rooms.
Kaisen Tribe is part of the Jiaxing Grand Canal Culture & Tourism Resort. “The goal is a living community, not an untouchable museum,” says Shen Tao, a resort official. Since 2018, the resort has pursued “heritage-first” development, rooted in its UNESCO status — including the Ming Dynasty Changhong Bridge. Eleven large lakes shape the classic Jiangnan water town landscape and traditions like lotus cultivation.
Historic repurposing is key: A 1960s granary(谷仓) complex now houses a café and cultural space, preserving its architecture. Another granary hosts a digital hub with VR and performances. A reconstructed steam locomotive(火车头) from the historic Suzhou-Jiaxing Railway (1936-1944) serves as a visitor center and patriotic site near wartime bunkers (碉堡).
Unique attractions like reptile museums, concrete pipe rooms, rice field tours, and animal encounters appeal strongly to younger travelers seeking social media moments. Future plans include expanding night tourism, enhancing digital integration, and developing a youth soccer training base for sports tourism.
28. What is Kaisen Tribe’s core educational concept
A. Nature-based limitless learning. B. Urban community growth centers.
C. Traditional farming restoration. D. Tech-driven immersive learning experiences.
29. Which of the following best explains “idle resources” underlined in paragraph 3
A. Polluted water ecosystems. B. Vast fields and ponds.
C. Abandoned heritage structures. D. Forgotten traditional crafts.
30. What can be inferred about the historical sites
A. Bunkers prevent cultural exchange.
B. Changhong Bridge needs UNESCO approval.
C. Granaries focus more on storage than new tech.
D. Old buildings get new uses while keeping history.
31. What key principle drives Kaisen Tribe’s success
A. Tourist numbers define cultural value. B. Commercial interests drive sustainability.
C. Innovation through heritage revival. D. Technology replaces traditional experiences.
D
Healthcare organizations face big problems: costs are rising, but income is growing slowly. Cloud technology offers a solution by replacing outdated systems, improving efficiency, and enhancing care. Key benefits include helping doctors make better decisions by giving them faster access to patient information, lowering costs by making operations run smoother—which is crucial when government payments are low—and providing stronger security to protect patient data. As Dr. Michelle Flemmings from Oracle notes, older computer systems often made work harder with repetitive tasks, while the cloud makes accessing data easier and reduces doctors’ workload.
Adding AI makes the cloud even more powerful. AI acts like a smart helper for doctors. Flemmings compares it to having a top medical expert by your side. AI helps assess patient risks, suggests best practices, and finds vital information in health records instantly. This teamwork speeds up tasks, like finding patients who qualify for clinical trials during regular visits—opportunities often missed before. Also, AI-powered patient websites offer personalized services like online booking, meeting the high demand for digital options.
Cloud uses are growing fast: reducing missed appointments, automating complex data analysis, spotting security risks, and simplifying administration tasks. However, moving to the cloud has challenges, mainly cost and security worries. Flemmings advises starting small with pilot projects to fix specific problems, especially for smaller hospitals. Importantly, cloud security is often better than old systems, with AI boosting threat detection. As Amar Nagaram from IU Health highlights, the cloud simplifies tech systems and improves teamwork.
Ultimately, the cloud is changing healthcare’s future. It cuts costs and tech burdens while speeding up innovation. Secure cloud tools let patients access care remotely, beyond the clinic. Nagaram states that without cloud tech, healthcare groups can’t compete. While moving needs careful planning, progress is happening. For example, IU Health uses AI to prioritize urgent patient help requests. Cloud technology is building a foundation for healthcare focused on patients, quality, and constant innovation.
What are the primary pressures driving healthcare towards cloud adoption
A. Demand for better patient experiences.
B. Rising costs and slowing revenue growth.
C. Shortage of physical data storage space.
D. Government requirements for new technology.
33. How is AI described when assisting a doctor
A. A clinical support tool. B. A real-time data processor.
C. A top consultant nearby. D. An independent advisor.
34. What is the recommended strategy for adopting cloud technology
A. Ignoring cost considerations. B. Gradual launch starting small.
C. Taking full-system migration. D. Outsourcing all IT operations.
35. Which can be a suitable title for the text
A. The Rise of Digital Patient Platforms.
B. The AI Revolution in Medical Diagnosis.
C. Cutting Healthcare Costs Through Technology.
D. Revolutionizing Healthcare Through Cloud Technology.
第二节（共5小题；每小题2.5分，满分12.5分）
根据下面短文，从短文后的选项中选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。
In cities across the globe, up to a quarter of office buildings are unoccupied, along with other urban properties, from storage to abandoned skyscrapers. To put this space to use, many cities are transforming empty buildings for other uses. 36
Just as the name suggests, vertical (垂直的) farming is the practice of growing crops in layers as opposed to traditional horizontal rows. These layers are often placed in spaces unfit for farming, but now we can grow crops there due to advanced agricultural methods. 37 However, thanks to technology, artificial light, and controlled temperatures and humidity, office spaces have proved to be great environments for farming.
38 It dates back to over 2,000 years ago with the Hanging Gardens of Babylon. Modern vertical farming simply began as an experiment in 1999, focused on growing food on the rooftops of Manhattan. Their work eventually transformed into using high-rise buildings as vertical farms to feed thousands of people in a sustainable manner. Vertical farming is now a $6 billion industry.
The main benefit of vertical farming is that it maximizes the yield of crops by efficiently using space. 39 It is made possible by their controlled environments and soilless agriculture methods like hydroponic(水培法). Hydroponics allows plants to grow in a water-based solution rather than soil, saving water. In fact, hydroponic systems only require 10% of the water of a traditional field.
Despite being untraditional, vertical farms produce over 50 types of plants, ranging from leafy greens and herbs to experimental fruits and more! 40 The reason lies in that they are capable of growing a variety of produce at all times and providing people with local fresh foods at affordable prices.
A. Vertical farming has a rich history.
B. One solution is indoor vertical farming.
C. The practice isn’t as simple as it sounds.
D. Most vertical farms can grow all year round.
E. That said, vertical farming will replace traditional agriculture soon.
F. Despite the benefits, the method also comes with considerable downsides.
G. This diversity and consistent output help address a critical urban issue: food deserts.
第三部分 语言知识运用（共两节，满分30分）
第一节（共15小题；每小题1分，满分15分）
阅读下面短文，从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。
You don’t get a second chance to make a first impression—this was the theme of this year’s International Public Speaking Competition (IPSC). Thirty-three young speakers aged 16 to 20 from around the world 41 the English Speaking Union to tell their stories, including Wu Dongxu from China. To him, the event wasn’t just about giving a 42 on first impressions, it also made a strong impression on him.
“Rather than a competition, the 43 was more like an enlightening research trip to me, which 44 me to see firsthand the differences and 45 between Chinese and foreign cultures,” said Wu.
Apart from the 46 differences in food, transportation and climate, what 47 Wu the most was the distinct styles of Chinese and foreign public speaking.
Although still a teen, Wu is no stranger to the public speaking podium (讲台). But on the stage of the IPSC, speakers had no podium to 48 behind. They just had to 49 the audience. “It made me realize how 50 eye contact and body language are,” said Wu. Speakers have the freedom to express more information with their gestures 51 just words.
Another difference that caught Wu’s 52 was the evaluation criteria. To his surprise, the IPSC organizing committee informed all the contestants before the 53 that accents and grammatical errors would not be considered in the evaluation process, meaning that the expression of feelings and your conveyed story are what matter most.
“Audiences are 54 to hear powerful stories, 55 those that resonate (引起共鸣) with people regardless of where they are from,” said Wu.
41. A. played around B. chatted in C. gathered at D. discussed about
42. A. treat B. speech C. report D. lesson
43. A. job B. discovery C. exercise D. experience
44. A. asked B. allowed C. chose D. invited
45. A. warnings B. examples C. similarities D. entertainments
46. A. obvious B. awful C. unbelievable D. special
47. A. worried B. moved C. frightened D. impressed
48. A. sit B. stand C. climb D. jump
49. A. face B. please C. amuse D. trust
50. A. famous B. boring C. hard D. important
51. A. along with B. instead of C. because of D. according to
52. A. word B. breath C. step D. attention
53. A. event B. trip C. research D. performance
54. A. eager B. sorry C. careful D. difficult
55. A. namely B. definitely C. especially D. naturally
第二节 （共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
阅读下面短文，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。
On September 3, 2025, China held a great military parade in Beijing, 56 (celebrate) the 80th anniversary of the victory in the Chinese People’s War of Resistance Against Japanese Aggression and the World Anti-Fascist War. The theme of the event is, “Commemorating the Great Victory, Upholding Peace and Development” and 57 (it) aim is to help people remember history, honor 58 (hero), cherish peace, and encourage young people.
The parade featured a wide range of weapons and equipment, the majority of 59 were unveiled for the first time. It lasted about 70 minutes and included 45 formations. These formations had many parts, such as 60 air flag guard, foot formations, honor guards carrying historical battle flags, equipment columns, and air flyovers. 61 impressed people most was the equipment section that showcased China’s technological progress in national defense. It has been 62 (universe) acknowledged that China has been working hard to modernize its national defense.
Many foreign leaders attended the ceremony 63 honored guests. This parade is not only a show of military strength 64 a serious promise to keep peace and learn from history. As a responsible major country, China always upholds world peace and promotes common development. To date, China’s development 65 (make) significant contributions to global peace and prosperity.
第四部分 基础知识考察 （共两节，满分10分）
第一节 单词填空（共10小题；每题0.5分, 满分5分）
根据中文提示和首字母填空，或根据括号内同根词填空。（注意：请将完整的单词（含首字母）填写在答题卷上。）
66. Afterwards, the company filed a patent for a new chemical s_________(物质).
67. I w_________(见证) how this young couple got through the most difficult time in their life.
68. There are many p___________(预测) about what the future will be like, but no one really knows for sure.
69. We need a lot of investigation to prove this a__________(假定).
70. The Prime Minister, ___________(陪同) by the governor, led the President up to the house.
71. Considering the ______________(extraordinary) dangerous circumstance, he insisted that they should not risk their lives by going out during the typhoon.
72. In ___________(compare) with big cities, these places are less modern but more natural.
73. With a lot of people ________(oppose) it, the government had to postpone the new proposal.
74. A Chinese dance drama has made its global debut(首次亮相) on social media platforms abroad, __________ (generate) a new wave of discussion on the beauty of Chinese culture among art lovers from all over the world.
75. Parents prefer taking their children to some places that combine ____________(entertain) with education.
第二节 完成句子（共5小题；每小题0.5分，满分5分）
根据中文提示填空，每个空仅填一个单词。
他忍受不了被别人嘲笑。
He can't stand 76 77 at.
他把笔记本电脑丢在哪里了，这是我们想知道的。
78 he had lost the laptop was 79 we wanted to know.
我们班有45名学生，其中只有10人在上一门选修艺术课。
There are 45 students in our class, out 80 81 only 10 are taking an optional art course.
所谓鞠躬，我们指的是“低头或俯身，以此作为尊敬或羞愧的一种表示”。
By 82 , we mean “ 83 our head or body forward as a sign of respect or shame”.
我们无法解释，为什么这么多人支持这项草案。
We could not give the reason, 84 85 so many people were in favour of the draft.
第五部分 写作（共两节，满分40分）
第一节（满分15分）
假如你是李华，你校外教David打算带领学生创办每周英语视频播客，现在正在征求学生意见，需要从以下两个主题中选择一个作为播客(podcast)的主题: “Emotional Outlets (解忧树洞)” 或 “Futuristic Visions (未来愿景)”。请你写一封英文邮件给外教，内容包括:
(1) 你的选择;
(2) 你推荐的理由。
注意:
写作词数应为80左右;
可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
第二节 读后续写 （满分 25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Jenny was the only child in her home. She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ran out of the house angrily.
She couldn’t help weeping sorrowfully when she thought of the scolding from her mother. Having wandered aimlessly in the street for hours, she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat, but it was not even possible for her, since she had nothing with her. She stood beside a stand for a while, watching the middle-aged seller busy doing his business. However, with no money in hand, she sighed and had to leave.
The seller behind the stand noticed the young girl and asked, “Hey, girl, you want to have the noodles ”
“Oh, yes..., but I don’t have money on me...” she replied.
“That’s nothing. I’ll treat you today,” said the man, “Come in.”
The seller brought her a bowl of noodles, whose smell was so attractive. As she was eating, Jenny cried silently. “What is it ” asked the man kindly.
“Nothing, actually I was just touched by your kindness!” said Jenny as she wiped her tears. “Even a stranger on the street will give me a bowl of noodles, while my mother drove me out of the house. She showed no care for me. She is so merciless compared to a stranger!!”
Hearing the words, the seller smiled, “Girl, do you really think so I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you thanked me a lot. But it is your mother who has raised you since you were a baby. Can you number the times she cooked for you Have you expressed your gratitude to her ”
Jenny sat there, speechless and numb with shock She remembered Mother’s familiar face and weathered hands. “Why didn’t I think of that A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel indebted, but I have never thanked my mum for what she has done for me.”
On the way home, Jenny made up her mind to make an apology to her mother for her rudeness as soon as she arrived home.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Approaching the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath.______________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.__________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________茂名市第一中学2025—2026学年度第一学期期中考试
高二英语试卷参考答案及评分标准
I阅读理解（2.5′× 20 ）
21-23 ADD 24-27 ABCA 28-31 ACDC 32-35 BCBD 36-40 BCADG
II完形填空（1.5′× 15 ）
41-45 CBDBC 46-50 ADBAD 51-55 BDAAC
III语法填空（1.5′× 10 ）
56. celebrating 57. its 58. heroes 59. which 60. an
61. What 62. universally 63. as 64. but 65. has made
IV课本知识考察（共两节，满分10分）
第一节 单词拼写（共10小题；每题0.5分, 满分5分）
66. substance 67. witnessed 68. predictions 69. assumption 70. accompanied
71. extraordinarily 72. comparison 73. opposing 74. generating 75. entertainment
第二节 完成句子(共5小题；每小题0.5分，满分5分)
76. being 77. laughed 78. Where 79. what 80. of
81. whom 82. bowing 83. bending/lowering 84. for 85. which
VI书面表达（15分 ）
【参考范文一】
Dear David,
I’m writing to share my opinion on the theme of the weekly English video podcast. After careful consideration, I’d like to vote for “Emotional Outlets” instead of “Futuristic Visions”.
As high school students, we often face pressure from studies and relationships, but many of us struggle to find proper ways to release emotions. This topic is highly relevant for students, as it provides a platform to openly discuss emotions, stress management, and mental well-being. It would not only help improve our English expression but also create a supportive community where we can share experiences and coping strategies. This theme encourages empathy, self-reflection, and practical communication skills, making it both meaningful and engaging.
I’m looking forward to the first episode!
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文二】
Dear David,
I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to share my thoughts on the proposed podcast themes. After careful consideration, I would like to recommend “Futuristic Visions” as the theme for our weekly English podcast.
I believe this topic will greatly engage students because it encourages creativity and critical thinking about technological advancements, environmental solutions, and societal changes. It aligns with our generation’s interest in innovation and allows us to explore diverse perspectives. Additionally, discussing future trends can inspire practical language use, as it involves describing possibilities, expressing opinions, and debating ideas. This theme not only enhances our language skills but also broadens our horizons.
Thank you for considering my suggestion. I am excited about the podcast and look forward to contributing!
Yours,
Li Hua
书面表达评分原则
1. 本题总分为 15 分，按5个档次给分。
2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3. 评分时应注意的主要内容为：时态、人称、内容要点，应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性、语言的得体性及应用文体裁格式。
4. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
5. 如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。
书面表达评分标准
第五档 (13-15分)：
*完全完成了试题规定的任务，完全达到了预期的写作目的覆盖所有内容要点。
*应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
*语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。
*有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧湊。
第四档 (10-12 分)：
*完全完成了试题规定的任务，达到了预期的写作目的
*虽漏掉 1、2 个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。
*应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
*语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。
*应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧湊。
第三档 (7-9 分)：
*基本完成了试题规定的任务，整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的
*虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。
*一应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
*有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。
*应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。
第二档 (4-6 分):
*未恰当完成试题规定的任务,信息未能清楚地传达给读者
*漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。
*语法结构单调、词汇知识有限。
*有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。
*较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。
第一档 (1-3 分)：
*未完成试题规定的任务，信息未能传达给读者
*明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。
*语法结构单调、词汇知识有限。
*较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。
*缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。
不得分 (0 分)：
*未能传达给读者任何信息
*内容太少，无法评判；所写内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
VII读后续写（25分）
One possible version:
Approaching the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath. Her palms sweating and throat tightening, she missed the days when she was the apple of Mother’s eye. She was so accustomed to accepting everything from Mom that she almost forgot to express timely gratitude, which led to the quarrel. With an empty stomach, she came across a seller of wisdom, whose words drove her to reflect on their relationship. Luckily, she was determined to admit her fault. “It’s never too late to make a sincere apology.” She whispered to herself, head down.
A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back. She raised her head to see the familiar face and the worried eyes. “Here you come! I've been looking for you,” came the tired voice. Jenny couldn’t help but throw herself into her mother’s arms. “I’m sorry and thank you for all you have done for me.” She could feel tears well up in her eyes. “You’re always my little girl!” Mom eyed Jenny tenderly. As the setting sun cast a golden glow on both of their faces, they embraced each other tightly.
读后续写评分原则
1.本题总分25分，按5个档次给分。
2.评分时，先根据所续写短文的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3.评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑:
(1)与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度;
(2)应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性;
(3)上下文的连贯性。
(4)拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。
4.如书写较差以致影响交际，可将分数降低一个档次。
读后续写评分标准
第五档 (21 ~25分)
*创造了新颖、丰富、合理的内容, 富有逻辑性，续写完整，与原文情境融洽度高。
*使用了多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达流畅，语言错误很少，且完全不影响理解。
*自然有效地使用了段落间、语句间衔接手段，全文结构清晰，前后呼应，意义连贯。
第四档 ( 16 ~20分)
*创造了比较丰富、合理的内容，比较有逻辑性，续写比较完整，与原文情境融洽度比较高。
*使用了比较多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构，有些许语法错误，不影响理解。
*比较有效地使用了段落间衔接手段，全文结构比较清晰，意义比较连贯。
第三档 ( 11 ~15分)
*创造了基本完整的故事内容，但有的情节不够合理或逻辑性不强，与原文情境基本相关。
*使用了简单的词汇和语法结构，有部分语言错误和不恰当之处，个别部分影响理解(低级语法错误，如主宾格使用混乱，时态错误，拼写错误等) 。
*尚有语句衔接的意识，全文结构基本清晰，意义基本连贯。
第二档 (6 ~10分)
*内容和逻辑上有一些重大问题，续写不够完整，与原文有一定程度脱节。
*所用的词汇有限，语法结构单调，错误较多且比较低级，影响理解。
*未能有效地使用语句间衔接手段，全文结构不够清晰,意义欠连贯。
第一档 (1~5分)
*内容和逻辑上有较多重大问题，或有部分内容抄自原文，续写不完整，与原文情境基本脱节。
*所使用的词汇非常有限，语法结构单调、错误较多、严重影响理解。
*几乎没有使用语句间衔接手段，全文结构不清晰，意义不连贯。
0分 白卷、内容太少以致无法评判或所写内容与所提供内容无关。

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