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2025-2026学年七年级英语上册单元复习考点培优仁爱科普版
（2024）Unit 5 Love Mother Nature!
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假如你是李华，你的美国友Paul听说你家有个很大的院子，院子里有很多的动物和植物，他对此很感兴趣。请根据要点提示发挥想象。用英语写一篇不少于60词的电子邮件向他简单介绍一下你家的院子，邮件的格式已给出，不计入总词数。
要点如下：
1. What animals and plants do you have in your yard
2. How many animals and plants do you have
3. Where are the animals
4. What colour are they
Dear Paul,
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Yours,
Li Hua
2．为了帮助学生们亲近大自然，认识和了解植物，某中学决定成立植物俱乐部。假如你是该俱乐部的负责人，请你根据下面的提示信息及写作要求写一篇英语短文，介绍一下这个植物俱乐部。
The plant club
时间 每周六上午八点半
活动 ◆参加关于植物的课堂 ◆去野外观察植物 ◆……
益处 ●学到更多关于植物的知识 ●结交有相同爱好的朋友
写作要求：
1.文中须包含表格中的要点提示，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3.词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Do you love plants Do you want to learn more about plants Let me introduce our new club—the plant club to you.
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3．假如你是李华，你的外国笔友Eric听说植物在中国传统文化中具有特殊意义，请你给他写一封信。介绍一种具有文化意义的植物——竹子。请根据导图和如下提示，完成这封信。
注意：
1.书信必须包括所有以下要点，并适当发挥。
2 .文中不得出现真实的人名和校名：
3.词数60左右：开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Eric,
I'm glad to introduce bamboo to you. In China, bamboo has a special meaning.
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Yours,
Li Hua
4．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出真实的校名和姓名。
某英文网站正在开展以“植物的力量”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍你最喜欢的一种植物，并说说你为什么喜欢它。
提示词语：tall, breathe, beautiful, food, joy
提示问题：
· What is your favourite plant Please describe (描述) it.
· Why do you like it
The power of plants
Plants are very important to us.
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5．河南省豫甲足球联赛12月将在南阳举行。全国各地的足球迷到南阳来观看比赛。假如你是南阳人李华，你作为本场足球赛的解说员，用英语写一篇短文。
要求如下：
①先向各地的朋友介绍下你的家乡南阳。
In the north of China; seasons; noodles (面条)
Nanyang yellow cattle (南阳黄牛); birds; flowers
②播报本场比赛的相关情况。
Now; Wang Junfeng’s team; at the start; give up; keep; pass; in the end; win
③感受
短文必须包括上面涉及的全部信息，适当发挥，书写规范。词数不少于70个。
My Hometown’s Football Game
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6．中国有许多独特的动物，其中大熊猫深受全世界人民的喜爱。请你根据下面有关大熊猫的资料，用英语写一篇短文，向大家介绍一下大熊猫。
写作要求：
1. 文中须包含表格中所提示的全部要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名或校名；
3. 词数70个左右。
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7．假如你是王勇，你的加拿大笔友Henry想了解你的家乡，并为此写了一封信给你。请你根据所给提示信息用英语写一封回信，向他介绍你的家乡并欢迎他前来旅游。
提示：
1. location & climate
2. animals or plants
3. food
4. people
要求：
1.短文须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2.语言表达要准确，语句通顺，意思连贯；
3.词数不少于60。信的格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Henry,
You asked me about my hometown in your last letter.
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Yours,
Wang Yong
8．英语课上，老师让学生们把收集到的关于亚马孙热带雨林和撒哈拉沙漠的资料进行整理讨论。请你根据他们搜集的资料，用英语写一篇介绍亚马孙热带雨林或撒哈拉沙漠的短文，分享给同学们。
Name Amazon Rainforest Sahara Desert
Location (位置) in South America in the north of Africa
Climate hot and wet hot and dry
Plants over 80,000 kinds, such as bananas and hot lips About 500 kinds, such as desert roses and olive trees (橄榄树)
Animals monkeys, snakes, birds... camels, desert foxes...
写作要求：
词数不少于 60个。
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9．老虎是中国的国家一级保护动物，深受人们喜爱。请你根据表格中的信息写一篇英语短文，把这只老虎介绍给你的好朋友。
Name Huahua
Age Five
Appearance (外表) Orange with black stripes; big eyes; strong; majestic (雄伟的) and cool
Favorite food Meat
Hobbies Run and hunt
写作要求：
1. 文中须包含表格中所提示的全部要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名或校名；
3. 词数70个左右。
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10．中国动物的种类非常丰富，有些动物是中国所特有的。请你根据下面有关金丝猴的资料，用英语写一篇短文，向大家介绍一下金丝猴。
名称 金丝猴 (Golden Monkey)
颜色 黄色或黑色
分布 中国西南部 (in the southwest of China)
特点 群居 (live in groups)；以树叶 (leaves) 和水果为食
现状 人类的捕杀 (kill) 导致它们处于危险之中 (in great danger)
写作要求：
1. 文中须包含表格中所提示的全部要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名或校名；
3. 词数70个左右。
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11．熊猫是中国的国宝，人们都喜欢它们。请你根据表格中的信息写一篇英语短文，把这只熊猫介绍给你的好朋友。
Name Xiaopang
Age Eight
Appearance (外表) Black and white; big eyes; fat (胖的); gentle (温和的) and cute
Favorite food Bamboo
Hobbies Climb trees and swim
写作要求：
1. 文中须包含表格中所提示的全部要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名或校名；
3. 词数70个左右。
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12．现在我们周围的环境污染越来越严重。作为中学生，我们应节约资源，保护环境，从我们身边的小事做起。请你用英语写一篇倡议书，投稿给你校的英文校报。内容包括：
必要性 地球是我家，必须保护地球
不良现象 1. 离开房间不关灯 2. 把垃圾扔进河里(补充1点不良现象)
建议 1. 节约用水、用电 2. 你的1—2条建议
　　参考词汇：电(electricity)
注意：词数70左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Good morning, everyone. I am glad to share my ideas about protecting the environment in our daily lives.
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13．某英文网站正在开展以“植物的力量”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍一种植物，并说说你为什么要选择这种植物。
提示问题:
(1) What is its name
(2) Where does it grow
(3) Why did you choose it
(4) What are some interesting facts about it
要求:1.词数80以上；2.开头已给出，不计入总词数；3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
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14．大家都知道植物对我们人类、动物以及周围环境都非常重要。假如你叫李华，请你根据以下思维导图的提示，以“Why Are Plants Important”为题从三个方面谈论一下植物的重要性，呼吁大家要爱护花草树木。
Why Are Plants Important
For people: produce oxygen for us to breathe, get food, medicine ... For animals: live in the forest, eat the fruit ... For the environment: clean the air, protect soil from washing away ...
提示：土壤soil；有害气体harmful gases。
要求：
1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息；
4. 词数80左右。
Why Are Plants Important
Plants are very important for people, animals and the environment. Now let me introduce the importance of plants to you.
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15．在我们周围有很多重要的东西，如trees, water, electricity…等等。请以 ________ is/ are important in our daily life (________ 在我们日常生活中是重要的)为题写一篇不少于60个字的短文，标点符号不占格。
Suggested questions:(必须包括下列内容)
What is important in our daily life
Why is it important / Why are they important
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16．假如你就读于洛阳某双语学校，下节英语口语课老师要求同学们介绍你市的市花——牡丹。请你根据从网上搜集整理的资料，用英语写一篇短文为口语课的发言做准备。
洛阳市的市花——牡丹
英文名 peony
地位 花中之王（king of flowers）
花色 红、粉、白、蓝、绿等，花色丰富
品种 1200多种
节日 每年4月到5月期间，中国洛阳牡丹文化节（The Peony Culture Festival of Luoyang China）
用途 观赏、食用、药用
注意：
（1）短文须包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
（2）语句通顺、意思连贯、语法正确；
（3）不少于70词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Hi, everyone! I’m happy to tell you something about peonies, our city flower.
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17．Dear friends,
I’m Simon. I am studying a plant at school this week. My teacher asks me to plant a plant by myself. But I don’t know what I should plant and where I should plant it. I also wonder how to look after it. Help me, please! Simon
假如你在网上看到了Simon的求助贴，请以“My blog about planting”为题给他回帖，提出一些合理的建议吧。
要求: 1.包含所有要点，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯;
2.70 词左右。
My blog about planting
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18．树木为人类提供木材，为动物提供食物和居住的场所，树木还能影响环境和气候。但是在有些地方，人们砍伐太多树木。请根据以下提示信息用英语写一篇短文，倡议大家一起保护树木。
内容提示：（1）阐述树木的重要性；（2）提出保护树木的建议（两至三点）。
写作要求：（1）文中须包含所有要点提示，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
（3）词数70左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：provide提供；wood木材；cut down砍倒；one-off一次性的；chopsticks
筷子；waste paper浪费纸张；plant trees种树
Trees are very important to people and animals.
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19．植物对人类、动物以及周围环境都非常重要。假如你叫李华，请你根据以下思维导图的提示，以“The Importance of Plants”为题从三个方面谈论一下植物的重要性，呼吁大家爱护花草树木。
要求：
(1)参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
(2)语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
(3)文中不得出现你的任何真实信息；
(4)词数不少于70。
The Importance of Plants
We all know plants are very important for us humans, animals and the environment. Now, let me introduce the importance of plants to you.
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In a word, plants are so important for us. We should protect them and try our best to plant more of them.
20．众所周知，树木对人类的生产和生活起着至关重要的作用，请你根据以下思维导图内容提示,以“The importance of trees”为题，用英语写一篇短文，说明树木对人类的重要性。
注意：
(1) 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
(2) 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。
(3) 语句连贯，词数60左右。作文的标题已经给出，不计入总词数。
The importance of trees
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Dear Paul,
How is it going I’m happy to tell you about my yard.
There are two ducks and some chickens. The ducks are yellow and in the small pool. The chickens are brown and near the trees. There are also many green trees and red flowers.
I love my yard. You can come to visit it someday.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章围绕自家院子里的动植物展开，涵盖种类、数量、位置、颜色等要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开头问候并点明主题，说明自家院子有很多动植物；
第二步：介绍院子里的动植物，包括种类、数量、位置和颜色；
第三步：表达对院子的喜爱，邀请对方来参观。
[亮点词汇]
① pool池塘
② near在……附近
③ visit参观
[高分句型]
① There are two ducks and some chickens. (There be句型)
2．One possible version:
Do you love plants Do you want to learn more about plants Let me introduce our new club—the plant club to you.
We meet at 8:30 a. m. every Saturday morning. There are lots of different activities in the club. You can have classes about plants. You can go to the wild to watch different plants. You can even grow some plants yourself!
In the club, you can learn more about plants and make new friends with the same hobby. You can also get close to nature and have a good time.
Come and join us! Let’s share the joy of learning about plants together.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍植物俱乐部的时间和各项活动；
第二步，介绍参加植物俱乐部的益处；
第三步，对加入俱乐部表示欢迎。
[亮点词汇]
①get close to接近，靠近
②have a good time玩得开心
③the joy of ……的快乐
[高分句型]
There are lots of different activities in the club. （there be句型）
3．例文
Dear Eric,
I’m glad to introduce bamboo to you. In China, bamboo has a special meaning. We always see bamboo as the symbol of persistence.
Bamboo grows in the south of China. It can grow very tall. In spring, baby bamboo comes out of the earth, and we call it sun. We can cook dishes with it. It is very delicious. In summer and autumn, it grows taller and taller with green leaves. However, it isn’t like other trees. It’s hollow inside its body.
People will cut bamboo down to make furniture when it is tall enough. People also like to draw bamboo to show its spirit and use bamboo to represent modesty and honesty.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点通过导图已给出，考生应根据写作要点，给艾瑞克写一封书信，给他介绍一种具有文化意义的植物——竹子。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接给出的句子，介绍竹子的意义；
第二步，具体阐述竹子的生长环境、竹子的特点和用途；
第三步，介绍竹子的象征精神。
[亮点词汇]
①introduce...to把……介绍给……
②see...as把……视为
③in the south of在……南部
[高分句型]
People will cut bamboo down to make furniture when it is tall enough. (when引导的时间状语从句)
4．例文
The power of plants
Plants are very important to us. People can breathe fresh air from plants. My favorite plants are trees. There are all kinds of trees. Some trees are tall and some are short. Some trees have beautiful flowers and bring joy to us. Some trees don’t have flowers, but they can provide fresh air for us. The trees are useful to us. Not only can they make food for animals and birds, but also they can protect the soil. Thanks to the plants around us, we can live on earth.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为说明文。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中自己喜欢的植物的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍你最喜欢的一种植物，并说说你为什么喜欢它。”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“植物的重要性、自己喜欢的植物、原因等”几个方面重点介绍自己喜欢的植物的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，表达“多亏了我们周围的植物，我们才能生活在地球上。”感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①all kinds of各种各样的
②provide sth for sb给某人提供某事
③be useful to对……有用
④thanks to幸亏，由于
[高分句型]
①There are all kinds of trees. (“there be”句型)
②Not only can they make food for animals and birds, but also they can protect the soil. (倒装句)
5．例文
My Hometown’s Football Game
My name is Li Hua. Welcome to visit our hometown. I’m very happy to tell you something about Nanyang.
Nanyang is an old city in the north of China. It has a long history. Now There are four seasons in a year. It’s warm in spring. It’s hot in summer. It’s cool in autumn. It’s cold in winter. People like to eat noodles. There are many kinds of animals and plants there, like Nanyang yellow cattle, birds, beautiful flowers and so on.
Now, there is a football game. At the start, Wang Junfeng’s team is not playing very well. But he doesn’t give up. He keeps running and passing the ball. In the end, he win the game.
I love Nanyang, I love our sports. You will have a good time here.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给的要点提示完成写作，注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单介绍自己，并引出下文对南阳的介绍；
第二步，从地理位置，季节，美食等方面介绍你的家乡南阳；
第三步，播报本场比赛的相关情况；
第四步，并表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① tell sb about sth告诉某人关于某事
② many kinds of许多种
③ give up放弃
④ have a good time玩得开心
[高分句型]
I’m very happy to tell you something about Nanyang.（不定式作原因状语）
6．范文：
The Giant Panda is a unique animal in China. It is deeply loved by people all over the world. It is black and white. It’s very cute. It lives in the southwest of China. Giant Pandas like eating bamboo and spend most of their time sleeping. They are protected, but their number is still small. We should try our best to protect them.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出写作的主题，要介绍大熊猫；
第二步，具体介绍大熊猫的外貌特征、分布、饮食和日常活动等；
第三步，介绍大熊猫的现状，呼吁人们保护大熊猫。
[亮点词汇]
① in the southwest of China在中国的西南部
② try our best尽我们最大努力
[高分句型]
① Pandas like eating bamboo and spend most of their time sleeping.（like doing sth 句型）
② They are protected, but their number is still small. （被动语态）
7．例文
Dear Henry,
You asked me about my hometown in your last letter. Let me tell you something about it. My hometown is a small town in Henan. It is in the south of Henan. It is small but it is a great place to live. The climate is different in four seasons. There are many small hills with a lot of green trees. In summer, a lot of people like going hiking here. Our main food is noodles. The people here are very friendly. Welcome to my hometown.
Yours,
Wang Yong
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍家乡的地理位置、气候、动植物、饮食和人文等；
第三步，书写结语，表示对朋友的欢迎。
[亮点词汇]
①in the south of在……南部
②a lot of许多
③like doing sth喜欢做某事
[高分句型]
There are many small hills with a lot of green trees.(There be句型)
8．例文
Amazon Rainforest
The Amazon Rainforest is in South America. It’s hot and wet. It is home to many plants and animals. The plants grow fast and well. The kinds of plants are over 80,000, such as bananas and hot lips. They can give much food to the animals, so you can see different kinds of animals like monkeys, snakes, birds and so on.
Sahara Desert
The Sahara Desert is in the north of Africa. It’s big. The climate of the Sahara Desert is very hot. It’s also very dry and rains little. There are only about 500 kinds of plants, such as desert roses and olive trees. There you can see animals like camels, desert foxes and so on. Do you want to go and see them
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时态；
③提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏表格中的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，直接介绍亚马孙热带雨林或撒哈拉沙漠；
第二步，具体阐述亚马孙热带雨林或撒哈拉沙漠的位置、气候、植被、动物等；
第三步，书写结语，表达对马孙热带雨林或撒哈拉沙漠的美丽自然风光的向往。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②different kinds of不同种类的
③want to do sth.想要去做某事
[高分句型]
①They can give much food to the animals, so you can see different kinds of animals like monkeys, snakes, birds and so on. (结果状语从句)
②There are only about 500 kinds of plants, such as desert roses and olive trees. (There be句型)
9．参考范文：
Huahua is a tiger. It is five years old. Huahua has an amazing appearance. Its fur is orange with black stripes. It has big eyes. Huahua looks very strong, majestic and cool. Its favorite food is meat. Huahua likes running and hunting. It is a precious animal that we should protect.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中所给信息，均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开门见山直奔主题，开始介绍老虎花花。
第二步：按照所给表格信息对老虎花花的情况进行介绍。
第三步：书写结语。表达应保护老虎的呼吁。
[亮点词汇]
①like doing喜欢做
[高分句型]
①It is a precious animal that we should protect. (定语从句）
10．例文
Good morning, everyone! Today, I want to tell you one of the Chinese animals — the golden monkey.
Golden monkeys live in the southwest of China. Some of them are yellow and some are black. They live in groups. They like eating leaves and fruit. People kill many golden monkeys, so they are in great danger now. Golden monkeys are our friends so we must help save them.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出写作的主题，要介绍金丝猴；
第二步，具体介绍金丝猴的外貌特征以及分布及特点等；
第三步，介绍金丝猴的现状，呼吁人们拯救金丝猴。
[亮点词汇]
① want to do sth想要做某事
② in the southwest of China在中国的西南部
③ in great danger处于极大的危险之中
[高分句型]
① Some of them are yellow and some are black. （and连接的并列句）
② People kill many golden monkeys, so they are in great danger now. （so引导结果状语从句）
11．例文
There is a zoo in our city. I often go there on weekends. There is a panda in the zoo. I like him very much because he is very gentle and cute. His name is Xiaopang. He is eight years old. He is black and white. He has two big eyes. He is a little fat, so people all like him very much. His favorite food is bamboo. He likes climbing trees and swimming in the water. Do you like him
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明意图，要介绍动物园里的一只熊猫；
第二步，从“姓名、年龄、外表、食物、爱好”等方面来介绍熊猫；
第三步，书写结语，询问大家是否喜欢这只熊猫。
[亮点词汇]
①a little有点
②like doing sth.喜欢做某事
[高分句型]
①I like him very much because he is very gentle and cute.（because引导原因状语从句）
12．例文
Good morning, everyone. I am glad to share my ideas about protecting the environment in our daily lives.
The Earth is our home and we have to protect her. Today environmental pollution has become a serious problem. Some people don’t turn off the light when they leave the room. There are also some people putting the rubbish into the river. Besides, factories burn things to make energy. This pollutes the air.
In order to protect the Earth, we must do something. First, we have to save water and electricity. Second, we should plant more trees to make the air clean. Third, we can go out by bus or bike. Finally, we shouldn’t use plastic bags.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据表格提示内容进行写作，注意不要忘记补充1点不良的现象及自己的建议，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍保护环境的必要性；
第二步，介绍存在的一些不良现象；
第三步，提出保护环境的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①turn off关掉
②in order to为了
③make energy制造能量
[高分句型]
Some people don’t turn off the light when they leave the room. (when引导时间状语从句)
13．例文
The Power of Plants
Plants are very important to us. They provide food, medicine, and beauty. Today, I want to introduce one of the most resilient plants I know—bamboo.
Bamboo is truly a marvel of nature. It grows in many parts of Asia, particularly in mountainous areas. While other plants require specific conditions to survive, bamboo thrives as an incredibly strong and adaptable plant. I chose bamboo because it is one of the fastest-growing plants on Earth. Some bamboo can grow over 90 centimeters in just a single day! This rapid growth is not just fascinating but also highly beneficial. Moreover, it can be used to make furniture, paper, and even clothing. An interesting fact is that bamboo can also purify the air.
Let’s protect plants like bamboo. They are not only useful but also demonstrate the power of nature. Every plant deserves our care and respect.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，以“植物的力量”为核心主题，聚焦竹子的生长特性、实用价值与独特优势，既传递植物知识，又升华对自然力量的敬畏，内容兼具科学性与感染力；
②时态：以一般现在时为主，描述竹子的生长分布、核心特点、实用价值及对植物的呼吁；使用情态动词强调竹子的能力与潜力，语气客观且富有肯定性，时态运用贴合逻辑，严谨流畅；
③提示：文章紧扣所有提示问题，完整覆盖“植物名称、生长地点、选择原因、有趣事实”，补充了“适应能力强、无需特定生存条件”等细节，结尾升华到“保护植物、尊重自然”，内容完整，逻辑连贯，无真实信息，词数满足80以上要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇承接已给主题，先总述植物对人类的重要性，再自然引出本文要介绍的植物——竹子，通过“most resilient”一词初步凸显竹子的特质，为下文展开铺垫；
第二步，围绕提示问题分层介绍竹子：先说明生长地点与生长特性；再解释选择原因；接着阐述实用价值与有趣事实，用具体数据和功能让竹子的“力量”更具象，增强说服力；
第三步，结尾发出呼吁，并升华主题，呼应征文“植物的力量”的核心，让文章从“介绍植物”上升到“传递环保意识”，提升文本深度，收束全文。
[亮点词汇]
①resilient有韧性的
②marvel of nature自然界的奇迹
③mountainous areas山区
④adaptable适应性强的
⑤fast-growing生长迅速的
⑥purify the air净化空气
⑦deserve值得
[高分句型]
①While other plants require specific conditions to survive, bamboo thrives as an incredibly strong and adaptable plant.（“While”引导让步状语从句）
②I chose bamboo because it is one of the fastest-growing plants on Earth. （“because”引导原因状语从句）
③They are not only useful but also demonstrate the power of nature.（运用“not only... but also...”结构）
14．例文：
Why Are Plants Important
Plants are very important for people, animals and the environment. Now let me introduce the importance of plants to you.
First of all, for people, plants can give us basic needs. We can use trees and plants in many ways. We can get a lot of food from plants. Some plants can be made into medicine and clothing. Second, plants are also important for animals. Many animals live in the forest and they eat the fruit from plants and trees. Third, trees and other plants help clean the air, so we can breathe the fresh air every day. They can not only stop the wind from blowing the soil away but also stop the water from washing the soil away.
In a word, all living things cannot live without plants. The plants are important. Let’s protect plants and make our world greener.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍植物的重要性；
第二步，从三个方面阐述植物的重要性：对人类，对动物以及对环境；
第三步，最后再次强调植物的重要性，并呼吁大家要爱护花草树木。
[亮点词汇]
①be made into被制成
②be important for对……很重要
③stop...from doing阻止……做某事
[高分句型]
①Many animals live in the forest and they eat the fruit from plants and trees.（and连接并列成分）
②They can not only stop the wind from blowing the soil away but also stop the water from washing the soil away.（not only ...but also...连接并列成分）
15．范文
Trees are important in our daily life
Trees are important in our daily life. They are very useful to us. Trees give us fresh air. We need clean air to breathe. They also provide shade on hot days. Many animals live in trees, and some fruits we eat come from trees too. Without trees, our world would be a sad place. So we should plant more trees and protect them.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生围绕“树木在日常生活中很重要”及“为什么重要”展开，添加了树木提供新鲜空气、遮阳、为动物提供栖息地、结果实等细节，突出了树木的重要性及保护树木的观点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明树木在日常生活中很重要且对我们很有用；
第二步，具体阐述树木重要的原因，如提供新鲜空气、遮阳、为动物提供住所、结出果实等；
第三步，说明没有树木世界会变得糟糕，得出我们应多种树并保护它们的结论。
[亮点词汇]
① fresh air 新鲜空气
② provide shade 提供阴凉
③ protect 保护
[高分句型]
Many animals live in trees, and some fruits we eat come from trees too.（并列句）
16．例文
Hi, everyone! I’m happy to tell you something about peonies, our city flower.
As the “king of flowers”, peonies come in so many colours like red, pink, white, blue and green. And there are more than 1,200 kinds of peonies! From April to May every year, our city has the Peony Culture Festival of Luoyang China. People come here to enjoy lovely peonies. You know what Peonies aren’t just for looking at; people also use them for food and as medicine. Our city flower is amazing, right
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，涵盖了牡丹的称号、颜色、种类、相关节日以及用途等，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先介绍牡丹 “花中之王” 的称号、颜色和种类。
第二步，再根据提示内容描述洛阳中国牡丹文化节、人们前来观赏的情景以及牡丹的其他用途。
[亮点词汇]
①king of flowers 花中之王
②so many 许多
③more than 超过
④Peony Culture Festival 牡丹文化节
[高分句型]
①As the “king of flowers”, peonies come in so many colours like red, pink, white, blue and green. (as 引导的短语作状语)
②Peonies aren’t just for looking at; people also use them for food and as medicine. (分号连接两个并列分句，体现牡丹的多种用途)
17．One possible version
My blog about planting
When it comes to planting a plant, here are some useful suggestions.
First, you can choose a succulent because it’s easy to take care of. Next, plant it in a small flower pot with good drainage. Put the pot in a place with enough sunlight, but avoid direct sunlight in summer. Last but not least, watering is important. If you want to avoid root rot caused by overwatering, water it once a week.
Hope these suggestions help!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示的信息，给出合理的建议，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，分别针对Simon的问题给出具体建议，包括选择什么植物、种植地点以及照顾方法；
第三步，表达希望建议对Simon有帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①take care of照顾
②avoid direct sunlight避免阳光直射
③once a week一周一次
[高分句型]
①First, You can choose a succulent because it’s easy to take care of. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②If you want to avoid root rot caused by overwatering, water it once a week. (if引导的条件状语从句)
18．例文
Trees are very important to people and animals. They provide wood for people. They are home to animals and they also provide food for animals. Trees are also important to the environment and the climate. But in some places, people cut down too many trees. That’s too bad. We must protect trees. We should not use one-off cups or chopsticks. We should not waste paper. And we should plant more trees and look after trees well. If everyone tries his best, we are sure to make a difference.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：时态为 “一般现在时”；
③提示：仔细审题，不要遗漏要点，并进一步做出补充，并且在列举建议时注意衔接词语的使用，使前后过渡自然，行文流畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点名主题，阐述树木的重要性；
第二步，列举保护树木的原因，即树木对我们非常重要，进而列举保护树木的建议；
第三步，进行总结，鼓励大家一起行动起来。
[亮点词汇]
①try one’s best尽某人最大的努力
②provide sth. for sb.向某人提供某物
③cut down砍倒
[亮点句型]
If everyone tries his best, we are sure to make a difference.（if引导的条件状语从句）
19．参考范文
The Importance of Plants
We all know plants are very important for us humans, animals and the environment. Now, let me introduce the importance of plants to you.
First of all, for people, plants can meet our basic needs. We can get a lot of food from plants. Some plants can be made into medicine and clothing. They are also important for animals. Many animals live in the forest and they live on plants. Finally, trees and other plants help clean the air, so we can breathe the fresh air every day. They can also cover the soil to stop the wind and water from carrying the soil away.
In a word, plants are so important for us. We should protect them and try our best to plant more of them.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，从人类的角度，谈论植物的重要性；
第二步，从动物的角度，谈论植物的重要性；
第三步，从环境的角度，谈论植物的重要性。
[亮点词汇]
①be important for对……重要
②stop sb. from doing sth.阻止某人做某事
③try one’s best to do sth.尽某人最大的努力做某事
[高分句型]
①We should protect them and try our best to plant more of them.（and连接两个并列成分）
20．例文
The importance of trees
Trees play a crucial role in our lives and are essential for the health of our planet.
First, they are vital for environmental protection. Trees absorb carbon dioxide and release oxygen, which is necessary for life. They also help to reduce air pollution by trapping dust and other pollutants. Second, trees have numerous other uses. They provide us with wood, which is used for building homes, making furniture, and creating paper. Third, trees are a source of food and shelter for many animals, keeping the balance of our ecosystem.
Let’s protect trees and make our earth more beautiful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总领全文，点明树的重要性；
第二步，说明树重要的原因，从功能、用途方面解释；
第三步，总结，呼吁大家保护树木。
[亮点词汇]
①play a crucial role in在……中起着至关重要的作用
②absorb carbon dioxide吸收二氧化碳
③release oxygen释放氧气
④help to reduce air pollution帮助减少空气污染
⑤provide us with给我们提供……
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①They provide us with wood, which is used for building homes, making furniture, and creating paper. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②Let’s protect trees and make our earth more beautiful. (祈使句)
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