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2025-2026学年七年级英语上册单元复习考点培优译林版（2024）Unit 6 My clothes, my style
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．你的学校要举办一届服装节，你要负责传统服装的介绍。中国的服装有着悠久的历史，最具代表性的有唐装（the Tang costume）、旗袍（cheongsam）……请你对这两种传统服装作个介绍。70词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计总词数。
提示词：traditional，history，stands for，become known to，popular
Ladies and gentlemen,
It’s my honour to introduce Chinese traditional costumes to you.
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That’s all. Thank you for listening.
2．你的朋友Simon非常喜欢时尚的衣服，他正在参加一场时装表演，请根据下面的提示对他作一下介绍，70词左右。文章开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
姓名 穿着 颜色 材料 效果
Simon cap grey — smart
shirt tie white dark blue cotton — cool
trousers shoes black black — leather match well
Simon likes fashionable clothes very much. He is attending a fashion show. Look！
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3．假如你是李华，上周末你在网上某服装店购买了一件毛衣。收到货后你发现衣服有问题，与客服（the customer service agent）理论，其服务态度（attitude）不好，而且不同意退换毛衣。因此你决定给经理写一封投诉信。
内容包括：
1.服装问题（颜色、尺寸……）。
2.服务问题。
3.提出解决方案。
要求：
1.80~120词，已给出部分不计入总词数。
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m writing to tell you about my experience in your clothing store.
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Yours,
Li Hua
4．学校将举行一场时装秀，要求同学们穿上自己设计的服装。请根据表格提示，描述你所设计的服装吧！
时间 下星期五
地点 学校礼堂
自己的设计 T恤衫 棉制的，鲜红色，V形领
牛仔裤 有大口袋，与T恤衫相配
衬衫 有纽扣，有长袖
运动鞋 皮革制的，舒适易穿……
个人感想 我希望……
要求：1.表达中必须包含所给要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译。2.词数80左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
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5．你班将举行服装设计展，你准备自己设计一套服装。请你根据表格内容写一篇短文，说明自己的设计思路。
The shirt white, cotton
Sports pants loose, comfortable
Trainers leather, white, modern
要求：1. 要点明确，语言流畅，可以适当拓展。2. 词数90左右。
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6．假设你是七年级（3）班的戴维，你参加了学校艺术节的“明日之星”才艺大赛，你将现场展示你设计的服装并用英文作介绍。请你根据以下提示，写一篇英文解说稿。
提示:
1.你的设计包括一件女式衬衫、一件夹克衫和一条裙子。
2.女式衬衫：白色，看起来干净又跟其他颜色搭配。真丝的，又光滑又柔软。
3.夹克衫：紫色，女孩们最喜欢的颜色。女孩穿紫色看起来时尚漂亮。
4.裙子：黑色，不太长也不太短，棉质，穿着舒服，很受年轻女孩欢迎。
注意:
1. 解说稿必须包括所给内容要点，但不要逐词翻译。
2. 70词左右，解说稿的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen. I am David from Class 3, Grade 7.
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I hope you like my design. Thank you!
7．假如有一个叫李华的男孩丢失了，他的家人正急着找他。请你根据表格里的内容，写一则不少于80词的寻人启事。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Name Li Hua
Age 8
From Nanjing
Look short, short black hair, round face, big eyes, small nose
Clothes a red cap, a white and yellow T-shirt, blue shorts, white shoes
Tel:1393-5628 Mr Li
This is Li Hua’s photo.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．假如你是学校英语俱乐部的通讯员，请你用英文为你校七年级正在举行的时装秀写一篇简报。
要点：
1.七年级的同学们正在学校艺术大厅内举行时装秀；
2.瞧，米莉走过来了。她穿着一件紫色的羊毛衫，一条棕色短裙和一双黑色长靴(boots)；
3.她的短裙是棉的，长靴是皮革的。她看起来很酷，也很时髦；
4.请来观看时装秀，入场券(ticket)价格为每人五元；
5.他们将用所得钱款帮助有需要的孩子们。
注意：
1.短文内容须包括所有要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2.70 词左右。
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9．假设你姐姐的婚礼将在下个月举行，为此，你打算为你的爸爸或妈妈或其他家人设计一套适合参加姐姐婚礼的服饰。请你写一篇英语短文，来介绍你选择设计衣服的风格、材质、颜色等，并说明理由。
注意事项：
1.选择为其中的一位家人设计衣服；
2.文章须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯，符合题意；
3.词数在70个左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
For my sister’s wedding,
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10．假设你们年级正在举办一场时装秀，请根据下面的几个要点问题，结合本单元所学的知识，写一篇 80词左右的英语短文，介绍一下这场时装秀的情况。
要点问题
1.When does it begin
2.Who is going for the fashion show
3.What clothes can you see at the show
4.What do you think of the show
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11．学校正在开展服装设计比赛，请你以“My Fashion Design”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍自己的设计。内容要点；
1.这是我设计的一件T恤衫、一条牛仔裤和一双运动鞋；
2.T恤衫是棉质的、白色的，它和其他任何颜色都好搭配；
3.牛仔裤在年轻人中很流行，所以我的设计还包括一条蓝色牛仔裤；
4.运动鞋是由皮革制成的，轻便、舒适，适合运动或远足；
5.其他同学的观点……
注意事项:
1.短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2.第5个内容要点需展开合理想象，用1—2句话作适当发挥；
3.词数70左右。
My Fashion Design
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12．假如最近你参加了校服设计大赛，设计了一套校服，请以“My fashion design为题写一篇短文，介绍你的设计以及设计理由。词数80左右，已给出部分不计入总词数。
My fashion design
Here is my design for a school uniform. I hope all the students will like it.
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13．写一篇短文，70词左右，介绍Simon，内容要点包括：
1. Simon是阳光中学七年级三班一名学生；
2. 他和他的同学正为希望工程(Project Hope)举行一次时装表演；
3. 他身穿一件黄色衬衫，由棉制成；
4. 穿一双黑色的皮鞋和一条白色裤子，与他的衬衫很配。白色与任何一种颜色都相配；
5. 他看起来既酷又摩登，在时装表演上他正玩得很高兴。
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14．中国传统服装越来越受年轻人的欢迎。假如《学习周报》正在以“Traditional Chinese Clothes”为主题举办征文活动。请根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文进行投稿。
1. 介绍你最喜欢的中国传统服装（风格、材质······）；
2. 喜欢的理由；
3. 如何向全世界推广的建议。
In recent years, more and more young people would like to try traditional Chinese clothes. They become a new fashion.
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15．请根据提供的相关信息写一篇不少于60词的短文，介绍我们的时装表演。
提示：下星期我们将举办一场时装表演，老师让我们涉及一些衣服和鞋。桑迪(Sandy) 设计了一件外套。这件外套是羊毛做的，很长但摸起来很舒服。米莉 (Millie) 设计了一条裙子是丝绸的，适合夏天穿。西蒙(Simon) 设计了一双靴子(boots)，是皮制(leather)的。所有的衣服和鞋看起来都很酷。
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________16．为了丰富校园文化生活并培养学生的创新能力，你校将举办一场时装设计大赛。请根据下列要点提示，以“My fashion design”为题写一篇70词左右的短文，简要介绍你的设计和搭配，可适当发挥。
要点：1. 女士衬衫：橙色，让人感觉开心。 2. 牛仔裤：深蓝色，与橙色互相衬托。
3. 夹克衫：深蓝色，棉质，不过长，也不过大。 4. 运动鞋：白色，轻便舒适，在年轻人中流行。
My fashion design
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17．请根据提示以“A Fashion Show”为题写一篇不少于90 词的短文，介绍一下同学们为时尚表演所设计的服装和鞋子。
要点：1.下星期我们将举办一场时装表演，老师让我们设计一些衣服和鞋子；
2. Sandy设计了一件外套，这件外套是羊毛做的，很长而且摸起来很舒服；
3. Millie设计了一条短裙，是丝绸做的，很多女孩喜欢它；
4. Simon设计了一双靴子，是皮制的；
5. 所有的衣服和鞋子看起来都很酷。
A Fashion Show
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18．假设你是七年级（3）班的戴维，你参加了学校艺术节的“明日之星”才艺大赛，你将现场展示你设计的服装并用英文作介绍。请你根据以下提示，写一篇英文解说稿。
提示：
1.你的设计包括一件女式衬衫、一件外套和一条裙子。
2.女式衬衫：淡黄色，女孩们最喜欢的颜色。
3.外套：深蓝色，和衬衫相配。
4.裙子：黑色，和其他任何颜色都相配，不太长也不太短，很受年轻女孩欢迎。
5.均为棉质，穿着舒服。
注意：
1.解说稿必须包括所给内容要点，但不要逐词翻译。
2.70词左右，解说稿的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen. I am David from Class 3, Grade 7.
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I hope you like my design. Thank you!
19．请根据提示，以“At the Fashion Show”为题，写一篇60词左右的短文。
1. 现在埃米和她的同学们在操场上举行时装表演。
2. 埃米穿的是一件红色丝绸衬衫、一条黑色棉短裙、一双红色长筒靴，她看上去很时髦。
3. 西蒙穿的是运动装和运动鞋。运动装是棉的，穿起来很舒服。运动鞋是黄白相间的，看上去很酷。
4. 多么棒的时装表演啊！人人都玩得很开心。
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20．假如你想参加时尚俱乐部，你要给俱乐部主席 Mr Brown写一封信，介绍自己的情况。内容包括以下要点：
1.名叫 Amy，15岁，高而苗条；
2.喜欢自己的生活方式，每天锻炼一小时，喜欢吃健康的食物，从不吃甜食，因为含太多糖分；
3.擅长游泳，喜欢看电视，周末经常和朋友一起去打篮球；
4. 经常看时装表演，喜欢穿黑色的短裙和红色的衬衫，因为这样看起来很酷；
5. 理想……
注意：1. 内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺；
2. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Dear Mr. Brown,
I’d like to join the Fashion Club.
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I hope I can be a member of your club.
Yours sincerely,
Amy
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Ladies and gentlemen,
It’s my honour to introduce Chinese traditional costumes to you.
First, let’s look at the Tang costume. The Tang costume stands for Chinese history and fashion culture. It has a long history. It became known to other countries during the Han and Tang dynasties. People can wear it on casual or formal occasions. It expresses both the wearer’s personal style and China’s rich traditional culture.
Now let’s see another Chinese traditional costume—cheongsam. People usually call the cheongsam “qipao” in most parts of China. It came into history in the Qing Dynasty and began to become popular in the 1920s. Now more and more people like it. Many foreign women like it, too.
That’s all. Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：一般现在时为主，部分涉及过去时；
③提示：根据题干所给信息介绍唐装和旗袍，适当添加细节，注意衔接词和句式多样性。
[写作步骤]
第一步：明确写作目的（介绍传统服装）；
第二步：分段介绍唐装和旗袍；
第三步：结束全文。
[亮点词汇]
①stands for象征
②on casual or formal occasions在非正式或正式场合
③come into进入
[高分句型]
①It expresses both the wearer’s personal style and China’s rich traditional culture.（both...and...连接并列成分）
2．【范文赏读】
Simon likes fashionable clothes very much. He is attending a fashion show. Look! He is wearing a grey cap. He looks smart in the cap. He is also wearing a white shirt and a dark blue tie. The shirt is made of cotton. He looks cool! Oh, look at his black trousers and black shoes. The shoes are made of leather. I think they match very well.
I really like his dressing style very much. Can you tell me your dressing style
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“现在进行时和一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“Simon非常喜欢时尚的衣服”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：按照从上到下的顺序依次介绍Simon的衣着，包括帽子、衬衫、领带、裤子和鞋子，重点介绍它们的颜色和材质以及穿上的效果。
第三步：总体评价。
[亮点词汇]
①a fashion show一场时尚秀
②be made of由……制成
③look at看
[高分句型]
①He is attending a fashion show. (现在进行时）
②I think they match very well. (宾语从句)
3．例文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m writing to tell you about my experience in your clothing store.
I bought a sweater there last weekend. When I received the sweater, I found that there was something wrong with it. First, its colour isn’t right. I bought a purple one, but the one I received is black. Second, I ordered a medium-size sweater but received a large-size one instead. Third, the sweater is even broken in some places. I talked to the customer service agent about the problems. But to my surprise, she was impolite and she refused to exchange it. I was deeply hurt by her attitude.
So, I’d like to give you some advice. First of all, you’d better improve your service. Then, you should change my sweater. At the same time, I hope you can say sorry to me.
I’m looking forward to receiving your reply soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先说明服装的问题，例如颜色和尺码都不对、破损等问题；
第二步，然后说明售后服务的问题，例如客服不礼貌、不同意退换货等；
第三步，最后提建议，给出解决方案。
[亮点词汇]
①talke to与某人交谈
②to my surprise 令我惊讶的是
③refuse to do sth. 拒绝做某事
[高分句型]
When I received the sweater, I found that there was something wrong with it.（when引导的时间状语从句）
4．One possible version:
We are going to have a fashion show in the school hall next Friday.
I am designing the clothes for myself. First, I design a cotton T-shirt. It is bright red and it is V- necked. Then I design a pair of jeans with lots of big pockets. They really go well with my T-shirt. I also design a cotton shirt with long sleeves and buttons on the front. My new trainers are very comfortable. They are made of white leather and they are easy to put on. White matches any other colour.
I hope everyone will like my design.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容，不要只是简单翻译。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题，学校将于下周五在礼堂举行一场时装秀；
第二步，根据表格提示介绍自己设计的服装的颜色、材质和亮点；
第三步，表达个人感想，希望大家喜欢自己的设计。
[亮点词汇]
①be made of由……制成
②a pair of一双
③be easy to易于……
[高分句型]
①Then I design a pair of jeans with lots of big pockets.（with短语作定语）
②I hope everyone will like my design.（宾语从句）
5．One possible version:
Our class is going to hold a fashion show. As a designer, here is my design for the show.
My design includes a shirt, a pair of sports pants and trainers. The shirt is white and it is made of cotton. I think white shirts look clean and that white matches any other colour. The sports pants are loose and comfortable. Young men in sports pants look energetic. The white leather trainers are popular with young people and they also look modern.
The shirt, sports pants and trainers are all very suitable to wear in the hot season.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、开篇点题，引出话题；
第二步、介绍自己设计的物品、颜色、材质以及设计思路；
第三步、书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①a pair of一条；一双
②be made of…由……制的
③any other任何其他的
④be popular with…受……欢迎
[高分句型]
①I think white shirts look clean and that white matches any other colour.(that引导宾语从句的省略)
6．例文
Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen. I am David from Class 3, Grade 7.
My design includes a blouse, a jacket and a skirt. The blouse is white, which looks clean and goes well with other colors. It is made of silk, so it’s smooth and soft. The jacket is purple. I think it is girls’ favorite color. Girls look fashionable and beautiful in purple. The skirt is dark and it matches the blouse well. It is not too long or too short. It’s made of cotton and is very comfortable to wear. It’s popular with young girls.
I hope you like my design. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单介绍自己；
第二步，具体阐述自己设计的作品；
第三步，书写结语，希望大家能够喜欢。
[亮点词汇]
①go well with和……很相配
②be made of由……制成
③be popular with受……欢迎
[高分句型]
①I think it is girls’ favourite colour.（省略that的宾语从句）
7．k例文
This is Li Hua’s photo. He is eight years old. He is from Nanjing. He is short. His hair is short and black. He has a round face. His eyes are big and his nose is small. He is in a red cap. His T-shirt is white and yellow. He is in blue shorts and a pair of white shoes. His dad and mom can’t find him. Please help us find him. Mr Li’s telephone number is 1393-5628. Thank you very much.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一则寻人启事；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、总体指出这里有一张走失者李华的照片；
第二步、具体介绍他的年龄、来自哪里、外貌及着装情况；
第三步、最后给出李先生的联系方式，请求人们帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①be from来自
②white and yellow白黄相间
③a pair of一双
④help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
Please help us find him.(祈使句)
8．例文
The students of Grade 7 are having a fashion show in the school art hall. Look! Here comes Millie. She’s wearing a purple wool sweater, a brown skirt and a pair of long black boots. Her skirt is made of cotton and the boots are made of leather. She looks cool and fashionable. Please come to watch the show. Each ticket is five yuan. The students will use the money to help the children in need.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直入主题，表明写作目的——时装表演；
第二步，介绍米莉的着装；
第三步，号召人们来看时装秀以及时装秀的门票的用途。
[亮点词汇]
①a pair of 一双
②be made of由……制成
[高分句型]
The students will use the money to help the children in need.（动词不定式作目的状语）
9．例文
For my sister’s wedding, I plan to design a purple qipao for my mother. My mother is tall and slim, and she has light skin. So I think a purple close-fitting qipao is perfect for her. The qipao is made of silk and has peonies on it. The silk qipao feels soft and smooth and it’s very comfortable to wear. Peonies on the qipao will make my mother look very pretty in it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“为了姐姐的婚礼，我打算为妈妈设计一件紫色旗袍。”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。要点——为妈妈设计衣服、衣服的类型和材质、图案等均要一一阐述；
第三步：书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①plan to do sth.计划做某事
②be made of由……制成
③feel soft感到柔软
[高分句型]
①So I think a purple close-fitting qipao is perfect for her. (宾语从句）
②The silk qipao feels soft and smooth and it’s very comfortable to wear. (and表并列)
10．例文
It is 2:00 p.m. now. The students and teachers in Grade 7 are having a fashion show in the school hall. Many students are wearing clothes designed by themselves to join in the show.
Sandy, from Class 2, is showing a coat. It is made of wool. Millie, from Class 3, is wearing a long silk dress. It’s fit for summer. Amy, from Class 4, looks pretty in a pair of leather boots.
I think those students are great and the show is wonderful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍你们年级举办的时装秀，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍时装秀的时间、参与人员；
第二步，介绍时装秀上的服装；
第三步，介绍对时装秀的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①be made of由……制成
②a pair of一双
[高分句型]
①Many students are wearing clothes designed by themselves to join in the show. (过去分词作定语)
②I think those students are great and the show is wonderful. (宾语从句)
11．例文
My Fashion Design
Here’s my design for a T-shirt, a pair of jeans and a pair of trainers.
The T-shirt is made of cotton. It's white. White matches any other colour, Jeans are popular among young people, so my design includes a pair of blue jeans. What about trainers The trainers are made of leather. They’re light and comfortable. They are fit for playing sports or a long walk. All the students are interested in my design. They think my design is very cool.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简介自己的设计内容。
第二步，从颜色、材质、用途等多方面详细介绍所设计的T恤、牛仔裤和运动鞋。
第三步，介绍其他同学的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①a pair of一双，一对
②be made of由……制成
③be fit for适合……
④be interested in对……感兴趣
[高分句型]
①White matches any other colour, Jeans are popular among young people, so my design includes a pair of blue jeans.（so引导的因果并列句）
②They think my design is very cool.（含有宾语从句的复合句）
12．例文
My fashion design
Here is my design for a school uniform, I hope all the students will like it.
The T-shirt is white. It is made of cotton and feels soft. White looks very clean and matches any other colour, Jeans are popular with students, so my design includes a pair of light blue jeans. It’s made of cotton too. Boys and girls all look smart in it. The sports shoes are made of leather. But they are light and comfortable to wear. Students can even wear them for many kinds of sports. They’re grey and go well with the T-shirt and jeans.
I believe my design will become a favorite among students.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，介绍个人设计的校服；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”，因为是在描述现在的设计及设计理念；
③提示：写作要点已隐含在题目中，即需要介绍校服的设计及其设计理由。考生应详细描述校服的设计特点，并清晰地阐述为何选择这样的设计。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接引出话题，即介绍自己的校服设计；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。详细描述校服的设计特点，包括颜色、款式、材质等方面，并解释每个设计特点背后的理由，如颜色选择如何体现学生的活力与朝气，款式设计如何兼顾舒适性与时尚感，材质选用如何注重耐用性与透气性等；
第三步，书写结语。可以表达对自己设计的自信以及对大家可能喜欢这套设计的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①be made of由……制成
②go well with与……相匹配
③be popular with受……欢迎
④become a favorite成为最爱
[高分句型]
①Jeans are popular with students, so my design includes a pair of light blue jeans.（so引导结果状语从句）
②I believe my design will become a favorite among students.（宾语从句）
13．例文
Simon is a student in Class 3, Grade 7 at Sunshine Middle School. He is having a fashion show for Project Hope with his classmates. Look! He is wearing a yellow shirt. It is made of cotton. He is wearing a pair of black leather shoes and a pair of white trousers. They match his shirt very well. White goes well with any other colour. He looks cool and modern and he is having a good time at the fashion show.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“现在进行时”与“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍Simon的基本信息；
第二步，根据题干中的要点，详细介绍Simon班上的时装表演以及Simon的穿着；
第三步，介绍Simon在这次活动玩得很开心，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①be made of由……制成
②have a good time玩得开心
[高分句型]
He looks cool and modern and he is having a good time at the fashion show.（and表并列）
14．范文：
In recent years, more and more young people would like to try traditional Chinese clothes. They become a new fashion.
Of all the traditional Chinese clothes, I like hanfu best. They’re usually loose with a belt. They’re made of different materials, like cotton and silk.
Hanfu are very beautiful. They’re suitable for people of all ages. They’re always comfortable to wear. So they’re popular with young people now.
Wearing hanfu is a good way to show our traditional culture to the world. Maybe we can have some hanfu festivals and give some hanfu shows in holidays.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己喜欢的中国传统服饰；
第二步，说明自己喜欢的理由；
第三步，提出向全世界推广的建议。
[亮点词汇]
① are made of由……组成
② are suitable for适合……
③ people of all ages各个年龄阶段的人
[高分句型]
①Wearing hanfu is a good way to show our traditional culture to the world.(动名词作主语)
②Maybe we can have some hanfu festivals and give some hanfu shows in holidays.(and并列句)
15．
We’ll have a fashion show next week. And the teacher asks us to design some clothes and shoes. Look! This is Sandy’s design. It’s a coat. It’s made of wool. The coat is very long but feels very comfortable. Millie’s design is a skirt. It’s made of silk. It’s fit to wear in summer. Simon’s design is a pair of boots. They are made of leather. All the clothes and shoes look very cool.
【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”，语态使用主动语态和被动语态；
③提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
【写作步骤】第一步，明确主题，我们将举办一场时装表演；
第二步，分别介绍桑迪，米莉和西蒙的设计；
第三步，发表自己对时装表演的看法。
【亮点词汇】①a fashion show时装表演
②be made of由……制成
③comfortable舒服的，舒适的
【高分句型】①The coat is very long but feels very comfortable. (but表示转折)
16．例文
My fashion design
My fashion design includes an orange blouse, deep blue jeans, a deep blue jacket, and white sports shoes. The orange blouse makes people feel happy. The deep blue jeans complement the orange of the blouse perfectly. The jacket is made of cotton and it is neither too long nor too big. The white sports shoes are light and comfortable, popular among young people. This outfit is both stylish and practical.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，介绍你的设计和搭配；
第二步，依据要点，细节介绍搭配亮点。
[亮点词汇]
①includes包括
②practical实用的
③is made of由……制成
[高分句型]
The white sports shoes are light and comfortable, popular among young people. (并列结构)
17．范文
A Fashion Show
Next week, we are going to have a fashion show. And the teacher asks us to design some clothes and shoes. Here are some of the classmates’ designs.
Look! This is Sandy’s design. It’s a white coat. It’s made of wool. The coat is very long and feels comfortable. And white matches any other colour well. Millie designs a skirt. It’s made of silk. A lot of girls like it. Simon’s design is a pair of boots. They are made of leather and very popular with many boys.
I think all the clothes and shoes look very cool.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍下周将举办一场时装表演；
第二步，根据提示内容介绍同学们设计的服装和鞋子；
第三步，最后表达看法。
[亮点词汇]
① ask sb to do sth让某人做某事
② be made of由……制造
③ be popular with受……欢迎
[高分句型]
I think all the clothes and shoes look very cool.（宾语从句）
18．例文：
Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen. I am David from Class 3, Grade 7.
My design includes a blouse, a coat and a skirt. The blouse is light yellow. I think it is girls’ favourite colour. The coat is dark blue and it matches the blouse very well. The skirt is black. It matches any other colour. The skirt is not too long or too short. It’s popular with young girls. They are all made of cotton and are very comfortable to wear.
I hope you like my design. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单介绍自己；
第二步，具体阐述自己设计的作品；
第三步，书写结语，希望大家能够喜欢。
[亮点词汇]
①be popular with受……欢迎
②be made of由……制成
[高分句型]
①I think it is girls’ favourite colour. (省略that的宾语从句)
19．例文：
At the Fashion Show
Now Amy and her classmates are having a fashion show in the playground. Amy is wearing a red silk blouse, a black cotton skirt and a pair of long red boots. She looks modern. Simon is wearing sports clothes and trainers. The sports clothes are made of cotton, and they are comfortable to wear. The trainers are yellow and white and they look cool. What a great show! Everyone is having a good time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“现在进行时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直入主题，表明写作目的——时装表演；
第二步，介绍埃米和西蒙的着装；
第三步，发表对这次表演的评价，并结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①a pair of 一双
②be made of由……制成
[高分句型]
①What a great show!（感叹句）
20．One possible version:
Dear Mr. Brown,
I’d like to join the Fashion Club. My name is Amy. I’m 15 years old. I’m tall and slim. I like my lifestyle. I exercise for one hour every day. I love healthy food. I never eat sweet snacks because there is too much sugar in them.
I am good at swimming. I like watching TV. I often play basketball with my friends at weekends. I often watch fashion shows. I like wearing a black skirt and a red blouse. I look very cool in them. I want to be a fashion designer when I grow up.
I hope I can be a member of your club.
Yours sincerely,
Amy
【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：按照要点信息进行写作，涵盖所有要点，可适当添加细节，突出写作的重点。注意开头和结尾已给出，只需添加正文。
【写作步骤】第一步，介绍自己的情况，包括姓名、年龄、身材和生活方式；
第二步，具体阐述自己擅长的运动、喜欢观看的电视和喜欢的穿衣风格；
第三步，最后谈谈自己的理想。
【亮点词汇】①too much 太多
②be good at擅长于
③want to be想成为
【高分句型】①I never eat sweet snacks because there is too much sugar in them.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②I want to be a fashion designer when I grow up.（when引导的时间状语从句）
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