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Unit 2 Amazing numbers单元话题必背范文
作文主题：人口增长 共6篇
1．在地理课上老师带领同学们调查世界各地的人口，请你根据下面图表写一下世界人口的报告。报告内容至少描述三个洲的人口数量，以及和其他洲的对比情况。
要求：1.语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；
4. 50-70词，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Asia has a population of 4,089 billion. The population of Asia is much larger than that of Africa.
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2．假设你是大明，经过调查，你对你家乡的人口情况有了一定的了解。现在根据下列提示写一篇短文介绍一下你家乡的人口情况。90词左右。
1. 你的家乡为合肥市。
2. 该市目前的人口大约为800万，但人口仍在不断增长。
3. 人口的增长主要有以下两个原因：
(1)新生婴儿数量的增加(每年约100 000)；
(2)流动人口的增加。
4. 人口增长给交通及环境都带来了压力。
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3．某英文杂志正在就城市的人口增长以及它所产生的一系列问题做调查。你所在的城市有哪些问题？你有什么好的建议和想法？请从以下三方面任选一个，写一篇70词左右的短文投稿。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
提示：
1.交通；
2. 污染；
3. 居住空间。
I live in a city in the south of China. There are more and more people coming to find jobs these years. This causes a lot of problems in my city.
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4．国家开放二孩政策后，很多家庭都可能有新的成员加入，那我们的生活会怎样呢？你会为家里做些什么？假设你现在是家里唯一的孩子，请以"If I Have a New Brother or Sister"为题，阐述你的想法和理由。
If You Have a New Brother or Sister How will you feel Reasons
What do you want to say to your parents …
What will you do for your family/younger brother(sister) …
注意：1. 开头部分已写好，你只需接着写；
2. 文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名；
3. 所写内容必须包括表格中的各项内容，并至少写两条理由；
4. 词数：80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
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5．书面表达
61. 国家开放二孩政策后，很多家庭都可能有新的成员加入，那我们的生活会怎样呢？你会为家里做些什么？假设你现在是家里唯一的孩子，请以“If I Have a New Brother or Sister”为题，阐述你的想法和理由。
If you have a new brother or sister How will you feel Reasons
What do you want to say to your parents
What will you do for your family/younger brother (sister) ...
...
注意：（1）开头部分已写好，只需接着写即可；（2）文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名；（3）所写内容必须包括表格中的各项内容，并至少写两条理由；（4）词数：80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
If I Have a New Brother or Sister
I think my life will be different if I have a new brother or sister.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．国家现在放开了二孩政策，很多人认为有一个兄弟姐妹很好，你认为呢？根据提示写一篇短文。
1．父母要花费更多时间和金钱，两个孩子会生气打闹；
2．有玩伴，不孤独，学会照顾别人，学会分享等；
3．……
注意：70词左右；短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
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2024沪教版新八上
Unit 2 Amazing numbers单元话题必背范文
作文主题：人口增长 共6篇
1．在地理课上老师带领同学们调查世界各地的人口，请你根据下面图表写一下世界人口的报告。报告内容至少描述三个洲的人口数量，以及和其他洲的对比情况。
要求：1.语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；
3. 70词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Asia has a population of 4,089 billion. The population of Asia is much larger than that of Africa.
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【答案：例文】
Asia has a population of 4,089 billion. The population of Asia is much larger than that of Africa. Africa has a population of 990 million people, which is smaller than Asia. Additionally, Europe has a population of 728 million. Compared to Asia and Africa, Europe has a smaller population. Other continents, such as North America, South America, and Oceania, have populations from 534 million to 35 million. In conclusion, Asia has the largest population, followed by Africa and Europe, while the populations of other continents are smaller.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，分别介绍非洲和欧洲的人口，与其他洲进行对比；
第二部，得出结论，亚洲人口最多，非洲和欧洲次之等。
[亮点词汇]
①additionally除此之外
②such as例如
③in conclusion综上所述
[高分句型]
①Africa has a population of 990 million people, which is smaller than Asia. (定语从句)
②Compared to Asia and Africa, Europe has a smaller population. (非谓语动词作状语)
2．假设你是大明，经过调查，你对你家乡的人口情况有了一定的了解。现在根据下列提示写一篇短文介绍一下你家乡的人口情况。90词左右。
1. 你的家乡为合肥市。
2. 该市目前的人口大约为800万，但人口仍在不断增长。
3. 人口的增长主要有以下两个原因：
(1)新生婴儿数量的增加(每年约100 000)；
(2)流动人口的增加。
4. 人口增长给交通及环境都带来了压力。
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【答案：例文】
Hefei is my home town. It is in the middle of China.
The population of my home town is about 8, 000, 000. It is too large already, but it is still growing. One reason is that about 100, 000 babies are born every year. What’s more, many people from the countryside are moving here to find jobs.
Population increase is a big problem in my home town. It makes traffic worse, pollutes our environment and brings many other problems. Besides, air pollution and water pollution are becoming worse and worse.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容介绍合肥市的人口情况，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍合肥市的人口现状；
第二步，分析人口增长的两个主要原因；
第三步，说明人口增长带来的问题。
[亮点词汇]
①in the middle of在……中间
②make...do sth使……做某事
③worse and worse越来越差
[高分句型]
①It is too large already, but it is still growing.（but连接的并列句）
②What’s more, many people from the countryside are moving here to find jobs.（动词不定式作目的状语）
3．某英文杂志正在就城市的人口增长以及它所产生的一系列问题做调查。你所在的城市有哪些问题？你有什么好的建议和想法？请从以下三方面任选一个，写一篇70词左右的短文投稿。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
提示：
1.交通；
2. 污染；
3. 居住空间。
I live in a city in the south of China. There are more and more people coming to find jobs these years. This causes a lot of problems in my city.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案：例文】
I live in a city in the south of China. There are more and more people coming to find jobs these years. This causes a lot of problems in my city.
Because of the increasing population, in the rush hour there are too many cars, bikes and so on. Every time I go to school by bus, it is so crowded. And traffic accidents often happen. Many people are hurt or even die in the traffic accidents.
I think people should be allowed to go to work or school at different times. Everyone must follow the traffic rules carefully, or they should be punished.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一和第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍城市人口增长带来的交通问题；
第二步，具体描述了交通拥堵的情况；
第三步，提出了相关建议。
[亮点词汇]
①in the rush hour 在交通高峰期
②be allowed to do 被允许做某事
[高分句型]
①Every time I go to school by bus, it is so crowded. (时间状语从句)
②Everyone must follow the traffic rules carefully, or they should be punished. (被动语态)
4．国家开放二孩政策后，很多家庭都可能有新的成员加入，那我们的生活会怎样呢？你会为家里做些什么？假设你现在是家里唯一的孩子，请以"If I Have a New Brother or Sister"为题，阐述你的想法和理由。
If You Have a New Brother or Sister How will you feel Reasons
What do you want to say to your parents …
What will you do for your family/younger brother(sister) …
注意：1. 开头部分已写好，你只需接着写；
2. 文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名；
3. 所写内容必须包括表格中的各项内容，并至少写两条理由；
4. 词数：80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
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【答案：例文】
If I Have a New Brother or Sister
I think my life will be different if I have a new brother or sister. I'll be very happy. Because I'll have a younger brother/sister to play with and talk with. I want to say thanks to my parents. I will do something for my family. On weekends, I'll help my mum do some housework, such as cleaning the room and sweeping the floor. I'll learn to look after myself. Because my parents are too busy to look after both of us. After my younger brother or sister is born, I'll help my mother look after him/her. When I am free, I'll take him/her for a walk and play with him/her. And I'll help him/her with his/her study when he/she is old enough to go to school.
In a word, I'm getting ready for the coming of my younger brother/sister.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题属于说明文。写作时要注意文章的表格要求，叙述假如你有弟弟或妹妹，你的感受，你对父母说的话，将会为弟弟或妹妹做什么，并叙述相应的原因至少2点。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般将来时为主；表达的情感要积极向上；为家人所做的事也要贴合实际；叙述要完整，且保证条理清晰。
5．书面表达
61. 国家开放二孩政策后，很多家庭都可能有新的成员加入，那我们的生活会怎样呢？你会为家里做些什么？假设你现在是家里唯一的孩子，请以“If I Have a New Brother or Sister”为题，阐述你的想法和理由。
If you have a new brother or sister How will you feel Reasons
What do you want to say to your parents
What will you do for your family/younger brother (sister) ...
...
注意：（1）开头部分已写好，只需接着写即可；（2）文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名；（3）所写内容必须包括表格中的各项内容，并至少写两条理由；（4）词数：80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
If I Have a New Brother or Sister
I think my life will be different if I have a new brother or sister.
【答案：范文】
If I Have a New Brother or Sister
I think my life will be different if I have a new brother or sister. I’ll be very happy. Because I’ll have a younger brother/sister to play with and talk with. I want to say thanks to my parents. I will do something for my family. At weekends, I’ll help my mum do some housework, such as cleaning the room and sweeping the floor. I’ll learn to look after myself. Because my parents are too busy to look after both of us. After my younger brother or sister is born, I’ll help my mother look after him/her. When I am free, I’ll take him/her for a walk and play with him/her. And I’ll help him/her with his/her study when he/she is old enough to go to school.
In a word, I’m getting ready for the coming of my younger brother/sister.
【分析】这是一篇要求介绍自己如果有个弟弟或妹妹会是什么样的作文。现在在开放二孩政策以后，第一个孩子如何和自己的弟弟妹妹相处是一个明显的问题，第一个孩子应该理解父母，并且帮助父母照顾弟弟妹妹。
【详解】这是一篇要求介绍自己如果有个弟弟或妹妹会是什么样的作文。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称，一般将来时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
在帮助父母方面可以做家务，也可以带弟弟妹妹出去玩，I’ll help my mum do some housework, such as cleaning the room and sweeping the floor.此句用的结构式help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事，以及such as结构。
6．国家现在放开了二孩政策，很多人认为有一个兄弟姐妹很好，你认为呢？根据提示写一篇短文。
1．父母要花费更多时间和金钱，两个孩子会生气打闹；
2．有玩伴，不孤独，学会照顾别人，学会分享等；
3．……
注意：70词左右；短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
【答案：范文】
I am the only child in my family. I can get everything I want. If I have a sister or brother, my parents won't spend much time with me and they will spend more money in daily life. Two children may make noise at home. But children can learn to share something with others. They can look after each other. And they won't feel lonely. Anyway, I think two-child policy is good.
【详解】本文属于话题作文，表达针对国家开放二孩政策不同的人不同的观点，并阐述自己的观点。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯、符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好地完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如spend with、make noise、share...with...、look after、anyway以及“If I have a sister or brother, my parents won't spend much time with me and they will spend more money in daily life”中if引导的条件句用一般现在时，主句用一般将来时，即“主将从现”原则，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯、用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯。
【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如spend with、make noise、share...with...、look after以及“If I have a sister or brother, my parents won't spend much time with me and they will spend more money in daily life”等；然后紧扣要点、动笔写作。在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词等，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅，例如if和anyway。最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
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