【单元考点培优】Unit 6 My e-friend 考点20:书面表达-2025-2026学年牛津译林版五年级英语上册核心考点培优精练 (含答案解析)

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【单元考点培优】Unit 6 My e-friend 考点20:书面表达-2025-2026学年牛津译林版五年级英语上册核心考点培优精练 (含答案解析)

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2025-2026学年牛津译林版五年级英语上册核心考点精练
Unit 6 My e-friend
考点20:书面表达
学校:___________姓名:___________班级:___________考号:___________
1.写话练习。根据表格信息,以My e-friend为题,写一篇介绍 Max 的小短文。
要求: 使用表格中的信息;语句通顺、表达正确有条理、书写规范;不少于6句话。
Name Age (年龄) Country (国家) Favourite subjects Hobbies Weekend activities
Max 11 Russia Maths and PE swimming, skating goes swimming, flies kites, goes to the cinema
My e-friend
I have an e-friend. His name is Max.
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2.书面表达。
请根据图片及提示,以“My e-friend”为题,向你的同学介绍一下你的网友 Alice的情况,不少于5 句话。
Name: Alice Age: 12 Favourite subjects: 音乐、英语 Hobbies: Weekend activities:
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3.Ben的两位好朋友想交中国网友。请阅读他们的信息,根据你的情况,选择一位和ta交友。写一段话介绍你的这位新网友。
要求:短文条理清晰,前后有逻辑;句子表达正确,拼写无错误;不少于6句话;书写规范。
Name: John Bush Age: 11 Country: the UK Father: doctor Mother: nurse Favourite subjects: Science and PE Hobbies: playing football, climbing
Name: Alice White Age: 12 Country: the UK Father: engineer Mother: teacher Favourite subjects: English, Art Hobbies: singing, drawing
Hello, everyone! I want to make e-friends with
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I hope we can be good friends.
4.书面表达。
英语课上,老师组织大家介绍自己的网友,请你参考下面的思维导图,以“My e-friend Mary”为题写一篇介绍自己网友的小短文。不能少于五句话(开头已给出,不计入总句数)。
My e-friend Mary
Hello, everyone! I’d like to tell you something about my e-friend Mary.
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5.写话。
请以短文形式介绍一下你的一位好朋友。内容包含他/她的姓名、年龄、爱好和他/她周末做的事情。
要求:(1). 所写内容需包含以上所有信息,可适当补充内容;
(2). 条理清晰,语句通顺,标点正确,书写规范;
(3). 不少于5句话。
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6.书面表达。
利奥(Leo) 认识了一位新网友弗兰克(Frank),他打算向同学们介绍一下 Frank,请根据下面的提示,帮助 Leo介绍一下吧!
要求:(1). 短文内容要包含所提供的全部信息,可适当地添加内容;
(2). 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范。词数40左右(不包括已给句子)。
My e-friend
This is my e-friend Frank.
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7.书面表达。
假如 Jerry是你的网友,请你围绕下面的思维导图,以“My e-friend”为题,写一篇介绍 Jerry的短文。
要求:(1).正确使用第三人称;
(2).语句通顺,要点全面,书写准确,不少于5句话;
(3).所写内容参考思维导图中的要点,也可以适当展开。
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8.书面表达。
假设 Anna 是你的网友,请仔细阅读表格中提供的信息,选择你认为重要的部分介绍一下她,鼓励加入其他方面的信息。要求语句通顺,意思连贯,表达有条理,书写规范,不少于五句话。 (不包括开头句)
Name Anna Country
Age 11
Hobbies reading stories ...
Weekend activities cook nice food for family fish with grandpa in the park … (always, usually, often, sometimes ...)
Others (其他) …
Anna is my e-friend.
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9.书面表达。
假如你的网友是Nancy,请根据图表提示,以“My e-friend”为题,向大家介绍一下Nancy吧!
要求:(1). 要点齐全,语句通顺,表达流畅。
(2). 不少于5句 (不包括已给句子)。
Name Nancy
Age 1 1 years old
City (城市) Nanjing
Job a student
Favourite subject Music
Hobbies
My e-friend
I have an e-friend. Her name is Nancy.
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10.书面表达。
请你根据提示内容,介绍一下你的网友的一些情况吧。
Name Helen
Country The US
Age 10 years old
Job A student
Hobbies Drawing, dancing and reading
要求:不少于50词,语句通顺,书写工整。
My e-friend
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11.请根据所给思维导图,以“My e-friend”为题写一篇短文介绍Anna的情况(不少于5句话)。
要求:语句通顺,标点正确。
My e-friend
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12.Liu Tao交了一个新网友David,他迫不及待地想跟同学们介绍这个新朋友,你能根据表格里的信息,帮他完成关于David的介绍稿吗?(不少于6句)
Name Country (国家) Age (年龄) Language (语言) Favourite subjects (最喜欢的科目) Hobbies
David UK 12 English PE and Art Swimming&dancing
I have an e-friend.
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13.Wang Bing 认识了一位新网友,他迫不及待地想向同学们介绍这位新朋友。请你根据下列提示,帮他完成关于Lucy的介绍,不少于5句话。
Name Age (年龄) Country (国家) Subjects Hobbies Weekend activities (周末活动)
Lucy 12 Canada 语文 英语 画画 弹钢琴 拜访朋友 去野餐
My e-friend
I have a new e-friend. She is Lucy.
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At weekends, _______________________________________________________________
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14.根据下列提示,帮助Anna介绍一下她的笔友James吧!不少于6句话。
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15.你想交一个外国朋友吗?这里有三位外国小朋友,请你根据卡片信息,选择一位来了解并介绍。
要求:正确使用动词的第三人称单数形式:语句通顺、表达有条理、书写规范;不少于5句话(不含第一句)。
Name: Jack Country: Australia Age:12 Father: doctor Name: Kitty Country: Russia Age:11 Father: teacher Name: Joe Country: Greece Age:11 Father: worker
Mother: nurse Favourite subjects: Maths, Science Hobbies: drawing, going boating Mother: writer Favourite subjects: Chinese, PE Hobbies: swimming, reading Mothers: worker Favourite subjects: English, Art Hobbies: playing basketball, watching films
I want to make friends with _______. He / She
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16.请根据以下信息,以“My e-friend”为题,选择其中一个人物,向同学们介绍一下。
要求:语句通顺,表达正确。不少于六句话,已给出的句子不计入总句数。
Name: Tommy Age: 11 Country: the UK Father: cook Mother: writer Favourite subject: English Hobbies: swimming, drawing Weekend activities: fly kites, go skating Name: Candy Age:12 Country: the US Father: policeman Mother: policewoman Favourite subject: Maths Hobbies: singing, dancing Weekend activities: play table tennis
Hello, everyone. Let me introduce my e-friend to you.
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参考答案与试题解析
1.范文:
I have an e-friend. His name is Max. He is 11 years old. He is from Russia. Max is a good student. He likes Maths and PE. His hobbies are swimming and skating. On the weekend, he always goes swimming with his brother. He goes to the cinema and flies kites with his sister.
【详解】1. 题干解读:
该题要求以“My e-friend”为题用第三人称描述自己的朋友,包括他的姓名、年龄、国家、喜欢的科目、兴趣爱好以及周末活动等,时态为一般现在时,注意语句通顺、表达正确有条理、书写规范;不少于6句话。
2. 参考词汇和参考句型:
参考词汇:Russia俄罗斯,Maths数学,PE体育,swimming游泳,skating滑冰,goes swimming去游泳,flies kites放风筝,goes to the cinema看电影
参考句型:He is…;He likes…;His hobbies are…;On the weekend, he…
2.范文:
My e-friend
I have an e-friend. Her name is Alice. She lives in America. She is 12 years old. She has big eyes. Her favorite subject is dancing. She likes drawing and singing. She often goes on a picnic with her friends at the weekends. Sometimes she flies kites.
【详解】1. 题干解读:该题目要求根据图片及提示,以“My e-friend”为题,向你的同学介绍一下你的网友Alice的情况,时态是一般现在时态,人称是第三人称,同时注意句子数量的要求。
2. 参考词汇和句型:
参考词汇:America美国,bigeyes大眼睛,longhair长头发,rice米饭,basketball篮球,cat猫,dance跳舞,swim游泳
参考句型:Her name is…;She likes…;Her favorite…is…;She likes…;She often…;Sometimes she…
3.范文:
Hello, everyone! I want to make e-friends with Alice White. She is twelve years old. She is from the UK. Her father is an engineer. Her mother is a teacher. Her favourite subjects are English and Art. Her hobbies are singing and drawing. I hope we can be good friends.
【详解】1. 题干解读:该题目要求根据信息,选择一位交朋友,写一段话介绍自己的这位新网友。然后再阐述姓名,年龄,来自哪里,父母的职业,最喜欢的科目及兴趣爱好。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型:
参考单词:twelve12,engineer工程师,teacher老师,English英语,Art美术,drawing画画
参考句型:She is …; Her father/mother is a/an …;Her favourite subjects are …; Her hobbies are …
4.范文:
My e-friend Mary
Hello, everyone! I’d like to tell you something about my e-friend Mary. She lives in the UK. She is 11 years old. She likes English and Maths. She is good at PE. She likes dancing and swimming. She usually goes swimming at weekends. Sometimes she has picnics with her friends.
【详解】1. 题干解读:该题目要求以“My e-friend Mary”为题,写一篇短文。然后再阐述住在哪里,年龄,喜欢的学科,兴趣爱好和周末做的事情等。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型:
参考单词:the UK英国,English英语,Maths数学,PE体育,dance跳舞,swim游泳,go swimming去游泳,at weekends在周末,have picnics去野餐
参考句型:She …
5.例文:
My Goodfriend
Lily is one of my good friends. She is 11 years old. She is very kind and warm-hearted. She always helps anyone in need. Everyone likes her. She likes drawing and swimming. She has a drawing lesson and a swimming lesson on Saturdays. She usually finishes her homework on Saturday. She usually likes playing badminton and drawing pictures with her friends in the park on Sundays.
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目要求介绍你的一位朋友,并介绍朋友的个人信息,兴趣爱好以及他/她的周末活动,时态用一般现在时描述,内容可适当延伸,注意条理清晰,语句通顺,标点正确,书写规范。
2.参考词汇和句型:
参考词汇:kind善良的, warm-hearted热心的,finish完成,play badminton打羽毛球
参考句型:She is… years old;She always helps…; She likes…
6.范例:
My e-friend
This is my e-friend Frank. He comes from the UK. He is a student. He is eleven years old. He likes reading and playing football. He often plays football on Monday. He likes Maths and Music. He has an animal friend. It’s a lovely dog. He is kind and friendly.
【详解】题干解读:该题目要求介绍自己的网友Frank。可以写一写网友Frank的国籍、年龄、兴趣爱好、喜欢的学科等。注意文章为一般现在时态,单词数量要符合要求。
参考词汇和句型:
参考词汇:read 阅读,play football 踢足球,math 数学,music 音乐,a lovely dog 一条可爱的狗,friendly 友好的
参考句型:He … ;He likes…
7.例文
My e-friend I have a new e-friend. His name is Jerry. He is twelve years old. He is from Canada. He likes Science and Art best. He often goes skating and draws pictures on the weekends.
【详解】1. 题干解读:该题目要求用第三人称介绍自己的网友,阐述他的年龄,爱好以及来自哪里。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型:
参考词汇: twelve十二,Canada加拿大,Science科学,Art美术,go skating去滑冰,draw pictures画画
参考句型:I have…;He is…; He likes…;He often…
8.范文:
Anna is my e-friend. She is 11 years old. She is from the UK. Reading stories and climbing hills are her hobbies. She goes to school from Monday to Friday. On Saturday morning, she always fishes with her grandpa in a park. In the evening, she does her homework. On Sunday, she usually has a picnic with her parents.
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目要求以第三人称介绍网友安娜,然后再阐述她的姓名,年龄,喜好和周末活动等。注意文章时态为一般现在时并符合句子数量要求。
2.参考词汇和参考句型:
参考单词:the UK英国,reading stories读故事,climbing hills爬山,hobbies爱好,from Monday to Friday从星期一到星期五,in the evening在晚上,usually通常,have a picnic去野餐
参考句型:She is…;Reading stories and climbing hills are her hobbies.;She goes…;On Saturday morning, she always…;On Sunday, she usually…
9.范文:
My e-friend
I have an e-friend. Her name is Nancy. She is eleven years old. She lives in Nanjing with her parents. She is a student. Her favourite subject is Music. She can sing very well. She likes dancing and reading. She often dances and reads books at weekends.
【详解】题干解读:题目要求以“My e-friend”为题,向大家介绍一下Nancy。可以根据图表提示来写,要求要点齐全,语句通顺,表达流畅。注意时态可用一般现在时且要符合句子数量要求。
参考词汇与句型:
参考词汇:eleven years old 11岁;parents 父母;favourite subject 最喜爱的科目;sing very well 唱的非常好;dance 跳舞;read 阅读;at weekends 在周末
参考句型:She is ……;She lives in ……;She can ……;She likes ……;She often ……
10.范文:
My e-friend
I have an e-friend. Her name is Helen. She lives in the US. She is 10 years old. She is a student. She likes maths and music. She can speak English and Chinese. She has Chinese lessons on weekends. Her hobbies are drawing, dancing and reading. We often send emails to each other.
【详解】1. 题干解读:该题目要求根据提示介绍自己的网友。然后再阐述姓名,住在哪里,年龄,工作,爱好等。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合单词字数要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型:
参考单词:live in住在(某地),maths数学,music音乐,Chinese中文,on weekends在周末,send eamils发送电子邮件,each other互相
参考句型:I have …; Her name is …;She is …; She can …;She has ...;Her hobbies are ...
11.范文:
My e-friend
Anna is my e-friend. She is 11 years old. She lives in the UK. She can speak Chinese and English. She studies Chinese after school. She is good at Maths and Art. She likes skating.
【详解】1.题干分析:该题目要求以“My e-friend”为题写一篇短文介绍Anna的情况。根据思维导图,可以从年龄,来自哪里,说的语言,学习的科目及爱好几方面来介绍。注意文章为一般现在时态,句子数量要符合要求。
2.参考词汇与句型
参考词汇:the UK英国;speak Chinese and English说中文和英语;Maths and Art数学和美术;skate滑冰;study Chinese after school放学后学习中文;
参考句型:She is...years old.;She lives...;She can...;She likes...;She is good at...;
12.范文:
I have an e-friend. He’s David. He lives in the UK. He is 12 years old. He speaks English. He likes PE and Art best. He likes swimming and dancing.
【详解】1. 题干解读:该题目要求根据表格信息介绍新网友。然后再阐述姓名,住在哪里,年龄,说的语言,最喜欢的科目以及兴趣爱好。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型:
参考单词:live in住在,the UK英国,speak讲,best最,
参考句型:He’s …; He lives in …;He speaks …; He likes …;
13.范文:
My e-friend
I have a new e-friend. She is Lucy. She’s 12 years old. She lives in Canada. Lucy likes English and Chinese.
At weekends, she often visits her friends and goes on a picnic. She likes playing the piano and drawing.
【详解】1. 题干分析:该题目要求根据表格提示,想同学介绍一下新网友Lucy。根据表格内容,可以从姓名,年龄,国家,喜欢的学科,爱好,周末活动几方面进行介绍。文章为一般现在时态,句子数量要符合要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型
参考词汇:Chinese语文;English英语;draw画画;play the piano弹钢琴;visit her friends拜访朋友;go on a picnic去野餐;
参考句型:She is...years old.;She lives in...;She likes...;At weekends, she often...;She likes...;
14.范文:
My name is Anna. I have a pen friend. His name is James. He lives in the UK. He is eleven years old. He can speak Chinese. He likes English and music. He has many hobbies. He likes swimming and drawing pictures. He can play basketball well. He has a cute cat. Its name is Coco. He likes to play with it every day.
【详解】1. 题干分析:该题目要求用第一人称结合图片内容介绍安娜的笔友詹姆斯,包括他的国家、喜欢的科目、兴趣爱好等。注意文章时态为一般现在时并符合句子数量要求,确保书写规范。
2. 参考词汇与句型:
参考词汇:pen friend笔友,English英语,music音乐,swimming游泳,cat猫
参考句型:His name is...;He lives...;He is...;He likes...;He can...
15.范文
I want to make friends with Jack. He is from Australia. He is twelve years old. His father is a doctor, but his mother is a nurse. His favourite subjects are Maths and Science. His hobbies are drawing and going boating. Do you like him
【详解】1. 题干分析:要求根据卡片信息,选择一位外国小朋友来了解并介绍。主要用第三人称的角度介绍,要介绍他或她的姓名、国家、年龄,父母的职业,喜欢的科目和业余爱好等。要用一般现在时,要满足句子数量要求和题干的其他要求。
2. 参考词汇和参考句型:
参考词汇:Australia澳大利亚,doctor医生,Maths数学,going boating划船。
参考句型:He is from…;His father is…;His favourite subjects are…;His hobbies are…。
16.范文:
My e-friend
I have an e-friend. His name is Tommy. He is 11 years old. He lives in the UK. His father is a cook. His mother is a writer. His favourite subject is English. He likes swimming and drawing. At weekends, he often flies kites in the park with his friends. Sometimes he goes skating at weekends. Do you have an e-friend
【详解】1. 题干解读:该题目要求用第三人称介绍自己的网友。然后再阐述他的年龄,兴趣爱好及家人等情况。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型:
参考单词:e-friend网友,favourite最喜爱的,weekend周末,go skating去滑冰
参考句型:He is...;His father/mother is...;His favourite...;At weekends, he...
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