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2025-2026学年七年级英语上册单元复习考点培优沪教版
（五四学制）（2024）Unit 4 Smart home
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．Write at least 60 words on the topic “My home in 2035”. (根据提示，以“2035年我的家”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
科技的发展日新月异，各种各样的智能设备构成了智能家居系统。2035年你的家可能是怎么样的？请设计并介绍一下你智能家中的设备 (不少于2个)，以及你这样设计的原因。
Guiding questions:
1. What will your home be like in 2035
2. What kind of smart devices would you like to have in your home in 2035
3. Why would you like to have these devices
(注意：勿出现任何与你的学校、姓名等相关的信息。)
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2．人工智能（AI）正深刻影响着我们的生活与学习。某英语报社“Teen Talk”栏目发起征文，邀请中学生分享对AI的看法。请你根据以下提示，写一篇短文投稿。
要求：
1. 词数80—100；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
As AI develops fast, it has become part of our daily lives.
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3．现在，AI学习工具如“DeepSeek”等变得越来越流行。你们班就此开展了一场讨论。请你以“DeepSeek: A Good Servant (仆人) or a Bad Master (主人) ”为题，结合下面表格中同学们的讨论内容，谈谈你的看法及建议。
For (A good servant) help...become better learners provide quick answers make problems easier ...
Against (A bad master) copy answers without thinking may provide incorrect answers ...
Your opinion & advice 建议至少两条
要求：
1. 词数80—100词；
2. 短文须包含表格中所有要点并适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名；
4. 短文首句已给出，不计入总词数。
DeepSeek: A Good Servant or a Bad Master
AI learning tools like DeepSeek are becoming increasingly popular among students. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．某英文网站举办“AI in Shenzhen”征文活动，请写一篇短文介绍人工智能在深圳（如交通、教育、生活、医疗等方面）的应用，并谈谈你对未来“人类”与“智能”合作的看法。
要求：
1. 80词以上，不得出现真实姓名和校名；
2. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。
AI in Shenzhen
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．2025年中央电视台春节联欢晚会上的节目Young Bot机器人通过人工智能学习舞蹈动作，在舞台上转动手帕，舞步完美。现代科技发展日新月异，我们可以想象在不久的将来智能机器人的出现将会给我们的生活带来很多变化。假设你是李钰，请以“A day with my smart robot”为主题写一篇演讲稿，参加China Daily举办的中学生科技周活动。
写作要点 参考句型
1. What does your smart robot look like It looks like... We start the day with... They can make our life... They can/can’t take the place of...
2. How do you spend a day with your smart robot
3. What are your opinions about future robots
要求：
1.短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3.词数不少于80（开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Yu. I stand before you to talk about smart robots.
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6．数字技术(digital technology)极大地改变了我们的生活。学校正在开展“数字科技改变生活”主题演讲活动，请你以“Digital Technology: A Great Helper in My Life”为题，写一篇发言稿。要点如下：
(1)介绍数字技术在生活中的重要性；
(2)具体描述数字技术在你学习、娱乐或生活等方面的应用；
(3)你对数字科技未来发展的期待。
注意：
(1)词数80~100，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear students,
Nowadays, digital technology plays a very important part in our lives.
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7．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文）。
题目：智享每一滴：我们如何用科技节水
Topic: Smart Tech for Every Drop: How Can We Save Water
写作要求：
1.描述一个问题：简要描述一个你所知的关于水资源浪费或短缺的常见问题。
2.提出一个解决方案：设想一种利用数码科技（例如：一个手机APP、一个智能水表、人工智能）来帮助节水的方法，并简单说明其原理。）
3.发表你的观点：阐述你是否认为科技真的能帮助人们保护水资源，并说明理由。
You may begin like this:
“Water is very important for our lives, but...”
“I believe technology can play a big role in saving water...”
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8．上周五，你们学校举办了一年一度的科技节，全校学生都参与其中。假设你是李华，请根据以下要点内容给校报投稿，介绍你校科技节的情况，并谈谈自己的感受。
活动1：观看一部有关物理学家杨振宁的纪录片
活动2：听一场关于未来智能生活的讲座
活动3：智能设备展 ①智能下棋机器人 ②…… (自行补充至少一种)
你对智能科技的看法 (至少两点)
参考词汇：物理学家 physicist 纪录片 documentary 展览 exhibition
要求：
(1) 80词左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
(2) 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
(3) 文章须包含表格提示的全部内容，可适当增加细节。
The Science Festival in Our School
Last Friday, our school held a science festival.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．人工智能AI（Artificial Intelligence）技术的快速发展和Chat GPT的问世，给人们的学习和生活带来了巨大的变化，同时也引发了人们对于人工智能取代人类的担忧。假如你是李华，受邀参加某英语报“Teenager Says”栏目，请说说你对人工智能的看法。
内容包括：
1. 人工智能的优点：代替人们做危险、枯燥的工作；
2. 人工智能的缺点：人们对AI过度依赖；
3. 你的看法……
注意：
1. 字数：100词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名；
3. 可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
Dear Editor,
I’m glad to be invited to join this program.
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The key is to make the best use of AI to make our life more convenient and more colorful.
Yours,
Li Hua
10．某英文网站正在征集题为My Experience of Using AI的短文，请你向该网站投稿，分享你的经验。内容要点包括：
1. 你如何使用AI帮助学习英语（不低于三点）；
2. 使用AI给你的英语学习带来的好处；
3. 鼓励大家运用AI技术辅助学习。
注意：
1. 包含所给要点，并可适当发挥；
2. 不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和学生的真实姓名；
3. 80词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：technology技术
My Experience of Using AI
The AI technology has come into many ways of our lives. I use it to help me learn English.
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11．随着科技的快速发展，过去诸多看似不可能的事情在今天成为现实。若干年后，人们的居住环境将会发生怎样的变化呢？请你以“Our Life in the Future”为题，写一篇英语短文，展望一下人类未来的生活。
写作提示：(1) Where will people live in the future
(2) How will they go to work or go to school
(3) What’s your opinion about the life in the future
写作要求：(1) 语句通顺，条理清晰，详略得当，书写工整；
(2) 80词左右，题目已给出，不计入总词数。
Our Life in the Future
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12．假设你是李华，请以“AI in My Life”为题，向你校英语公众号投稿，用英语介绍你在学习和生活中使用人工智能的经历及感受，并表达你对AI的看法。
注意：
1. 词数80词左右；可适当拓展。
2. 文章的标题及开头已给出，不计入总字数。
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
参考词汇：digital 数字化的 artificial intelligence（AI）人工智能
AI in My Life
Living in a digital age, I find artificial intelligence everywhere in my daily life.
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13．人工智能AI(Artificial Intelligence)技术的快速发展和DeepSeek的问世，给人们的学习和生活带来了巨大的变化。假如你是李华，受邀参加校广播台“Teenager Says”栏目，请以My ideas on AI为题谈谈你对人工智能的看法。
提示：
Advantages: chat with people/ help solve people’s problems…
Disadvantages: make people lazy in mind/ reduce people’s job opportunities…
要求：
1.根据提示，可适当发挥；
2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3.100词左右。(标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
My ideas on AI
Hello, everyone! I’m glad to be invited to join this program.
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14．在这个飞速发展的数字时代，人工智能AI，已悄然渗入我们生活的方方面面，越来越多的人开始借助AI来学习，但也有人认为使用AI学习会带来弊端。你的观点是什么呢？校刊英语专栏正在以“Should We Study with the Help of AI ”为题开展征文活动，请你根据写作要求，结合自身实际，用英语写一篇短文，陈述你的观点及理由，向专栏投稿。
Should We Study with the Help of AI
prons cons
1. clearer learning steps 2. provide support anytime 3. … 1. think less when studying 2. a tool for cheating 3. …
My opinion …
写作要求：
(1) 文中须包含上表提示的所有信息，适当发挥；
(2) 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
(3) 词数100左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数) 。
Should We Study with the Help of AI
Some students like to study with the help of AI, some don’t. Here are some opinions about the use of AI.
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15．春节申遗成功后，2025年中国蛇年春晚的《秧BOT》节目吸引了全世界的目光，传统艺术与现代科技的巧妙结合，让中华优秀的传统文化焕发了全新生命力。Deepseek的横空出世更是让世界看到了中国科技的发展与进步。人工智能AI (Artificial Intelligence) 自诞生起，已经极大地改变了我们的生活。最近学校英语杂志发起了“What does AI Bring to Us ”为主题的征文，假如你是李华，请你按照下面的提示，并适当拓展，写一篇英语短文投稿。
What does AI Bring to Us AI is widely used in many fields and brings a lot of benefits (益处). For example, 1. ... allows us to find information... 2. learning apps uses AI to help....
AI also brings worries and challenges. 1. ... lose jobs... 2. ...depend too much on...
I think... I hope AI will... in the future.
要求：
1.80—100词左右（标题和开头都已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
What does AI Bring to Us
Whether we like it or not, AI has become a more and more important part of our daily lives, changing the way we live and work.
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16．人工智能(AI)技术的快速发展，给人们的生活和学习带来了巨大的变化。作为一名中学生。你认为AI能在哪些方面为你的学习提供帮助，以及我们应该如何合理使用它呢？请根据以下提示写一篇英语发言稿，并在下周一的英语课上与大家分享。
写作要点：
好处 坏处
1.使工作和学习有效率 2.帮助解决一些问题 3.制定学习计划 4.与人聊天 1.过度依赖 2.失去工作 3.失去思考能力
写作要求：
1.要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范，行文连贯：
2.不得照抄阅读理解原文：不得在作文中出现真实的校名和学生姓名。
3.80词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
AI technology has been developing rapidly in recent years, and it has changed our lives in many ways.
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17．人工智能已经深度融入我们的日常生活。假设你是李华，学校科技节将举办主题为“我们生活中的人工智能”的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下提示写一篇英语演讲稿。
提示：
(1) What can AI do for us (search for information quickly, smart homes,…)
(2) What worries do you have about AI (workers may lose jobs, privacy risks,…)
(3) What’s your opinion on AI
注意：
(1)短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(2)词数80个左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Good morning, everyone! Today, I’m honored to stand here and share my thoughts on “Artificial Intelligence in Our Daily Lives”.
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That’s all. Thank you for listening!
18．AI（人工智能）的兴起正在改变我们的学习方式。有的同学利用AI极大提升学习兴趣和效率；但也有同学过度依赖AI，减少了独立思考的机会。请你结合图示信息，发表你的看法。
注意：
1.词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.包含上述提示要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
3.不得透露学校、姓名等个人信息，否则不予评分；
4.提示词：affect learning影响学习。
Now AI technology has found its way into our daily life. There is a heated discussion on whether middle school students should be allowed to use AI in their studies.
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19．手机短视频越来越受学生的欢迎。很多学生在空闲时间经常在抖音上看短视频。就此学生们发表了不同的看法。请根据下面提示，写一篇文章，同时发表自己的观点及针对如何安排空闲时间向大家提供建议。
一些学生认为：看短视频令人放松，打发时间……
一些学生认为：长时间看短视频对眼睛有害，浪费时间，不利于学习……
你的观点及建议：……
提示词：TikTok 抖音； short videos 短视频； a waste of time 浪费时间
要求：
1、必须用上所给的内容提示，可适当发挥；
2、语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范，词数不少于80。
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20．假如你是李涛，你们学校英语社团正在开展以“正确使用网络”为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下要点，用英语写一篇短文，参加此次活动。
1. 网络的重要性：
2. 网络的利与弊：
3. 提出希望。
要求：（1）短文必须包含所给要点，可适当发挥；
（2）语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
（3）文中不得出现任何真实信息；
（4）词数不少于80（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Use the Internet Properly
The Internet is playing an important role in our life now.
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
My Home in 2035
In 2035, my home will be a fully smart space focused on daily convenience and health. It can “understand” my needs and make life easier.
I want a smart kitchen system most. It can learn my eating habits and prepare ingredient lists automatically. When I’m back, it will automatically start preheating the oven for my favorite cake. I also need a smart mattress. It can monitor my sleep quality and heart rate every night. If there’s something wrong, it will send alerts to my phone at once.
These devices will save me time and keep me healthy. I’m really looking forward to my 2035 home.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包含所有提示要点，可适当补充细节，使文章内容充实；行文时多使用第一、三人称，适当运用短语和多样句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总述2035年的家是全智能空间，以便捷和健康为导向，能贴合需求、让生活更省心；
第二步，分述两种智能设备——智能厨房系统 (可学习饮食习惯、自动准备食材清单及预热烤箱) 与智能床垫 (可监测睡眠和心率、异常时发警报)；
第三步，总结智能设备的价值 (省时间、保健康)，表达对2035年家的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①look forward to 期待
②monitor my sleep quality 监测我的睡眠质量
[高分句型]
①When I’m back, it will automatically start preheating the oven for my favorite cake. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②If there’s something wrong, it will send alerts to my phone at once. (if引导的条件状语从句)
2．例文
As AI develops fast, it has become part of our daily lives. It is changing our lives and studies. It helps us learn new things quickly and finish homework more easily. Daily life becomes more convenient with helpers like Siri or Alexa answering questions.
However, AI has disadvantages. Some worry it makes us think less or even takes away jobs. Also, it might leak private information.
I think AI is useful, but it shouldn’t replace our own skills. We should use it as a helper, not depend on it too much.
Let’s use AI wisely to create a better future!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干给出的要点，适当增加细节，灵活运用恰当的句型，使行文流畅自然。
[写作步骤]
第一步：介绍人工智能的优缺点；
第二步：介绍自己的看法；
第三步：书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①take away拿走
②depend on依靠
[高分句型]
I think AI is useful, but it shouldn’t replace our own skills. (宾语从句)
3．例文
DeepSeek: A Good Servant or a Bad Master
AI learning tools like DeepSeek are becoming increasingly popular among students. Most students think DeepSeek is a good servant. It helps them become better learners by providing quick answers and rich resources, making difficult problems easier to understand.
However, some classmates see DeepSeek as a bad master. Depending on it too much may lead them to merely copy answers and stop thinking independently. Sometimes the information provided may even be incorrect.
From my view, DeepSeek should assist rather than replace us. We should use it for ideas but always check and understand the answers. Most importantly, we must think for ourselves. Only in this way can we make AI a good servant in our studies.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，包括支持DeepSeek作为好仆人的理由、反对DeepSeek作为坏主人的理由以及个人看法和建议，考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点，并适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。通过描述DeepSeek在学生中的流行程度来引出讨论的主题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从支持者和反对者的角度分别阐述DeepSeek作为好仆人和坏主人的理由；
第三步，书写结语。提出个人看法和建议，强调DeepSeek应作为辅助工具而非替代品，鼓励学生独立思考。
[亮点词汇]
①assist rather than replace辅助而非替代
②provide quick answers and rich resources提供快速答案和丰富资源
③think independently独立思考
④make...a good servant使……成为好仆人
[高分句型]
①Most students think DeepSeek is a good servant. (复合句，包含宾语从句和现在分词短语作结果状语)
②Only in this way can we make AI a good servant in our studies. (倒装句)
4．
例文 AI in Shenzhen
Artificial intelligence is widely used in Shenzhen. In transportation, AI helps control traffic lights. In education, smart apps provide online classes and correct homework. In daily life, many families use AI speakers to play music or set alarms. In medical fields, AI helps doctors with fast and accurate diagnosis.
I think humans and AI will work together closely in the future. AI can do repetitive jobs so that people can focus on creative tasks. If we use AI in a right way, it will bring us a brighter and more convenient world.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，围绕“深圳的人工智能”展开，介绍AI在多领域的应用及未来展望，内容兼具实用性与前瞻性，语气客观平实，既呈现了AI在深圳的落地场景，又传递出对AI与人类协同发展的积极态度，逻辑清晰且有现实意义；
②时态：以一般现在时为主，描述AI当前的广泛应用，体现科技应用的当下状态；用一般将来时预测未来发展趋势，时态区分明确，符合逻辑，流畅自然；
③提示：文章完整覆盖核心要点，包含“AI 在深圳的应用场景、各场景具体功能、对未来的看法”，内容充实且重点突出，无真实信息，表达简洁有力，词数符合要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇总起全文，用“Artificial intelligence is widely used in Shenzhen”点明核心主题——AI在深圳的广泛应用，为下文分述具体场景铺垫；
第二步，分领域列举AI的应用：从交通、教育、日常生活到医疗，每个领域用简短语句说明AI的具体功能，句式统一且信息密集，让读者快速了解AI在深圳的落地情况，体现其普及性；
第三步，升华主题，展望未来：先提出“人类与AI将紧密协作”的核心观点，再分析AI与人类的分工优势，最后强调“合理使用”的前提，得出“AI 将带来更光明便捷世界”的结论，收束自然，既呼应前文的应用现状，又让短文的思想更有深度。
[亮点词汇]
①be widely used被广泛应用
②transportation交通
③control traffic lights控制红绿灯
④correct homework批改作业
⑤work together closely紧密协作
⑥focus on creative tasks专注于创造性任务
⑦in a right way以正确的方式
[高分句型]
①AI can do repetitive jobs so that people can focus on creative tasks.（“so that”引导目的状语从句）
②If we use AI in a right way, it will bring us a brighter and more convenient world.（“If”引导条件状语从句）
5．例文
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Yu. I stand before you to talk about smart robots. My smart robot looks like a friendly human with blue eyes and a shiny silver body. We start the day with morning exercises. My robot dances with me to keep us healthy. Then, it helps me with my homework. It can find information quickly and explain difficult problems. In the afternoon, we play games together.
I think future robots will make our life easier and more interesting. However, they can’t take the place of humans because love and creativity are special to us.
Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，引出主题，描述机器人的外貌；
第二步，根据题干的要点，按时间顺序描写与机器人共度的一天；
第三步，表达对未来机器人的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①help sb with sth帮助某人做某事
②take the place of代替
[高分句型]
①I think future robots will make our life easier and more interesting. （宾语从句）
②However, they can’t take the place of humans because love and creativity are special to us.（because引导的原因状语从句）
6．
范文：
Dear students,
Nowadays, digital technology plays a very important part in our lives. It makes our life more convenient and efficient.
In my daily life, digital technology helps me a lot. For study, I often use learning apps to review lessons and watch online courses to improve my weak subjects. For entertainment, I enjoy listening to music and watching movies on my smartphone. Besides, my family often use mobile payment when shopping, which saves us much time.
I believe digital technology will bring us more surprises in the future. Maybe we can use VR to travel around the world at home. I’m looking forward to a smarter life with digital technology.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：主要使用一般现在时和一般将来时；
③提示：围绕数字技术的重要性、具体应用和未来期待展开，注意内容连贯，词数达标。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开头点明数字技术的重要性；
第二步：具体描述数字技术在学习、生活等方面的应用；
第三步：表达对数字技术未来发展的期待；
第四步：自然结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①convenient and efficient便捷高效
②learning apps学习应用
③mobile payment移动支付
④look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①Besides, my family often use mobile payment when shopping, which saves us much time. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
7．
One possible version
Water is very important for our lives, but many people waste it. For example, some leave taps running while brushing teeth, which wastes lots of water daily.
I believe technology can play a big role in saving water. A smart water meter is a good idea. It connects to a phone app and sends alerts when water use is too high. This helps people notice waste and cut down.
I think tech really helps protect water. It makes people aware of their use and gives easy ways to save. With such tools, we can use water wisely.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为材料作文；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开篇点题，说明“水的重要性”并举例“刷牙时流水”的浪费现象；
第二步：提出观点“科技可节水”，以“智能水表”为例，说明其工作原理与作用；
第三步：总结“科技有助于明智用水”，强化核心观点。
[亮点词汇]
①play a big role in在……中起重要作用
②cut down减少
③be aware of意识到
④use...wisely明智地使用……
[高分句型]
①For example, some leave taps running while brushing teeth, which wastes lots of water daily.（which引导的非限定性定语从句）
②It connects to a phone app and sends alerts when water use is too high.（when引导的时间状语从句）
8．例文：
Last Friday, our school held a science festival. All students took part in it. First, we watched a documentary about Yang Zhenning, a great physicist. We learned about his great contributions to physics. Then, we listened to a lecture on smart life in the future. Finally, we visited an exhibition of intelligent devices. There was a smart chess-playing robot and VR glasses for experiencing virtual worlds.
I think smart technology is amazing. It can not only make our lives easier but also help us learn better. I hope to create useful inventions someday.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：这是一篇材料作文，为记叙文；
② 时态：主要采用“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据要点提示进行写作，需涵盖三项活动，补充至少一种设备、两点看法。注意条理清晰，语法正确。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明全校参与情况；
第二步，具体介绍三项活动；
第三步，表达对智能科技的看法。
[亮点词汇]
① great contributions to physics对物理的伟大贡献
② virtual worlds虚拟世界
③ take part in参加
[高分句型]
① There was a smart chess-playing robot and VR glasses for experiencing virtual worlds. (there be句型)
② It can not only make our lives easier and but also help us learn better. (not only...but also结构)
9．例文
Dear Editor,
I’m glad to be invited to join this program. With the development of science and technology, Artificial Intelligence is getting more and more popular in our daily life.
As we all know, every coin has its two sides. On the one hand, AI can be used to do dangerous, boring and tiring work so that we will live a better and happier life. On the other hand, with AI being widely used, a large number of workers are losing their jobs. What’s more, some people depend on AI so much that they lose their ability to think creatively and independently.
In my opinion, AI will never completely take the place of human beings so there is no need to worry about it too much. It is a tool we invented and we are surely able to make it under control.
The key is to make the best use of AI to make our life more convenient and more colorful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干给出的要点，适当增加细节，灵活运用恰当的句型，使行文流畅自然。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明AI的广泛应用；
第二步，分点阐述人工智能的优点和缺点；
第三步，发表自己对AI的看法，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①With the development of随着……的发展
②On the one hand...on the other hand一方面……另一方面
③be used to do被用来做某事
④a large number of大量，许多
⑤depend on依赖
⑥take the place of取代
⑦make the best use of充分利用
[高分句型]
①On the one hand, AI can be used to do dangerous, boring and tiring work so that we will live a better and happier life. (so that引导目的状语从句)
②It is a tool we invented and we are surely able to make it under control. (that省略的定语从句)
10．例文：
My Experience of Using AI
The AI technology has come into many ways of our lives. I use it to help me learn English.
First, I use AI-powered apps to practice pronunciation. They correct my mistakes instantly. Second, AI chatbots help me improve my writing by providing grammar suggestions. Third, I listen to AI-generated English stories to enhance my listening skills.
Using AI makes my learning more efficient and fun. It saves time and offers personalized feedback.
I encourage everyone to try AI tools for learning. They are helpful and convenient!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：内容要点已给出，考生应按要求进行写作，需涵盖AI在英语学习中的三点应用、好处及鼓励使用，不可遗漏任何信息提示，适当添加细节，注意行文连贯，表述完整并突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引入主题，说明AI在日常生活中的应用；
第二步，具体阐述AI在英语学习中的三点帮助；
第三步，总结AI带来的好处；
第四步，鼓励大家使用。
[亮点词汇]
①AI-generated English stories AI生成的英语故事
②personalized feedback 个性化反馈
③efficient高效的
[高分句型]
①AI chatbots help me improve my writing by providing grammar suggestions.（运用了现在分词作状语）
②Using AI makes my learning more efficient and fun.（运用了动名词作主语）
11．【参考范文】
Our Life in the Future
I think that life in the future won’t be the same as it is today.
With the help of technology, building houses on the sea will be possible. As the population is growing quickly, people may move onto the sea to live in the future. In their houses, they will take the elevator to the underwater world. They will go to work or school by plane or boat.
I think all of these can come true and our life will become better and better in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，全文要点明确，结构严谨，语法运用准确，注意上下文要连接流畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，讲述未来和现在将有所不同；
第二步，具体描述未来的居住地点和交通方式；
第三步，分享自己对未来生活的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①the same as和……一样
②come true成真
③better and better越来越好
[高分句型]
I think that life in the future won’t be the same as it is today. (that引导的宾语从句)
12．例文1:
AI in My Life
Living in a digital age, I find artificial intelligence everywhere in my life. Here are some examples.
At school, AI is very useful for my studies. When I can’t solve a homework problem, I can take a picture of it. Then AI will tell me how to do it step by step, just like a real teacher. At home, I have an AI speaker. It can play music for me. It also tells me what the weather is like. But sometimes, I use AI too much.
In my opinion, AI brings us lots of convenience. But we need to use it in a wise way.
例文2:
AI in My Life
Living in a digital age, I find artificial intelligence everywhere in my life. AI has become a helpful tool for both my studies and daily life.
In my studies, AI apps help me improve my English pronunciation and offer better ways to solve difficult math problems. During my free time, I enjoy using AI-powered apps to create my own music or pictures. With just a few clicks, I can transform my ideas into creative designs.
However, AI sometimes gives incorrect answers and can't truly understand my feelings. Also, depending too much on AI may stop us thinking on our own.
In a word, we should use AI wisely and remember our thinking ability and creativity are more valuable.
例文3:
AI in My Life
Living in a digital age, I find artificial intelligence everywhere in my daily life. It plays an important role in both my studies and daily life.
At school, AI acts as a helpful key, unlocking new ways to learn. For example, English learning apps correct my pronunciation and suggest better words. At home, my smart speaker is like a friend, playing music based on my mood and checking the daily weather for me. It can even chat with me about various topics, from space to art.
However, I regret to see that some classmates copy answers directly from AI without thinking, which limits their ability to solve problems independently.
In my opinion, AI is a double-edged sword. Only by using it wisely can we ensure it helps us, rather than replace us.
【详解】只对例文1作解析：
[总体分析]
①体裁：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：以 “一般现在时” 为主；
③提示：文章紧扣写作要点，围绕人工智能在生活中的体现、优势及使用情况展开，没有遗漏关键信息。通过列举在学校和家中的具体例子，增加了细节内容，行文流畅自然，符合题干要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述对人工智能技术的总体看法。
第二步，分点阐述人工智能的优势和劣势。
第三步，总结并表达自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①science and technology科学技术
②chat with和…… 聊天
③for example例如
[高分句型]
①When I can’t solve a homework problem, I can take a picture of it.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②It also tells me what the weather is like. （宾语从句）
13．例文
My ideas on AI
Hello, everyone! I’m glad to be invited to join this program. With the rapid development of science and technology, Artificial Intelligence becomes more and more popular in our daily life.
Artificial Intelligence can chat with people and help solve people’s problems. For example, it can help the students do homework correctly and solve the subject problems. With AI’s help, people can free themselves from over-work and spend more time on what they are interested in.
However, it also has many disadvantages. If we always depend on it, it will make us lazy in mind. Its appearance will reduce people’s job opportunities.
In my opinion, AI is a double-edged sword. Instead of worrying about its negative effects, you should learn more about how to use it properly.
【详解】[总体分析]
①体裁：本文是一篇材料作文，阐述对人工智能技术优劣势的看法；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干给出的要点，适当增加细节，灵活运用恰当的句型，使行文流畅自然。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述对人工智能技术的总体看法；
第二步，分点阐述人工智能的优势和劣势；
第三步，总结并表达自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①science and technology科学技术
②chat with和……聊天
③for example例如
④depend on依靠，依赖
[高分句型]
①With the rapid development of science and technology, Artificial Intelligence becomes more and more popular in our daily life.(“with+名词短语”作状语；“比较级 and 比较级”表达“越来越……”)
②If we always depend on it, it will make us lazy in mind.(if引导条件状语从句)
14．例文
Should We Study with the Help of AI
Some students like to study with the help of AI, some don’t. Here are some opinions about the use of AI.
On the one hand, AI is like a smarter helper. For example, when we face problems in study, it can show us clearer learning steps so that we can have a better understanding. At the same time, AI can also provide support anytime, whether day or night, which is good for our learning.
On the other hand, we shouldn’t depend on AI too much, or we will think less when studying. We may become lazy. And if we often use AI to do homework instead of doing it ourselves, AI will become a tool for cheating, which may prevent us from thinking independently.
In my opinion, AI cannot replace us, but we can benefit a lot from using AI as long as we use it in a right way. So we should make good use of it while using our own brains to think and learn. Only in this way can we make the most of AI and improve our learning.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作提示已给出，可适当增加细节，不要遗漏，注意上下文的逻辑关系。
[写作步骤]
第一步，指出AI的好处；
第二步，指出AI的弊端；
第三步，阐述自己的看法，应辩证的看待AI。
[亮点词汇]
①on the other hand另一方面
②in my opinion在我看来
③as long as只要
④depend on依靠
[高分句型]
①Only in this way can we make the most of AI and improve our learning. (倒装句)
②And if we often use AI to do homework instead of doing it ourselves, AI will become a tool for cheating, which may prevent us from thinking independently.(定语从句)
15．例文：
What does AI Bring to Us
Whether we like it or not, AI has become a more and more important part of our daily lives, changing the way we live and work.
AI is widely used in many fields and brings a lot of benefits. For example, smart devices allow us to find information about all kinds of topics. What’s more, learning apps uses AI to help students achieve personalized study. However, AI also brings worries and challenges. More and more people lose jobs because of AI. Besides, we depend too much on smart devices.
I think as long as we use AI in a right way, we will get benefits from it. I hope AI will be more helpful in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：内容要点已给出，考生应按要求进行写作，适当添加细节，使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直入主题，表明AI的重要性；
第二步，讲述AI的利弊；
第三步，讲述自己对于AI的想法和期望。
[亮点词汇]
① a lot of 许多
② allow sb. to do sth. 允许某人做某事
③ help sb. do sth. 帮助某人做某事
④ because of 因为
⑤ in the future 将来
[高分句型]
① I think as long as we use AI in a right way, we will get benefits from it. (as long as引导条件状语从句)
② I hope AI will be more helpful in the future. (省略that的宾语从句)
16．例文：
AI technology has been developing rapidly in recent years, and it has changed our lives in many ways.
As a student, I find AI very helpful in my studies. First, AI makes learning more efficient. It can quickly find information online, saving me a lot of time. Second, it helps solve problems. When I get stuck with math or science questions, AI can explain them clearly. Third, it can help make study plans, telling me what and when to review. Some AI tools can even chat and practice English with me.
However, we must be careful. Over-dependence on AI is a problem. If we always ask AI for answers, we might stop thinking by ourselves. Also, using it too much might make us lazy.
So, how should we use AI wisely We should see it as a helpful tool, not the answer itself. Always try to solve problems first, then use AI to check or explain. Remember to double-check the information it gives us. This way, AI can truly help us learn better.
【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】第一步，承接开头，介绍AI对学习的好处。
第二步，介绍AI对学习的坏处。
第三步，提出合理化建议。
【亮点词汇】①make learning more efficient提高学习效率
②get stuck with被卡住
③a helpful tool有益的工具
【高分句型】①When I get stuck with math or science questions, AI can explain them clearly. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②Remember to double-check the information it gives us. (祈使句)
17．参考范文：
Good morning, everyone! Today, I’m honored to stand here and share my thoughts on “Artificial Intelligence in Our Daily Lives”.
Now we can see all kinds of AI products in our daily lives. AI helps us search for information quickly, makes our homes smarter, and even helps doctors. With the help of AI, things that took hours now take minutes.
However, AI also brings problems. I worry some workers might lose their jobs. I’m also worried about privacy risks. What’s worse, we students depend on AI too much and we may lose the ability to do things on our own.
In my opinion, AI is like a knife—it can cut food or hurt people. I believe that if we put AI to good use, we will live a better life.
That’s all. Thank you for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，从学习及生活等方面介绍AI改变了我们的生活；
第二步，介绍对于AI的一些担忧；
第三步，最后介绍自己对AI的一些看法。
[亮点词汇]
①all kinds of各种各样的
②search for寻找
③depend on依赖
[高分句型]
①What’s worse, we students depend on AI too much and we may lose the ability to do things on our own.（and表并列）
②I believe that if we put AI to good use, we will live a better and happier life in the future. (that引导的宾语从句、if引导的条件状语从句）
18．例文
Now AI technology has found its way into our daily life. There is a heated discussion on whether middle school students should be allowed to use AI in their studies.
I believe that middle school students should be allowed to use AI when learning because it can provide valuable information. For example, AI can offer help on homework in time. Moreover, it can reorganize information clearly, helping students understand complex topics. It can also make learning fun.
However, we must learn to use AI wisely and avoid simply copying answers. Only by thinking independently can we truly improve our knowledge and skills. Therefore, with the right attitude, AI can become a powerful tool to develop our study habits.
So, I agree that we should be allowed to use AI.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：结合写作要点，表明你的观点，避免单词拼写错误和语法错误，确保语义连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：提出观点——应该允许使用AI；
第二步：介绍AI的益处以及应该避免的问题；
第三步：总结全文——赞成使用AI。
[亮点词汇]
①be allowed to do sth. 被允许做某事
②for example 例如
③in time 及时
[高分句型]
①I believe that middle school students should be allowed to use AI when learning because it can provide valuable information. (宾语从句，原因状语从句)
②Only by thinking independently can we truly improve our knowledge and skills. (倒装句)
19．
范文：
Nowadays, short videos on mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among students. Many students often watch short videos on TikTok in their free time.
Some students think that watching short videos is relaxing. It helps them pass the time and have fun. However, other students believe that spending too much time on short videos is harmful. It may hurt their eyes, waste time, and affect their studies.
In my opinion, watching short videos is OK if we do it for a short time. But we should not spend too much time on it. I suggest that we should do more meaningful things in our free time. For example, we can read books, play sports, or help with housework. These activities can make us healthier and happier.
Let’s use our free time wisely!
【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：需包含双方观点、个人看法及建议，使用提示词。
【写作步骤】第一步：引入话题，说明短视频在学生中的流行现象；
第二步：分别阐述支持者和反对者的观点，使用提示词；
第三步：提出个人观点和建议，并给出具体例子。
【亮点词汇】①more and more popular 越来越受欢迎的
②in one’s free time 在某人空闲的时候
③help sb. do sth. 帮助某人做某事
④spend time on sth. 花时间在某事上
⑤make sb.+adj. 使某人……
⑥in one’s opinion 在某人看来
【高分句型】①Some students think that watching short videos is relaxing. (含有that的宾语从句)
②However, other students believe that spending too much time on short videos is harmful. (含有that的宾语从句；动名词作从句中的主语)
③In my opinion, watching short videos is OK if we do it for a short time. (动名词作主语；if引导的条件状语从句)
④Let’s use our free time wisely! (祈使句的肯定形式；let sb. do sth.“让某人做某事”)
20．
例文
Use the Internet Properly
The Internet is playing an important role in our life now.
It is significant because it helps us study, communicate and relax. For example, we can find useful information online and talk to friends easily. However, the Internet is a double-edged sword. On one hand, it makes our life convenient. On the other hand, it may cause problems if we use it improperly. Some students spend too much time playing games, which is bad for their health and study.
I hope everyone can make full use of the Internet and avoid its bad effects. Let’s use it wisely to learn more and become better!
【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要使用一般现在时；
③提示：需覆盖网络重要性、利与弊、提出希望三点，适当发挥，语言简洁。
【写作步骤】第一步，说明网络在生活中的重要作用；
第二步，分别阐述网络的优点和缺点，结合实际例子说明；
第三步，呼吁大家正确使用网络。
【亮点词汇】① significant重要的
② double-edged sword双刃剑
③ make full use of充分利用
【高分句型】Some students spend too much time playing games, which is bad for their health and study. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
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