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2025年秋人教版九年级英语Unit13
单元写作主题语言素材+高分范文1篇
一、核心短语
1.环境污染类
heavily polluted 污染严重的
muddy 泥泞的
stinky 恶臭的
endangered 濒危的
exhausted 枯竭的
deteriorated 恶化的
toxic 有毒的
discarded 废弃的
2.环保行动类
environmentally-friendly - 环保的
sustainable - 可持续的
low-carbon - 低碳的
economical - 节约的
renewable - 可再生的
green - 绿色的
environmentally-conscious - 环保意识强的
efficient - 高效的
3. 环境变化类
clear - 清澈的
clean - 洁净的
lush - 繁茂的
fresh - 清新的
pleasant - 宜人的
restored - 恢复的
improved - 改善的
ecologically balanced - 生态平衡的
二、实用短语（核心聚焦主题+语法融合）
1. 环境污染相关短语
air pollution - 空气污染
water pollution - 水污染
soil pollution - 土壤污染
white pollution (plastic pollution) - 白色污染（塑料污染）
garbage accumulation - 垃圾堆积
deforestation - 森林砍伐
resource exhaustion - 资源枯竭
ecological damage - 生态破坏
2. 环保行动相关短语
reduce pollution - 减少污染
save energy - 节约能源
recycle waste - 回收利用
sort garbage - 垃圾分类
plant trees - 植树造林
go low-carbon (walk/ride bikes) - 低碳出行（步行 / 骑自行车）
protect wild animals - 保护野生动物
raise environmental awareness - 提高环保意识
3. 语法融合核心短语（单元重点）
used to have... - 过去常常有……
is being destroyed now - 现在正被破坏
have taken measures to do sth已经采取措施去做某事
be widely used - 被广泛使用
have been working on... - 一直致力于……
rivers that used to be clear - 过去清澈的河流
is being controlled - 正在被治理
has been greatly improved - 已经极大地得到改善
三、高级句型（融入初中核心语法，按作文功能分类）
1. 引出环保话题（开头段，用 used to 对比）
My hometown used to have clear rivers and lush forests, but now many places have been polluted.
我的家乡过去有清澈的河流和茂密的森林，但现在很多地方都被污染了。
With the development of industry, the air that used to be fresh is becoming more and more muddy, which has aroused widespread concern.
随着工业的发展，曾经清新的空气正变得越来越浑浊，这已经引起了人们的广泛关注。
2. 描述污染现状（主体段，用被动语态 / 现在进行时）
A lot of plastic waste is thrown away casually, which not only pollutes the soil but also poses a fatal threat to wild animals.
大量的塑料垃圾被随意丢弃，不仅污染土壤，还对野生动物造成了致命威胁。
Factories are discharging toxic wastewater into the river; many fish have died, and the ecological balance of the river has been severely damaged.
工厂正在向河流排放有毒废水，许多鱼类已经死亡，这条河的生态平衡被严重破坏了。
3. 阐述环保行动（主体段，用现在进行时 / 现在完成时）
The government has taken a series of measures to protect the environment, such as restricting factory emissions and promoting garbage sorting policies.
政府已经采取了一系列措施来保护环境，比如限制工厂排污、推广垃圾分类政策。
More and more people are choosing low-carbon travel, and our school has also been organizing tree-planting activities to contribute to environmental improvement.
越来越多的人正选择低碳出行，我们学校也一直在组织植树活动，为改善环境贡献力量。
4. 总结呼吁（结尾段，融合多种语法）
Protecting the environment is not a slogan but everyone’s responsibility. As long as we keep acting, the beautiful environment that used to exist can surely be restored.
保护环境不是一句口号，而是每个人的责任。只要我们坚持行动，曾经美丽的环境一定能被重新恢复。
We have seen some positive changes, but the road to environmental protection is long. Let’s work together to make the earth more livable.
我们已经看到了一些积极的变化，但环保之路任重道远。让我们携手努力，让地球变得更宜居。
四、高分范文呈现（150 字左右，分段清晰 + 高级句型 + 好词妙语）
Protect Our Earth, Protect Our Home
My hometown used to be a beautiful place with clear rivers and fresh air—we could see fish swimming freely and hear birds singing in the thick trees. However, with the rise of small factories, the environment has been severely damaged: toxic waste water is poured into rivers, and thick smoke pollutes the sky.
Fortunately, people have realized the importance of environmental protection. The government has taken measures to close down factories which have caused heavy pollution, Meanwhile, many citizens are actively participating in environmental actions. We sort garbage every day, plant trees on weekends, and choose to walk or ride bikes instead of taking cars. Now, the rivers are becoming clearer, and the air is getting fresher.
Protecting the earth is protecting our own home. I believe that as long as we stick to these actions, the ecological balance will be fully restored. Let’s keep working hard—small efforts can make a big difference to our planet.
（范文中文翻译）
保护地球，守护家园
我的家乡过去是个美丽的地方，河流清澈、空气清新 —— 我们能看见鱼儿自由游动，听见鸟儿在茂密的树林里歌唱。然而，随着小型工厂的兴起，环境遭到了严重破坏：有毒废水被排入河流，浓烟污染了天空。
幸运的是，人们已经意识到了环保的重要性。政府已采取措施关闭污染工厂，许多市民也积极参与环保行动。我们每天垃圾分类，周末植树，选择步行或骑自行车代替开车。现在，河流正变得越来越清澈，空气也越来越清新。
保护地球就是保护我们自己的家园。我相信，只要我们坚持这些行动，生态平衡终将完全恢复。让我们继续努力 —— 小小的举动，就能为我们的星球带来巨大改变。

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