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2025-2026学年七年级英语上册单元复习考点培优沪教版（2024）Unit 6 Travelling around Asia
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．你在英语课上通过“国际笔友计划”，认识了一位来自英国的网友Tom，上周Tom给你发了一封邮件，在邮件里分享了他的校园生活和周末爱好，还好奇地询问你的日常。现在需要你回复一封邮件，邮件需包括以下内容向他介绍自己，分享你的校园生活，并热情邀请他假期来广州游玩。
写作要求：
1. 自我介绍；
2. 描述校园里的活动和课程及你的感受；
3.简单介绍广州，邀请网友来广州旅行。
注意：
(1) 词数在60-80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数；
(2) 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Dear Tom,
I’m so happy to get your email. You asked about my life, so let me tell you something. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Su Wen
2．今年暑假，你跟你的爸爸一起去四川度假。假如在8月4日（星期一）这天，你们爬了山，并参观了动物园，看到很多大熊猫。请根据以下问题提示，写一篇日记，描述当天的情况。
提示：
1. How was the weather
2. Where did you go
3. Who did you go with
4. What did you do
5. How did you feel about the trip
写作要求：
1.文中须包含所给的要点提示，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3.词数70左右。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．假如你叫玲玲，是一名学生，你在暑假期间与家人去云南旅行了。请根据表格提示 给你的笔友Tony写一封电子邮件，分享你的旅行经历和感受。题目：My holiday
Place Yunnan
Time Summer holiday
Scenic Spots (景点) Dianchi Lake, Lijiang Ancient Town
Activities Rode bikes around the lake, enjoyed the beautiful scenery, took photos, tasted the delicious food...
Feelings Wonderful and relaxing...
要求：1.要求80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2.必须包括表格中所有信息，可以适当发挥。
Dear Tony,
I’m so happy to share my holiday with you
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I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Lingling
4．假如你是李华，在上周五参加了学校组织的郊游活动。请你以“A school trip”为主题，写一则英文日记，内容包括参加活动的人员、集合时间、郊游地点、交通方式、活动内容以及个人感受等。
提示词：和同学们去了；the Green Farm；摘苹果；学习、了解；喂动物；玩得很开心
要求：(1)80 词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3)日记中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
Friday, 13 April
It was sunny today. We went on a school trip.
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5．假如你是深圳中学生李华，你的美国笔友Alice打算明年来深圳度假，向你咨询来深圳的最佳季节，请你写一封邮件给她，向她推荐来深圳的最佳季节，并说明理由，包含以下内容：
一、描述推荐该季节的气候及植物变化；
二、描述推荐该季节的两项活动及原因。
Spring (1) fly kites (2)
Summer (1) eat ice cream (2)
Autumn (1) take picnics (2)
Winter (1) climb mountains (2)
（不少于80词）
Dear Alice,
Knowing that you will take a trip to Shenzhen next year. I think the best season for you to come to Shenzhen is
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Hope to see you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
6．假设你是埃米 (Amy),你正和你的三个好朋友在三亚度假。今天你刚收到好友张楠的邮件，询问你的度假情况。请你根据以下图片和要点提示，用英语给张楠回一封邮件，介绍今天三亚的天气情况及你们正在进行的活动。

Dave Lucy

Laura Amy
要点：
1. 你们此刻正在做什么；
2. 此刻的天气如何；
3. 你此刻的感受。
要求：
1. 70词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 不得出现真实的校名和人名。
Dear Zhang Nan,
I’m very glad to get your email.
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Yours,
Amy
7．假如你是来自美国的Sam，你有一位来自中国的笔友大明。你和你的家人这个冬天想去中国旅游。请你给大明写一封信，向他介绍一下你们想去中国哪个地方参观，以及你们为什么要去那里，在那里你们有什么具体打算。
参考词汇：visit, there is/are
要求：1.书写认真、规范、清晰。
2. 语句通顺，用词恰当，语法正确。
3. 在文章内不能出现真实校名和姓名。
4. 60词左右。开头结尾已给出，不算总词数。
Dear Daming,
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This is my travel plan. Do you have any better ideas Please write to me.
Yours,
Sam
8．假如你是高明，你正在澳大利亚的姑妈家度假，请根据表格信息，用相应的时态给你的北京好友张海写一封邮件。要求字数60词左右(可适度发挥)。
Name Gao Ming
Where Australia
Date July 15th
Weather snowing; cold
Activities (活动) “I”—watch a film with my aunt
“My uncle”—skate
“My cousins”—make a snowman
Feeling (感受) have a good time, relaxed
Dear Zhang Hai,
How is it going
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Yours,
Gao Ming
9．假设你是 Frank，你正在北京旅游，现在是早上九点，天气晴朗，请你根据提示，给你的朋友 Linda写一封电子邮件，描述一下北京的天气以及人们的活动，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Linda,
How’s it going
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See you soon.
Yours,
Frank
10．你去过中国哪些地方旅游？请你写一篇以“我的旅游经历”为主题的英语演讲稿，在英语课堂与同学们分享。
内容包括：
1. 介绍你记忆中最深刻的一次旅游；
2. 描述这次旅游的经历；
3. 你的感受。
要求：1. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2.语句连贯，词数70词左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! I am glad to share my last holiday journey with you.
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I hope I can visit it again next year.
11．同学们，开学了，你还记得暑假你去了哪里吗？和谁一起去的？乘何种交通工具去的？都发生了什么有趣的事情呢？请以“My Last Summer Holiday”为题写一篇作文。
要求：
1. 文中不能出现自己、朋友或家人的真实名字；
2. 条理清楚、意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写规范；
3. 不少于70词。
My Last Summer Holiday
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12．Mary制作了一个关于自己去年的旅行以及今年的旅行计划的思维导图，请你根据下面的思维导图内容，介绍一下Mary的旅行吧！
要求：语句通顺，语法正确，不少于50词。
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13．用英语讲好中国故事是每个中学生义不容辞的责任和光荣使命。“诗画丹江，醉美淅川”作为南水北调渠首所在地——淅川的宣传标语，吸引着全国各地的游客前来观光旅游。请你根据以下写作要点，用英语写一篇短文，介绍一下自己的家乡淅川，推荐给大家来淅川游玩。
写作要点：
1、家乡的地理位置、气候特点以及著名景区等；
2、友好善良的家乡人喜好哪些运动等；
3、表达自己对家乡的情感并欢迎大家来家乡观光旅游。
写作要求：
1、包含所给要点，可适当发挥；
2、条理清晰，语句通顺，句法正确，书写规范；
3、文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
4、开头已给出，不计入总词数，不少于80词。
参考词汇：名胜古迹 places of interest，香严寺Xiangyan Temple，坐禅谷Meditation Valley，丹江大观苑Danjiang Grand View Gardan，等等and so on.
Hello, everyone. I want to tell you something about my hometown—Xichuan.
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14．假如你是李华，你的加拿大笔友Tom准备来你的家乡——福州当交换生，他想提前了解一些有关福州的情况，请你模仿所给的范文给Tom写一封电子邮件，介绍美丽福州。词数在70个左右。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥；
2. 结构完整，意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 勿在文中使用真实姓名、校名。
Dear Tom,
How are you Let me tell you something about my hometown, Harbin.
There are four seasons in a year in Harbin. Summer is short and cool, while winter is long and cold. The best time to visit Harbin is in winter. It’s a good time to do winter sports. For example, you can ride bikes on the ice and make a snowman. To keep warm, you should bring some warm clothes and shoes.
Welcome to my hometown! You will have a good time here.
Yours,
Li Hua
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Word bank:
while 然而；当……时候 For example 例如
15．每个季节都有其独特的美，在不同的季节中我们感受着不同的风景，体验着不同的乐趣。相信你所在的城市冬天一定很美吧！假设你是李辉，请你以“Winter in my hometown”为题，写一篇英语短文，向大家介绍你所在城市的冬天。
要点：
1. 城市冬天的天气和景色；
2. 人们通常在冬天做什么；
3. 你的感受。
注意：
（1）词数80-100，标题已为你写好，不计入总词数；
（2）内容应包括所有的提示信息，可适当发挥；
（3）语句通顺、意思连贯、语法正确；
（4）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Winter in my hometown
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16．近日，新泰被评为“齐鲁炒鸡之乡”，很多外地游客想来新泰游玩。元旦假期，你邀请了两年未见的好友Wang Hao来领略新泰之最（最高的山，最大的公园，最美味的食物等）。请你根据以下问题，写一篇英语短文，介绍Wang Hao的变化及所见所闻。
内容提示：
1．What are Wang Hao’s differences before and now
2．What does Wang Hao do in his free time
3．Where did Wang Hao go and what did he do in Xintai
提示词：Qingyin Park, Mount Xinfu, fried chicken（炒鸡）
要求：
1．书写认真规范，词数不少于80词，开头已给出不计入总词数；
2．短文必须包括所有要点提示，语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；
3．文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
My friend Wang Hao came to Xintai for a trip a week ago. Let me tell you something about him and his trip.
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17．走遍中国，游历各地，一部“To the Wonder”（《我的阿勒泰》）让“新疆”成为不少人向往的旅行目的地。假设你是一名来自新疆的学生，请你根据以下提示，以“Welcome to Xinjiang”为题，写一篇英语短文，邀请更多的人走进你的家乡“新疆”。词数不少于80词。
要求：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥：
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范。
Welcome to Xinjiang
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18．假定你是阳光中学“文旅社团”的社长李华，你校新来的外教Sam向你咨询在工作之余他应如何游览深圳，深入体验本地生活。请你根据以下提示写一封邮件，给他合理的建议。
内容包括：
1. 深圳总体介绍 地理位置；花园城市；……（自行补充1点）
2. 旅游推荐 旅游景点；饮食体验；……（自行补充1点）
3. 美好祝愿 ……
要求：
1. 词数：至少60词（开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 包含所有要点，可适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名：
4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。
参考词汇：garden city花园城市；Window of the World世界之窗；morning tea早茶
Dear Sam,
I’m so glad to get your email and it’s my pleasure to tell you how to enjoy yourself in Shenzhen when you are free.
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I hope the advice will help you. And please don’t hesitate to contact me if you need any!
Yours,
Li Hua
19．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter来信询问你今年寒假的旅游计划，在北京和成都之间，你还没有决定选择哪个城市。请根据以下提示信息给他写一封回信。提示信息：
1.旅游频率：每年两次，寒假和暑假，因为这两个假期时间充足，可以去更远的城市。
2.北京的优点：比成都近；有中国最著名的大学北京大学、清华大学；有中国最大的博物馆故宫；北京的价格更便宜……
3.成都的优点：冬天比北京温暖；有动物中最可爱的熊猫花花；有各种你没有吃过的美味食物……
要求：
1.包含提示中的内容，可适当发挥；
2.不要出现真实校名和姓名；
3.词数：不少于 70 词。
提示词汇：北京大学：Peking University 清华大学：Tsinghua University 故宫：the Palace Museum
Dear Peter,
In your last letter, you asked me about my travel plans. I can‘t decide which city to go between Beijing and Chengdu.
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Yours,
Li Hua
20．寒假将至，假如你是李华，你的加拿大朋友 John准备来北京度寒假。请你向他简要介绍一下北京，用英文写一篇短文。
要点：
(1)北京的天气怎么样
(2)有什么名胜古迹 适合参加哪些活动
(3)春节期间人们做什么
要求：
(1)内容包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
(2)语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯，60—80词左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
(3)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
Dear John,
I’m very glad to tell you something about Beijing.
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Yours,
Li Hua
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文：
Dear Tom,
I’m so happy to get your email. You asked about my life, so let me tell you something. I am a middle school student from Guangzhou. My school life is busy but interesting. We have many activities like sports meetings and art festivals. I also enjoy English classes because they help me learn about different cultures.
Guangzhou is a beautiful city with delicious food and famous places, such as Canton Tower. If you have time, I would like to invite you to visit Guangzhou during the holiday. I am sure you will have a great time here!
Yours sincerely,
Su Wen
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏邮件中自我介绍、校园生活分享及邀请网友来广州旅行的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“很高兴收到你的邮件，让我来告诉你一些事情”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“自我介绍、校园活动及课程感受、广州介绍及邀请”几个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语。表达“相信你会在这里玩得开心”的祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①be busy but interesting忙碌但有趣
②such as例如
③have a great time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①I also enjoy English classes because they help me learn about different cultures.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②If you have time, I would like to invite you to visit Guangzhou during the holiday.（if引导的条件状语从句）
2．例文
August 4, Monday Sunny
Today was a wonderful day! The weather was sunny and warm. My father and I went to Sichuan for our summer vacation. In the morning, we climbed a beautiful mountain. In the afternoon, we visited the zoo and saw many lovely pandas. They were eating bamboo and playing happily. I felt very excited and happy because it was my first time seeing real pandas. This trip was amazing and unforgettable!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇日记；
②时态：为一般过去时；
③提示：需包含5个问题提示（天气、地点、同伴、活动、感受）。
[写作步骤]
第一步：用日记格式开头，简要概括当天整体感受；
第二步：按时间顺序描述具体活动，包括爬山和参观动物园；
第三步：用情感表达结尾，强调旅行的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①wonderful精彩的
②amazing令人惊叹的
③unforgettable难忘的
[高分句型]
I felt very excited and happy because it was my first time to see real pandas.（because引导的原因状语从句）
3．
例文：
Dear Tony,
I’m so happy to share my holiday with you. I went to Yunnan with my family during the summer holiday. We visited Dianchi Lake and Lijiang Ancient Town. At Dianchi Lake, we rode bikes around the lake and enjoyed the breathtaking scenery. We also took many photos there. Every photo was amazing! In Lijiang Ancient Town, we tasted delicious local food. The local people were really warm and friendly. I even didn’t want to say goodbye to them! The whole trip was relaxing and wonderful. I really missed the time there.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Lingling
【总体分析】①题材：电子邮件
②时态：一般过去时
③提示：需包含地点、时间、景点、活动和感受
【写作步骤】第一步：问候并总述旅行经历（如去了哪里、和谁一起）
第二步：详细描述景点和活动（按表格提示分点展开，适当补充细节）
第三步：表达感受（呼应表格中的“feelings”）
【亮点词汇】①breathtaking（令人惊叹的）——替换“beautiful”，增强表现力。
②delicious（美味的）——准确描述食物。
③relaxing（放松的）——直接体现旅行感受。
【高分句型】①We rode bikes around the lake and enjoyed the breathtaking scenery.（运用了并列动词结构，清晰描述活动与感受。）
②I really missed the time there.（运用了一般过去时和副词“really”，强调情感。）
4．
例文
Friday, 13 April
It was sunny today. We went on a school trip. All my classmates and I gathered at the school gate at 8:00 a.m. Then, we took a bus to the Green Farm. The trip took about 30 minutes. At the farm, we picked apples in the orchard and learned about how they grow. We also fed the animals, such as goats and chickens. It was very fun and interesting. I enjoyed the day very much and felt really happy.
It was a wonderful experience! With these memories, I learned a lot about nature.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇日记；
②时态：本文应使用“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，交代郊游活动的背景，包括时间，地点以及交通方式等；
第二步，详细描述活动内容；
第三步，表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②learn about学习关于
[高分句型]
①I enjoyed the day very much and felt really happy.（并列句）
5．例文
Dear Alice,
Knowing that you will take a trip to Shenzhen next year, I think the best season for you to come to Shenzhen is autumn. The weather is cool and dry, with temperatures around 20-25°C and clear skies. You can see beautiful plant changes, like leaves turning golden yellow in parks such as Lianhuashan Park, making the scenery very pretty.
There are many fun activities. First, taking picnics is great because the comfortable weather is perfect for relaxing outdoors. Second, visiting theme parks like Window of the World is enjoyable since you can explore without the summer heat or winter cold.
Hope to see you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写邮件的意图，介绍来深圳的最佳季节的理由；
第二步，具体阐述可以游玩的活动；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①take a trip旅行
②such as例如
③theme parks主题公园
[高分句型]
①First, taking picnics is great because the comfortable weather is perfect for relaxing outdoors.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②Second, visiting theme parks like Window of the World is enjoyable since you can explore without the summer heat or winter cold.（since引导的原因状语从句）
6．例文
Dear Zhang Nan,
I’m very glad to get your email.
It is sunny and hot in Sanya today, and I want to tell you that we are having a great time here. Dave is swimming in the sea. Lucy is playing with sand and a crab on the beach. Laura is playing beach volleyball. I’m relaxing on a chair under an umbrella and drinking some juice.
We feel so happy and relaxed. I think that Sanya is really a wonderful place.
Yours,
Amy
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“现在进行时”；
③提示：文章应该包含所有提示要点，可适当补充细节，使文章内容充实；行文时多使用第一、三人称，适当运用短语和多样句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，以收信喜悦开篇，礼貌引入；
第二步，介绍三亚天气与众人度假活动，体现游玩乐趣；
第三步，总结心情，评价三亚，收束全文。
[亮点词汇]
①have a great time玩得开心
②play beach volleyball玩沙滩排球
[高分句型]
①I think that Sanya is really a wonderful place. (宾语从句)
7．例文
Dear Daming,
This winter, my family and I plan to visit Beijing. There are many famous places and delicious food there. We want to see the Great Wall and the Forbidden City, because they are very old and beautiful. We also want to try Beijing Roast Duck. There is snow in winter, so it will be very nice.
This is my travel plan. Do you have any better ideas Please write to me.
Yours,
Sam
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：为“一般现在时和一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍想去哪里旅游以及原因；
第二步，介绍旅游的具体计划；
第三步，询问对方是否有更好的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①plan to do sth计划做某事
②want to do sth想要做某事
[高分句型]
①There are many famous places and delicious food there.（there be句型）
②We want to see the Great Wall and the Forbidden City, because they are very old and beautiful.（because引导原因状语从句）
8．例文
Dear Zhang Hai,
How is it going I’m having a wonderful time here in Australia. It’s July 15th today. The weather is cold and it’s snowing heavily. I’m watching an exciting film with my aunt now. My uncle is skating and my cousins are making a big snowman outside the house. Everything here is so interesting and beautiful. I feel very relaxed, happy and lucky to be here.
Yours,
Gao Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“现在进行时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：信件开头以及要点已经给出，需根据表格内容介绍假期的时间、天气、活动和感受，语言简洁自然，符合日常书信表达。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接信件开头，向好友张海问候，介绍自己正在澳大利亚度假；
第二步，具体描述时间、天气及家庭成员的活动（运用现在进行时）；
第三步，表达自己愉快、放松的心情，体现假期生活的美好。
[亮点词汇]
①have a wonderful time 玩得很开心
②make a snowman 堆雪人
③feel relaxed 感到放松
[高分句型]
My uncle is skating and my cousins are making a snowman outside the house.（并列句结构）
9．例文：
Dear Linda,
How’s it going I’m having a great time in Beijing. It’s nine o’clock in the morning now, and the weather is sunny. I’m at Beihai Park.
There are many people here. Some old men are doing Tai Chi, moving slowly and gracefully. A group of women are dancing to lively music, looking so happy. Kids are running around and playing games. Some people are taking photos of the beautiful scenery, trying to keep these nice moments.
I really enjoy the peaceful and lively atmosphere here. Beijing is such a wonderful city.
See you soon.
Yours,
Frank
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文（电子邮件），用于向朋友 Linda 描述北京北海公园的天气及人们的活动，分享旅游见闻；
②时态：以 “现在进行时” 为主，同时用“一般现在时”等辅助说明天气、个人感受等；
③提示：涵盖思维导图核心要点——个人信息、天气情况、公园里人们正在进行的活动、个人感受，内容完整且连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇交代背景。以“I’m having a great time in Beijing.”引出旅游场景，说明时间与天气，并点明所在地点，为后续描述铺垫；
第二步，描述公园活动。围绕不同人群（老人、女士、孩子、游客等），用现在进行时逐一说明他们正在进行的活动（打太极、跳舞、玩游戏、拍照等），通过“slowly and gracefully”“lively”等细节让活动场景更鲜活；
第三步，表达个人感受。以“I really enjoy the peaceful and lively atmosphere here. Beijing is such a wonderful city.”收尾，传递对公园及北京的喜爱，让邮件情感更饱满。
[亮点词汇]
①have a great time玩得开心
②lively music欢快的音乐
③beautiful scenery美丽的景色
④peaceful and lively atmosphere宁静又热闹的氛围
⑤wonderful美妙的
[高分句型]
①Some old men are doing Tai Chi, moving slowly and gracefully.（现在分词短语作伴随状语）
②Some people are taking photos of the beautiful scenery, trying to keep these nice moments.（现在分词短语 作目的状语）
10．参考范文
Hello, everyone! I am glad to share my last holiday journey with you.
Last summer, I traveled to Guilin with my parents. We took a boat ride on the Li River. The mountains there were strange and the water was clear. We also visited Reed Flute Cave, which was full of amazing rock formations. We took lots of beautiful photos there to remember the wonderful moments. The local people were very friendly and gave us many suggestions about delicious food. We tasted the famous Guilin rice noodles, and they were really tasty. The beautiful scenery made me feel relaxed and happy.
I hope I can visit it again next year.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为讲稿；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先介绍旅行的基本背景，包括旅行时间；
第二步，再根据提示内容描述、同行人员和旅行目的地，具体旅行行程。先写在漓江乘船的经历及所见景物，再写参观芦笛岩的体验，并提及拍照留念；然后讲述与当地人的互动及品尝当地美食，通过细节描写展现旅行特色； 以及旅行带来的感受。
第三步，最后表达对未来的期待，升华文章情感。
[亮点词汇]
①take a boat ride 乘船游览
②be full of 充满；满是
③beautiful scenery 美丽的风景
④feel relaxed 感到放松
[高分句型]
①Last summer, I traveled to Guilin with my parents.（时间状语“Last summer”置于句首，清晰交代叙事时间，“with my parents”作伴随状语，简洁说明同行人员）
②We also visited Reed Flute Cave, which was full of amazing rock formations.（which引导非限制性定语从句）
11．例文
My Last Summer Holiday
My summer holiday was wonderful! I went to a beautiful beach with my cousin. We went there by train. It was fast and comfortable.
We built a huge sandcastle on the beach and looked for pretty shells. I also learned to swim in the sea. What fun it was! In the evening, we watched the sunset together. The sky turned orange and pink, which looked like a painting!
We ate delicious ice cream every day. I really miss those happy times. I hope to go there again next year.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作需回应题干中的所有问题 (去了哪里、和谁、交通工具、趣事)，并在此基础上适当补充细节，使文章内容充实；行文时多使用第一人称，适当运用短语和多样句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，总述假期感受，并交代核心信息：去了哪里、和谁、交通工具等；
第二步，详细描写白天和晚上的具体活动，并通过比喻增强画面感；
第三步，总结假期体验，并表达怀念之情和未来期待。
[亮点词汇]
①by train 乘火车
②look for 寻找
[高分句型]
①What fun it was! (感叹句)
②The sky turned orange and pink, which looked like a painting! (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
12．例文
Last year, Mary went to Xinjiang. She rode a horse there, which was very interesting. She also went shopping and bought some nice things. Besides, she ate a lot of fresh food.
This year, Mary plans to go to Hangzhou. She wants to visit the West Lake. She is going to go boating on the lake and take many beautiful pictures.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，介绍人物的旅行经历与计划；
②时态：结合“last year”使用“一般过去时”，结合“this year”使用“一般将来时”；
③提示：介绍Mary去年的旅行情况以及今年的旅行计划。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍Mary去年去新疆的旅行，描述在新疆的活动；
第二步，说明Mary今年计划去杭州，讲述在杭州打算进行的活动；
第三步，整体呈现Mary不同年份的旅行安排，使内容完整清晰。
[亮点词汇]
①interesting有趣的
②fresh新鲜的
③plan计划
④beautiful美丽的
[高分句型]
①She rode a horse there, which was very interesting.（此句使用“which”引导的非限定性定语从句，对“rode a horse”这件事进行补充说明，丰富句子结构。）
②She is going to go boating on the lake and take many beautiful pictures.（运用“be going to”结构表示将来的计划，清晰表达未来的动作安排。）
13．例文
Hello, everyone. I want to tell you something about my hometown—Xichuan.
Xichuan is a beautiful city in the south of Henan. The climate here is very nice. It is not too hot in summer and not too cold in winter. There are many places of interest in my hometown, such as Xiangyan Temple, Meditation Valley, Danjiang Grand View Gardan and so on. They are very beautiful and many people come to visit them every year. The people here are very friendly and they like doing different kinds of sports like running and swimming. My hometown is very beautiful. I love it very much.
Welcome to my hometown.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、开篇点题，引出话题；
第二步、介绍家乡的地理位置、气候特点以及著名景区等；
第三步、介绍友好善良的家乡人喜好哪些运动等；
第四步、表达自己对家乡的情感并欢迎大家来家乡观光旅游。
[亮点词汇]
①in the south of…在……的南部
②places of interest名胜古迹
③such as例如
④different kinds of不同种类的
[高分句型]
①There are many places of interest in my hometown, such as Xiangyan Temple, Meditation Valley, Danjiang Grand View Gardan and so on.(there be句型)
14．例文
Dear Tom,
How are you Let me tell you something about my hometown, Fuzhou.
Fuzhou is in the southeast of China. Spring is warm and wet, while autumn is cool and dry. The best time to visit Fuzhou is in spring. It’s a great time to enjoy beautiful flowers and green hills. And you can visit Three Lanes and Seven Alleys where there are many old buildings. You can also try delicious food like fish balls.
Welcome to Fuzhou! You will have a great time.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍福州位置、气候、景点以及美食；
第二步，表达欢迎。
[亮点词汇]
①enjoy享受
②delicious美味的
③have a great time玩得开心
[高分句型]
And you can visit Three Lanes and Seven Alleys where there are many old buildings.（定语从句）
15．例文：
Winter in my hometown
Hello! Welcome to my hometown. It’s a beautiful place to visit in winter. My favourite season is winter.
Winter in my hometown is a season of contrast. The weather can be quite cold with temperatures often dropping below freeing and snowfall is very common. The landscape is often blanketed in a layer of white, creating a beautiful scene.
People here enjoy various winter activities, such as ice skating on the frozen lake or skiing in the nearby mountains. Families gather indoors to share warm meals and stories around the table.
I find the winter in my hometown to be enchanting. It is a time for reflection and togetherness.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作句式已给出，考生应注意紧扣要点并适当拓展.。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。用“欢迎来到我的家乡”引出下文。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。描述城市冬天的天气和景色、人们通常在冬天做什么。
第三步，书写结语。表达我的感受，进行情感升华。
[亮点词汇]
①common常见的
②scene景色
③togetherness和睦相处
[高分句型]
①I find the winter in my hometown to be enchanting.（宾语从句）
16．例文
My friend Wang Hao came to Xintai for a trip a week ago. Let me tell you something about him and his trip.
When we first met, Wang Hao was a shy and introverted individual. He found it difficult to express his thoughts and often hesitated to participate in group activities. His academic performance was also not up to the mark, mainly due to his lack of confidence.
Now, he is much different from before. He has learned a lot more, and become more outgoing. He has a lot of things to do in his spare time. he usually takes exercise after school. He likes basketball and volleyball very much. Sports help him to keep healthy and study better. He often watches TV or does some reading in the evening. Sometimes he listens to music for a while. He finds it a good way to relax himself. In Xintai. We come to Qingyin Park and Mount Xinfu. They’re the biggest park and mountain in Xintai. And we eat fried chicken, it’s very delicious.
We have a good time in Xintai. I hope Wang Hao can come here again next time.
【详解】【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，具体阐述内容提示中给出的问题，适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
【写作步骤】
第一步，表明写作意图。介绍关于好朋友的一些事情以及此次旅行。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从所给出的问题“好朋友的前后变化，空闲时间做的事以及此次旅行主要玩的和吃的”几个方面来介绍具体情况。
第三步，书写结语。希望好朋友下次再来新泰。
【亮点词汇】
①spare time空闲时间
②keep healthy保持健康
③for a while一会儿
④have a good time玩得开心
【高分句型】
He finds it a good way to relax himself.（find it＋adj＋to do sth“发现做某事是什么样的”句型）
17．例文
Welcome to Xinjiang
Hello, everyone! I’m a student from Xinjiang, and I’m so excited to invite you to visit my hometown.
Xinjiang is located in the northwest of China. It has a dry climate with little rain. The land here is full of wonders, with deserts, grasslands, mountains, and beautiful lakes. You can see many wild animals running freely in the wild. Xinjiang is also famous for its delicious fruits, like grapes and Hami melons. They are so sweet and juicy that you can’t stop eating them. You can go hiking and trekking in the mountains. You can also explore the ancient Silk Road sites and learn about the history.
I hope you can come and visit my hometown soon!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的家乡——新疆，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，根据提示内容详细介绍新疆的相关信息；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be located in坐落于
②be famous for因为……而闻名
③can’t stop doing sth.忍不住做某事
[高分句型]
①They are so sweet and juicy that you can’t stop eating them. (so...that引导的结果状语从句)
②I hope you can come and visit my hometown soon! (宾语从句)
18．例文
Dear Sam,
I’m so glad to get your email and it’s my pleasure to tell you how to enjoy yourself in Shenzhen when you’re free. Shenzhen lies in the south of China. It is known as a garden city because of its beautiful scenery. It’s also a modern city with tall buildings everywhere. Shenzhen is known as a garden city, with beautiful scenery everywhere.
Firstly, you can visit the Window of the World, where you can see many famous attractions from all over the world in miniature. It’s a great place to take pictures and learn about different cultures. Secondly, don’t miss the local food in Shenzhen. You can try the morning tea, which is very famous. There are various kinds of delicious dim sum, such as shrimp dumplings, barbecued pork buns, and egg tarts. You can enjoy a relaxing morning while tasting the delicious food.
I hope the advice will help you. And please don’t hesitate to contact me if you need any!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文。
②时态：一般现在时。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中关于深圳的介绍要点, 适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总体介绍深圳的概况，地理位置，花园城市，现代化城市等。
第二步，详细介绍深圳的旅游景点，如世界之窗，品尝当地美食，早茶等。
第三步，书写结语，表达美好祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①be known as被称为……
②a great place to do sth.做……的好地方
③learn about了解
[高分句型]
①Firstly, you can visit the Window of the World, where you can see many famous attractions from all over the world in miniature. (where引导的定语从句)
②You can try the morning tea, which is very famous. (which引导的定语从句)
③There are various kinds of delicious dim sum, such as shrimp dumplings, barbecued pork buns, and egg tarts. (there be句型)
19．One possible version:
Dear Peter,
In your last letter, you asked me about my travel plans. I can’t decide which city to go between Beijing and Chengdu.
I usually travel twice a year during the winter and summer vacations. These vacations are long enough for me to visit farther cities. Beijing is closer than Chengdu. It has the most famous universities in China, like Peking University and Tsinghua University. And the largest museum in China the Palace Museum is in Beijing, too. The cost of traveling in Beijing is cheaper than that in Chengdu.
As for Chengdu, it’s warmer than Beijing in winter. The most lovely panda, Huahua, lives in Chengdu. Besides, there are all kinds of delicious food that I’ve never tasted.
What do you think
Yours
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出；
第二步，介绍北京的优点；
第三步，介绍成都的优点。
[亮点词汇]
①as for至于
②all kinds of各种各样的
[高分句型]
①It has the most famous universities in China, like Peking University and Tsinghua University.（形容词最高级）
20．例文
Dear John,
I’m very glad to tell you something about Beijing. Bejing is the capital city of China. It has a long history and it is very beautiful You can see Tian’anmen Square, the Palace Museum and the Great Wall. They are famous all around the world. It’s winter in Beijing. The weather is cold and snowy. You can go skating or make a snowman. The Spring Festival is coming. Chinese people usually eat dumplings and get together with their families and friends.
Welcome to Beijing! I hope you can have fun in Bejing.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】【总体分析】
题材：本文是一封书信。
时态：一般现在时。
提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点内容，可适当发挥。注意写作时要按第一人称写。
【写作步骤】
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍北京。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍北京的地理位置、天气、旅游景点、春节期间人们做的活动等。
第三步，书写结语，欢迎John到北京来，并且希望他在北京玩得开心。
【亮点词汇】
①the capital of ……的首都
②all around the world 全世界
③make a snowman 堆雪人
【高分句型】
I hope you can have fun in Beijing.（省略that的宾语从句）
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