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2025年秋人教版九年级英语Unit 11
单元写作主题语言素材+高分范文1篇
一、核心短语（适配情绪描写）
1. 正面情绪形容词
cheerful 愉快的
delighted 欣喜的
relaxed 放松的
inspired 受鼓舞的
thrilled 激动的
peaceful 平静的
confident 自信的
joyful 喜悦的
2. 负面情绪形容词
depressed 沮丧的
frustrated 挫败的
anxious 焦虑的
upset 难过的
disappointed 失望的
gloomy 郁闷的
nervous 紧张的
sorrowful 悲伤的
3. 情绪变化副词
suddenly 突然地
gradually 逐渐地
instantly 立刻地
eventually 最终地
unexpectedly 意外地
dramatically 急剧地
slowly 慢慢地
quickly 快速地
二、实用短语（核心聚焦 make 用法 + 情绪相关）
1. 正面情绪触发
cheer sb up 使某人振作
lift one's spirits 振奋某人精神
bring sb joy 给某人带来快乐
fill sb with happiness 使某人充满幸福
put sb in a good mood 让某人心情变好
bring a smile to sb's face 让某人露出笑容
2. 负面情绪触发
let sb down /disappoint sb让某人失望
make sb feel down 使某人情绪低落
make sb worried 让某人担心
put sb in a bad mood 让某人心情变差
make sb feel stressed 使某人感到压力大
upset sb deeply 深深让某人难过
3. 情绪变化表达
turn from sadness to joy 从悲伤转为喜悦
change from anxiety to calm 从焦虑变为平静
shift from frustration to confidence 从挫败转为自信
go from nervous to relaxed 从紧张变得放松
transform one's mood 转变情绪
lighten up 心情舒缓
4. make 句型核心短语（单元语法重点）
make sb smile/laugh 使某人微笑 / 大笑
make sb cry/sigh 使某人哭泣 / 叹气
make sb feel happy/relaxed 使某人感到快乐 / 放松
make sb feel sad/anxious 使某人感到难过 / 焦虑
make sb want to give up 使某人想要放弃
make sb decide to try harder 使某人决定更努力
make sb feel proud of oneself 使某人为自己骄傲
make sb forget all worries 使某人忘记所有烦恼
三、高级句型（融入 make 用法，按作文功能分类）
1. 引出情绪话题（开头段）
Life is full of moments that can make us feel various emotions, from joy to sorrow.
There was an experience that made me change from deep frustration to great confidence, which I will never forget.
The people around us often have a strong influence on our mood—they can make us smile or even change our attitude towards life.
2. 描述情绪触发（主体段）
The unexpected failure in the math exam made me feel extremely depressed, and I even wanted to give up.
My best friend’s sincere encouragement made me realize I wasn’t alone, which gradually lifted my spirits.
The beautiful scenery in the countryside made me feel peaceful instantly, forgetting all the pressure from study.
It was her warm smile and patient listening that made me feel understood, turning my sadness into relief.
3. 表达情绪变化（主体段）
At first, I was anxious about the speech contest, but my teacher’s guidance made me become more confident.
What started as a disappointing day turned out to be wonderful—my classmates’ surprise party made me burst into tears of joy.
The difficult task made me feel frustrated at first, but with my parents’ support, I gradually calmed down and found a solution.
She shared her own experience of overcoming difficulties, which made me decide to face challenges bravely instead of escaping.
4. 总结感受与收获（结尾段）
I’ve learned that small kindnesses can make a big difference to others’ moods, so we should always be ready to care for those around us.
This experience taught me that setbacks don’t have to make us sad—they can also make us stronger and stronger.
In my opinion, it’s not the events themselves but our reactions that matter; we can choose to let positive things make us grow.
四、满分范文（150 字左右，分段清晰 + 高级句型 + 好词妙语）
The Power of Kindness
Last month’s English speech contest made me experience a dramatic mood change. I had prepared for weeks, but stage fright made me freeze during the performance—my voice shook and I forgot my lines. I felt extremely frustrated and even blamed myself for being weak.
Just when I was about to give up, my teacher pulled me aside and said gently: “Mistakes make us grow, and your courage to stand on stage is already a success.” Her words, along with my classmates’ encouraging applause, made me feel warm and inspired. I gradually calmed down and decided to try again next time.
This experience taught me that kind words can make a depressed person regain confidence. It also made me realize that setbacks are not failures but chances to become stronger. From then on, I always try to use small kindnesses to lift others’ spirits, just as others did for me.

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