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2025-2026学年九年级英语上册单元复习考点培优仁爱科普版Unit 4 Amazing Science
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．发明改变世界。请你根据表格，以“A useful invention”为题，写一篇短文介绍手机的发明时间、发明者、手机用途 (至少三个)，并分享作为青少年我们如何合理地使用手机的建议 (至少两点)，使它真正成为最有用的发明之一。
Invention Mobile Phone
Inventor American, Martin Cooper
Time 1973
Usage 方便与他人交流 ……
Your opinions about how to use them 上学日不能使用手机 ……
要求：短文须包含以上内容，可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯，词数80—100。
A Useful Invention
The mobile phone is one of the most useful inventions.
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2．5月19日是全国助残日Help-the-Disabled Day，今年的主题为：“科技助残，共享美好生活”。你是一位经常为残疾人提供帮助的学生志愿者，请你根据你的观察和体会，写一篇短文，向Shenzhen Daily的读者提出科技助残的若干建议。
May 19th marks Help-the-Disabled Day in China.
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3．发明改变了世界，改变了我们的生活，如手机、汽车、地图等。假如你是李明，你校英语社团正在开展线上国际交流活动，其公众号计划做关于发明改变生活的系列推送。请你用英语给公众号投稿，推荐一个你认为重要的发明，并说明推荐理由。
提示词语：important, change, develop
提示问题：(1)What invention do you want to recommend (推荐)
(2)Why do you want to recommend it
注意：(1)词数80左右；
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
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4．现在，AI学习工具如“DeepSeek”等变得越来越流行。你们班就此开展了一场讨论。请你以“DeepSeek: A Good Servant (仆人) or a Bad Master (主人) ”为题，结合下面表格中同学们的讨论内容，谈谈你的看法及建议。
For (A good servant) help...become better learners provide quick answers make problems easier ...
Against (A bad master) copy answers without thinking may provide incorrect answers ...
Your opinion & advice 建议至少两条
要求：
1. 词数80—100词；
2. 短文须包含表格中所有要点并适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名；
4. 短文首句已给出，不计入总词数。
DeepSeek: A Good Servant or a Bad Master
AI learning tools like DeepSeek are becoming increasingly popular among students. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．2025年中央电视台春节联欢晚会上的节目Young Bot机器人通过人工智能学习舞蹈动作，在舞台上转动手帕，舞步完美。现代科技发展日新月异，我们可以想象在不久的将来智能机器人的出现将会给我们的生活带来很多变化。假设你是李钰，请以“A day with my smart robot”为主题写一篇演讲稿，参加China Daily举办的中学生科技周活动。
写作要点 参考句型
1. What does your smart robot look like It looks like... We start the day with... They can make our life... They can/can’t take the place of...
2. How do you spend a day with your smart robot
3. What are your opinions about future robots
要求：
1.短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3.词数不少于80（开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Yu. I stand before you to talk about smart robots.
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6．为了激发青少年的想象力和创造力，你们学校将在下周举办以“I want to invent…”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你用英语写一篇发言稿参加该比赛。
写作提示：
1. 你产生发明的念头的时间；
2. 你想发明的物品；
3. 你想发明该物品的理由。
要求：
1. 包含要点内容，选择使用参考词汇，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3. 文章不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；
4. 词数：不少于80词。(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)
Good morning, everyone!
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Thank you for listening!
7．请根据以下内容提示写一篇文章，介绍三峡大坝。
内容提示：
1. 世界上最大的水电站和大坝，世界著名的人造奇观之一；
2. 位于中国湖北省宜昌市；
3. 长约2300米，高185米，顶部宽15米；
4. 为中国数百万的人口供电；
5. 三峡地区是中国风景最美的地区之一。
提示词：三峡大坝 the Three Gorges Dam; 水电站 hydro-electric power station
注意：
1. 80词左右；
2. 不要出现考生本人信息；
3. 禁止抄袭本试卷中所有语篇内容。
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8． 科技改变生活方式，给人们带来了极大的便利，如支付宝(Alipay)、高铁(High Speed Rail)、微信(WeChat)等。请以“Chinese Way of Life with High-Tech”为题，举例描述科技如何改变我们的生活方式(至少四种)，让外国友人了解生活在中国的便利和舒适。
要求：
(1)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名;
(2)词数约100词，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Chinese Way of Life with High-Tech (高科技)
With the rapid development of our economy,
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9．随着AI技术的发展，许多同学都借助AI软件来助力学习，学校广播站邀请你分享“AI助力英语学习”的经验。请根据以下提示，写一封英文建议信，给同龄朋友分享AI工具 （如Doubao、DeepSeek、小猿搜题……） 的使用心得和建议，并鼓励同学善用AI，做学习的主人。
要点：
1. How has AI helped you with your English studies (At least two ways)
2. What suggestions can you offer teenagers on how to use AI tools (At least two suggestions)
注意：
①内容涵盖所有要点，可适当拓展；
②已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数；
③词数80-100词。不得出现真实校名，姓名。
Dear friends,
I’m excited to share how AI tools like Doubao and DeepSeek have helped me with my English studies.
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10．随着ChatGPT，DeepSeek，豆包等AI工具从“新奇玩具”变成学习、工作中不可或缺的“生产力工具”，如何高效使用AI也逐渐成为一项必备技能。作为一名中学生，我们应该如何在学习中正确、高效地运用AI 助手？请你以“Making AI Work for Your Studies”为题写一篇英语作文。
要求：
1. 注意文字整体性；
2. 80-120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
提示：
Word BankWays Advantages Advice Problem-solving Get information quickly Independent thinking Skill practice Save time Think twice Language learning …
Making AI Work for Your Studies
AI tools are changing how we study, and they will offer amazing help if we use them correctly.
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11．ChatGPT作为智能聊天模型，不但能够与人类对话和互动，还能够完成撰写文案、翻译及写代码等任务。如今，越来越多的人接触到ChatGPT，包括中学生。假如你校英语网站为了了解同学们对ChatGPT的使用情况，发布了一个调查问卷。请你结合调查问卷写一篇英语文章向该网站投稿，并谈谈中学生使用ChatGPT应持有怎样的态度。
Questionnaire (调查问卷) about ChatGPT
★How often do you use ChatGPT to help with your study
A．Often. B．Never. C． Sometimes.
★What function of ChatGPT do you use in your study (You can choose more than one answer.)
A．Solve problems. B．Search for information.
C． Provide writing guides. D．Practise spoken English.
★What do you think of ChatGPT
A．Useful. B．Useless. C． It depends.
写作要求：1.要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅；
3.100词左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇： AI (artificial intelligence) 人工智能：
ChatGPT is an AI language model, which can provide students with great help in their study._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
12．随着人工智能和科技的迅猛发展，我们的生活方式正在经历前所未有的变革。展望未来，你是否对未来生活充满期待呢？《21世纪学生报》正开展一场以"Life in the future"为主题的征文活动，诚挚邀请广大学生积极参与。你可以选取以下某些方面，或者充分发挥你的想象力，展现你对未来生活的独特设想与创新思维。
注意：（1）内容涵盖所有要点，全文连贯通顺。
（2）词数不少于90字。
（3）文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
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13．假如你是李华，你的学校为了让学生了解近年我国在具身智能（Embodied intelligence）和人工智能（AI）领域的发展举办了主题为“Robots and AI in China”的展览。请你根据下列表格提示内容写一封邮件，向你的英国笔友William介绍本次展览的内容及你观展后的感受。
Robots and AI in China
★Time: 4:00 p.m. Date: Sept. 8 Place: the school playground
★Robots and AI tools ★Feelings: proud, …
★Help in many ways
提示词：develop v. 研发
注意事项：1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范。
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名。
Dear William,
I know that you are interested in robots and AI.
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Yours,
Li Hua
14．数据显示，我国家庭智能机器人的市场需求正在增加。针对这一现象，请你以“Is Using Home Robots a Good Idea ”为主题在班里进行了一项调查并在英语课前就此发言。请你根据图片中的调查结果写一篇发言稿，谈谈你的观点并陈述你的理由。
调查结果
Yes 60%
No 28%
Not sure 12%
要求：1. 词数80~100，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Is using home robots a good idea I’ve made a survey in our class recently. As a result, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
15．计算机在我们的生活、工作中的作用越来越大，你知道计算机的起源与发展吗？请根据表格提示，写一篇题为“Computers”的短文。
要求：意思连贯，语句通顺；词数不少于80词。
Who John von Neumann, an American scientist
When in 1946
Advantages (优点) send some messages, get useful information, make life easier
Disadvantages (缺点) unhealthy websites, be crazy about computer games
Where they are used in many fields
Price high
Change become smaller and lighter
Computers______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
16．在建设海南自贸港的背景下，英语的重要性逐渐显现并不断增强。假如你是李华，某软件公司准备开发一款适合当地居民在业余时间学习英语的APP，邀请你一起参与设计。请根据下文提示用英语向该公司介绍你的构想。
The name of the APP Happy English Learning
Contents English news, movies, songs , games
The advantages of the APP 1.make it easy to study; 2.improve listening and speaking; 3. ...
注意事项：
（1）必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥；
（2）意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
（3）词数90左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（4）请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Here is my design for the new APP.
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17．从中国神舟系列宇宙飞船成功发射到建成天宫空间站，我们正一步步将梦想变成现实。随着科技的发展，未来人们生活会发生很大变化。某英文网站正开展以“Life in the Future”为主题的征文活动，请根据以下图文提示写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对未来生活的设想。
要求：
(1)必须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
(3)词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Life in the Future
With the development of science and technology, life in the future will be quite different.
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18．人工智能AI（Artificial Intelligence）技术的快速发展和Chat GPT的问世，给人们的学习和生活带来了巨大的变化，同时也引发了人们对于人工智能取代人类的担忧。假如你是李华，受邀参加某英语报“Teenager Says”栏目，请说说你对人工智能的看法。
内容包括：
1. 人工智能的优点：代替人们做危险、枯燥的工作；
2. 人工智能的缺点：人们对AI过度依赖；
3. 你的看法……
注意：
1. 字数：100词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名；
3. 可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
Dear Editor,
I’m glad to be invited to join this program.
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The key is to make the best use of AI to make our life more convenient and more colorful.
Yours,
Li Hua
19．电脑在我们的工作、生活中作用越来越大，你知道它的起源与发展吗？请根据下列提示谈谈它的发展变化，并说明我们应如何正确地运用电脑。
要求：1.短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯；
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3.不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Product computer Advantages (优点) 1. Be used to count (计算)，now.…
When 1946 2. Open our eyes...，know about...
Who John and J. Eckert 3. Listen to...
Be made of ... Disadvantages (缺点) 1. play computer games
Size Used to be big, now... 2. ...
Computers are becoming more and more important in our daily life. Do you know the history and the changes of computers
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20．假如你是李华，今年元旦你参观了科技馆，你对“未来机器人与人类生活”主题展厅的一款家庭医生（Home Doctor）机器人很感兴趣，拟在本周英语课的值日生报告中向全班同学介绍它。请根据以下要点提示写一篇英语短文。
要点提示：
1.基本情况：这个机器人是由三名中学生在三个月前发明的；高1.2米，模样是一位可爱的女孩；
2.制作材料：再生材料，如玻璃，塑料，硅胶（silica gel）；
3.主要功能：提供相关健康知识咨询；还可以帮忙照顾老人和孩子。
写作要求：
1.不少于80词，开头已经给出，但不计入总词数；
2.要点齐全，语句通顺，逻辑清晰。
Hello, everyone. My name is Li Hua. I went to visit Badong Science & Technology Museum this New Year’s Day. I was greatly interested in a new kind of robot— Home Doctor.
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参考答案及试题解析
1．A Useful Invention The mobile phone is one of the most useful inventions. It was invented by Martin Cooper, an American, in 1973.
Mobile phones are widely used in our daily life. They help us communicate with others easily. We can also use them to study online and relax by listening to music. Besides, they are useful for taking photos and checking maps.
As teenagers, we should use mobile phones properly. First, we should not use them on school days. Second, we need to control the time spent on phones and use them mainly for learning. In this way, mobile phones can truly become one of the most helpful inventions.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点内容，可适当发挥。注意写作时要按第一人称写。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍手机的发明时间、发明者；
第二步，具体阐述手机用途；
第三步，提青少年合理用机建议，上学日不用、控时且多用于学习。
[亮点词汇]
①communicate with与……沟通
②in this way以这种方式
[高分句型]
①Mobile phones are widely used in our daily life. (一般现在时的被动语态)
②It was invented by Martin Cooper, an American, in 1973. (一般过去时的被动语态)
2．例文
May 19th marks Help-the-Disabled Day in China. This year’s theme is “Technology Assists the Disabled, Sharing a Beautiful Life”. As a volunteer, I have some ideas.
First, smart wheelchairs with AI can help disabled people move around safely. Second, voice-controlled devices can help blind people listen to books or news easily. Third, special apps with sign language videos can help us communicate with deaf people.
Technology can make life easier and happier for everyone. Let’s use it to help more people!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：本文主要是提出科技助残的若干建议，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：引出话题；
第二步：详细提出科技助残的建议；
第三步：书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①listen to听
②use sth. to do sth.使用某物做某事
[高分句型]
①Let’s use it to help more people! (祈使句)
3．例文
There are a lot of inventions that have changed our lives. Among all the inventions, I think the most important one is the mobile phone.
The mobile phone is widely used in many ways. First, we can use it to communicate with others anywhere and anytime. Second, we can use it to do a lot of other things. For example, we can use the mobile phone to take photos and make videos.
There is no doubt that the mobile phone plays an important role in our lives.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给内容推荐一个你认为重要的发明，并说明推荐理由，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你要推荐什么发明；
第二步，介绍为什么要推荐这个发明。
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①communicate with和……交流
②for example例如
③play an important role in在……中扮演重要角色
[高分句型]
①There are a lot of inventions that have changed our lives. (that引导的定语从句)
②There is no doubt that the mobile phone plays an important role in our lives. (同位语从句)
4．例文
DeepSeek: A Good Servant or a Bad Master
AI learning tools like DeepSeek are becoming increasingly popular among students. Most students think DeepSeek is a good servant. It helps them become better learners by providing quick answers and rich resources, making difficult problems easier to understand.
However, some classmates see DeepSeek as a bad master. Depending on it too much may lead them to merely copy answers and stop thinking independently. Sometimes the information provided may even be incorrect.
From my view, DeepSeek should assist rather than replace us. We should use it for ideas but always check and understand the answers. Most importantly, we must think for ourselves. Only in this way can we make AI a good servant in our studies.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，包括支持DeepSeek作为好仆人的理由、反对DeepSeek作为坏主人的理由以及个人看法和建议，考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点，并适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。通过描述DeepSeek在学生中的流行程度来引出讨论的主题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从支持者和反对者的角度分别阐述DeepSeek作为好仆人和坏主人的理由；
第三步，书写结语。提出个人看法和建议，强调DeepSeek应作为辅助工具而非替代品，鼓励学生独立思考。
[亮点词汇]
①assist rather than replace辅助而非替代
②provide quick answers and rich resources提供快速答案和丰富资源
③think independently独立思考
④make...a good servant使……成为好仆人
[高分句型]
①Most students think DeepSeek is a good servant. (复合句，包含宾语从句和现在分词短语作结果状语)
②Only in this way can we make AI a good servant in our studies. (倒装句)
5．例文
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Yu. I stand before you to talk about smart robots. My smart robot looks like a friendly human with blue eyes and a shiny silver body. We start the day with morning exercises. My robot dances with me to keep us healthy. Then, it helps me with my homework. It can find information quickly and explain difficult problems. In the afternoon, we play games together.
I think future robots will make our life easier and more interesting. However, they can’t take the place of humans because love and creativity are special to us.
Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，引出主题，描述机器人的外貌；
第二步，根据题干的要点，按时间顺序描写与机器人共度的一天；
第三步，表达对未来机器人的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①help sb with sth帮助某人做某事
②take the place of代替
[高分句型]
①I think future robots will make our life easier and more interesting. （宾语从句）
②However, they can’t take the place of humans because love and creativity are special to us.（because引导的原因状语从句）
6．例文：
Good morning, everyone!
Without invention, we can’t have a happy life. So since I was young, I’ve dreamed of inventing something that can help to improve the environment. Several days ago, I came up with a good idea for my invention. It’s a special box which is used for holding wastes. It can move and speak different languages. As soon as people throw away wastes on the street, they will be cleaned up by the box at once. At the same time, the box will tell people not to do that again. Of course, my box won’t cost too much. In this way, more cleaners and money can be saved. What do you think of my invention Will it be helpful in improving the environment
Thank you for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
②时态：“一般现在时”，“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”等；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，写作开头已给出，写作时可直接介绍你的发明。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“产生发明的念头的时间”、“想发明的物品”以及“想发明该物品的理由”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。
第三步，书写结语，进行互动。
[亮点词汇]
①dream of doing sth 梦想着做某事
②help to do sth 帮助做某事
③came up with 提出
④be used for doing sth 被用于做某事
⑤As soon as 一……就……
⑥throw away 扔掉
⑦cleaned up 清理
⑧at the same time 同时
⑨tell sb not to do sth 告诉某人不要做某事
⑩think of 认为
[高分句型]
①So since I was young, I’ve dreamed of inventing something that can help to improve the environment. (since引导的时间状语从句和that引导的定语从句)
②It’s a special box which is used for holding wastes. (which引导的定语从句)
③As soon as people throw away wastes on the street, they will be cleaned up by the box at once. (As soon as引导的时间状语从句)
7．例文
The Three Gorges Dam is the largest hydroelectric power station and dam in the world. It’s one of the famous man-made wonders of the world. It’s located in Yichang City, Hubei Province, China. It’s on the Yangtze River. It’s about 2,300 metres long, 185 metres high and 15 metres wide at the top. It produces electricity for millions of people in China. The Three Gorges area is one of the most beautiful areas of China, so it attracts thousands of tourists every year.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇短文，围绕三峡大坝展开。
②时态：时态为一般现在时。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意包含所有内容提示，适当添加细节，使短文内容丰富且符合词数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。引出三峡大坝的地位。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从位置、规模、供电、三峡地区风景几方面，介绍三峡大坝。
第三步，无需额外结语，按逻辑完成内容阐述，原文已自然结束。
[亮点词汇]
①hydroelectric power station水电站
②man-made wonders人造奇观
③located in位于
④produce electricity发电
⑤beautiful areas美丽地区
[高分句型]
①It’s one of the famous man-made wonders of the world. (“one of+形容词最高级+名词复数”结构，说明三峡大坝的地位)
②It’s about 2,300 metres long, 185 metres high and 15 metres wide at the top. (说明三峡大坝的规模，体现其宏大)
③The Three Gorges area is one of the most beautiful areas of China, so it attracts thousands of tourists every year. (so表结果，说明三峡地区风景带来的影响)
8．例文
Chinese Way of Life with High-Tech (高科技)
With the rapid development of our economy, high-tech has greatly changed Chinese people’s daily life and made it more convenient.
We rarely carry cash now. Apps like Alipay and WeChat Pay let us pay for meals, shopping or bills by scanning a phone. High Speed Rail takes us between cities fast—a 10-hour train trip now only needs 2 hours. When we don’t want to go out, food delivery apps bring hot meals in 30 minutes. We also use Didi to call cars easily, no more waiting on the street.
Living in China with such high-tech support is really comfortable!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为话题作文；
②时态：为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意需要介绍至少四种科技对我们的生活方式的改变。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，介绍高科技极大地改变了人们的生活，给人们带来了便利；
第二步，具体从“支付方式、高铁、外卖和出行”四个方面展开论述；
第三步，书写结语，抒发感慨。
[亮点词汇]
①daily life日常生活
②pay for为……付钱
③go out出去
[高分句型]
When we don’t want to go out, food delivery apps bring hot meals in 30 minutes.（when引导时间状语从句）
9．Dear friends,
I’m excited to share how AI tools like Doubao and DeepSeek have helped me with my English studies.
These tools have improved my listening and speaking skills by providing real-time feedback. They also help me correct grammar mistakes and expand my vocabulary, making learning more efficient and fun.
However, it’s important to use AI tools properly. First, plan your time wisely and avoid over-reliance on AI. Second, combine AI with traditional learning methods, such as reading books and practicing with classmates. Remember, AI is a tool, not a replacement for hard work. Let’s make the most of AI and take control of our learning journey. Together, we can achieve great results!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信；
②时态：以一般现在时为主；
③提示：材料所给要点需完整表达，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍AI如何帮助英语学习；
第二步，对青少年正确使用AI提出建议；
第三步，发出倡议，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①real-time feedback实时反馈
②make the most of充分利用
③take control of控制；掌管
[高分句型]
①However, it’s important to use AI tools properly. （“It’s+形容词+to do” 句型）
② Let’s make the most of AI and take control of our learning journey. （祈使句）
10．例文：
Making AI Work for Your Studies AI tools are changing how we study, and they will offer amazing help if we use them correctly.
First, AI can help us with problem-solving. When we meet difficult questions, AI can explain them step by step. It also helps us get information quickly and saves time. For example, we can practice English speaking with AI and improve our language skills. However, we should not depend on AI too much. Always think independently and check the answers. Remember to think twice before accepting what AI gives. Use AI as a helper, not a replacement for thinking.
In this way, AI can truly make our study better and smarter.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：“一般现在时”，“一般将来时”和“现在进行时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，写作开头已给出。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“在学习中正确、高效地运用AI 助手的方法和建议”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。
第三步，书写结语，进行总结。
[亮点词汇]
①help sb with sth 在某事上帮助某人
②step by step 一步一步地
③help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事
④For example 例如
⑤depend on 依靠
⑥too much 太多
⑦think twice 深思熟虑
[高分句型]
①AI tools are changing how we study, and they will offer amazing help if we use them correctly. (how引导的宾语从句和if引导的条件状语从句)
②When we meet difficult questions, AI can explain them step by step. (when引导的时间状语从句)
③Remember to think twice before accepting what AI gives. (动词原形开头的祈使句和what引导的宾语从句)
11．例文
ChatGPT is an AI language model, which can provide students with great help in their study.
As for me, I sometimes use ChatGPT to help with my study. I often use it to solve problems and search for information. And sometimes I also use it for writing guides and spoken English practice. I think it’s useful.
However, every coin has two sides. In my opinion, middle school students should use ChatGPT properly. We can take it as a helpful tool to save time and learn better, but we mustn’t rely on it too much, especially in doing homework independently. Only in this way can it really benefit our study.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意需要谈谈中学生使用ChatGPT应持有怎样的态度。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据问卷调查，介绍自己使用ChatGPT的情况；
第二步，介绍中学生使用ChatGPT应持有的态度。
[亮点词汇]
①as for sb.就某人而言
②search for寻找
③in my opinion在我看来
④rely on依赖，依靠
[高分句型]
①I think it’s useful.（省略引导词that的宾语从句）
②Only in this way can it really benefit our study.（倒装句）
12．例文
Life in the Future With the rapid development of science and technology, life in the future will be quite different.
Houses will be intelligent, with robots doing most of the housework. Schools will have online classrooms, allowing students to study from anywhere. For transport, flying cars will be common, making travel faster. The environment will be much better because people will use clean energy. In terms of jobs, more work will be done by AI, so people will have more time for hobbies. Also, with advanced medical technology, people will be healthier and live longer.
We’ll have easier and more convenient lives in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：“一般将来时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求以“Life in the Future”为主题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出对未来生活的设想；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“房子、环境、交通、学校、工作、健康”几个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①in the future在未来
②most of ... 大多数的……
③clean energy清洁能源
[高分句型]
①Schools will have online classrooms, allowing students to study from anywhere.（现在分词短语表伴随状况）
②The environment will be much better because people will use clean energy.（because引导原因状语从句）
13．范文：
Dear William,
I know that you are interested in robots and AI. Our school held an exhibition themed “Robots and AI in China” on the school playground at 4:00 p.m. on Sept. 8 to let students know about China’s development in embodied intelligence and AI fields in recent years.
There were various robots and AI tools on display, like UNITREE, DeepSeek and Doubao. They can help people in many ways. For example, some robots can assist the disabled, some can serve food, and others can teach knowledge.
After visiting the exhibition, I felt really proud. Our country has made such great progress in these fields.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“Robots and AI in China”的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“展览内容，观展后的感受”等方面进行介绍；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①are interested in对……感兴趣
②know about了解
③on display展览
[高分句型]
①I know that you are interested in robots and AI.（that引导的宾语从句）
②Our school held an exhibition themed “Robots and AI in China” on the school playground at 4:00 p.m. on Sept. 8 to let students know about China’s development in embodied intelligence and AI fields in recent years.（不定式作目的状语）
14．例文
Is Using Home Robots a Good Idea
Is using home robots a good idea I’ve made a survey in our class recently. As a result, 60% of the students think it’s a good idea. Here are their reasons. First, home robots help with housework so that people have more time to do things they enjoy. Second, home robots can act as guards when no one is at home.
However, 28% of the students disagree. They think depending on the robots too much may make people lazier and it also costs too much to buy a home robot.
As for the rest of the students, they are not sure if it’s a good idea to have a home robot.
In my opinion, home robots can make our lives easier. I will surely get one in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括表格信息，可适当补充理由；写作中适当使用连接词、短语和句型，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，陈述各方观点及理由；
第三步，表达自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①depend on依赖
②too much太多
③in my opinion在我看来
[高分句型]
①First, home robots help with housework so that people have more time to do things they enjoy.（定语从句和目的状语从句）
②As for the rest of the students, they are not sure if it’s a good idea to have a home robot.（宾语从句）
15．例文
Computers
Computers are becoming more and more important in our daily puters were invented by an American scientist named John von Neumann in 1946.
Computers have many advantages. For example, we can use them to send some messages. What’s more, they can help us get useful information. There are many computer functions. They make life much easier. However, they also have some disadvantages. There are some unhealthy websites which are bad for teenagers. Some students are crazy about computer games so that their grades are getting worse and worse.
Computers can be used in many fields. It’s hard to imagine what our life would be like if we had no computers in our daily life. Now, their price is high. In my opinion, computers are going to become smaller and lighter in the near future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍电脑的发明者以及被发明的时间；
第二步，介绍电脑的优缺点；
第三步，介绍电脑的重要性以及电脑未来的发展。
[亮点词汇]
①for example例如
②be bad for对……有害
③be crazy about对……痴迷
[高分句型]
①Computer was invented by an American scientist named John von Neumann in 1946.（过去分词作后置定语）
②There are some unhealthy websites which are bad for teenagers.（there be句型）
16．参考范文：
Here is my design for the new APP. It is named Happy English Learning. There are many interesting things in this APP, such as English news, movies, songs and games in English and so on. Next, let me introduce the advantages of the APP. It can make it easy for local people to learn English together. Their English listening and speaking skills can be improved as well. When they are tired, they can enjoy themselves by singing English songs or watching some English movies.
I believe all of the learners can have fun learning English by using this APP.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己要设计的APP名称；
第二步，具体阐述这个APP包含的内容及优点；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②and so on等等
③as well也
[高分句型]
①There are many interesting things in this APP, such as English news, movies, songs and games in English and so on. (there be句型)
②When they are tired, they can enjoy themselves by singing English songs or watching some English movies. (when引导的时间状语从句)
17．例文
Life in the Future
With the development of science and technology, life in the future will be quite different.
The environment will be nicer. The trees will be greener and rivers will be clearer. There is no heavy traffic any more on the earth. Buildings like houses, hospitals will be built in other planets or under the sea. So there is enough space for people on the earth. Robots will do dangerous and hard work instead of human beings. They make people have more time to relax and enjoy their lives. The clothes that we wear will change their colors and styles according to the weather and our moods.
We’ll have easier and more convenient lives in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头，介绍未来的环境；
第二步、介绍未来的建筑以及机器人代替人类做的工作；
第三步、介绍未来的穿着并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①no…any more不再……
②instead of而不是
③according to根据
[高分句型]
The clothes that we wear will change their colors and styles according to the weather and our moods. (that引导定语从句)
18．例文
Dear Editor,
I’m glad to be invited to join this program. With the development of science and technology, Artificial Intelligence is getting more and more popular in our daily life.
As we all know, every coin has its two sides. On the one hand, AI can be used to do dangerous, boring and tiring work so that we will live a better and happier life. On the other hand, with AI being widely used, a large number of workers are losing their jobs. What’s more, some people depend on AI so much that they lose their ability to think creatively and independently.
In my opinion, AI will never completely take the place of human beings so there is no need to worry about it too much. It is a tool we invented and we are surely able to make it under control.
The key is to make the best use of AI to make our life more convenient and more colorful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干给出的要点，适当增加细节，灵活运用恰当的句型，使行文流畅自然。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明AI的广泛应用；
第二步，分点阐述人工智能的优点和缺点；
第三步，发表自己对AI的看法，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①With the development of随着……的发展
②On the one hand...on the other hand一方面……另一方面
③be used to do被用来做某事
④a large number of大量，许多
⑤depend on依赖
⑥take the place of取代
⑦make the best use of充分利用
[高分句型]
①On the one hand, AI can be used to do dangerous, boring and tiring work so that we will live a better and happier life. (so that引导目的状语从句)
②It is a tool we invented and we are surely able to make it under control. (that省略的定语从句)
19．Possible Version One:
Computers are becoming more and more important in our daily life. Do you know the history and the changes of computers The computer was invented by John W. Mauchly and J. Presper Eckert in 1946. And it was made of different kinds of materials, such as plastic, metal and so on. At that time, the computer used to be very huge and it was as large as a big room. But now, it is much smaller, just like a book.
The computer is a very useful tool in our life. It was only used to count in the past, but now it can be used to help us work and study. It has many other functions. For example, it can broaden our horizons and let us know more. Besides, we can also listen to music or play games on it. That makes us relax. However, some young people spend too much time in playing games. It is very bad for eyes and study.
Every coin has two sides. In my opinion, we should use computers correctly. And I believe the computer is going to change our life completely in the near future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中电脑的发展变化及正确运用方式的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“历史、变化、优点、缺点”等几个方面重点介绍电脑的发展变化及正确运用方式；
第三步，书写结语。总结电脑的重要性，并提出正确运用电脑的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①more and more important 越来越重要
②different kinds of 不同种类的
③be used to do被用来做……
④in the near future 在不久的将来
[高分句型]
①The computer was made of different kinds of materials, such as plastic, metal and so on. （such as 举例说明）
②And I believe the computer is going to change our life completely in the near future.（宾语从句）
20．例文
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. I went to visit Badong Science & Technology Museum this New Year’s Day. I was greatly interested in a new kind of robot—Home Doctor.
Home Doctor was invented by three middle school students three months ago. It looks like a lovely girl, and it’s about 1. 2 meters tall. It was made from renewable materials, like glass, plastic and silica gel. This robot is helpful. It can provide people with some useful information on health. It also helps to take care of the old people and the babies at home.
It’s really amazing. It’s difficult for me to imagine what the robots will be like in the future. I believe Home Doctor will be very popular with people in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：作文要求介绍一款自己感兴趣的机器人，并对其外观、材料、功能进行描述。写作时注意表述清晰，做到无语法和单词拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头描述背景，引出家庭医生机器人；
第二步，详述机器人的外观、材料和功能；
第三步，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①look like看起来像……
②be made from由……制成
③take good care of 照顾
[高分句型]
①I believe Home Doctor will be very popular with people in the future. （宾语从句）
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